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Author has written 5 stories for Naruto.

Sunday December 26th, 2010

Oops! Gomen! Sorry I haven't updated my stories in forever! I kind of had to stop writing and reading manga and fanfics since starting college because I spend such a disproportionate amount of time on them. I've got a paper due tomorrow I have to finish but I'll try to bang out a few chapters next week--sorry guys!

Tuesday June 1st, 2010

I forgot I had a FanFiction account until I got a review today. I don't have a lot of time to write anymore, but if you'd like me to continue anything feel free to pm with requests for continuation-- just because I know how frustrating cliff hangers are :)

while I'm at it, I suppose I'll entertain short oneshot requests too.

Thursday December 11, 2008

Reviews

I welcome any suggestions anyone has that could help me improve my writing in general. Please review everything you read even if it says "I hated this and your story's lame," or "Update!" Even if you don't think it contributes much I like knowing whether people are reading and whether they like it or hate it.

Please feel free to give me constructive negative criticism. I will not get nasty and flame you in retaliation. Do not flame just because your favorite character is not doing what you want in my story or if your least favorite character is doing well and you hate that.

My Stories/Bias

You should know that my favorite Naruto character is Hanabi.

I don't dislike any of the other Naruto characters but I will write some stories slanted against Hinata because there are so many stories about Hinata heavily slanted against Hanabi and I think Hanabi deserves some counter-press.

That being said I also write stories where both sisters are cast in a favorable light.


Hiashi isn't heartless and Neji isn't cruel

Question: "…I recall that Hiashi told Kurenai that he didn't care if Hinata were killed on a mission. So what makes you think that having her killed would be beyond him, or any other Hyuuga? Even Neji tried to do it, and he had no real reason to hate Hinata specifically."

Answer: When Kurenai said that “Hinata may be surrounded by death,” if she was put on the team, Hiashi said he didn’t care. There is a big difference between not caring if your child is put on a team and being willing to kill the child yourself. To me this exchange means that Hiashi doesn't care if Hinata is surrounded by death and that he wants her to have an authentic genin training experience and not be sheltered. How else was she going to become a ninja? That’s the lifestyle every rookie has to get used to. Kurenai was acting like there was some safer alternative but Hiashi didn't want Hinata to get any special treatment because she was a candidate for heir of a clan.

When he followed it up by saying that the Hyuuga didn't needed her because she was weaker than Hanabi I think it was because he knew Hinata was listening outside. Hiashi was using reverse psychology to motivate her. Apparently it worked: in Kurenai’s flashback during the Chunin exam we see that it made Hinata very driven in training.

Hiashi is not a heartless villain and Hinata is not a pitiful victim.

As for Neji, I don't think he was trying to kill Hinata. If he was trying to kill her would he have asked her to forfeit first? I think he was merely trying to humiliate her to show that the branch family is just as strong if not stronger than the main family and he shouldn't be discriminated against. He would have accomplished that if she had bowed out, but she chose to accept the fight so of course he had to fight back without holding back. He asked her to forfeit many times during the match and warned her she would die if she kept pushing herself. He knew he could beat her easily if she kept fighting but she didn't bow out and the proctor didn't stop the fight so of course he tried to end it and of course she sustained serious damage.

During Neji’s final attack running towards her the proctor hadn't officially announced the fight was over until he was in mid-run. So it isn’t really a show of bad character on Neji's part that he tried to attack her one last time to end it, especially when she brought up a touchy subject. However, it is a show of bad character when he smirks at his total victory later when he see's Kurenai so concerned.

