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Author has written 11 stories for Crash Bandicoot, and Transformers/Beast Wars.
NEEDS A BETA READER. okay so for those who read my Transformers OC POV, to start with i did not have that GOOD habit of remembering basic grammar, capital letters and what not, and so far i have barely made a start on trying to amend those issues so i would really appreciate the help please? ;P
i have another page for my stories as well as some other stuff - http://belle-izumi.deviantart.com/ :)
Making a clean slate, my writing skills have vastly improved and I'm bombing through my stories :D
but first introduction
hi I'm a human being with a name i most likely share with a few million others so take your pick ;) i enjoy writing fanfic (obviously) mostly transformers, but i hope to one day work on other things like Naruto for example but that will be a a LONG while yet :)
i enjoy reading as much as i like writing and i favor the Human and Autobot partner stories the most (as you could probably tell if you have read my work :P) but i also like the fluff/humor/family/friendship/hurt/comfort genre too nothing wrong with a bit of sadness now and then :)
i do the best i can to be precise with how characters are meant to act, i have a little OCD when it comes to things like that, but i will admit when i have made mistakes. but i will mention this, this is my way of writing, its not a career, its a hobby i put them up here for other people to enjoy as well as myself so i don't forget about them lol.
anyway i hope you find my stories on your travels sometime and read and review if you wish, i'll be looking forward to it ;) bye for now
the section below is a memo to myself to try and remember my own OC's because my memory sucks _;
crash bandicoot characters - splash bandicoot, nathan cortex, nicky cortex, Marahute solar , crystal solar , susaku solar, foresta eclipse, max powers, simon lizard, cassandra cortex/bandicoot ,ember, flora , aurora, saphire.
and in the digimon story intro - i'll be making digimon adventure Generation not sure how many episodes i'll be writing but in this adventure it contains spider digimon (mainly beacuse spiders are my greatest foe :S) so here our the characters who will be included
Digimon Characters - Junior Kamiya, Matthew Ishida, Sammy Ishida, Belle Izumi, Mickey tachikawa ,Jordan Kido, Riku Ichijouji, Roxas Ichijouji (yeah i know kingdom hearts but i like those names :3) , yasmine Ichijouji, David motomiya, Cassy hida, Kieran, TK (junior) oh god i can't remember my characters names..the horrible result of college work too..many..assignments!!
naruto characters (human) - Ellen Robertson same name different person :)
Transformers - Ellen Robertson, Eve Lennox, Rochelle Mckenzie.
omg-its-a-dancing-charmander :D you rule
favorite movies -
Atlantis the lost empire (Disney)
Beauty and the Beast (Disney)
Bedknobs and broomsticks (Disney)
mostly animated :P
About my OC's.
Ellen Robertson - My most used OC
Cybertronian Name - Starlight (name i came up with back in 2009, thats what you get for thinking too much :P) (Transformers Prime she has a robotic form which she refers to as said name)
Appearance - if you check my avatar pic you'll see what her basic look is but i'll describe her anyway.
Eye color - Blue
Hair color - Brown
Age - in the first live action movie she is 5 years old, in revenge of the fallen she is 17, in Dark of the moon she is 19. in the transformers prime series she is 16.
Autobot Parent/Guardian - Optimus Prime
General Description - she wears blue jeans, with a white top, depending on her age, for example 17 and onwards she would wearing a black jacket...she likes to smybolise this as her stage in life. in transformers prime she's wearing a navy blue jacket.
Personality - she's generally nice to anyone, though with jerks she likes to calmy make witty remarks the ones no one else can think of on the spot, instant own! there have been few occasions where she has actually had to fight someone , mainly because everyone has there limit. she can be very cheeky, to a point she doesnt know her limit. funny,brave,optimistic,friendly,charismatic,smart,responsible,reliable,dedicated,daring,obnoxious at times, can be stubborn as a way of standing her ground. just to name a few. even with jerks like, galloway and those who want to cut her down. she would never try to threaten or go to there level. one day they will see her in a different way.
at a young age she was always naive and curious, and that alone got her into life threatening situations following Optimus as they tracked down decepticons, exploring possible decepticon hideouts with her friend Eve, not thinking about how she endangers her life as well as her friend her mind was set on the exciting opportunity of the situation, though young she was very witty especially towards those who try to insult her though she speaks without thinking and can result in the insulter being the attacker resulting in another situation where optimus has to prevent Ellen from getting herself killed by a decepticon, autobot even a human...and its tiring work.
it was only through many years of being with optimus that she realized the seriousness of the situation, but she was still the same in a sense at 14 she still kept to her curious ways and still kept to her humorous self but was more aware this time, though she would still sometimes put herself in these situations she was more careful and made sure not to put anyone in harms way due to her errors. she loves to train, a favorite is running down a hill side for four miles, she is not camera shy and will show off in the most melodramatic way possible as she loves to act, she loves sci-fi and she can recite every quotation of every film she has ever watched but despite her bubbly personality she will act serious when the situation calls for it.
