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Joined 07-06-06, id: 1084257, Profile Updated: 04-05-09
Author has written 19 stories for Pirates of the Caribbean, Star Wars, Lost, Star Wars, Inheritance Cycle, Maximum Ride, and Twilight.

The image on the side is a picture I found of a brown wolf pup...he's exactly what Jay (Puppy from Call of the Wild) looks like. Adorable, right??

About Me:

Age: 1,000,000,000,000

Gender: Female

Animals: All except snakes and big animals in the water. Snakes just cause i dont like their teeth...scary...but Snakes on a Plane WAS funny! And uh...yea...big water animals scare me. I don't really know why...

Movies: P.S. I Love You, The Nightmare Before Christmas, Monty Python & The Holy Grail, Twilight, Edward Scissorhands, Star Wars, etc.

Books: The Great Gatsby, The Twilight Saga, The Inheritance Saga, The Maximum Ride Series, This Side of Paradise, The Alchemist, & anything written by Nicholas Sparks.

My obsessions: Music (I can never have enough...I love it!), Guitar Hero/Rock Band (Yeah, that's how you kill a Friday night), & art.

Favorite Bands: Um...I really don't have favorites, but here are some on my i-pod: The Academy Is..., AFI, Avenged Sevenfold, Boys Like Girls, Cartel, Driver Side Impact, Disturbed, Evanescence, Fall Out Boy (Hence, my SN), Finger Eleven, Flyleaf, Foo Fighters, Good Charlotte, Halifax, Hinder, Lifehouse, Linkin Park, My Chemical Romance, Nirvana (The OLDER songs...), Panic at the Disco, Paramore, The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus, Rise Against, Saosin, Sevendust, Story of the Year, since october, Scientist Vs. Werewolf, Sugarcult, Taking Back Sunday, Three Days Grace, Thursday, Yellowcard, and 30 Seconds to Mars...I warned you! I'm surprised you read the list XDDD.

Stuff I do: Write, draw, blare music, and hang w/ friends.

Stuff I like: movies, the beach, hanging out with friends, my i-pod, pudding (heck yes!), and just being able to say that I like stuff.

Newest Fanfics: um...yea...nothing right now. trying to write one right now, i promise!

My newest character: Anna Collins (Call of the Wild OC who falls head over heels for a werewolf)

Coming Soon:

Nameless- Well, that's not really the title. But just a substitute until I come up with a good one. Right now, here's a synopsis until I can discover a name.

Just years before Edward discovers his Bella, he starts to realize that life isn't so swell being alone. With a snap decision of saving the life of a five-year-old girl, he finds himself bonding with a child that he had never imagined meeting. With mysteries unraveling and the appearance of his true love, is it possible for Edward to protect the loves of his life? EXB all the way with some family bonding : )

My Blessing- Rosalie Hale Cullen, like many vampires, is barren. Yet a blessing from God changes everything. With the gift like no other, she is charged with the ultimate task: can she raise a child of her and Emmett's own? Will the Cullens get a shot at heaven? RxEm, BxE, AxJ, CxEs. 75 chance of JXA (JacobxOC).

I have sympathies for the Cullens over the matter of children. And because of that, I figured that Rosalie deserved a way to cure her bitterness. So here's a special fic that I've done in my spare time (When I'm not brainstorming for Call of the Wild). The first chapter has been written, but it won't be released until Call of the Wild is finished.

Collide- Isabella Marie Swan, or better known as Bella, moved to Forks when she was sixteen years old, permanently. Charlie Swan recieves the ultimate award as police chief: the ancient, haunted Masen Mansion. With the mysterious teenage ghost and the bizarre letters in an old leather journal, Bella finds herself falling in love...with a spirit? AU, EXB all the way! Hinting AXJ, RXEM, CXEs

And now for some crazy quotes from me and my friends:

'Dadgum.'- Rison

'I like lawnmowers 'cause they cut stuff'- Brianna

'We've found Rachel's soulmate!'


'Caboose' - Josh and Me

'I like cats.'

'I'm not really a weasel, you know.'


'Yep. I'm just a cat disguised as a weasel'- Me and Josh

'It's time for macaroni and WEENIES'- My grandpa

'If you are Hawaiian and have black hair, then you're Hawaiian.'- Brianna

'We came all that way for NOTHING?!' -Fat Kid at the Top of the Smokey Mountains...

'We will suck your brains out...WITH BENDY STRAWS! MUHAHAHA (cough, cough!)'- My cousin and I at a football game.

'This still sucks. It just sucks sideways.' - Victoria on math.

'HEY! I need that arm!'

'For what?'

'I need it to open cans!' -Tiffany and I during a particularly boring Creative Writing I class.

'Music is like candy. You gotta throw out all the rappers!'-Keelee, my crazy Journalism friend.

'THIS MAN IS CRYSTAL! See, he has the mustache too.'- Shelby

"OH YEAH, THOSE REINDEER! Wasn't there Rudolph and what's his name...Frances?"-Dallas, my insane friend from HOPE.

"Man, wouldn't it be awesome if like, Athena started to pop, lock, and drop it?"

