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Author has written 28 stories for CSI, Misc. Tv Shows, Stargate: Atlantis, Eureka, Chuck, Criminal Minds, Bones, and NCIS.

Name: Loren

Location: Georgia

Fave Shows: Right now? NCIS. I go through obsessions, you know? I think my first one was ER, then CSI, then SGA, Criminal Minds, Bones and now NCIS. Of course, I have miniature obsessions like Heroes, Numb3rs, Jericho, and Scrubs, and finally, there's just the really good (and usually funny ones) I just enjoy watching. Everybody Loves Raymond, How I Met Your Mother, and the Big Bang Theory. There's probably loads more, but that's all I can think of.

Fave Characters: To name a few: Tim McGee (NCIS), Dr. Spencer Reid (Criminal Minds), Dr. Lance Sweets (Bones), Patrick Jane (Mentalist), Chuck (Chuck), Sheppard (SGA), Greg (CSI), Carter (ER), Tony (NCIS), Jake (Jericho)...

Little about me: Well, I'm currently 22 years old and again, I live in Georgia. I have worked at Walt Disney World, a sea turtle center, a movie theater and now I'm working in a federal prison. I love it.

Other than that, I love my family, my friends, I love my dogs, music (love music) and the Lord. That's really about it; me in a nut shell.

My Writing: Well, seeing as how I wrote my first stories at the age of like, 13 or 14(?), some are pretty bad. Heck, all of them might be really bad, but I know they are at least improving as I go. I'm learning the ropes from experience and from tons of talented writers I've come to know right here on ff.net and other places on the internet. Most of them lately from the SGA fandom (which is the best I've ever been a part of). So, I love all of them.

I'm a whumper, plain and simple. All of my stories have some quantity of whump or hurt/comfort, I should say. It's funny, when I first started writing, all my stories would focus on whump. Whump for whump's sake, really. But, as I've grown and matured, I've turned more so towards character insights and development. Not all of my latest ones, of course, but in many cases I think. I think I've come to appreciate these characters a little more. This is mostly centered around John Sheppard of SGA, but it did start with my very few Jericho fics. I like it better this way, though. So, it works. :)

My feelings on Romances: I don't like them. They generally aren't my cup of tea at all, especially when that's the focus. Most shows, especially the crime dramas I watch, would never put two of the main characters together, and therefore I see pairing them up to be out of character. In most cases, that is. And I hate ooc fics. Every now and then I'll find a pairing I can accept, as long as it is in a very low quantity and is semi believable for the series (Chuck/Sarah from Chuck, Bones/Booth from Bones). Now, I'm sure there are many very well written romance fics out there, but they just don't interest me and so you'll never see me write one.

My feelings on Death fics: I don't read them and I don't write them. I love when characters are thought to be dead when they really aren't (a couple of my stories will prove that point) but not actually dead.