Back story - Ellen was staying with Sam and his parents as her mother had D.I.A a year before. Her father was still out there alongside captain Lennox's team, Ron was good friends with her father and agreed to take care of her until he returned. Guess who has to look after Ellen when his parents are out... and the rest is history she was there when he was getting his first car, he took her to the lake alongside miles, and she was even there for the awkward romance hooray for our responsible hero :p. And yes even present for all the goofy robot humour, anyway long story short it all ends up as Ellen's dad was one of the victims of scorponok and Will was the one to break the news to her in mission city pretty heavy stuff for a five year old, but it ends up with Optimus adopting her (isn't it always lol) maybe I'll do a fanfic of the said bonding with lots of fluff :3. i've basically put this up to avoid confusion when i eventually write story fics for other characters, with Ellen making appearances.
Appearance - long black hair, slightly spiked at the tips, she has long black hair to cover faded scars.
7 years old - skinny looking girl but makes up with it with muscle, hair drapes over her face, many scaring on face and arms but is covered up with make up.
19 years old - slender looking, but again you can see the subtle hints of a girl who can obviously defend herself, biggest and in her opinion, unpractical flaw is her rather large bust... amongst her friends anyway.
Eye color - Brown
Hair color - Black
Autobot guardian - Ironhide
Age - Transformers 2007, 7 years old. ROTF, 19 years old. DOTM, 21 years old.
General Description - most tops she wears are mainly black, she wears the darkest shade of blue for jeans, with her favourite film being terminator 2, she wears biker cowboy boots.
personality - particularly as a kid she is a troubled child, very paranoid at the slightest touch or insult, as she brawls at school very often. can be very aggressive, quick tempered, grumpy and refuses to trust anyone even if it means being brutally mean to those she is forced to hang around with just so they don't get close to her...deep inside she regrets this but cant take any chances.
at the age of nineteen she is still somewhat grumpy, feisty and quick tempered but this has all vastly toned down, she is more disciplined now when it comes to baring patience but she has her limits and won't hesitate to head butt the problem. she feels strongly about her friendship with her friends be it human or autobot. and will defend them in there time of need, physical or if the situation calls for her to use her mouth. she is a thrill seeker/dare devil, she enjoys being in the middle of it all and will even risk the stripping of her skin to be apart of the action. her language is colorful and she can be brutally honest especially towards those she doesn't know or like.
Now i'm going to do this thing that many do mainly because i'm guilty of falling for them *do-eeeeeeee!* ///
WHO'S YOUR FAVORITE TRANSFORMER?
Optimus Prime, could you tell? ;)
WHAT WOULD YOU DO IF YOU MET YOUR FAVORITE TRANSFORMER?
most likely go all shy :3, stutter a lot in an attempt to speak to him, then probally go really red in the face and hide my face in under my shirt ///
WHAT WOULD YOUR FAVORITE TRANSFORMER DO IF HE/SHE MET YOU?
Hopefully i've witnessed him in battle so he ends up taking me to base for my own safety...hey i can dream can't i? X3
WHAT MUSIC DOES HE/SHE LISTEN TO?
not to loud rap thats for sure ;)
DO YOU HAVE AN OC?
i have a few but my most used OC is Ellen
WHAT WOULD YOUR OC DO IF HE/SHE MET YOUR FAVORITE TRANSFORMER?
she doesn't just meet him, she grows up in his care, but upon meeting she asked if she could ride with him to sams house.
WHO IS YOUR FAVORITE AUTOBOT?
altogether now...Optimus Prime! be it G1/Prime/ or Movie basically all the one's Peter Cullen provided the voices for...damn he's so cool!
WHAT CRAZY THING COULD YOU IMAGINE HE/SHE DOING?
giving Sam a hug XD ... but i secretly wish to see that >_>
WHO IS YOUR FAVORITE DECEPTICON?
Knock-out, Soundwave - Prime
Barricade - Bayverse
i don't have that many favorite decepticons, I'm more of an Autobot supporter :3
WHAT CRAZY THING COULD YOU IMAGINE HE/SHE DOING?
Hmm perhaps knockout was to scrape a fork alongside his paintjob? *shudders*
and for soundwave...he would actually talk! :O
WHAT WOULD YOUR FAVORITE AUTOBOT AND DECEPTICON DO IF THEY MET EACH OTHER?
it would be a very awkward conversation i imagine ;
WHO IS YOUR LEAST FAVORITE AUTOBOT?