"Yeah, and Zeus would totally Crank that Soulja Boy!" -Victoria and Logan during the credits roll in The Odyssey.

"What's up?"

"Um, well there's a variety. See, there's some drywall, or I think what that's what it's called. Then there's the sky, the stars..."

"The sun, maybe a few meteors."

-Ramon and I (Haha inside joke).

"It started off like any ol' movie. But then it got real scary!"- My grandpa on a movie.

"I think it would be awesome to have a tail. To move it around and stuff" –My brother, Zac.

"Smoothies don't go in bottles. They go in cups with ice!" - Amanda


Well, I know most people have seen the movie. So I plan on giving a mini review since I have the space and time haha.

Okay, let's face it people: the movie was great. Sure, it lacked in some elements that Twilighters required (Alice in the asylum and perhaps some more Edward/Bella relationship building moments) but overall, it carried the essence of Twilight, which was enough for me.

Ehh critics suck. Let's just get that point across. They did not go into the movie knowing that it is NOT a violence/gorefest that stereotypes of the vampire world have come up with over the centuries. Too many movies have that mandatory law that all vampires must be evil, homicidal fiends that wreak havoc on the unsuspecting townsfolk. And geez, the critics do not get that it was a LOW-BUDGET film! There's only so much you can do! Plus with this crappy economy, I'm suprised that it turned out as good as it did! I guess my whole point with the bashing critics is this: Ladies and Gentlemen of the critiquing world, hear me! GET OVER YOUR PATHETIC STEREOTYPES AND TASTE THE FRESH AIR OF ORIGINALITY INSTEAD OF YOUR FOREVER REMAKES!

As for my personal nit-picks...Well, the cast overall was splendid. I enjoyed every single one of them. I suppose my only real disappointment was with Robert Pattinson's behavior during the Biology scene...he looked more like he was going to gag rather than be enticed by Bella's scent. It was not a major flaw, but just a little nit-pick of mine. I wanted to hug dearest Jasper many times, simply out of sympathy and love of the character overall. My only concern I think with the whole movie was this: the meadow scene with Edward sparkling. Was it just me who expected his face to look like LITERAL diamond with his facial features chiseled in? Like a diamond statue? I don't know, he looked good but not awe-striking. Perhaps with a better budget with New Moon they can correct this minor error. Bring on the CGI!

And kudos to...well, let's name off everything, shall we? I loved the narration of Kristen Stewart, props to you! And Edward was downright gorgeous the whole time, just as I had dreamed him to be. The Cullen family overall was amazing, with Emmett's naturally goofy behavior shown and Rosalie's rotten attitude (loved it!). I wanted to hug Carlisle and Esme, they were adorable! Ahh Alice! She was cute and spunky just as I hoped! Jasper was literally swept out of the book, he was exactly as I hoped for (maybe a little bit more haha). Charlie Swan and Billy Black...they were amazing and perfectly in character. Ahh Jacob Black...I think I declare myself a Taylor Lautner fan after this, he was the perfect Jacob that I admit, I doubted when I first saw the cast list. I want him to return for New Moon! And well, the baddies...Love 'em! Victoria gave me chills and yet seemed so powerful I was almost like 'ooo you go girl!'. James...sexy. Laurent...chills, man! He made my friend scream at one point! And how could I forget the humans? All of them were great, perfect cast! As for the scenery...eep I want family vacation in Oregon or Washington State now!

Gotta say...it was great. I reccomend it to anyone. Just don't go into it with high expectations. And well, let yourself forget about the stereotypes and focus on the love story. We all know that is what Twilight is really about!

