Author has written 2 stories for Leverage, and Hobbit.
I'm a starting fanfiction writer. The three is not a crowd job is my first fanfiction. I will use this fanfiction to improve my writing before I'll start writing other stories. That is why this fanfiction will be a bigger one (20 chapters at least). I want to grow familiar with writing stories.
I am open for advice. As long as you explain.
I got advice once but I removed that comment. The reason was this:That comment only told me what I did wrong not how I could actually improve that. This comment stated that I could use some help with phrasing and terms. But the comment didn't tell me or gave me examples of how I could do that. So now I still have no clue how to improve that. That same comment also told me to do a spelling check. Like I have stated in my fanfics, English is not my native language and I am dyslexic. I always run the spelling check Fanfiction net offers me. So if there are still some mistakes it's because fanfiction net missed them.
Of course if you see one that is important for the flow of the story you can private message me and I will correct that spelling error.
So my request to people who see my flaws: Not only tell me what they are, give me examples or ways to improve them. Especially if you comment as a guest because I can't comment you back if I have any questions about your advice.
So if there is somebody who agrees that my writing could use some help with phrasing and terms, please tell me how I can improve that and give me examples of how I did it and how it would have been better.
Thank you for your time reading this. Help in improving my writing is greatly appreciated.