Poll: What do you think should happen to my OCs in Speedy Thing Goes In? Vote Now!
Author has written 26 stories for Kingdom Hearts, Final Fantasy VII, Invisible Man, One Piece, Bleach, Saints Row, Final Fantasy XIII-2, Hikaru no Go, and Dragon Ball Z.
Thought I'd put this here for all to see. Every time I see full Japanese words in an English fic I instantly get pissed off. Suffixes are fine. Titles (sensei) are fine. But "Aishiteru hanese desu ano onii-chan You're so kawaii" just makes me want to punch the idiot writer in the face. I've become a bitter shell of my former self so don't expect me to be nice when I review. I hate almost every one here and until someone gives me a miracle to read, my opinions for everyone else are still a complete low.
Current Obsession: *author is currently curled up in pain and is too busy suffering to have an obsession*
Deletion Notice:If I plan on deleting a story, or already have, I'll put it in the status here on my profile. The reason for this deletion is because I simply don't want it on the site anymore because of the bad quality and/or the lack of attention it gets. If I've had something here for over 3 years and it hasn't gotten a single favorite/review I see no reason to keep it.
-New Update(4-18-2012)- RE UPDATED (8-28-2013)
Just Can't Understand: Almost complete. Due to the recent story DLC, and DLC in general, I'll have to add more chapters than I thought. Though this won't come for awhile
Speedy Thing Goes Out:DELETED
Change of Plans: DELETED
Welcome to the Soul Society: On hiatus.
Reaction Shot: Hiatus.
Speedy Thing Goes In: *points above*
Happier Than You: Rewritten: DELETED
Dearest Child: Dead until further notice.
My Other Self: Hiatus
Ressurection: On hold but far from dead. I've been getting tons of Story Alerts and I appreciate them. Sorry it's taking so long. Until I can get back into HNG I just can't write anything.
Changing Plans: DELETED
Shot, Stabbed, and Burned: Hiatus
Two Best Friends Play Kingdom Hearts: Hiatus
-New Update(5-8-2012)-Re updated due to my changes not being saved and I forgot most of the stuff I added... stupid ff...
I recently bought a 3DS. Therefore, as soon as I get my hands on Kingdom Hearts 3D, I will be sure that any new stories acknowledge it. But I still have to wait like 2 months.
For the first time since I joined this site I changed my avatar. I hate these new updates and the crackdown on MA rated stories is absolutely retarded since they're only doing it now. If my stories get taken down then it's a huge oh well. When that time comes I will re-upload them to adultfanfiction. But only if anyone is interested.
-New Update (8-11-2012)-
I completed Kingdom Hearts 3D, so expect to see even more revisions to my previous stories, or something new. Yes I know the most votes in my poll are to finish what I started, but trust me, I will when I get into the groove for them.
-New Update (9-13-2012)-
Everyone, I have absolutely no clue what to do right now. My mind can't pick a fandom and I'm sort of floating around. If I can get the thing to work, I may end up playing some Assasin's Creed on my pc and that may lead for some writings from that, or I may end up getting cray cray over something completely random. Like Batman or something. I do apologize for the lack of any new content, but I swear I half half or barely written chapters everywhere. All I need is a certain push or shove off a cliff to continue.
-New Update (12-19-2012)-
Won't be writing for a bit, sorry... Also, I'm deleting a few of my fanfics due to sheer embarrassment. After counting how long ago I started them, I think I started at either the age of 14 or 15. An age of retardation and period angst.
-New Update (07-08-2013)-
Wow, been a looong, long time. I suppose you can look forward to some KH work. Mainly new ideas and such. It's been so long since I've written that I need to clean out the cobwebs to eventually complete my previous stories. Resurrection will still be on hold because as much as I love it, I can't get into Hikaru no Go again yet.
-New Update (11-20-2013)-
No, I'm not dead... yet. Just not giving a fug about this place right now.
These are my OCs. Each will serve a special purpose depending on the fanfic, and no OC will switch. Meaning you will only see Moneta in anything that doesn't involve Organization XIII or Kaine outside of my Bleach story.
Due to recent re-writes of my stories, I may end up changing traits for all of them. Such as Moneta. If my profile doesn't match up with the story, that means I haven't uploaded the chapter or changed my profile.
