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Joined 04-03-06, id: 1020771
Author has written 2 stories for Xiaolin Showdown, and Warriors.

hi, I FINALY THOUGHT UP A PEN-NAME YAH

my profile used to have stuff about my favourite things. But i realised that was all kinda n00bish so I changed it. I noticed a while back that peoples profiles can be really boring because they go on about NOTHING so I decided to write something that will keep us all entertained, and teach people that are new to fanfiction a thing or two. Anyway here it is

How to make sure your OC isn't a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

you just thought up an OC, you think everything is grand and dandy, you have a great OC and an OK story-line. You post it on FF and everything's great. You see you've got your first review yah, you go onto the review page and BAMM! you just got flamed because your great "OC" is actually a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu. So I've written this to make sure something like that never happens to someone who reads this.

1) when you think up a OC your probably going to give them powers or something e.g there super strong or super smart or something like that. Anyway don't give them to much powers/strength. Everyone has an Achilles heal. Even if they don't have powers Oc's also need flaws in there personalty e.g they talk to much, there vain(this can work as a good or bad personalty trait) or there just plain annoying.

what i do when i come up with a OC is I sit down, get a piece of paper or Microsoft word and make out a table like this.

OCs name: Sara (this character/OC is not in any of my stories)

Strengths: very funny and can cheer people up easly

Weaknesses: can be really annoying sometimes and doesnt take things seriously

2) please, PLEASE don't make your OC the most beautiful thing that ever existed. I am begging you please don't, that is one of the most Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu ish things you can do, if you can pull it off great that's good for you, but please be realistic it is not humanly possible to have no feature flaws. I do the same thing I did with 1)

OCs name: Sara

Best features: her sky blue eyes, thick black hair and long curly eyelashes

Worst Features: Has a growth on her chin, always has bags under her eyes and has a constant red nose because she always has a cold.

3) don't make everyone of the opposite gender fall in love with him/her unless they have a love potion or something just don't. maybe have them fall in love with one person, but just one person, you could try and get away with two, it's really up to you.

4) The main evil character does not want to capture your OC because of there extreme power. Every single Mary-Sue story that I have read has that plot line. Maybe have it as your OC gets into a fight with someone and becomes evil in spite. (hmm must turn this into a story) seriously just don't write that plot line, everyone on FanFiction is sick of that plot line, even Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu writers are sick of that plot line. So don't write it.

well I I've been helpful with this guide :P

The totally awesome, amazing generation is on hiatus because I've lost my muse(waaa) i might re-write it sometime, for for now meh. Also i'll try and continue The warriers dream...but im going to camp for two weeks so yeah give me some time and stuff

Ninety-five percent of teenagers are concerned about being popular. If you are one of the five percent who aren't, copy this, put it in your profile, and add your name to the list: Queen S of Randomness 016, Queen B of Randomness 016, AnimieKittyCaffe, The Gypsy Pirate Queen, That Bloody Demon, The Astrology Nerd, Shadow929, Crazy Billie Joe Loving Freak, Yavie Aelienel, Hyperactively Bored, Spymaster E, Shanny-Boo, Gem W, Brown-eyed angelofmusic, piratesswriter/fairy to be, Bara-Minomoto, Em Quagmire, Buffy The Mary-Sue Slayer, Random Little Writer, SamanthaFantasyFan, The-Good-Die-Alone, Damn i can't think of a penname.