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A to Z of Tim Whumps! by JazzieG reviews
Just what it says in the title! 26 individual stories of ways Tim gets hurt! Why? 'Cos it's fun! All team members will appear throughout. *May contain spoilers for all Seasons*
NCIS - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 6 - Words: 90,911 - Reviews: 159 - Favs: 185 - Follows: 219 - Updated: 8/22/2016 - Published: 11/22/2012 - Tim M.
The Flight Home by myownmind reviews
Hotch and Reid are called back to D.C. in the middle of a case in Los Angeles. The commercial flight they're on runs into problems and crashes in the Rocky Mountains. Now they have to survive the crash and the fact that the killer may be with them.
Criminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 30 - Words: 66,587 - Reviews: 507 - Favs: 368 - Follows: 324 - Updated: 2/25/2012 - Published: 1/23/2011 - A. Hotchner/Hotch, S. Reid - Complete
Until the Bell Tolls by Tipper reviews
An arsonist fugitive is caught, but the disaster he's planned continues to play out. To make matters worse, everyone's on edge after a King goes down. Some spoilers for Season One
Breakout Kings - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 12 - Words: 53,781 - Reviews: 54 - Favs: 55 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 1/17/2012 - Published: 1/2/2012 - Complete
After the Revelations by ficklescribbler reviews
A series of "missing scenes", connected as a somewhat back-story following the episode "Revelations". How did Reid and the BAU team handle the aftermath? Team fic; rated T for mentions of drug use and mild swearing.
Criminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Friendship - Chapters: 11 - Words: 22,714 - Reviews: 118 - Favs: 155 - Follows: 124 - Updated: 6/18/2010 - Published: 4/26/2010
Taken from right under them by LostRevelations77 reviews
The C.S.I team gets two murders called in. But when it turns out they are both fake, Greg gets kidnaped while trying to find the head of their vic. Will the team find him in time? And what happens when the man that got him kills his own associates? update
CSI - Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Drama - Chapters: 9 - Words: 10,622 - Reviews: 62 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 31 - Updated: 6/22/2009 - Published: 11/19/2005 - Greg S.
Into The Nadir by Laatija reviews
Somewhere, within the depths of an injudicious city, darkness waits. Trouble is brewing and the fate of millions of people lies in the hands of a very unsuspecting colonel. Chaos has found him, now what will he do? Whump in abundance.
Stargate: Atlantis - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Mystery - Chapters: 34 - Words: 59,279 - Reviews: 304 - Favs: 32 - Follows: 54 - Updated: 7/11/2008 - Published: 10/17/2007 - John S. - Complete
Long Time Gone by Lorr reviews
Sheppard's team finds a energy reading on a remote planet and goes to investigate. They lose a team member, but find someone long thought dead. Can they get the lost team member back in the limited time they have?
Stargate: Atlantis - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 11 - Words: 33,755 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 2 - Published: 1/1/2008 - John S., Rodney M. - Complete
Scrambled Brains on the Side, Please by Titan5 reviews
The team is captured by some acquaintances of Kolya, who just may have driven Sheppard over the edge in their attempt to find Atlantis.
Stargate: Atlantis - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14,220 - Reviews: 35 - Favs: 46 - Follows: 2 - Published: 12/26/2007 - Complete
Choices by Titan5 reviews
A tag to Miller's Crossing in which John has trouble dealing with his part in Wallace's death. Spoilers, obviously.
Stargate: Atlantis - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 11,622 - Reviews: 55 - Favs: 21 - Follows: 21 - Updated: 12/21/2007 - Published: 12/20/2007 - Complete
Under The Surface by Pilgrim Soul reviews
A routine mission goes horribly wrong when the team find themselves trapped and seriously injured. Team fic. Whump all round. WIP
Stargate: Atlantis - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 6 - Words: 23,683 - Reviews: 87 - Favs: 43 - Follows: 94 - Updated: 9/3/2007 - Published: 11/28/2006
Blur by nine miles to go reviews
JD blows off the vision blurs and dizziness. After all, what could go wrong? LONGER THAN A ONESHOT! JDA.
Scrubs - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 18 - Words: 35,796 - Reviews: 266 - Favs: 145 - Follows: 150 - Updated: 12/6/2006 - Published: 10/24/2006
No Common Allegiance: The Red Line Blues by dHALL reviews
Part one of three. An earthquake.A derailed subway car.Six young gang members,a gun and a claustrophobic math professor.Looks like he picked the wrong day to conquer an irrational fear. SERIES COMPLETED!
Numb3rs - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 7 - Words: 13,841 - Reviews: 98 - Favs: 97 - Follows: 27 - Updated: 7/15/2006 - Published: 6/25/2006 - Charlie E. - Complete
Blood Relations by dHALL reviews
Charlie learns all about Kevlar first hand. Don uses anger to mask his fears while Charlie faces his. And a quest for retribution may end Charlie's life before they get the chance to make amends. Completed.Revised slighly and errors corrected Sept'06
Numb3rs - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 19 - Words: 32,386 - Reviews: 242 - Favs: 152 - Follows: 34 - Updated: 6/15/2006 - Published: 5/29/2006 - Complete
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The Basement reviews
COMPLETE: As one agent fights for his life and another fights for control of his own mind, the rest of the crippled team must focus on solving the crime and stopping an impending attack on a Navy ship. *Not the best summary but anyway, no ships, just team love.