OC/ 1: Moneta
Purpose: Servant of Vexen
Age: Having no natural birth, she does not have a general age. Like a tool, she is as old as Vexen has kept her. Her appearance, for the sake of Changing Plans(DELETED), is that of a young woman. Twentyfive to be exact.
Hair: Powder Blue
Eyes: A very light blue, almost identical to her hair
Skin: Light Brown
Blood Type: Yellow
Personality: Moneta is generally a kind girl with proper manners. However, she can show a mean side when anyone tries to bring grief to her Master. She also has a great dislike for those who are cruel to others weaker than them.
Special Traits: Super strength, skilled in hand to hand combat, and can heal at an accelerated rate. She also only wears grey clothing which can change form at her will.
Mary Sue level: 29 (Will be updated)
From the site itself: "21-35 points: Borderline-Sue. Your character is cutting it close, and you may want to work on the details a bit, but you're well on your way to having a lovely original character. Good work."
OC 2: Kaine
Purpose: Fan who goes into the world of Bleach in Speedy Thing Goes In
Race: Human, Caucasian
Age: 17 1/2
Skin: Lightly tanned
Blood Type: AB
Personality: A bit spunky but at the same time, a bit of a wimp. She's kind, and loyal to her friends. And if someone insults her, she'll be willing to take action no matter the cost. But afterwards that backbone will melt and she'll probably end up apologizing or running away. She's also a bit of a ditz when nervous.
Mary Sue level: 1
0-10 points: The Anti-Sue. Your character is the very antithesis of a Mary-Sue. Why are you even taking this test?
OC 3: Delila Arándano
Purpose: Servant Arrancar in Los Noches, friend to Kaine in Speedy Thing Goes In
Eyes: Black (not mentioned in the story so I'm putting it here)
Blood Type: ???
Personality: Sweet, gentle, and submissive. She shows respect to everyone, and cares deeply for Kaine. She's like a mother, but friendly like an older sister. Because of this, most of the Arrancar look down on her, and call her weak. Also, unlike the Arrancar, she feels as though Arrancar and human are really close.
Special Traits: She has a Zanpakuto. Its power will be revealed in due time. Just like the other Arrancar with one, she has markings on her face as two blue dots under each eye. She is Aizen's strongest servant type Arrancar. However, her power is not strong enough to be a Fraccion. Delila also has a talent for cooking human food.
Mary Sue Level: 23
OC 4: Niji Mariko (Mariko Niji if referenced in English)
Purpose: Traveling companion to Nnoitra in Welcome to the Soul Society.
Race: Human spirit
Age: 86 (Died in 1980/Lived to be 25)
Eyes: Dark Brown
Blood Type: 0
Personality: Harsh, rude, violent, self confident, tough, loves fighting, and a bit rough around the edges... or jagged rather
Special Traits: Strong, and well trained at swordsmanship. She can use Kidou, but not any spells at a really high level
Things I like in fanfiction:
A good plot
Things I don't like/Hate:
My Thoughts On:
Romance: I'm not a fan of it. At all. However, it all depends on the media it is from. Anime, no. Video Games, depends but generally yes.
For females, I'm extremely laid back. I like female pairings more than any other. It's an absolute plus when both females are in chracter as well. Same sort of goes for males, but the chances of me finding a story like that are slim to none.
OCs: OCs: I generally do not like them, but I usually make exceptions if they're really good characters. Mar from Marie D Suesse And The Mystery New Pirate Age! is a prime example of what an OC should be like.
AU: I'm not completely sure what to make of these. Depending on the category, I either hate them or love them. When it comes to video games, I guess I find AU more acceptable (like Final Fantasy). But anime? Not so much.
OOC: It should not be done unless the writer is skilled at masking it. Even still, unless the story is a comedy of some sort, the concept should not even be taken into consideration. I know I make it happen from time to time, but I try to keep it to a minimum while still retaining their personality. For instance, Xemnas from Kingdom Hearts. He's cold, and unfeeling. I have made the mistake of adding quirks to his personality that go against this, which I intend on correcting.
I do enjoy reading fanfiction and it would really make my day if anyone had any recommendations.
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