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The Moment It Began by Sindie reviews
Deathly Hallows spoilers ensue. This story is being written as a response to JKR's comment in an interview where she said if Snape could choose to live his life over, he would choose Lily over the Death Eaters. AU Sequel posted: The Moment It Ended.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 124 - Words: 304,405 - Reviews: 6507 - Favs: 2,627 - Follows: 1,169 - Updated: 10/20/2014 - Published: 8/20/2007 - Severus S., Lily Evans P. - Complete
Explosive by kaotic312 reviews
Sequel to MARRY MY FATHER PLEASE? Rated M. Firecrackers and Cupcakes don't go together, do they? Gaara/Hanabi and Kiba/Shiho. No it's not misspelled. Not Shino. Shiho. Not an OC if you're not up to date on the current manga by the way.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 83 - Words: 444,605 - Reviews: 2756 - Favs: 458 - Follows: 382 - Updated: 11/3/2012 - Published: 1/25/2008 - Gaara, Hanabi H. - Complete
The Nature of Love by Nate Grey reviews
6 year olds Gaara and Naruto are exchanged by their villages. Yugito and Akatsuki are locked in a race to unite the last demon vessels. With couples you can't admit you love: GaaraAyame, SasuHina, KakaAnko, InoNaruKin, KibaSaku, IrukaTayuya.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 35 - Words: 367,306 - Reviews: 527 - Favs: 438 - Follows: 396 - Updated: 2/9/2010 - Published: 4/16/2007 - Gaara, Naruto U.
Branches by Nate Grey reviews
Hinata has always feared being forced into the Branch House. But somehow, the new seal on her forehead has accomplished everything that she has been unable to. Sealed Hina x ANBU Naru, Sakura-bashing.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 22,194 - Reviews: 178 - Favs: 368 - Follows: 457 - Updated: 7/2/2009 - Published: 12/10/2008 - Hinata H., Naruto U.
Konoha's Tragic Orange Beast by Nate Grey reviews
Or why Lee taking Naruto under his wing could potentially be a bad thing for them both.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,778 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 53 - Follows: 12 - Published: 11/24/2008 - Naruto U., Lee R. - Complete
Nine Tailed Serpent by LT2000 reviews
Naruto was the ideal shinobi, a cold killer twisted by the Kyuubi's demonic whisperings. When he is placed onto a Genin team, new bonds develop. Now this living machine struggles with his dark past and what it means to be human. Now complete.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 27 - Words: 270,796 - Reviews: 2724 - Favs: 3,068 - Follows: 1,911 - Updated: 8/11/2008 - Published: 1/16/2006 - Naruto U., Anko M. - Complete
One Week: Free Spirit by wordflows reviews
HinataxTemari. Oneshot. Hinata didn't know where home was, anymore.
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,148 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/14/2008 - Hinata H., Temari - Complete
A Proper Romance by Keryl Raist reviews
My version of WIKTT's Marriage Law. Snape's nicer, but still in character. Yes, it can be done! Hermione's an adult, trying to move on from her grief. Comfort, healing, and romance await. Come, read, and see if you agree with over 1000 positive reviews!
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 78 - Words: 161,567 - Reviews: 1677 - Favs: 635 - Follows: 359 - Updated: 4/12/2008 - Published: 8/8/2007 - Hermione G., Severus S. - Complete
The love of a sister by princessofnothingxx reviews
Hatred is a powerful emotion which overtakes the body and numbs the mind. Hinata finds herself loathing this emotion as she watches her sister and tries not to succumb to the powerful emotion.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Family/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 496 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 11 - Published: 3/23/2008 - Hinata H., Hanabi H. - Complete
Crimson Eyes by hebi ryuusei reviews
Itachi was the kid everyone loved while Anko's the loud mouthed student of the Snake Sannin who seemed to have very few in her life. At first, they appear incompatible. When Kakashi is thrown in the mix, emotions linger in the air. ItaAnkoKaka with FIRE
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 6 - Words: 9,887 - Reviews: 108 - Favs: 39 - Follows: 42 - Updated: 3/11/2008 - Published: 1/20/2006 - Itachi U., Anko M.
Discordia by Winter Ashby reviews
Kiba was flat on his back, a warm body on top of him, straddling him, a cold metal blade to his throat and silky black hair falling over his face. [Kiba & Hinata]
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,904 - Reviews: 40 - Favs: 65 - Follows: 21 - Updated: 1/3/2008 - Published: 12/7/2007 - Kiba I., Hanabi H. - Complete
Observations of the Summer of '75 by Random-Musings reviews
Lily realizes that the physical changes of adolescence are the least of her worries. A Lily centric, coming of age oneshot of Snape and Lily taking place during the summer before 5th year. In character, era appropriate, with DH spoilers.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,675 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 19 - Follows: 1 - Published: 10/27/2007 - Lily Evans P., Severus S. - Complete
