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Joined 10-01-01, id: 116599
Author has written 11 stories for Prey, TV X-overs, and Pretender.

I am a mystery suspense writer who writes mainly Pretender and Prey stories ,usually based on what happens after the series ends, but sometimes I will write something that happened during the series. Pretender/Prey Crossover: The Hercules Project: http:www.fanfiction.net/s/1754392/1/
is the beginning of all my Prey and Pretender stories.

Pretender Stories in chronological order : Marked: http:www.fanfiction.net/s/1824084/1/
Deadbeat http:www.fanfiction.net/s/2009155/1/
and The Origin Dance http:www.fanfiction.net/s/2072155/1/
How Deceitful The Heart Lies http:www.fanfiction.net/s/2081477/1/
spans Jarod's childhood and just after he meets his father. Bloodbath: http:www.fanfiction.net/s/1888340/1/
are separate. The latter is what might happen if Jarod couldn't take it anymore.

My Prey Stories: Lupe:http:www.fanfiction.net/s/422376/1/
Plans: http:www.fanfiction.net/s/1888340/1/
and Cold Eyes in a Pleasant Face http:www.fanfiction.net/s/2071167/1/

Most of my stories are R or PG 13 - There is no Slash - and the stories are interconnected, characters from one show may crossover into another's. Fan Fiction writing is a hobby for me.If the dates in the stories or the location is wrong, please let me know, nicely please. The characters in my stories have grown, and I will give a reason in my stories if something doesn't match with your approval , but I will not change a bad character into a good one even though the actor who plays that character is very handsome,etc. Enough said? I give critiques, and suggestions, so if you want me to pat you on the back and say, "oh you're so wonderful" forget it. Of course, if you write the story well, and you show the characters well as well as the settings, I will let you know. However, I cannot review all stories, even those I like. By the way, if you are begging for reviews and there are over 25 reviewers, you are just fishing for approval. . I cannot understand why the character does something, I'll ask. If the character starts back with a bad habit, I would like to know why even though I cannot understand how a character went back to a bad habit after four years of not indulging in it. If the writer has an excellent imagination, and a way of putting things, that's a plus in my estimation.My writing home page is at http:suspensewriter.nutzworld.netNo critiquing of my web site is allowed. If you are really serious about being a writer, you can join the allcrits yahoo group. It's private.

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Cold Eyes In A Pleasant Face reviews
The year is after 2006. Kevin is a teacher in an exclusive school, he's so sure that nothing will stop him. But he's not the only Dominant there. There are others and they plan to stop him. Chapt 34 now up.
Prey - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 34 - Words: 47,892 - Reviews: 6 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 5/21/2006 - Published: 9/25/2004
The Origin Dance reviews
Chapter 34 uploaded. Can one character be two persons?
Pretender - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 34 - Words: 62,331 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3/19/2006 - Published: 9/26/2004
If at First You Don't Succeed reviews
This is my idea of The Miss Parker Method of Stopping Smoking. What's yours? This is dated before she met Thomas.
Pretender - Rated: T - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,203 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/11/2005
A Pretender Christmas reviews
The Pretender never had a real Christmas since he escaped.it's time to make up for what he missed. Alright REVIEWS! PLEASE! By the way, doing so would get you a link to your stories when I fix up my fiction site.
Pretender - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 3,229 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/24/2004
How Deceitful the Heart Lies reviews
Have you wondered why Jarod as a boy would never grow up to look like the real Jarod and why those DSAs were in black and white instead of color (with all the Centre's scientific knowledge) Well now at last the truth can be told!The conclusion
Pretender - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Suspense - Chapters: 14 - Words: 15,662 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11/10/2004 - Published: 10/3/2004
Dead Beat reviews
In revision, The Old Centre has fallen and a New one stands in its place, Jarod and Miss Parker are raising their kids and are now Bounty Hunters going after a Deadbeat dad. Revised up to Chapter 24, rest will follow.
Pretender - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 34 - Words: 56,136 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9/16/2004 - Published: 8/12/2004
Marked reviews
Revised. Corrections made to plot, inserted dates of events: Jarod's starting to change, but into who or what did he revert to? Chap 1 to 53 revised.
Pretender - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 53 - Words: 116,497 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 8/11/2004 - Published: 4/17/2004 - Complete
PLANS reviews
The Dominants did not all come from Mexico. Some have already been among us
Prey - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 44 - Words: 62,199 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 6/14/2004 - Published: 3/25/2004
THE HERCULES PROJECT
The origins of the Dominants in Prey and the Pretenders in The Pretender are connected because they came from the same origins.
TV X-overs - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 28 - Words: 42,844 - Updated: 6/10/2004 - Published: 2/29/2004
Bloodbath reviews
What if Jarod realized he had no other course of action?
Pretender - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,828 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/31/2004
LUPE
This is the story of Lupe, the Mexican girl who along with Bianca was captured by the Dominants.
Prey - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Drama - Chapters: 8 - Words: 5,943 - Published: 10/1/2001