Author has written 20 stories for Evangelion, Black Lagoon, Oh My Goddess!, and Bleach.
Coming to you from the Great White North.
I've been writing for a long time and I enjoy the constant evolution of my writing. The longer I do it, the more I learn to flesh out the scenes and better describe the action and the emotions of the characters. Hopefully I will continue to develop, since I would like to improve my ability to write more involved plots.
My Stories: A simple quote a character might make, or part of a conversation they might have is all it might take to spark something. Sometimes I try to hit a specific theme, but most often something just pops into my head and starts playing out. If it flows easily on its own, it will likely turn out okay. If it doesn't come fairly easily, it usually gets reworked because it likely wasn't going to work in the first place. I can usually tell within the first page whether or not its going to fly.
I constantly read and reread my work, looking for errors, scene flaws, continuity problems and checking the character's perspective on the scene. I also won't start posting a story until it's either done, or nearly done. I refuse to put out unfinished work.
Remember, none of us are professional writers, and none of us should assume we're professional literary critics. Have an opinion, but be intelligent about it. Don't come off sounding like you are the 'great god of fan fiction'. We're here to have fun, so please, don't suck the life out of it.
I've been helping out as an "Inner Hollow' for Sabaku no Kyuubi's Bleach fic, Panther King of the Shinigami. If you haven't read it, go check it out. He does good work.
A Long Held Rant Of Mine:
In light of the nature of a couple of stories I have been tinkering with, I felt the need to post a statement concerning a particular character's origin, and that character would be Evangelion's Rei Ayanami. (This rant will become a permanent part of my profile when I next update here)
A lot of people consider her to be a hybrid clone of both Lilith and Yui Ikari. I am NOT one of those people.
I mean, c'mon, this assertion is made in the 'suitable for toilet paper' publication known as The Red Cross Book, a pamphlet like missive that was handed out at during the run of End of Evangelion to act as a glossary of terms. If I remember correctly the entry about Rei being a Lilith/Yui clone is about twelve words long.
Do you honestly expect me to accept a twelve word statement like that to be canon? This can easily be consider a major plot element, yet it gets a short sentence in a publication that is little more than an after thought, and was probably Anno's way of giving the other middle finger to the idiots that slagged him and Gainax so badly for they way they ended the series. End of Evangelion of course being the first middle finger given to the morons that pissed, moaned, harassed the staff and vandalized the building, all over the way the series ended.
Simply put, you don't put something that significant out there in a glossary pamphlet when you DIDN'T put it in the 26 episodes you just created. It wasn't mentioned in E of E either.
Now some will accuse me of hypocrisy because of the way I have alluded to her origins in some of my previous work, and it may be seen again in work yet to come. It is not hypocrisy, it is an exercise in showing how that particular idea can be circumvented. I like to find different ways to get around things like that, same as with how you manage to link Shinji and Misato, which is oddly enough is the most natural pairing fit in the series, considering the age difference.
There is another problem that exists with the assertion that Rei is a partial clone of Yui. It is supposed that the DNA sample came from what they salvaged from the entry plug after Yui's accident. Just exactly how is that possible, when she was turned to LCL? (just like Shinji was when he fought the 14th angel) There would be no DNA to salvage to use for the cloning.
I have two multi-chaptered stories for Evangelion that I have been poking and prodding at for a few years now, and I really would like to get them done and out. One links him closer to Rei, the other, Misato. And I will NOT be portraying Rei as being related to Shinji in any way, shape, or form. For anyone who doesn't like it, or my stance on Rei's origins...to bad. Don't read it then.
If you want to read the lemon version of Unlocked Hearts, you can find it at deviantArt. Since it is Mature (MA) rated material, you will need to sign up for one of their free accounts (at least) to be able to view it.
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Any future lemons I write will be posted there as well, the clean versions will be posted here.
04/19/14: New story is up. It's covered in rust and may not be right up there with my best, but hopefully it doesn't suck and I get some reviews.
Then again, if it does suck I might get more reviews since that seems to be how this site works these days.
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