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My Journal: Katara's Story by LadyLibra12 reviews
Katara is writing a journal to tell about her life, and how she slowly begins to realize she loves Zuko. A new way to write for Katara's POV! [Zutara] Rated 'T' for later chapters.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 12 - Words: 13,863 - Reviews: 221 - Favs: 36 - Follows: 60 - Updated: 6/17/2012 - Published: 3/23/2006 - Katara, Zuko
Project 20: Twenty Ways To Get Revenge on Hilary by dong-chun-mei reviews
What happens when a bossy brunette gets on your nerves one too many times? Project 20 that's what! Tyson's been planning this for a while... Revenge is so sweet. This funny ride is sure to end badly... or will it? TyHil emplied RayMariah MaxMar KaiJulia
Beyblade - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 14 - Words: 20,732 - Reviews: 151 - Favs: 41 - Follows: 40 - Updated: 6/7/2012 - Published: 2/1/2007 - Tyson G./Takao K., Hilary/Hiromi T., Max T./Max M., Kai H.
Black Roses by SpazzChicken reviews
In Albion, dragons are vile and hated. But a girl who has known no family but a young dragon will go to any length to save him when he's in danger. Even if it means relying on a bitter pervert of a Hero. **Under Revision--New Ch 5 Up**
Fable - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 21 - Words: 53,803 - Reviews: 119 - Favs: 24 - Follows: 23 - Updated: 12/21/2009 - Published: 1/10/2006
Crystal Tears by THEWolfGrl reviews
Sakura laid limply on the bed underneath him. Her vision blurred, and Sakura blacked out, but not before seeing him shrug off his dark green jacket, and move for his pant’s zipper. There's only one silver headed ninja who can save her now. [KakaSaku]
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 7,418 - Reviews: 171 - Favs: 67 - Follows: 131 - Updated: 7/24/2007 - Published: 6/10/2007 - Kakashi H., Sakura H.
Crimson's Child by Ladya C. Maxine reviews
Prequel to 'Resurfacing'. Abused by his disfunctional family, young Tala sees no other way of living, resigned to the pain. When he befriends a certain bluenette is it for better or for worse...? Chapter 11 up!
Beyblade - Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 11 - Words: 32,272 - Reviews: 285 - Favs: 117 - Follows: 61 - Updated: 4/3/2007 - Published: 7/25/2003 - Tala, Kai H.
The King Of Hearts by Azeali reviews
Rogue who is stuck in a institute with annoying little mutant children sought out to cling to her and make her life even more difficult gets a shock when the new recruit is not quite what she expected, but is the newcomer better or worse? ROMY.
X-Men: Evolution - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 16 - Words: 19,798 - Reviews: 394 - Favs: 82 - Follows: 144 - Updated: 2/5/2007 - Published: 4/20/2006 - Rogue/Anna Marie, Gambit/Remy L.
Xiaolin Idol 2 by princ3ssch3rri3bl0ss0m724 reviews
[CHAPTER 8 UP] They sing scat, and all that's left are damn i cant think of a penname, Chase, and Amanda. You have to vote, OR ELSE THE WORLD WILL EXPLODE!
Xiaolin Showdown - Rated: T - English - Parody/Romance - Chapters: 8 - Words: 10,229 - Reviews: 81 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 1/23/2007 - Published: 6/24/2006
All For Love by Witch Girl Pilar reviews
Bull is engaged to marry Karat. But when Karat gets kidnapped by a familiar villian, he will stop at nothing to save his fiancée, even if it means giving up his career... Contains most BullXKarat and some WenXLiennaXEnjyu. FINISHED
Battle B-Daman - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 10 - Words: 31,553 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 12/20/2006 - Published: 5/7/2006 - Complete
Til Death Do Us Part by Vicki So reviews
The Avatar and company face their greatest challenge: planning and getting through Zuko and Katara's wedding day! Why oh why couldn't they have just eloped? Comedic drabbles and randomness for everyone who hates weddings! COMPLETE!
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 43 - Words: 51,281 - Reviews: 1729 - Favs: 665 - Follows: 168 - Updated: 10/8/2006 - Published: 3/16/2006 - Zuko, Katara - Complete
The Frozen Sun: Runaway by Purefeline reviews
A shecat apprentice with mysterious powers embarks on an adventure to save her band and stop the evil that they can't put a face to. Why were the cats exciled from their clan? Why is she mistrusted and hated by others? My first fanfic. CHAP7'S UP!
