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Joined 12-14-06, id: 1181764, Profile Updated: 09-13-17
Author has written 33 stories for Shining Force, Riviera, Golden Sun, Misc. Games, Nostalgia, and Xenoblade Chronicles.



"Shining Cloud" is finally finished, with the epilogue now up. If there's anyone still reading this wonderful fic, I apologize for the tardiness. (Also, why haven't you been reviewing?) This will be the end of my fan fiction writing for the near future; I've already started working on a fresh properly publishable story, and I have ideas for a potential novel fiercely brewing. I'll undoubtedly come back to pen a few more fanfics in the future, and of course I'll be reading and reviewing the works of others, but you may consider this a goodbye of sorts. I hope some of you out there will read the ending of "Shining Cloud", and that you enjoy it. Feel free to drop a review for it, too. I'm listening.


The epilogue of "Shining Cloud" is, sad to say, still in progress, but while refreshing myself on a few plot points I uncovered a confusing bit of dialogue in Chapter 38 and, believe it or not, a minor continuity error in Chapter 39, so I've fixed those errors and put up the revised chapters. Nothing worth your re-reading those chapters, but just so we have a record of it, I did make a few alterations.


Chapter 41 of "Shining Cloud" is here... incredibly late. A few real world things made it difficult to meet the deadline, and due to the lack of readers (as mentioned in the previous update here), I figured I might as well take my time with the final chapter and do it right. Sure didn't think it would take over two months, though. It's a long chapter, but it seemed to me like I was working on it quite diligently, so I'm surprised that it took me this long. After this I'd be a fool to promise an arrival date for the epilogue of "Shining Cloud", but I hope to have it out on August 1. I'm inviting reader input on what to include in the epilogue; see the author's notes for chapter 41.


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To Anyone Who has Read any of my Fics:

Do not under any circumstances hesitate to review. I welcome any sort of feedback. Criticism, even non-constructive criticism, is just one more way to see how people feel about my work, which is essential for a writer.

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A Hunter's Life by The Exile reviews
The Profound Darkness may have been defeated but, as Chaz soon discovers, a Hunter's work is never done.
Phantasy Star - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 20 - Words: 38,307 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 11/1/2011 - Published: 8/19/2009
Scythes by Avenvia reviews
Menardi runs a finger down the curved blade of the scythe, testing its sharpness. The finger comes away bloody, though Jenna cannot tell if it is the blood of a Proxian or a monster. Vindictively, she wonders if there's even a difference.
Golden Sun - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,898 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 2 - Published: 5/8/2011 - Jenna, Menardi - Complete
The Final Curtain by The Exile reviews
Garian and Carbon Garian are squaring up for their final battle.
Dark Savior - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,546 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 6/4/2010 - Published: 11/8/2009 - Complete
Shining Legacy by Demonic Weasel reviews
Destiny and prophecy meet when the Shining Force and their allies wage war on Mishalea and her allies, but no one may triumph unless the gods will it...
Shining Force - Rated: M - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 52 - Words: 270,375 - Reviews: 84 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 9/14/2009 - Published: 7/1/2004 - Complete
Loving You Too by Laa Chase reviews
A Lemon-Flavored 4th OVA. Two-Part One Shot revised on 3/17. /// Momiji finally turns 18. Her childish figure has long since been replaced with a woman’s physique, and Kusanagi can’t hold himself back anymore. He wants her.
Blue Seed - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 8,810 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 3/17/2009 - Published: 8/21/2008 - Complete
Restoration by Demonic Weasel reviews
As the backdrop of war in Rune has ended, kingdoms must be rebuilt against a new lack of consensus. The heroes of Cypress and Guardiana must work around new fissures in their relationships with each other and the world.
Shining Force - Rated: T - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 7 - Words: 35,220 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 10/1/2008 - Published: 7/28/2008 - Complete
Moments of Time by Demonic Weasel reviews
Garian escaped Jailer's Island after defeating his Carbon counter-part, however, the contradictions in his existence did not end there. The first of several inter-connected tales exploring Garian's fate.
Dark Savior - Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,162 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 7/14/2008 - Complete
Fina's scheme by ImonZ reviews
Why is Fina acting so strange? What’s she planning? And why won’t she let Vyse and Aika know?