Skid and Mudflap - its not that i hate them its just there voices, i can't seem to bare it -_-
WHO IS YOUR LEAST FAVORITE DECEPTICON?
Starscream, be it prime/movie or G1, yes he's hilariously failing in life but i just can't seem to...like him...he's just...bleurgh!
IF YOU COULD MARRY YOUR FAVORITE TRANSFORMER, HOW MANY KIDS WOULD YOU HAVE?
Pardon me? O_O, optimus to me is more of a hero someone to admire, not a love interest -_-; that's just me anyway and besides that's...just...nasty.
Transformers fics in order
if i were to put them in chronological order mainly for my most used oc it would be...
Transformers Prime OC POV
Life on the nemesis
DOTM (WORKING PROGRESS)
Transformers prime - new story I've been working I've been practicing so hopefully my grammar has improved ;). arh man 31 episodes down only... whenever the series ends which i hope is another 20 years! lol
basically Ellen's look on things during the transformers prime series and along the way learn more about her origins and her involvement with each of the characters, although she is mostly concerned for the safety of the others shes the one with the most injuries at the end of the day, i like to think Ellen can defend herself not against humans she can take down any human if she wanted to, though Silas is a worthy foe and her connected history with him has clouded her judgement when fighting him. no when i say i think she can defend herself i mean against decepticons, on a rare occasion that can be physical but mostly its mentally she will rarely if not ever scream in the presence of one, she will not give them the satisfaction. but megatron is the exception but only when he has taken hold of her unexpectedly will she made somewhat of a gasp. although she tries to avoid unintentional danger she will either do so because of her nature or she can contribute in a way, hanging around base for weeks on end with no where else to hang can be a strain on her mentality.
Little Distractions (complete) - set in the movie-verse this is the story that introduces Ellen during the events, but it is all viewed through Optimus's pov, i was loosely thinking of how different he is here to his g1 self but i love both, so i kind of made him slightly more cold and oblivious to certain things but it changes with each chapter. Ellen being the source obviously but i didn't want them to instantly like each other i wanted to go into it slowly so it made it more satisfying when i eventually got to the ending.
Dad (complete) - just a little one shot fluff moment (I'm a sucker for them ;3) but i liked writing it so much i may make an extended story involving everyday occurrences for human and guardian, i may call it 'three autobots and there charges' or something :p. but anyway this was basically a little story of when Ellen was still in mourning for her father but eventually accepted optimus as her father too in the end, please note that i will not be paying for anyone's dental bills when there teeth fall out from reading this fic i have put clear warnings but it seems there have already been casualties ;P
Saving you - trying something a little different, introducing my other oc Eve, who i have paired up with ironhide, i have rated this M mainly for swearing, attempted suicide and another thing but i won't say for it is technically a spoiler for those little group of people still baring with me :). but this is basically a child suffering from abuse story, social workers can't handle her, teachers can't handle her, even her friends and family are struggling, ironhide to the rescue! his wonderful personality will surely win her over...right? well luckily eve is more for ironhides type then she would the nice and clean type, he has an edge to him that gains her attention, though she won't tell him this and is still a bit wobbly with the thing that is called 'trust' but perhaps one day she'll get there.
Three Autobots and There Charges -a series of fluff, humor, awkwardness and all set in different scenarios, my Oc's Ellen, Rochelle and Eve are all at the autobot base this story is basically the events that happened in between the movies, mainly after the first one but before the second one (11 years before the events of ROTF) , of what life is like growing up with the autobots, from asking where babies come from to graduation i'm covering it all :)
Life On The Nemesis - This is a future story I'm currently working on but haven't uploaded it yet, this takes place at the end of ROTF, megatron and starscream retreat but not without taking something of Optimus's...who else but my oc Ellen this time she must try to survive life on the nemesis without Optimus, without her friends, will she be able to survive long enough to be saved or will she mentally collapse at the on going torture?
crash bandicoot generation episode 1 nathan cortex - yeah i actually haven't been on here for a while, well my account anyway and yeah since then i've become much better i believe with my writing skills :P. When i looked through this story i face palmed, so yeah i think i just write everything down before looking at it as I've already wriiten earlier in my profile. i'll rewrite this mainly because this story was a prototype since i've completely changed my characters personalities, back stories and have made new characters as well. someday i hope to be able to start this story again as well as finish it as it is a crucial part of the series.
crash bandicoot generation episode 2 splash bandicoot - i wont rewrite this as i'm fine with the first chapter but i can't continue this story either as some things said in this story may be a reference to the first story, so yeah due to college now it may be a while before theirs a spark of inspiration :P
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