Promises Made Fade in the Morning Light by Yukari Rin reviews
Written for the Naruto wishlist livejournal community's 2006 gift exchange. HanaHinaNejiish. They made a promise that night, but hadn't expected her to be the one to break it.
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,105 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 1 - Published: 6/18/2007 - Hanabi H., Hinata H. - Complete
Why, Asuma sensei? Why? by The Reading Maid reviews
Ino is furious, Shikamaru is twitching, and Choji is choking. Why? Well, it may have something to do with the fact that Asuma just told them that they're training with team Gai today. Should be fun, right? Right? RIGHT?
Naruto - Rated: K - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,712 - Reviews: 34 - Favs: 37 - Follows: 3 - Published: 5/21/2007 - Shikamaru N., Ino Y. - Complete
The Fledgling and the Hawk by Kuro Guardian reviews
He repaid ill with ill and uncaged a terror. From the Stories Not Told to Children Collection.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,581 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/26/2007 - Hanabi H., Neji H. - Complete
The Iron Hyuuga by Nate Grey reviews
Hyuuga tradition places heavy demands on the clan's heirs. But the daughter of Neji and Tenten is far more interested in fun, family, friends, and a different kind of strength. Sequel to White Dog Night.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 49,642 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 23 - Follows: 25 - Updated: 4/16/2007 - Published: 12/15/2006 - Hinata H., Naruto U.
Of Life, Death, and Remembrance by Kaliotrimma reviews
In which there is sorrow in a time of war, and a revelation about life itself. GaaraxHanabi, crack pairing FTW, hints of ShikaTem, NaruSasuSaku. Oneshot.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,286 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 3 - Published: 4/10/2007 - Gaara, Hanabi H. - Complete
White by the object lesson reviews
“Honestly, though, Raven. If I bought you the white dress of your choice, would you wear it? Just for me? Just one day?” I looked at him curiously. He seemed to be going somewhere with this. RaexRob oneshot r&r please!
Teen Titans - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,199 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 50 - Follows: 7 - Published: 1/21/2007 - Raven, Robin - Complete
Hyuuga Secret Arts by Nate Grey reviews
Companion to White Dog Night. Neji and Hanabi form a bond through secret training sessions, and they will need it to face the consequences of Hinata's last act as a Hyuuga.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 8 - Words: 41,086 - Reviews: 36 - Favs: 31 - Follows: 13 - Updated: 1/12/2007 - Published: 5/5/2006 - Hanabi H., Neji H. - Complete
20 Facts About Hyuuga Hanabi by Dreammistress Jade reviews
20 facts about Hanabi Hyuuga. Written for my claim on the 20 truths community on livejournal.
Naruto - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,166 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 21 - Follows: 4 - Published: 12/19/2006 - Hanabi H. - Complete
Building Clan Uzumaki by Nate Grey reviews
Temari finds a third brother in Naruto, but standing with him also means making a place for herself in Konoha, by force if necessary. Yet another sidestory to White Dog Night.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 29,688 - Reviews: 40 - Favs: 55 - Follows: 50 - Updated: 12/7/2006 - Published: 6/18/2006 - Temari, Naruto U.
Of Fans and Sand by Ame no Megami reviews
Their encouter was out of the ordinary as two young shinobis trained to be the best of their village stumbled across each other. It was the first time she had met him, and probably the last time she would. ItachiTemari
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,858 - Reviews: 33 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 12 - Published: 10/1/2006 - Itachi U., Temari
white eyes freed souls by X-treme67 reviews
Hanabi's pov 'bout the sister that is now the heir, the father that betrayed her and the cousin that she freed. better than it sounds plz r'n'r...oneshot i think
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 668 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 9/22/2006 - Hanabi H. - Complete
Rise of the Rokudaime by Nate Grey reviews
An assassination attempt on Konohamaru summons the winds of change in Konoha, and Kakashi finds that he can no longer ignore the beckon of destiny. Set during White Dog Night's timeskip. Not Another Romance.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 13,625 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 9/12/2006 - Published: 7/13/2006 - Kakashi H., Anko M. - Complete
Misfortune by fallenxfate reviews
I loved her, she loved him. But he loved someone else, too. [dark fic]
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 220 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 6 - Published: 7/28/2006 - Neji H., Sakura H. - Complete