Skies of Arcadia - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 11,419 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 12/24/2007 - Published: 12/22/2007 - Complete
Artificial Reality by Renji Akai reviews
When the boundries of video games and real life are broken, this is what could happen.[note: basically a parody of the video game industry, the games they produce, and the typical gamer stereotypes.]
Misc. Games - Rated: T - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 6 - Words: 4,389 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 12/7/2007 - Published: 6/30/2007
Tea for Two by Whitewash reviews
Yggdra's invited a certain someone over for tea. Unfortunately, Rosary comes around before he does, and she cannot make life any easier for either of them, can she? [RosaryxYggdraxMilanor]
Yggdra Union - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,548 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 2 - Published: 6/3/2007 - Complete
Raiders of the Lost Heart by ImonZ reviews
A young mercenary has to join forces with Vyse, Aika and Fina to find a long lost pirate treasure. Aika sees a dark shadow that dwells within him. Can she help him overcome it? What secret is he hiding from them?
Skies of Arcadia - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 18 - Words: 59,832 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 5/17/2007 - Published: 3/14/2007 - Aika, Vyse, Fina - Complete
Junk Mail by Salacassera reviews
Ash and Marona wake up one morning to find their modest home completely besieged by Sea Mail bottles.
Phantom Brave - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,204 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 2 - Published: 2/11/2007 - Complete
Dreamer Awakened by Ruri Hoshino reviews
Kusanagi has disappeared and Momiji returns to Izumo where she finds her life endangered a circumstance that is, in part, responsible for drawing Kusanagi back into her life.
Blue Seed - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 47 - Words: 340,760 - Reviews: 587 - Favs: 260 - Follows: 27 - Updated: 8/21/2004 - Published: 4/4/2001 - Complete
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Shining Cloud reviews
-SF CD- Deanna and Natasha had concluded that there was little to no truth behind the prophecy that their eldest son, Hindel, would become a warlord of Iom and murder the two of them. But as Hindel comes of age, he becomes only more and more devoted to Iom. And a war is coming in which he must take part. Co-starring Anri, Nick, Mayfair, Ruce, May, and others.
Shining Force - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Family - Chapters: 42 - Words: 146,154 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 9/13 - Published: 4/30/2015 - Complete
I Want Some Hot Stuff, Baby, Tonight reviews
-Shining Force Neo- An explanation for why Meryl shouts the same thing every single time she launches an attack.
Shining Force - Rated: T - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,362 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/23/2016 - Complete
Write Me No Sonnets reviews
A series of short romantic comedies from throughout Pad and Melody's relationship, occasionally with angst for flavor. Tale #10: Melody has decided to leave the adventuring party forever. But Pad has a few objections to that, And so, the chase is on.
Nostalgia - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 11 - Words: 30,435 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 3/14/2014 - Published: 10/18/2011 - Melody, Pad - Complete
Our Deepest Fear reviews
-SF CD- When Mayfair challenges one of his deepest beliefs, Nick must return to the site of a past trial to find the truth. But that truth may prove too hard for even him to face.
Shining Force - Rated: T - English - Family/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,095 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/3/2013 - Complete
Ten Years Later reviews
-SF CD- Ten years after the events of Shining Force: Sword of Hajya, some old friends reunite. And Deanna has an issue dating back eight years that he'd like resolved.
Shining Force - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,107 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/3/2013 - Complete
Night of the Resurrection
-Hell: A Cyberpunk Thriller- Rachel was right: It doesn't make sense that the Hand of God would go to such exorbitant expense and risk just to make two new people. So what is the real reason she and Gideon Eshanti were marked for death? Can Gideon solve this final puzzle before it's too late? At long last, the truth about The Night of the Re-entombment!
Misc. Games - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,956 - Updated: 11/16/2012 - Published: 11/7/2012 - Complete
The Cruel Heart reviews
Melia reflects on her poor taste in men and her means of dealing with a certain romantic rival. Luckily, she has one friend she can confide in.
