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Joined 01-05-07, id: 1189177, Profile Updated: 01-03-10
Author has written 1 story for Naruto.

Name: Sarah

Age: 15

and that's all you need to know about me :)

i've had so many obsessions, including Naruto, onepiece, death note, and FMA.

of course, now i hate almost all of them, but hey, i used to like them. :)

now i just review others' stories so that they can do better :D

i think the #1 thing i hate is when people don't put summaries on their stories =_="

I also hate when the author puts a story up, and then deletes it the next day, and then puts the story up again. :(

And i REALLY hate it when someone makes the character OC. Srsly? Is that dark male character in the story REALLY going to jump up and confess his love for her in front of a big crowd with a huge dopey grin on his face?

no, he wouldn't.

so don't write it :)

Peace :P

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Kiss and Kill! by FaintFalconHunter reviews
My name is Sasuke Uchiha. I am an assasin working for Orochimaru. My next target Sakura Haruno. Hi,my name is Sakura Haruno my father is hiring a bodygauard for me for no reason. Life sucks!
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 24 - Words: 37,472 - Reviews: 471 - Favs: 115 - Follows: 109 - Updated: 6/4/2019 - Published: 9/4/2007 - Sasuke U., Sakura H.
A Test of Insanity by Starchii reviews
AU DeiXIno ItaXSaku TenXHidan Complete Sakura, Tenten, and Ino were just walking back from a mission when suddenly two Akatsuki members appear and capture them. What is their motive and why did they kidnap all three of them?
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 14 - Words: 49,518 - Reviews: 250 - Favs: 150 - Follows: 68 - Updated: 6/21/2012 - Published: 3/9/2007 - Ino Y., Deidara - Complete
The Howling by Starchii reviews
[Sequel to A Test of Insanity] [TenXHidan, InoXDei, ItaXSaku] It has been three long years since the last time Tenten saw the man from her nightmares and, with the help of Hyuuga Neji, is mostly ready to move on, even though her longing still remains...
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 9 - Words: 39,226 - Reviews: 200 - Favs: 74 - Follows: 92 - Updated: 10/2/2009 - Published: 12/1/2007 - Tenten, Hidan
Something's wrong with Gaara by xXTsumetaiXx reviews
It was a normal day until Gaara got a package. Ever since then Gaara's been acting very strangely. What was in that package? Who gave it to him? What's going on! Now Temari and Kankuro have to find out what has happened to their sibling!
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 19 - Words: 16,560 - Reviews: 175 - Favs: 74 - Follows: 38 - Updated: 4/18/2009 - Published: 9/1/2006 - Gaara, Temari - Complete
The Cherry Blossom Chronicles A DeiSaku story by Rafiki the Soothsayer reviews
REDONE! Deidara and Sakura develope strange feelings for each other as they meet in Orochimaru's lair. What could these feelings amount to? DeiSaku NaruHina ShikaTema and many more to come. Please R&R! NEW CHAPTERS WILL BE POSTED SOON!
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,771 - Reviews: 46 - Favs: 25 - Follows: 27 - Updated: 2/7/2009 - Published: 4/26/2008 - Deidara, Sakura H.
Love Lockdown by Lady Silvamord reviews
They say it takes a village to raise a child. Similarly, it takes the entirety of Akatsuki to help Itachi get the girl. ItaSaku, complete.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 66,700 - Reviews: 817 - Favs: 1,994 - Follows: 541 - Updated: 11/30/2008 - Published: 11/4/2008 - Itachi U., Sakura H. - Complete
Alive by Mokulule reviews
Do you ever wonder what happened to Itachi's body? Did Zetsu eat it? What of his eyes? If Sasuke changed his mind about having them? She'd found him purely by accident. Oneshot.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,247 - Reviews: 42 - Favs: 88 - Follows: 46 - Published: 11/24/2008 - Sakura H., Itachi U. - Complete
The Things I Do For Love by Kabooza reviews
[Sasuhina] Sasuke is an elite demon his duty is to kill all the angels that live below on Earth. When his next target become Hyuuga Hinata, the princess angel, will Sasuke have a change of heart? Read and Review! Flames Allowed!
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 5 - Words: 11,889 - Reviews: 35 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 36 - Updated: 8/27/2008 - Published: 12/8/2007 - Sasuke U., Hinata H.
Love You Hate You by OrigamiGirl reviews
Sasuke/Sakura - 'Uchiha Sasuke's fate was decided today.'
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 6 - Words: 11,571 - Reviews: 82 - Favs: 23 - Follows: 43 - Updated: 6/29/2008 - Published: 5/7/2008 - Sakura H., Sasuke U.
