Author has written 40 stories for Yu-Gi-Oh GX, Inuyasha, Fullmetal Alchemist, Yu Yu Hakusho, Anime X-overs, MÄR, Silver Kiss, Twilight, Naruto, Truth About Forever, D.Gray-Man, Dragon Ball Z, Maximum Ride, Vampire Academy, Static Shock, Avatar: Last Airbender, Soul Eater, Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's, Young Justice, H2O: Just Add Water, Blue Water High, Doctor Who, and Sherlock.
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Classes for me don't start back up until September 23, but during the earlier part of September I'll be moving and leaving my job as assistant manager at a pool so I'll be training replacements (they need 3 people to do what I did :D). I work at a pool so the summer is the busiest time for u, but I've been managing to pump out my Doctor Who fic, An Open Mind like woah. I'm HOPING to get more chapters of Missing in Action and Blue Water Life and maybe even Hyperdrive out but no promises, as my obsessions have recently been on Doctor Who.
Q: Why won't you read my story/Why did you stop reading my story?
Another thing on the front, if you can't spell, capitalize, or use punctuation in your summary, then I skip right over the story. So if you can’t capitalize your title or summary, why would you in the story? Perception is reality.
Now, onto what’s inside. If your summary and title passes and I click the blue link, you’re still not out of the clearing yet. If you can’t use the “enter” key, I will just exit. No one wants a headache after reading a wall of text. It’s obnoxious. Start a new paragraph with each new speaker at least. It gets confusing when you have “one person speaking here like this.” “And then a totally new person speaking here.” I lose track that way and it gets aggravating.
Another thing, CAPITALIZE. I hate reading stories that have things like that. I understand not everyone has MSWord, which autocaps things. But that just brings me to my next thing. PROOF READ. If you find it boring to reread your stories after you type it, then chances are people will get bored reading it, too. It doesn’t take that long to read your story and make grammatical edits and spell check. Not too good at spelling? There are PLENTY of betas on his site! Even ind a reader who's willing to proof read your story in exchange for getting the chapters quicker.
One last thing. DETAILS AND DESCRIPTION. Well, that’s two things…oh well. If I see something like this:
Character 1: blahblahblahblah
Character 2: blahblahblahblahblah
Then I WILL report the story and leave. It is against the rules to use script format anyways, so just don’t. I also hate:
“Blahblahblah,” said Character 1.
“Blahblahblah,” said Character 2.
“Blahblahblah,” said Character 3.
“Blahblahblah,” said Character 2.
Uhhh…if you can’t even be creative enough to come up with another word other than “said” then how is your story going to be creative? Use things like “agreed”, “snapped”, “complimented”, “scoffed”, interrupted”, “mumbled”, “murmured”, “muttered”, and many, many other words that show emotion. It helps give people in your stories character and helps develop them in the minds of the readers.
I know it seems like I’m picky, but I just hate wasting my time on stories that can’t even take the time to be neat, creative, and well written. (coughcoughBreakingDawncoughcough). If you have questions, comments, concerns, or flames about this, go ahead and PM/e-mail me.
Name: Kimmy-chan (Kimmy-kun), Kim, Simberland, Moldymoo, Kimbo, Kimiko, Hey You!
Age: 21 (as of Valentine's Day 2013)
Favorite Bands/Singers: Evanescence, T-ARA
Here's my predictions for Bleach...The bold is stuff that came true...
Masaki Kurosaki is actually a close relative/sister of Matsumoto. Isshin Kurosaki is a close relative of Kukaku, Ganju, and Kaien Shiba, mainly because Kaien and Ichigo are nearly identical. That and it would be freaking AWESOME if Isshin was their brother, because then Ganju would be Ichigo's uncle :D I do believe Masaki was a shinigami, but both left shortly before the Turn Back the Pendelum arc. I think Isshin was either captain of an un-numbered squad, or was the previous captain of squad 10. I think it would be kind of cool if Isshin had a similar zanpakuto to Ichigo's--not the same one because of the events in Diamonddust Rebellion. I do believe that Ichigo will take one of the captain's positions. I think he will participate in the winter war. I do NOT think Isshin will take a position until the twins are set in life, though there would be frequent visits. We're talking weekly. The man is obssessive. I think Tatsuki and Orihime will become soul reapers when they pass on, but I don't think they'll come to Soul Society until they die.
--==((MY STORIES UNPOSTED))==--
FFVII: Tsubasa--(Final Fantasy VII) Chapters 1 and 2 done, but I've forgotten the plot.
Fiorei--(Winx Club) Chapters 1-5 done, forgotten the plot...
Do Good--(YuGiOh GX) First 9 or 10 chapters done, but I want to finish it before I post it, along with change some key details.
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