Burning Letters by Kiratt reviews
[OneShot] There's a few thing I realized a little too late, a few things I wish I could've changed. So now I sit, writing this stupid letter in blood red ink, hoping maybe you'll get it.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,184 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 7/27/2006 - Hanabi H. - Complete
Genshi by leafygirl reviews
Continuation of the story Loophole Three years have passed and Sakura is still in Konoha with a new occupation. Hunternin. Even though an enemy, Itachi is still in her mind.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 6 - Words: 24,169 - Reviews: 1186 - Favs: 1,848 - Follows: 393 - Updated: 6/27/2006 - Published: 5/6/2006 - Sakura H., Itachi U. - Complete
Hokage Climbing by Nate Grey reviews
When Konohamaru's demons catch up to him, only Hanabi can comfort him. Not that she particularly wants to, mind you, and certainly not when she could be home in bed. Companion to Hyuuga Secret Arts.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,633 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 18 - Follows: 5 - Published: 6/18/2006 - Hanabi H., Konohamaru S. - Complete
Shadow in the Sun by Nate Grey reviews
Nara Kouji has hidden beneath his bandages for most of his life. But even a living shadow can only stay hidden from the knowing gaze of Hanabi for so long. Companion to Hyuuga Secret Arts.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,963 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 9 - Published: 6/18/2006 - Hanabi H., Shikamaru N. - Complete
60 Beats by RiverDarkness reviews
Hanabi was being made the new heir, Hinata was going to get to join the Branch Family, Hinata had a plan will she painc or be calm? Violence, Hinata is OOC
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,110 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 1 - Published: 4/11/2006 - Hinata H., Hanabi H. - Complete
The Lesser by Muffytaj reviews
A Hinata and Hanabi fiction, exploring the bitter and twisted relationship between the two sisters.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 215 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 34 - Published: 3/23/2006 - Hinata H., Hanabi H. - Complete
Freed Unto a Cage by renardblanc reviews
[Entry for Link and Luigi's contest] Hanabi asks for a peculiar birthday gift from Hinata. Oneshot, first fic ever, whoot!
Naruto - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,189 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 2 - Published: 3/8/2006 - Hinata H., Hanabi H. - Complete
Irresistible game by Bishounenchaser reviews
...but he was just so handsome and so seductive. His voice was like silk and his words wrapped around her entrancing...Drabble
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 5 - Published: 2/6/2006 - Kurenai Y., Itachi U. - Complete
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The Mark of the Seal reviews
She would never understand why Hinata was the one who screamed and fainted when the ceremony was done. Just as she would never know that her sister had switched the powders for the ceremony so the seal on her forehead was a powerless scar. Hanabi, Hinata
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 6 - Words: 5,470 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 19 - Updated: 12/11/2011 - Published: 12/4/2008 - Hanabi H., Hinata H.
Renegade Lilly reviews
Once upon a time the White Lilly of Konoha slaughtered her entire family in violent rage to avenge her cousin's murder. Now she lives somewhere on the edge of Suna with another missing nin. Her eyes are white, his eyes are red, opposites attract.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 7,197 - Reviews: 29 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 12 - Updated: 12/27/2010 - Published: 1/15/2007 - Hanabi H., Itachi U.
Before We Were reviews
Hinata wasn't always the sweet tragic unloved daughter and Hanabi wasn't always the favorite. You have no idea how hard she had to work to get anywhere near that... SasukexHanabixGaara,Hanabi's POV.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 8 - Words: 19,147 - Reviews: 53 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 21 - Updated: 7/5/2007 - Published: 8/21/2006 - Hanabi H., Hinata H.
Impressions reviews
Neji.There were plenty of other guys I could have liked, guys people expected me to like, but it didn’t happen that way…and I have no idea why… NejixTenten[Tenten's POV, stand alone prelude to Renegade Lilly]
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 5,508 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 6/9/2007 - Published: 12/20/2006 - Tenten, Neji H.
Regrets reviews
her breath was hot and damp against his skin. They never went that far but he was drunk... and he didn’t stop her... sasuke,sakura,hanabi,gaara. oneshot.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 803 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 8 - Published: 11/17/2006 - Sasuke U., Hanabi H. - Complete