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Author has written 17 stories for Naruto, Misc. Anime/Manga, F.E.A.R., Prototype, Elfen Lied, Rosario + Vampire, Fairy Tail, and Highschool of the Dead.
ATTENTION: I'm sure most of you have noticed that I haven't updated in months...maybe a year by now. Thing is, there is no time to write, absolutely none. Job, exams, the game I'm creating...I have little time to actually write and upload. Because of this I've been gone from FF. But...if I do come back with updates they will be very rare. I won't write new stories anymore and I will update only 1 story if I do start updating. I apologize, but I've reached a point in life where time has been divided in such a way that a hobby of mine cannot be completed anymore. But please note, this is not the end, my stories will have a conclusion unless I state it otherwise (POSTED ON 17/09/2012)
Name: Exil (only a nick cause no real name needed )
Age: ?? (date of birth below, do the math)
Date of birth: 07-07-1989
Sex: male (and yes please)
Manga's: (Top 10)
1. Freezing (both)
2. Fairy Tail
3. Cage of Eden
4. Deadman Wonderland
5. Highschool of the Dead
6. Mother Keeper
7. Big Order
Currently I am thinking of writing two Original Stories, my own ideas, my own setting, my own characters. At the moment I'm in conflict as to what I should do with them, publish them on FF.net and hope they aren't stolen, or try my luck in publishing them once they're done...It remains to be seen...
I have adopted a new policy, if you desire to adopt one of the stories then you will have to show me what you can do...I've seen people mock stories and make them worse then they were. I'm not saying my stories are perfect, but they are decent, if the one that wants to adopt one can't keep the decency and old reviewers come and complain that the story is turning into a big mockery, I will take it back! I didn't put all my effort into those stories so that someone can stomp over them and mock them like that!
This new policy starts as of 06-07-2010
I don't write generic stories, none of my stories (or the newer ones) are generic Naruto stories. Meaning that you won't find a happy go lucky idiot all the time, you won't find a mirrored personality of Naruto from the manga/anime. He will be out of character and the stories you see here are the only ones I have and hopefully no new ones will ever come because...lets face it. People nowadays want generic Naruto more and more, I cannot deliver that, I grew up with the old writer mentality and with the old stories, buried away and gaining dust somewhere in the archives of FF.
And original stories? There was a point when I wanted to write one or more but to be honest, no one will read them. Its not like you can start a story and have people read them and review them, good or bad. Its not fiction or better yet, its not Naruto fiction and as such many readers won't be bothered with those.
So yea...OOC Naruto? Please don't tell me about him, I've heard enough about it and I won't change my style for a handful of people. I am not looking for 100k's of reviews and followers. Those that still read my stories, thank you, I mainly write for you guys, not for someone else.
Underpowered Naruto? You've been reading too many Overpowered Naruto...that or my mentality of a hero growing in power as a story progresses is not your cup of tea.
And finally...if you ever leave me a short review along the lines of "This sucks / This story is bad / etc" and don't go into detail as to why I will either ignore it or respond in a mocking way and any detailed review you give me after that I will ignore. If at first you cannot be bothered to leave a legitimate complaint then I can't be bothered to listen to you a second time.
It's quite simple, I give you a title, a summary and a description and you go on from there and write a story, if you are up for the challange.
1. Demons: There is one power that can rule all of them, with that power the user can summon the demons of hell to do his bidding. Uzumaki Naruto is the first one to have this power and he will not hide it, never...all those that have wronged him will pay.
Description: Alright, first of all this should have DOOM 3 elements (the demons - they just rock). Second, you can start the fic either from when Naruto was young, or after the battle on the bridge (land of the waves). How Naruto gets this power, well... if you pick up my challange I will tell you. Third, pairings can be any except for YAOI (don't ask, won't tell), Hinata (won't fit Naruto in this one), Sakura (Naruto will be strong and he won't need weaklings), Temari (no comment), Tsunade (too old - but meh...) and finally Ino (no comment). PM me if you want to pick up the story, the chapters should be at least 5k words - hey we are talking about something never done before :P ...oh and before I forgot, the one that picks it up can decide how strong Naruto will be, how evil he will be and so forth...
2. Uzu no Kuni (Title means Whirlpool Country) Uzumaki Kushina didn't die that fateful night, Kyuubi was still sealed inside Naruto...however, Kushina didn't like the way people looked at her son, and when she hears of the council's plans she runs in the night carrying her son back home...back to Whirlpool Country.
Description: There are a few things you need to keep in mind. Naruto will know who his father is, the hidden village of Whirlpool will be nothing more then ruined houses and structures (here you can decide if it will be rebuilt or not). Around the village, in the country will be a lot of small towns, and there will be one close to the ruins of the hidden village where Naruto will be known by everyone (you decide how and why). The pairing will be Naruto x OC, but there is a catch here. The OC will have to be a civilian without any kind of powers, you can however give her knowledge of how to use weapons such as bows or swords. By no chakra or mana or anything like that. Why? Because there are enough Naruto stories where he is paired with a female ninja, a small change is in order. Also, you will decide if he hates or not Konoha. Also, under no circumstances will he ever JOIN Konoha, he will NEVER join it. He will be tought the ninja ways by Kushina and any other people you desire. If you decide to take up the story please make the chapters at least 5k long, if you are interested or have any other ideas feel free to PM me.
Things I hate in fics:
1. Kushina hating her son saying he is a demon (I really, really doubt she would see her son as a demon, this is the biggest crap I have ever read)
2. Naruto leaving the village (exile) and coming back just cause they want him again
3. The extreme overuse of YAOI (when I look for a fic the rating is 6-7 per 10 YAOI fics with Naru/Sasu ... )
4. Overuse of Naru/Hina and Naru/Saku pairing (why don't people try to write the rare ones? and if they do why do they stop writing them if they are good stories?)
5. Stories that have 30 percent occupied with polls (you are the author, you write the fic, not us...)
Pic example for my characters:
Picture - reference:
Armor used in Demon's Curse: (chapter 5 to 8)
Armor used in Demon's Curse: (chapter 8 onward)
Note: The drawings aren't done by me, I just got the ideas from them
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