![]() ![]() i have some ocs that need help with their in a fanfic of mine right now its at a standstill because i made my ocs sue and two stews i need help fixing them 2/26/2016 #1 |
![]() ![]() so... are you asking for beta reader or something? or are you expect us to read your fanfiction? 3/20/2016 #2 |
![]() ![]() Think about and continually remind yourself that all humans have strengths and weaknesses. What are their flaws and set a limit to what each person can do in your story's world. Whenever I have trouble keeping characters in check, I always think of Fullmetal Alchemist, where despite the main characters being geniuses, they can't save everyone, and there are things they'll never be able to do. Therefore, that humbles them into understanding that they are just one of many in the world they live in. There's balance. Always think of a scale and compare each of the things you want a character to have. 7/24/2016 #3 |
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