Maiden of the Sea by GaaraLover123 reviews
Hinata Hyuuga knows a secret, a secret that Captain Sasuke Uchiha want's despartely & will do anything to get, unfortunately so would all the other pirates on the seven seas. What is Hinata's secret, hop aboard the pirate ship revenge and find out.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,078 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 16 - Published: 6/28/2008 - Hinata H., Sasuke U.
Prison Break x by UrbanGiant reviews
Sasuke Uchicha. Glorious. Famous. Feared. Untouchable. Captured At Last. Bound, weak and awaiting the gallows in his cell, Sasuke contemplates his life and how he spent it. Slight SasuxSaku My First Story, Comments & Tips Appreciated. xoxoxo
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,930 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 1 - Published: 6/18/2008 - Sasuke U., Sakura H. - Complete
Captain Uchiha by Domestic Servant reviews
A parody of Naruto chapter 404. If you aren't caught up with the manga, don't read. Surely the meeting between Madara and Falcon didn't go as smoothly as we read, right? Heavens no! Out-of-character, complete cracktastic fun!
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,566 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 17 - Published: 6/17/2008 - Sasuke U., Suigetsu H. - Complete
A Black Rose by Black Karasu reviews
She was a black rose. Having to deal with family losses, adoption, kill, blood, demons, and high school. Pairing: ItachixSakura A lot of Ino bashingSasuke bashing! Rated T for A LOT of death. COMPLETE
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 31 - Words: 83,234 - Reviews: 917 - Favs: 254 - Follows: 120 - Updated: 3/2/2008 - Published: 12/7/2007 - Sakura H., Itachi U. - Complete
Our Retribution by Marcii07 reviews
Uchiha Madara was once known as the father of the Sharingan, until one day, eight years ago, he vanished. Returning home, he finds his entire clan is gone...while mourning for his lost family, a certain Avenger returns home. Will he find the hope he needs
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,829 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 13 - Updated: 1/10/2008 - Published: 3/1/2007 - Sasuke U., Naruto U.
Drowning in the Twisted World by DakestNekoGirl094 reviews
Discontinued
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,206 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 10/31/2007 - Published: 10/14/2007 - Sasuke U.
Funny Thing, Jealousy by UchihaSakura4 reviews
Sakura has loved Sasuke for years but now she's finally tired of waiting for him to notice her. But what if she dates someone else to purposely catch his attention? It's time to see if Uchihas really get jealous. mainly SasuSaku
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 16 - Words: 29,723 - Reviews: 768 - Favs: 599 - Follows: 230 - Updated: 9/18/2007 - Published: 12/5/2006 - Sasuke U., Sakura H. - Complete
Chocolat by shikaruTo reviews
The vocalist of a band called 'Chocolat' stole Hinata's heart when she saw him perform in a night club. He got a silver stud on his tongue, but then, a classmate of Hinata also had the exact same stud. Could it be...? SasuHina. AU. Complete.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 7,979 - Reviews: 370 - Favs: 318 - Follows: 84 - Updated: 8/25/2007 - Published: 8/22/2007 - Hinata H., Sasuke U. - Complete
Sasori plus Deidara plus Itachi are Akalicious by Fallen Lum reviews
Sasori, Dei and Itachi is a band. Fan meetings and concerts, you name it!
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,927 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 8 - Published: 8/8/2007 - Sasori, Deidara - Complete
A Picture’s Worth a Thousand Words by Kaiko-Chan reviews
What happens when Sasori calls Deidara’s art junk? And what do flowery pink kimonos and bingo books have to do with anything? Read and review!
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,095 - Reviews: 27 - Favs: 25 - Follows: 5 - Published: 7/8/2007 - Sasori, Deidara - Complete
Random short Naruto stories 3 by Orochimaru'sForeverLover reviews
Just some random stories i make up in my head once i make them i write them in my microsoft word thing and post them here so you can read them Hope I'm not boring you it's alot better than it sound right now...ENJOY!
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 458 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 4/22/2007 - Published: 2/21/2007
The Story of Our Lives by Cataracta reviews
Theirs was never meant to be a happy story, she knew, but she still began it as 'once upon a time'. DARK Sakura X Sasuke