NCIS - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 8 - Words: 24,119 - Reviews: 99 - Favs: 68 - Follows: 104 - Updated: 8/5/2014 - Published: 5/5/2014 - Tony D., Tim M., Ziva D., Leroy Jethro Gibbs - Complete
Sidekicks and Soccer Moms reviews
A one-shot/missing scene for last night's episode, Chasing Ghosts. This is my take on a conversation that could have been had between McGee and Tony towards the end. No ships (just friendships) and SPOILERS for season 10. Look inside if you want more info as I don't want to spoil anyone.
NCIS - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,063 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 2 - Published: 4/10/2013 - Tony D., Tim M. - Complete
A Family Affair reviews
Follows Sarah McGee during the events of Extreme Prejudice and dives deeper into the troubled McGee family. Just a lengthy one-shot that centers on a really sweet relationship between two siblings.
NCIS - Rated: K - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,385 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 81 - Follows: 11 - Published: 3/20/2013 - Sarah McG., Admiral McGee, Tim M. - Complete
A Far Cry From Normal reviews
After a horrible case seemingly takes a turn for the worse, the team is led to believe they have lost one of their own. - This is a character study of our beloved team as they endure a certain situation. No ships, just friendship and general NCIS love.
NCIS - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 4 - Words: 11,832 - Reviews: 50 - Favs: 94 - Follows: 43 - Updated: 11/26/2012 - Published: 11/20/2012 - Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Tim M. - Complete
Catching Heroes reviews
A one-shot missing scene for the season ten premier, Extreme Prejudice, seen through the eyes of a nurse. No pairings, just a little look into what I like to think happened.
NCIS - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,168 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 38 - Follows: 4 - Published: 11/25/2012 - Tim M. - Complete
One for the Angels reviews
A tag/companion to "Extreme Prejudice" because there's so much I wish we could have seen. Fills in blanks and adds to what we got. Focuses on the team because, in the search for Dearing, I really missed them. Spoilers for 10X1.
NCIS - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 3 - Words: 7,138 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 25 - Follows: 34 - Updated: 10/25/2012 - Published: 10/13/2012
A Flaw in the Reasoning reviews
A close call for Bones sheds new light on her current state as a pregnant woman and on her friendship with a certain psychologist. First ever Bones fic. Focuses on Bones and Sweets, but everyone is included!
Bones - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 4 - Words: 12,816 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 25 - Follows: 27 - Updated: 3/27/2012 - Published: 1/31/2012 - T. Brennan, L. Sweets
The Lucky Ones reviews
Reid wakes up in a hospital miles away from where he began and the team has no idea where to even begin looking for him after a strange case throws them all for a loop. Team fic, no pairings.
Criminal Minds - Rated: K - English - Crime/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 4 - Words: 9,450 - Reviews: 60 - Favs: 53 - Follows: 97 - Updated: 11/2/2011 - Published: 9/26/2011
Profilers vs Nature reviews
COMPLETE Two of our beloved agents find themselves stuck in the Colorado mountains after a car accident. They must fight to survive and make sacrifices for each other as they attempt to find help and a way home. Not a pairing, just whump and friendship!
Criminal Minds - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 13 - Words: 33,605 - Reviews: 206 - Favs: 198 - Follows: 134 - Updated: 6/4/2011 - Published: 5/16/2010 - Complete
Enjoy the Silence reviews
*Spoilers for Amplification* - A tag or something like that . Basically, it's the team love I missed for a fallen colleague and friend. Focuses more on the team's concern for Reid and maybe later a bit more inside into his recovery.
Criminal Minds - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 4 - Words: 9,637 - Reviews: 69 - Favs: 144 - Follows: 134 - Updated: 8/1/2010 - Published: 5/29/2009
Too Much at Once reviews
Basically, this is a "what if" story. What if Reid's gunsot wound in "Facelss, Nameless" was a bit more serious? Slight AU to part of "Faceless, Nameless" so, spoilers for that episode. Enjoy! Complete!
Criminal Minds - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 8 - Words: 19,082 - Reviews: 146 - Favs: 391 - Follows: 133 - Updated: 5/16/2010 - Published: 4/18/2010 - S. Reid, A. Hotchner/Hotch - Complete
Options reviews
COMPLETE It was Reid... So why was JJ so scared of seeing him? RevelationsTag Not a romance, just friendship :
Criminal Minds - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,979 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 44 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 12/2/2009 - Published: 11/26/2009 - Jennifer J./JJ, S. Reid - Complete
White Lies reviews
When Reid is taken hostage in a bank by a group the team has been profiling, he must work to keep the hostages safe by making sacrifices of his own and creating a bond with his captor. Team and Reid fic. No pairing, no other warnings. Just some whump
Criminal Minds - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 11 - Words: 24,161 - Reviews: 256 - Favs: 678 - Follows: 143 - Updated: 8/4/2009 - Published: 6/28/2009 - S. Reid, A. Hotchner/Hotch - Complete
Chuck vs The Hospital reviews