Warriors - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 9 - Words: 23,152 - Reviews: 26 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 9/16/2006 - Published: 4/21/2006
Big Brother House Xiaolin Showdown style by Adorabella reviews
The Xiaolin monks and the Heylin are stuck together in the Big Brother House, anything could happen. And you get to decide who gets thrown out in the next chapter! rated T for language.
Xiaolin Showdown - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 6 - Words: 9,511 - Reviews: 120 - Favs: 21 - Follows: 22 - Updated: 8/15/2006 - Published: 4/15/2006
The Same Bed by ThefirstTevlek reviews
War has broken out again and Howl is asked for help but the war isn't the only thing that has butterflies in Sophie's stomach. Rated for later Chapters. Kind of a sequel to Sickly Sweet...
Howl's Moving Castle - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 10,653 - Reviews: 183 - Favs: 148 - Follows: 191 - Updated: 8/1/2006 - Published: 2/18/2006
Warriors Randomness by oddsponge13 reviews
Randomness has taken over the forest! What will happen? Will Firestar survive his trip to Disneyland? Who will win the Thunderclan Monopoly tornament? Was Tigerstar related to Darth Vader? Read this fanfic, and find out!R&R! NO FLAMES!
Warriors - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Humor - Chapters: 15 - Words: 10,177 - Reviews: 108 - Favs: 21 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 6/10/2006 - Published: 3/16/2006
Darkest Before Dawn by DaddysGirl81 reviews
Hilary Tatibana use to be all laughs and smiles. She could always see the good side of everything. But one day when she is walking home from school she is abducted by a strange man that does unthinkable things to her. Two months later she finally makes it
Beyblade - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 7 - Words: 9,449 - Reviews: 31 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 3/21/2006 - Published: 7/12/2005 - Hilary/Hiromi T.
Demolition Memories by Elves-Ate-My-Ramen reviews
Tala finds a photo album and the boys take a look at it. What stories have been hidden from the rest of the world? Take a look for yourself. Rated 'T' for foul language. NO PAIRINGS OR LOVE WHAT SO EVER. Possible additional chapters.
Beyblade - Rated: T - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,793 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 6 - Published: 2/20/2006 - Bryan, Tala - Complete
The Diary Of A Teenage Permanent Baby Sitter! by xglittergigglesx reviews
Kitty gets dumped with a baby girl and everyone thinks it's hers. There's a new girl that is trying to steal Lance plus she has school! How the hell will she cope!
X-Men: Evolution - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 8,448 - Reviews: 29 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 13 - Updated: 2/5/2006 - Published: 6/4/2005 - Avalanche/Lance A., Shadowcat/Katherine P./Kitty P.
When it Rains by abbylicious reviews
Misty gets pregnant after a night of drunken mistakes, but Ash doesn’t know he’s the father. After almost five years apart, Ash is a returning Pokémon Master and Misty is still a strong-minded woman, plagued by the past. They meet again at Ash’s
Pokémon - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 9 - Words: 33,762 - Reviews: 281 - Favs: 174 - Follows: 46 - Updated: 2/17/2005 - Published: 12/1/2002
Baby Blues by Relatively Unknown reviews
*FINISHED* The Brotherhood find a special gift on their doorstep one night...
X-Men: Evolution - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 6 - Words: 7,135 - Reviews: 47 - Favs: 18 - Updated: 11/27/2001 - Published: 11/26/2001
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the totaly awesome, amazing next generation reviews
the xiaolin heros are grown up and they've moved out to go and fight evil. so it's the next generation of warriors. one with a dark past. all relatied to charters we all know and love.
Xiaolin Showdown - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 6 - Words: 8,548 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 9/27/2006 - Published: 4/27/2006
The warriors Dream reviews
4 wind clan cats are called by starclan too go on a quest to go and safe another clan from death can they do it? i suck ot summarys
Warriors - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 734 - Reviews: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/3/2006