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,174 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 5 - Published: 3/31/2007 - Sakura H., Sasuke U. - Complete
Turmoil by Pullingthetrigger-allwrong reviews
Hinata is bullied by girls for her alluring features. When she transfers to Konoha High, she befriends a group of vampires that protect her. But from what? And why does HE look at her with such hate is there something behind it? SasuHina NejiTen
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Fantasy - Chapters: 14 - Words: 31,407 - Reviews: 450 - Favs: 263 - Follows: 115 - Updated: 11/27/2006 - Published: 8/6/2006 - Hinata H., Sasuke U. - Complete
Sails of the Sand Heart by midnitesilverblade reviews
Cordoba. The legendary city of pirates and thieves. Sabaku no Gaara and Uchiha Sasuke are the two notorious captains of two famous pirate ships. Both are after the cargo of the Herald of Hyuga. What happens when they find out the “cargo” is a person, not
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,615 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 10 - Published: 9/3/2006
Hinata's Savior by sailorsun777 reviews
Her father hates her, her sister surpasses her in everything, and her cousin has no feelings towards her. So who does she look to for help?
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,572 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 18 - Follows: 6 - Published: 9/2/2006 - Hinata H., Naruto U. - Complete
The World Ends by Ninjacat reviews
When it comes to Sasuke, living or dying for Sakura had never been a matter of choice. Dark sort of whatif set perhaps 10 years into the future, beware EvilSasuke!
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,340 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 59 - Follows: 8 - Published: 5/19/2006 - Sakura H., Sasuke U. - Complete
Wedding Crashers by sylver rain reviews
When forced into marriage, what do friends do to the wedding to help? Why, crash it, of course! [Chpt 8: The plan is set in action as the boys get the crashing going. Neji begins to accepts his ominous fate but Sasuke seems to be suffering a greater deal.
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Horror - Chapters: 8 - Words: 17,527 - Reviews: 178 - Favs: 67 - Follows: 46 - Updated: 5/8/2006 - Published: 12/13/2004
Draco's Pain by Sadie VanHelsing reviews
Ok, here's my first Harry Potter one. Basically, it shows Draco in a better light, and the way he feels to his father. I dunno, I'm not good with summaries
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 5 - Words: 2,396 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/7/2006 - Lucius M., Draco M. - Complete
Naruto :Cinderella style! by KrAzI JaY reviews
A parody romance story of the movie Cinderella, Naruto style! With all our fav char.'s! Prince Sasuke! And the poor servant Sakura...who isnt really as innocent as she seems...ahem just read.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Parody/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,906 - Reviews: 57 - Favs: 29 - Follows: 47 - Published: 12/31/2005 - Sakura H., Sasuke U.
Riding Lessons by ashlyns reviews
Oneshot. A funny look at what happens when Legolas tries to teach Gimli how to ride a horse on his own...with drastic consequences. Humerous, cute, please R and R!
Lord of the Rings - Rated: K - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,720 - Reviews: 33 - Favs: 63 - Follows: 13 - Published: 8/17/2005 - Legolas, Gimli - Complete
Tell It As It Is by AznAnimeGrl2649 reviews
.:NaruHina, Slight SasuSaku:. Lessons in poetry? Bells ringing? The Ramen Hotline? A funny story of how Naruto comes up with a plan to ask Hiashi for Hinata's hand in marriage with the help of his two teammates.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,843 - Reviews: 33 - Favs: 61 - Follows: 16 - Published: 7/11/2005 - Naruto U., Hinata H. - Complete
300 Ways to Prepare Kiwi by CzechChicka reviews
One-shot funny little ficlet. While on a trek with the infamous Peredhil twins, a young Legolas has his first encounter with alcohol...
Lord of the Rings - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,954 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 8 - Published: 8/27/2004 - Legolas, Elrohir - Complete
Help! I'm trapped in my cousin's body! reviews
Hinata is a shy girl. Neji is a confident young man. What happens if their bodies switch? NOT A NEJIXHINATA! Plz R&R!
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 5 - Words: 2,403 - Reviews: 29 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 4/4/2007 - Published: 3/29/2007 - Neji H., Hinata H. - Complete