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Joined 07-18-06, id: 1094089

My name is unimportant. I have read many bad fanfics, and a few good ones over the years. Rarely does either get fairly reviewed. It's not fair. So, I will make an effort to give fair and helpful critics on the fics I come across here.

Don't take my criticisms personally, if you don't like the reviews I give. Believe it or not I'm trying to be helpful. No matter who reviews you or what they say, you shouldn't get discouraged; it's always the author's opinion that counts after all.

If I like a fic, I'll make it a point to say so. If, however, I don't like a fic, I will say why and offer suggestions for improvement. I will then return to the fic to see if the author heeds my advice.

I tend to dislike overly Mary-sue, self insertion, and song fics. Also I have very little tolerance for the lack of corrective editing (It's called spell/grammar check people!).

Another peeve of mine would be stories that lack originality. We've all seen it a million times, someone reads a fic (usually an o.c. centered one), and says to themselves "Hey that's neat; I'll go write a fic JUST LIKE IT only with MY character!" NO!

I may eventually dip my own pen, but first I'll explore this community a bit more to figure out the general atmosphere. Not for conformity related purposes, mind you, I simply wish be ensure that this is a fitting place for me as an author. I want to make sure that I can receive constructive and honest criticism as well.

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The Prodigal by The Cleric reviews
Stripped of her powers and duties as Wonder Woman, Diana finds unlikely solace from Batman, who offers her a job at WayneTech. With his help, Diana begins the road to reclaiming her title. COMPLETED
Justice League - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 16 - Words: 105,644 - Reviews: 320 - Favs: 305 - Follows: 197 - Updated: 8/24/2010 - Published: 7/5/2005 - Diana of Themyscira/Wonder Woman, Bruce W./Batman - Complete
First Love by Cherry-Fiona reviews
What happens when Batman's first love reenters his life? And where does Wonder Woman stand in his heart? What kind of a person would the present Bruce Wayne choose? Inspired by Batman Begins. Rated K for now.
Justice League - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 13 - Words: 21,600 - Reviews: 80 - Favs: 39 - Follows: 63 - Updated: 12/21/2008 - Published: 12/11/2005
You Remind Me by Bellaluna1 reviews
After a Xiaolin Showdown, Kimiko is left without any memories of who she is. She has only one clue to her past: Jack Spicer. So what will the evil boy genius do when the Xiaolin monk appears at his door? KimikoJack
Xiaolin Showdown - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 10 - Words: 20,008 - Reviews: 123 - Favs: 73 - Follows: 36 - Updated: 6/15/2007 - Published: 6/23/2006 - Kimiko, Jack
The Fourth Reason by dwparsnip reviews
The return of Superman to the Justice League, and how Diana reacts to it, gives Bruce reason in his mind to worry about his relationship with her. SPOILERS FOR Superman Returns.
Justice League - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 4 - Words: 18,361 - Reviews: 40 - Favs: 55 - Follows: 21 - Updated: 8/10/2006 - Published: 7/24/2006 - Complete
Awakenings by Athena Phoenix 144 reviews
Bruce comes to a realization. Unfortunately, it's too late. WWAP
Justice League - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 924 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 4 - Published: 8/10/2006 - Complete
People Will Say We're In Love by Lavender Gaia reviews
Diana plus Bruce plus show tunes equals...? BMWW drabble
Justice League - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 871 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 9 - Published: 8/2/2006 - Complete
Ficlets For You by killertrees reviews
All these are very short ficlets for the fanfic100 challenge. All are centered on the group Trinity which is Wonderwoman, Batman, and Superman. View story for actual rating. Most will be K. Updated: minor changes, Big thanks to Athena Phoenix 144.
Justice League - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 1,697 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 8/1/2006 - Published: 7/23/2006 - Complete
The One Reason by Lavender Gaia reviews
BMWW Drabble. Bruce finally gives Diana a decent answer.
Justice League - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 525 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 24 - Follows: 4 - Published: 8/1/2006 - Complete
Missing You by Lavender Gaia reviews
Just a short bit of BMWW fluff. Bruce misses Diana.
Justice League - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,800 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 40 - Follows: 6 - Published: 7/27/2006 - Complete
She Drinks a Whiskey Drink by Athena Phoenix 144 reviews
After Shayera and Diana face off in a drinking contest, Batman must intervene.
Justice League - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,859 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 38 - Follows: 8 - Published: 7/27/2006 - Complete
Intervention by Athena Phoenix 144 reviews
Clark Kent interviews Bruce Wayne, with unexpected results. Prequel to In His Heart.
Justice League - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,455 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 1 - Published: 1/28/2006 - Complete
Cold Confessions by Athena Phoenix 144 reviews
Batman and Shayera are stranded on a distant planet. As the temperature decreases, so does their reluctance to discuss certain subjects.
Justice League - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,407 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 43 - Follows: 4 - Published: 12/21/2005 - Complete