Xenoblade Chronicles - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,789 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 1 - Published: 7/7/2012 - Melia - Complete
Shadow of the Future reviews
-SF CD- Natasha confronts Mayfair about her pragmatic marriage. Cypress mages employ desperate measures to free May from bondage to Iom. Nick's son is born. And the first part of the prophecy about Deanna and Natasha's son threatens to come true.
Shining Force - Rated: M - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 11 - Words: 38,318 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 3/4/2012 - Published: 8/22/2011 - Complete
The One I Haven't Lost reviews
-SF1- In the wake of Kane's death, Mae confronts Max about their feelings.
Shining Force - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,755 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/14/2011 - Complete
How the Barefoot Gentleman Pursued the Free Woman reviews
Post-TLA. Felix goes to Prox to find Karst and Agatio, despite his fear that Sheba will hate him for it. But Sheba will be the least of his problems, as Felix's search for love threatens to end in tragedy. Rated T for violence and Felix's heavy cursing.
Golden Sun - Rated: T - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 13 - Words: 38,142 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 4/1/2011 - Published: 9/7/2010 - Felix, Karst - Complete
Dark Nativity reviews
-SFG Final Conflict- How did Mishaela give birth to Mephisto in the midst of her battle with Ian's force? How did he end up in the hands of Zeon's minions? The Shining Force may be better off not knowing. Rated M for graphic violence and adult themes.
Shining Force - Rated: M - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,870 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Published: 3/17/2011 - Complete
Shining Force: Battle Across Dimensions reviews
English translation of "Shining Force: La Batalla de las Dimensiones" by SulfuroXP. AU crossover with incarnations of characters from Shining in the Darkness, Shining Force Feather, and just about everything in between.
Shining Force - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 13 - Words: 12,759 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 9/24/2010 - Published: 3/20/2010
Celebration and Negotiation in Iom reviews
-SF CD- It's a grand gathering of the rulers of Cypress, Iom, Guardiana, Sharland, and Emild as they usher in a new era of peace. No peace is perfect, however. Rated M for sexual references and other adult themes.
Shining Force - Rated: M - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,679 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9/14/2010 - Published: 5/7/2010 - Complete
The Headless Knight reviews
-The Lost Age- The origin of Dullahan. An English translation of NebilimK's tale, rated T for disturbing violence. Another shipping-free fic brought to you by Martin III!
Golden Sun - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,154 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/15/2010 - Complete
Making a Good First Impression reviews
-Shining the Holy Ark- The tale of the first meeting between Arthur, Melody, and Forte.
Shining Force - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,606 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/28/2010 - Complete
Half False Prophet reviews
-SF1, SFG Final Conflict- What sort of person was Kane before he became possessed? Who was the prophet who warned him of Darksol's revival? And why was Kane consulting him? The answers are found in this story.
Shining Force - Rated: T - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,598 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/7/2010 - Complete
Hope for the Nations reviews
-SF CD- Chester and May look for a way to placate Emild's king. Deanna and Natasha struggle to rebuild war-torn Iom. Sharland seeks an advantage over Cypress as the alliance with Guardiana tenses. Can Nick hold it all together? Rated M for sexual content.
Shining Force - Rated: M - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 44 - Words: 189,887 - Reviews: 29 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 3/6/2010 - Published: 6/12/2008 - Complete
Into Harm's Way reviews
Wachenröder. The complete version of a scene left incomplete by the game. Bellebete joined the final fight against Vlad for Lucian's sake. But was Lucian right to let her come? Rated T for minor adult themes.
Misc. Games - Rated: T - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,542 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11/29/2009 - Complete
In Mysterious Ways reviews
Building a family was always an uphill battle for Kyle and Dora. But one obstacle in particular made Dora doubt if even their love could pull them through. Bouldershipping. Written for rounin's fanfic contest. Rated T for several adult themes.
Golden Sun - Rated: T - English - Family/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,904 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/10/2009 - Dora, Kyle - Complete
Terror in the Night reviews
-SF2- The peaceful sleep of Granseal's residents is shattered by the coming of a monstrous creature. What it wants: Bowie.
Shining Force - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,858 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/31/2009 - Complete
Of Gods and Mortals reviews
Sheba has a side to her that, in retrospect, Felix should have expected before they landed in Lalivero to drop her off. If he had, he could have avoided this whole mess. A shipping-free fic, rated T for minor adult themes and electric shocks.
