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Joined 09-05-06, id: 1128993, Profile Updated: 03-21-11
Author has written 3 stories for Star Wars, and Transformers.

See the face on your left? That's Silas Carver from "The Third Order". I'm not that good at character appearance description, so I thought I'd show the face of my antihero.

My motto for writing is: "A good antagonist makes a better protagonist, which makes a better story." While it's commonly accepted that the protagonist should win, I have no compunctions against making life difficult for him or her in the process. Plus, who doesn't like and/or respect a well-crafted antagonist? They have the best dialogue and can generate the most surprising plot twists.

Here are some lines from antagonists of my own creation:

"The quickest method to convince a person to see your point of view is to make them believe they reached their own conclusions."

"There are few thing I enjoy more than watching my enemies snatch defeat from the jaws of victory."

"Welcome back to the land of the living; ready to die again?"

"You are so focused on the enemy with the gun to your head that you fail to see the friend with the knife at your back."

But a character who creates conflict just to create conflict is uninteresting. "People who commit evil acts never think they are evil. They always believe their actions are justified. The problem is they usually take their actions to extremes." That was what one of my English professors told me about creating a good villain (slightly paraphrased).

"Stagnation, human, is the enemy of all things. It rots from within everything that it touches. It destroys purpose, meaning, curiosity. And it breeds corruption, greed, apathy. But the one thing I find most disturbing about stagnation is how readily people will fight for it."

“That is what happens over the centuries, boy. Your sympathies wane as you constantly pick off the scum of the universe from the bottom of your boot, listening as they beg and plead for a hand out."

I've been in the process of writing these books for several years now, and with any luck, I'll be debuting this villain and the hero(s) fighting against him shortly after I graduate college. However, my intuition says I'll be typing up chapters well into my 30s.

Current Projects:

Star Wars

The Third Order

Chapter 17 "Dark Reflections" - Recouping after the encounter with Sion, loyalties are pushed to a new limit. Includes the cave and a cameo by an ancestor of a "The Old Republic" character.

"Return to Dxun" The crew divides to conquer in a two-pronged attack. And a debt is settled in blood.

"The Invasion of Iziz" While Jaq, Mira, Visas, Bao-Dur, HK-47, and T3-M4 lead a Mandalorian charge against the Sith on Dxun, Carver, Mandalore, Brianna, Kreia, and G0-T0 storm the Iziz palace. Malvolis enters a showdown with Jedi Master Kavar in which neither combatant can afford to lose...

So I Dated a Sith Lord

Chapter 2- a few drinks after chapter 1. On hiatus until further notice

Conquest

A fanfic based on the PC game "Empire at War". So far, I have created the main Imperial cast and part of a first chapter organized. The main character on the Imperial side is Arvel Fisk, captain of the Victory Star Destroyer Relentless. Fisk is cold, decisive, and lacking a sense of humor, but his XO, Gade Russat, makes up for it by attempting to make his captain at least crack a smile on occasion. I'm still working on the Rebels, and expect some female characters to play some important roles. Plot-wise, I'm going to blend events from both EaW singleplayer campaigns and maybe the Forces of Corruption campaign from the other factions' points of view. I'm imagining a one-on-one battle between the Relentless and an Aggressor-class Destroyer, the Overkill.

Here's the opening credit scroll as it is so far:

A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away...

Star Wars

Empire at War: Conquest

War has come again to the galaxy. After establishing his New Order, Palpatine moves quickly to exert his authority over the thousands of star systems who now find themselves in the iron grip of an oppressive Galactic Empire.

However, as the Emperor tightens his hold on the galaxy, rumors circulate of an underground resistance movement forming within the Imperial Senate intent on bringing down the Empire and restoring freedom to the galaxy.

Facing an increasingly impotent senate, this group, known only as the Alliance, finally decides to take military action against the Empire in the form of a daring raid on Kuat's orbital shipyards. In the aftermath of the attack, one Imperial captain reels in shock while a Rebel commander celebrates his victory...

More will be revealed later...

