Dan Cahill's Ninja Squadron of Honesty
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This thread is for all of the authors out there who have received CC from an active member of the DCNSH.

You are ninjas in training. It is the duty of the sensei to kindly offer advice to the young ninjas. If you have received unkind words from someone who said they were a part of the DCNSH, this is where you come to report it. The duty of the DCNSH is not to flame, but to give constructive criticism or CC. For that reason, please be kind, use correct grammar, and avoid swearing.

Also, use your ninjas skills. We are a Ninja Squadron, yes?

8/27/2011 #1
fangirls see differently

Uh... Okay...

8/27/2011 #2
Lapulta J.R.R. Cahill


Whatever you say, Hope.

9/12/2011 #3

I never actually explained my idea, did I? *facepalm*

Okay, so I was in my study hall and I got really really really painfully bored. Like Dan-on-an-airplane-with-no-technology bored. And I remembered how that morning, I had read a fanfiction that was awful, but everybody said stuff like "ohemgeez this is so gr8 u need to updat fastly." It was slowly and steadily driving me insane. So I came up with this idea for a squadron of ninja writers who were not afraid to KINDLY tell the truth. You know, and say stuff like "Your grammar needs work. The plotline was semi-original, but your grammar distracted from that." See?! It's pretty nice, and nobody will complain of "cyberbullying."

Yeah. And the name is just a display of exactly how bored I was.

9/13/2011 #4
Lapulta J.R.R. Cahill



9/13/2011 #5

So will you help?!? Please?!?! I can't run an organization by myself, (considering I already forget to charge my cell phone... oops) and I can't review everything by myself! I can try, but AP Human Geography assigns essays a lot. I barely have time to READ fanfiction.

The audience gasped collectively. The very idea of not being able to read fanfiction brought them to their knees.

Oh, yeah. I hired a narrator. Hahaha.

9/14/2011 #6
fangirls see differently

I'll help!

9/15/2011 #7
Thanks Eva!!!
9/16/2011 #8
Lapulta J.R.R. Cahill

I will!

What do we do?

9/18/2011 #9
fangirls see differently


Read the description. O.o

9/19/2011 #10
Lapulta J.R.R. Cahill

But I have. Don't we have story assignments to read and then review?

That's not a bad idea, actually....

9/19/2011 #11

I'm confused about why you're confused.

9/19/2011 #12
Lapulta J.R.R. Cahill

What story are we suppose to review about?

9/20/2011 #13
Did you look on the Sensei thread? I think that will answer your questions.
9/21/2011 #14
Lapulta J.R.R. Cahill

Oh.... kay....

9/25/2011 #15
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