Author has written 9 stories for Warriors, and Hamtaro.
NOTE: If you want to ask me a question, please PM me. FFN doesn't always email me, and I don't check my old stories for reviews, so I won't know unless you PM. Sorry if I come off rude because I don't reply.
Name: Cinderpaw11. Can't you read? It's right up there in big letters! My user-names are usually: Cinderpaw11(Such as here, Fictionpress, Wattpad, and many more...), Cinderpaw(Funnyjunk) and Hamtaro59 for my much older files(Runescape, Club Penguin, neopets, useless/addicting places like that. And Deviantart.)
FOR THE FANS OF MY "BIRTH" STORIES
I'm sorry. I am so, so sorry. If you're here, if you remember who I am, if you remember me being popular briefly on this site despite that my writing was bollocks, I cannot express to you just how sorry I am. Those stories have been taken down.
Let me explain: over the course of the years, I've been getting more and more complaints about those "not following the books" even though they've existed since way before said book had been released (or even announced in some cases.)
Most recently (about three hours before I wrote this) I got an anonymous review on Sasha's Birth saying this:
"Sometimes I wonder what's wrong with this world...
Do you even know about Crookedstar's Promise?"
It seems small, doesn't it? But this added to all the other "Wow um you really need to read Yellowfang's Secret because *minor detail* is wrong idiot" reviews I got tipped it over the edge for me.
This person, though, said "I wonder what's wrong with the world..." Like for some reason me not having read Crookedstar's Promise is a sin. And I have read it. I own the damn thing. But not even it's idea had been mentioned when I published Sasha's Birth. I couldn't have known about anything that happens in it before it existed. And according to most of you guys, it's my fault that I didn't know. So because of some rude people that couldn't check a God damn release date, they're being taken down. I can't take anymore negative messages, guys. I can't. I've had enough of it with my step-father. I've only just gotten him out of my life, and I'm going to get rid of what's causing the new negative trouble. In my mental state, I really can't take anymore. I need it away from me, because I only just started feeling better again after years and years of depression, and some of you are just bringing it back full force. I don't think I even want to post on this site anymore. And I wouldn't, except that I want to finish The Renewed Trilogy. Once I'm done that, I'm moving to Wattpad, and I probably won't come back to this file again, except maybe to read.
If you want to continue reading my stories, I do have another file, though I haven't posted any Warriors there, nor do I plan to. This fandom is toxic, and I'm going to get out as soon as I can. Just ask if you want my other file. The reason I intend to keep that file over this one is because on that file, I have only received positivity. I'm fine with being told when I've done something wrong under circumstances when I've ACTUALLY done something wrong. I am not going to take the blame for writing a fanfiction with facts different from the books before the books existed.
Some of you may know that for quite awhile now, I've been thinking of taking down my old stories anyway. While I was seething over that last review, it made me think. Why keep up the story anyway? I don't like it. It's badly written. Badly, badly written. And they always say to do things for yourself, right? It's my writing, I control it. If I don't like it; if it embarrasses me; if every time I get a review, I'm scared that it'll be someone else complaining about me being an idiot, then get rid of it. For a long time, for so long, years, I've cringed when thinking of my old writing, the fact that I actually posted it. And I know I've grown as a writer - I can see that. I am so much better now, and I have my old stories to thank for that. I love them, I really love them, without those stories, I wouldn't have ever found an outlet for my depression, I wouldn't have found a passion, and I am so thankful that I started writing, because if I hadn't, I have no doubt in my mind that I would have ended my own life years ago.
But I can only take so much negativity on them, on the stories that forged me, on the stories that made me who I am, on the stories I love so much. So I'm taking them down. You can ask for them, you really can, I still have the files, you can ask for any of them, for all of them, if you ask nicely you can even post them under your own name (but maybe tidy them up a bit. They're still badly written, after all.) Don't be afraid to ask me for them, please. The only regret I have about taking them down is you guys, the people who liked them despite it all, and I love you for that, so don't be afraid to talk to me, please.
On one last note, I really am so sorry. I was actually going to write one more. Just one. Breezepelt's Birth. I know now that what Whitewing saw wasn't the future, just fears for her kits lives, but I still like the idea. I was going to write about how Nightcloud actually had three kits, but two were stillborn. Nightcloud saw Crowfeather neglecting Breezepelt, and that's why she always is so nasty about it in the books. She didn't know she was forging the future she despised for her kit. But now I won't, or if I do, I won't post it. Maybe one day, I'll go and rewrite all of them, post them into one big story on this site, a collection of one-shots. Maybe.
I guess this is what made me so popular in the beginning. My main Births caught on quickly, and everyone started making requests of who I should do next. There was so many - and still is - that I have a list I need to do, that I've been putting off. I've decided that I'm going to quit writing them, after five more. You can see which in my 'Coming Soon' section.
Twisted Limp Lifeless - I read Fading Echoes, and couldn't get this story idea out of my head.
After Sunrise: Forever - Just kind of appeared like the other two, just thinking 'what would Crowfeather think' was all the motivation I needed.