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Revan's Shadow by Knightfall1138 reviews
A Story of the Old Republic: Revan is a charismatic Jedi Knight with a bright future in the Order, but his ambitions will lead him down a path toward the true meaning of the Dark Side and the Unknown World that waits beyond the veil.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 33 - Words: 95,651 - Reviews: 137 - Favs: 170 - Follows: 86 - Updated: 7/16/2010 - Published: 4/28/2009 - Revan, Exile/Meetra Surik - Complete
Pawn Endgame by Emalin reviews
KOTOR2. It's been his obsession for so long. In the belly of the Trayus Academy, he finally acts on it, and the Exile is his next target. Atton's, Mical's, and FemExile's POVs. Atton/Exile. Rated for strong emotional themes and violence. Complete!
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 10 - Words: 9,499 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 1/8/2010 - Published: 3/20/2007 - Atton R., Exile/Meetra Surik - Complete
Don't Worry, Everyone Crashes on Taris! by Freesourceful reviews
Continues the "Just Another Crazy Beginning" one-shot. Things take a turn for the strange. The dynamic duo have broken up and an inexplicable species of followers called "fans" tags Raven; making a covert mission above ground dangerously more so...
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Humor/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 5 - Words: 15,317 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 12/7/2009 - Published: 1/17/2006 - Revan, Carth O.
Temptation by DoseofReality reviews
AN: Backwards editing, and I changed my penname. Don't freak out. Back to working on the story. I promise. And the site has apparently murdered my section breaks. Damn you, stupid site.
Star Wars - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 12 - Words: 140,502 - Reviews: 465 - Favs: 611 - Follows: 488 - Updated: 9/7/2008 - Published: 6/23/2006 - Revan, Bastila S.
Star Wars KOTOR: Struggle with Darkness by De Loup Noir reviews
Part 2 of my story Fate's saviour. With the lose of his beloved Bastila, Drake must struggle with his desire for revenge and the darkness in his heart as he struggle's to find her and the Star Forge. Violence warning
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 9 - Words: 26,316 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 46 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 2/19/2008 - Published: 2/3/2008 - Revan, Bastila S. - Complete
In the Enclave by HanuuEshe reviews
The three Jedi Masters get a surprise when they try to strip the Force away from the Exile again...
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,707 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 5 - Published: 1/14/2008 - Complete
Choices by HanuuEshe reviews
Revan isn't the only one to have difficult choices to make during the Mandalorian Wars, nor the only one to choose contray to the wishes of their superiors.
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,476 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 5 - Published: 11/10/2007 - Complete
Redemption by PadawanMage reviews
[KOTOR] What if Carth had left early to go find Revan in the Rakatan temple and missed her turn to the dark side with Bastila? A Dark Side Female Romance story not seen in the final game.
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,610 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 5/3/2007 - Published: 4/7/2007
KOTOR: Darth Revan Returns by Lexington's Hammer reviews
[Chapter 25 Added] The excitement of theor escape is over and now Revan must complete the last thing in his plan before he leaves the Republic. COMPLETE! Please readn andor review!
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 25 - Words: 99,217 - Reviews: 103 - Favs: 94 - Follows: 53 - Updated: 2/27/2007 - Published: 10/26/2004 - Complete
The Hopes of the Republic by Kendoka Girl reviews
KOTOR fic. Book I. In a desperate gamble, the Republic dispatches a secret mission designed to turn the tide of the war. However, the mission is compromised and Darth Malak hunts Jedi Bastila and Carth Onasi, seeking to destroy them. Update completed
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 38 - Words: 151,789 - Reviews: 174 - Favs: 57 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 12/17/2006 - Published: 7/29/2004 - Complete
Just a Random Tuesday… by Twisted Biscuit reviews
A VERY long Tuesday in the life of Minerva McGonagall. With rampant Umbridgeitis, uncooperative Slytherins, Ministry interventions, an absent Dumbledore and a schoolwide shortage of Hot Cocoa, it’s a wonder she’s as nice as she is.
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 58,525 - Reviews: 578 - Favs: 2,913 - Follows: 622 - Updated: 10/1/2006 - Published: 8/26/2006 - Minerva M., Dolores U. - Complete
Star Wars: A Lost Cause by Dante-Raven reviews
My take on what if Luke Skywalker had joined the Empire as opposed to the Rebel Alliance like he was planning to.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 13 - Words: 24,756 - Reviews: 88 - Favs: 100 - Follows: 114 - Updated: 8/12/2006 - Published: 10/15/2005
Just Another Crazy Beginning by Freesourceful reviews
Sometimes, even the beginning isn't where you think it is. Humorous KOTOR One shot. Gratuitous and colorful swearing, anyone? Continued in "Don't Worry, Everyone Crashes on Taris!" COMPLETE
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Humor/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,047 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 16 - Published: 1/11/2006 - Revan, Carth O. - Complete
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The Third Order reviews
Silas' recovery after his encounter with Sion, and the journey into the tomb of Ludo Kresh begins. DSM Exile
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 18 - Words: 134,859 - Reviews: 48 - Favs: 41 - Follows: 39 - Updated: 11/24/2011 - Published: 9/25/2006 - Exile/Meetra Surik
Eternal reviews
Very short oneshot. The war is not over. One being will make sure of that.
Transformers - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 4 - Published: 9/1/2007 - Megatron - Complete
So I Dated a Sith Lord reviews
AU. What if a Jedi and a Sith formed a mostly nonviolent relationship? Some language, some violence, but what did you expect?
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,584 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 4 - Published: 11/6/2006