Golden Sun - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,773 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 4 - Published: 6/23/2009 - Felix, Sheba - Complete
Shining the Holy Ark. Aunque la búsqueda de Arthur, Melody, y Rodi para ser Innovators no empezó de verdad hasta que Arthur y Melody arrinconaron a Rodi en la cueva de Desire, las semillas de su destino fueron sembradas años antes.
Shining Force - Rated: K+ - Spanish - Fantasy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,132 - Published: 5/17/2009 - Complete
Not Important reviews
-SF CD- During Nick's adult life, already several events have changed him forever. The first was the murder of his family. This is a tale of the second. Rated T for minor adult themes.
Shining Force - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,494 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12/21/2008 - Complete
Valentine's Day in Riviera reviews
Serene and Ein are geared up for Valentine's Day. Fia has never been interested in the holiday...but that was before she met Ein. No, my loyal readers, this is NOT a joke,NOT a hoax,and NOT by a ghost writer!
Riviera - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,297 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 7 - Published: 8/21/2008 - Fia/Fiaa, Ein/Ecthel - Complete
Loyalties reviews
-SF CD- Dantom was always sure of two things:that nothing could stand against King Gadrios, and that he would serve Gadrios and his heirs until he died. But other loyalties would arise to make demands. Rated T for violence and adult themes.
Shining Force - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 3 - Words: 11,694 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/5/2008 - Complete
Not Quite Alone reviews
-Shining the Holy Ark- Arthur takes on a simple mercenary job, but when some old friends get involved, it's not only the job that gets a notch more complicated. Rated T for violence and offensive language.
Shining Force - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,830 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/5/2008 - Complete
The Proposal reviews
SF CD Nick has made up his mind: Mayfair is his ideal wife. There could be no better queen for Cypress. But can he make Mayfair herself see things that way? Meanwhile,the new enemies of Cypress and Iom are gathering... Rated T for minor adult themes.
Shining Force - Rated: T - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 8 - Words: 35,778 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 1/5/2008 - Published: 11/21/2007 - Complete
The Old Order Passes Away reviews
[SFG Final Conflict, SF2] Parenthood is always a big step. For a now middleaged Ian, always more accustomed to the battlefield than to family, it may be an insurmountable one. Rated T for adult themes,violence,and offensive language.
Shining Force - Rated: T - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 4 - Words: 10,496 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 9/21/2007 - Published: 9/20/2007 - Complete
Maggie May reviews
[Shining Wisdom] During a quick rest stop at an Odegan village, Kazin rethinks his relationship with Sarah and comes to an unpleasant conclusion. Rated M for sexual content.
Shining Force - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,533 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 5 - Published: 8/21/2007 - Complete
Longings reviews
[Shining the Holy Ark] Though Arthur, Melody, and Rodi's journey to become Innovators did not truly begin until Arthur and Melody cornered Rodi in the Cave of Desire, the seeds of their destiny were sown long before. Spoiler free.
Shining Force - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,449 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/18/2007 - Complete
While You Guys Were Out reviews
[SF CD] Nearly all the adults at Castle Cypress have headed off to war with Iom, except for Mayfair... who has suddenly gone missing. What are a bunch of adolescents left in charge of a castle to do? Rated T for minor adult themes.
Shining Force - Rated: T - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 6 - Words: 22,052 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 7/24/2007 - Published: 6/21/2007 - Complete
Deanna and Natasha reviews
[SF CD] He was an Iom soldier,psychologically crippled since boyhood by his late father. She,a Cypress mage hopelessly lovestruck by her king. Yet their mutual love forged them into two of Cypress's greatest heroes. Rated T for violence and adult themes.
Shining Force - Rated: T - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 22 - Words: 67,456 - Reviews: 33 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 5/21/2007 - Published: 2/11/2007 - Complete
The King's Friends reviews
[SF CD] The Cypress army is mustering,but it will take more than brute force to defeat Iom. To save his kingdom and his arm,Prince Nick may have to deceive his own friends. Fortunately,this is nothing new for Nick. Rated T for minor adult themes.
Shining Force - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,063 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/18/2006 - Complete
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