After a mission goes terribly wrong, Sarah is faced with her biggest fear ever since she became Chuck's handler. No pairing, Chuck whump.
Chuck - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 3 - Words: 7,690 - Reviews: 29 - Favs: 30 - Follows: 43 - Updated: 12/21/2008 - Published: 11/30/2008 - Sarah W., Chuck B.
In Between reviews
Sheppard's having a bit of an out-of-body experience. Now if he could only find his way out of it. COMPLETE
Stargate: Atlantis - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Friendship - Chapters: 10 - Words: 28,686 - Reviews: 101 - Favs: 23 - Follows: 34 - Updated: 9/26/2008 - Published: 8/4/2008 - John S., Rodney M. - Complete
Weakness reviews
Tag to "Games People Play." Picks up where the episode leaves off. Basically, it's about how much Zoe and her father went through and all the things that needed to be said.
Eureka - Rated: K - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,585 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/1/2008 - Complete
In the Arms of Angels reviews
Tag to Miller's Crossing, then some. - When Sheppard travels down to earth for a few days and finds Jeannie waiting for him, they end up in a sticky situation. No pairings, Spoilers for Miller's Crossing. More details inside. COMPLETE
Stargate: Atlantis - Rated: K - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 6 - Words: 24,584 - Reviews: 132 - Favs: 55 - Follows: 46 - Updated: 3/27/2008 - Published: 2/1/2008 - John S. - Complete
Liar, Liar reviews
COMPLETE Rodney returns to Atlantis after a long trip only to find more trouble back home. Guess who? Set before Sunday because this is fanfic and I can do that. Shep Whump in an interesting way...
Stargate: Atlantis - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 8 - Words: 26,837 - Reviews: 97 - Favs: 60 - Follows: 38 - Updated: 12/17/2007 - Published: 11/9/2007 - John S., Rodney M. - Complete
Every Beautiful Day reviews
Yet another tag to Doppelganger. Just because I would love some extra Shepwhump in addition to the lovely episode we got. Obvious spoilers for Doppelganger. Rating for mild swearing. COMPLETE
Stargate: Atlantis - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 4 - Words: 9,709 - Reviews: 42 - Favs: 27 - Follows: 17 - Updated: 11/24/2007 - Published: 10/25/2007 - Complete
Coming Around reviews
Tag to Common Ground. Sheppard is back and alive, though not completely well. And the worst part is, he's having to get through it mostly by himself. New SGA writer and starting off with something safe.
Stargate: Atlantis - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 4 - Words: 15,024 - Reviews: 56 - Favs: 39 - Follows: 28 - Updated: 9/26/2007 - Published: 9/7/2007 - John S. - Complete
Our Darkest Hour reviews
It's coming. The team becomes involved in a new case that seems to be building up to something horrific. But can they figure out what it is before it's too late?
CSI - Rated: K - English - Mystery/Angst - Chapters: 7 - Words: 18,922 - Reviews: 63 - Favs: 17 - Follows: 27 - Updated: 8/9/2007 - Published: 6/21/2007 - Nick S., Greg S.
Snowbound reviews
How friendship and sacrafice keeps Sara and Greg alive in the snow.
CSI - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 11 - Words: 45,438 - Reviews: 106 - Favs: 44 - Follows: 41 - Updated: 6/16/2007 - Published: 1/15/2007 - Greg S., Sara S.
A Reason to Live reviews
[Jericho] Jake has a lot on his mind after his talk with Robert Hawkins is having problems dealing with it all.
Misc. Tv Shows - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,266 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/16/2007 - Complete
As Changing as the Sun reviews
[Jericho] Jake, along with his mother reflect on the hardships of life after the bombs. A nice little fic about mother and son
Misc. Tv Shows - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,762 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/6/2007 - Complete
Heart of Winter 2 reviews
[Jericho] What I thought happened from the point where the truck is taken off Jake, on. So.. all the stuff you didn't see happen, and then I hope to continue on to Stanley and then others, but I might need some reviews for that :
Misc. Tv Shows - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,149 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 3 - Published: 3/16/2007
Powerless reviews
Another darn kidnapping story. Greg centered.. read and review if ya can. K so, its done now. Thanks to everyone who has stayed with it and didn't send ciberknives at me for taking so long to update.
CSI - Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 14 - Words: 46,182 - Reviews: 166 - Favs: 83 - Follows: 32 - Updated: 2/23/2007 - Published: 11/28/2006 - Greg S. - Complete
Getting Out reviews
Its been done before, just trying out my writing style. Pretty much, Sara and Greg are in a dangerous situation and one or both will be getting hurt I'm sure. I plan to have a more unique story out soon, but this is just an idea of how I write.
CSI - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 9 - Words: 13,184 - Reviews: 37 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 20 - Updated: 10/9/2006 - Published: 9/15/2006 - Greg S., Sara S.
Don't Always Assume reviews
Everyone is tired, especially Greg. He is finally getting to go home, but never makes it there. The team assumes the worst. But are they right? Only a little angst and there will be some humor here and there. COMPLETE! COMMENT PLLLEASE!
CSI - Rated: K - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 5 - Words: 6,021 - Reviews: 46 - Favs: 31 - Follows: 17 - Updated: 7/18/2006 - Published: 6/27/2006 - Greg S. - Complete
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