Blood - I don't really remember why I made this. I guess I was bored. (Like the birth stories, this has also been taken down. It sucked and didn't make sense.)
Invisible - Do you honestly think that Honeyfern wants the love of her life and sister to get together? No? Me neither.
The Last Chapter - My first continued story, and the one thing that had made me temporarily stop with the Birth's. Firestar just dreams the whole Clan thing, but misses them so he creates his own, but with kitty-pets.
Power of Three: The Sight - My version of PoT, if Squirrelflight(Leafpool) had four kits, it's pretty much just a remake with more kits, and a very unique Tinderkit - the new one. She has the power, not Hollyleaf or Dovewing, but her. It was adopted by SpiritGirl183.
Paper Stars - My first non-warriors fanfiction. Kari, a new ham-ham, moves in, and finds herself in an adventure she'll surely never forget.
Wake Up - Paper Stars sequel. Poor Panda was heartbroken when Stan was chosen over him. But everyone needs a happy ending, so here's his.
The Renewed Trilogy: Book One: Come Clean - Based off of Hilary Duff's song, Come Clean. Hollyleaf survives the cave-in and heads to ShadowClan for refuge. After a few moons, she becomes the deputy, and has kits. And finally as things start to calm, a storm brews. Hollyleaf finds out about a mysterious string of murders, and when her mate is killed by the mysterious cat, Hollyleaf is thrown head-first into the storm. As Hollyleaf has to spy on her own Clan-mates, interview them, and even separate some, suspicions arise, and the killer finds out what she's planning. And maybe the murder will get her before she can get them...
* IN PROGRESS *
The Renewed Trilogy: Book Two: Wind's Nocturne - Sequel to Come Clean. The second book in The Renewed Trilogy. Hollyleaf, now deceased and living in the mind of young Hollykit, her brother Lionblaze's kit, has to train and ready Hollykit for her future - killing the Toadstool Killer, Hollyleaf's murder, and the murder of many others. But with secret night training, Hollykit's own father grows distrustful; her brother, Sparrowkit, let's sin overwhelm him, and her beloved sister, Petalkit, suddenly becomes deathly ill - with little hope of surviving. And just when she thinks everything's getting easier, the horrible secrets from her past come and hunt her down, dragging her down into their depths...
* COMING SOON / FUTURE IDEAS *
Let Go - The Sequel to Invisible. Honeyfern confronts Bluestar and Spottedleaf to discuss why they lie, and finds out a horrible secret. One that nobody was supposed to know. And Honeyfern finds out that she can never move on, if she never lets go. Full Story / Hurt/Comfort-Family / Rated T [Doubtful this will be written. I do have an idea, but it's very vague and I'm not sure if I want to do it. We'll see.]
The Renewed Trilogy: Book Three: Mad World - Hollypetal's life is finally . . . normal. No Hollyleaf talking to her in her head, no more having to chase after a killer. But Sparrowflight still hates her; Petalpaw is dead; no one can look at her the same since her secret came out. Cherrypelt's mocking gets worse and worse, and nobody is there to defend her. Everything's falling down around her. Her once exciting adventure has spiraled downward, and now, for her, it doesn't matter. Ever since her sisters death, she knew nothing would be right. But her only loyal friends --Rainstrike, Rockfur and Roseleaf-- are trying their hardest to bring her back to life. "There's no point anymore, is there? No one cares about what happens to me. Life would be better if the 'freak' died." "Don't think I'm letting you go that easily, fur-ball." Full Story / Hurt/Comfort-Romance-Angst / Rated T
The Renewed Trilogy: One-Shots - Seeing random clips of things that happen though-out the original three books through a different perspective, and giving back-stories to certain things and explaining the unexplained. (Examples: Sparrowkit/paw's jealousy; Scorchfur watching Hollyleaf die, and bringing her to the In-Between; why Crowfrost kills; Crowfrost's point-of-view on Hollyleaf's death and his own; and, because it is very needed, Hollyleaf's happily-ever-after, when she reunites with Scorchfur. I will also be taking suggestions on one-shot idea's, so feel free to give them.) Full Story / All Genre's / Rated T
I might do a one-shot on Kari going to visit her old home and Vanessa, and reveal some of Kari's - and Vanessa's - past. One-Shot / Hurt/Comfort-Friendship / Rated T
If at any point I mention a band, book, anime/manga, quote, etc., in one of my fanfic's or use a song or something as inspiration, I DO NOT OWN IT. Anything I mention belongs to its rightful owner.
What should Sparrowpaw's warrior name be? Sparrowflight has won this competition.
Should I rewrite my 'Birth' stories and put them all into a long drabble-y story? Each Birth would be a separate chapter. Rewrite, but keep them as separate one-shots. has won this competition. [I have chosen not to do this (or not any time soon, anyway.) Sorry, folks. I like to look back at how much I've improved, I don't have the time, and honestly, the Birth thing is getting pretty played out for me. I doubt I'll even do the last five . . .]
Should I do the last five Birth stories I mentioned? They're a little played out, and I don't think anyone actually cares if I finish them... [Like it says above, probably won't happen.]
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