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Guns and Roses by RosieWilde reviews
Bella and Edwardʼs relationship is interrupted by WWI. He dreams of glory as a soldier, and she must figure out life without him. A moving story of how friendship turns to love when survival is in doubt. ExB AU/AH. Finalist in the Indie TwiFic Awards.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 38 - Words: 156,809 - Reviews: 1502 - Favs: 698 - Follows: 393 - Updated: 8/4/2009 - Published: 12/13/2008 - Bella, Edward - Complete
Mystery With Black Wings by boopboopglee reviews
In this story Max and Fang have plans for eachother and the flock, that is until a new enemy finds their beach hideaway. Max is ripped away from them and held captive for 2 years.But when she comes back does Fang want what he wanted then? Find out HERE
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 24 - Words: 30,947 - Reviews: 503 - Favs: 119 - Follows: 110 - Updated: 3/19/2008 - Published: 6/18/2007
Remade by TheRealThing reviews
An AU story starting after A New Hope in which Vader discovers that he has been lied to by his master about the death of his wife and children, and sets out to avenge them.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 108 - Words: 168,420 - Reviews: 1660 - Favs: 689 - Follows: 287 - Updated: 5/5/2007 - Published: 7/26/2006 - Darth Vader, Leia O. - Complete
Off in Clone Land by Got Scots reviews
Ewan McGregor's clones are off on their own in this crazy adventure. What will become of them? ...key dramatic music...
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Humor/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 8 - Words: 9,116 - Reviews: 34 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 4/6/2007 - Published: 12/27/2006 - Obi-Wan K., Anakin Skywalker
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Divine Intervention reviews
Jacob Black was left broken hearted at the end of Eclipse. He's convinced that Bella was the one, but he's proven wrong the moment he sets eyes on Anna Collins, his impacting imprint. All original, not like your other imprint stories. JxOC
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 15 - Words: 41,856 - Reviews: 117 - Favs: 67 - Follows: 53 - Updated: 11/25/2008 - Published: 4/4/2008 - Jacob
Call of the Wild reviews
Sixteeen-year-old Anna Collins was an ordinary girl who moved to La Push with her father. But after sighting a rusty brown wolf in her yard one night, her life changes forever. AnnaXJacob, other characters in later chapters.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 24 - Words: 56,778 - Reviews: 277 - Favs: 139 - Follows: 78 - Updated: 6/17/2008 - Published: 1/4/2008 - Complete
There For You reviews
“Do you know why I’m doing this?” I asked, even though I knew that he was aware of the answer. “Why?” he asked, deciding to go along with where I was going. I took his face in my hands, and stared at him in his eyes. BxE Songfic
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,937 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 1 - Published: 1/2/2008 - Complete
Hurricane reviews
Caught in a storm, Nudge and Iggy are separated from the rest of the Flock. How will they survive? Will something of beauty blossom from disaster? Niggy, with slight Fax
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,006 - Reviews: 42 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 24 - Updated: 12/22/2007 - Published: 12/9/2007
Oh, rose, Don't Leave Me reviews
Fax Oneshot. Max and the Flock stay in a cabin in Tenessee in the winter, and what sort of conclusion does she come to by the lull of his words?
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,016 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 4 - Published: 11/30/2007 - Complete
A Little Love reviews
A night in Paris leads Max to come to a conclusion that could change her opinion of saving the world forever. Max Pov. No Mari, simply slight Fax.
Maximum Ride - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,556 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 11/23/2007 - Complete
Sick reviews
Oneshot. Fang's got first watch, and one of the Flock is missing. Can he uncover who and why?
Maximum Ride - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,134 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 2 - Published: 11/19/2007 - Complete
Cat and Mouse reviews
LSFRevanxCarth. After years away, Carth is on the brink. Can he manage without her? PostKotOR 2.
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,584 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 1 - Published: 11/19/2007 - Complete
Mend Her Heart reviews
Fang POV. Max has a date with Sam, and things are not how Fang hoped for. Oneshot, will make series if requested.
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,705 - Reviews: 28 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 11/9/2007 - Published: 11/5/2007 - Complete
The Gift reviews
The story of how Padme copes with her life now as not only a Senator, but a mother. Meanwhile, Aubree is trying to fit into a new world unlike the old. Starts PadmexOC,then Anidala.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 20 - Words: 30,079 - Reviews: 86 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 16 - Updated: 11/3/2007 - Published: 1/3/2007 - Anakin Skywalker, Padmé Amidala
Preschool Days reviews
The lives of the Losties as preschoolers. Follow the Adventures of these children as Tailies, Fusies, and Others collide.
Lost - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 8,230 - Reviews: 113 - Favs: 23 - Follows: 19 - Updated: 7/30/2007 - Published: 10/29/2006 - Kate, Jack
His Light reviews
This is the tale of the adventures of Eragon with a twist: what if he had a little sister around to share them? Meet Lysela, a girl ready to help her big brother save all of Alaegasia. Wanted: Reviews please!
Inheritance Cycle - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 5 - Words: 7,167 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 1/22/2007 - Published: 1/13/2007
Time in the Suds reviews
Carth Onasi seems to need to have a little break...a little one. LSFRevanCarth, KotOR 1. R&R
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 650 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 9 - Published: 12/26/2006 - Complete
Our True Love reviews
Love is difficult, especially to resist. I guess the hardest part of it is when you have a handsome scoundrel holding your palms against the wall and practically begging you to reach to him. LSFExileAtton
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,124 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 2 - Published: 12/19/2006 - Complete
A Moment Under the Mistletoe reviews
A KotOR Christmas Special: My gift to all LSFExileAtton fans! Enjoy, and Happy Holidays!
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 997 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/18/2006 - Complete
A Love for A Scoundrel reviews
LSFExileAtton. It was her fear of his death and his persona that made her realize that a love for him was budding. Songfic
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,020 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 4 - Published: 12/18/2006 - Complete
I Will Carry You reviews
Malachor V nightmares are affecting the crew. The Exile is breaking, and Atton may be the right help...on top of a new talent...LSFExileAtton pairing. Please read and review, I need critiscism!
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 815 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Published: 8/6/2006 - Complete
Angel of Comfort reviews
AttonLSFExile. After the encounter at the Jedi Enclave on Dantooine, the Exile returns broken. Will a certain scoundrel make things better?
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 530 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 4 - Published: 8/3/2006 - Complete
Betrayal reviews
Will's POV. The feelings within Will during the death of the Black Pearl and JackLiz's kiss.
Pirates of the Caribbean - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 387 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/22/2006 - Complete