Half-Wit Ed-Boy
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Joined 05-29-07, id: 1288751, Profile Updated: 10-19-15
Author has written 14 stories for Cartoon X-overs, Ed, Edd n Eddy, Pokémon, Megas XLR, Bleach, Space Dandy/スペース☆ダンディ, and Panty & Stocking with Garterbelt/パンティ&ストッキングwithガーターベルト.

Age: Old... :(

Place of residence: A subdivision outside of a backwater town in East Tennessee

Occupation: College Student, Writer, Artist, Filmmaker

All my older fanfics have been discontinued as of now, in exchange for some newer ones. However, I am holding a commission to have my fanfics adopted by anyone who wants them. Please visit my forum and post under the "Adopt-a-fic" section the fic you would like to adopt. First come, first serve!

Like most people on here, I write because I love to tell a good story, but I'm still learning my craft. If you see any ways I can improve, feel free to drop me a line! Any criticism is greatly appreciated! I like learning from my readers what works and what doesn't, as it helps me out as a writer! :D

Pasting this here from my DeviantArt page: I'm hoping to have a few things posted for this month, and may be even starting a comic series starring Carrie, Mei-Lin, and Millie. I'm also planning to push to finish a few chapters of Space Dandy: It's a Fanfic, Baby! and post a few drawings and stuff. However, after November, content from me will become extremely scarce. As a few of you may know, on top of going to college and having to deal with such responsibilities, I've been taking care of my grandparents on the weekends and on such days I happen to not have any college classes (such as during seasonal breaks and the like). However, starting in November, that care may have to change from part time to full time. My grandmother's hips have been getting worse and worse, and next month, she's going to have to have hip replacement surgery. So, I'm going to have to take care of her, which will eat up a significant chunk of time out of my day. I'll post a note on my latest fanfiction chapter hopefully this week, if I get it finished, but in case I'm not able, I would appreciate if someone would pass along this information to my readers on FF.net via the commenting system. I would myself, but I don't want to violate the TOS by posting as a chapter, nor do I want to seem like I'm boosting my own comment count by posting a comment on my fics myself. Again, thanks for sticking with me this long, and hopefully things get sorted out.

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Hey, I know I don’t comment a lot, nor do I read much Fanfiction, but as you can see from my profile, I do write a lot. A lot of people ask me to give constructive criticism, or to proofread or co-write fanfiction, but I’m just not good at doing that. Instead, I’m going to contribute by sharing a few tips I have for writing, not just fanfiction, but for anything in general. Most of these I got from my creative writing and screenwriting professors at school, but they’re good advice and I follow these as much as I can. I don't claim to be a great writer, but I've been writing for a long time, so here's some tips I can pass down to anyone looking to make their work better.

1. 1. WRITE WHAT YOU KNOW. Yeah, this one’s kind of lame, but I can’t stress this enough if you’re just starting out writing. Fanfiction is probably the best place to begin, and what better thing to write about than your favorite characters from your favorite show/movie/anime/cartoon? You have your characters and your world pre-established, so all you have to do is come up with an original scenario and you’ve got a story! I actually broke this rule with my most recent fanfic, Space Dandy: It’s a Fanfic, Baby!, however, I took what I knew about other space shows like Outlaw Star and Buck Rodgers and created the first chapter based on that knowledge.

2. 2. BUILD ON WHAT YOU KNOW. Now that you’re writing, build on that knowledge. If you’re writing a fanfic, watch/read about the material you’re writing about. Take note of the dialogue that goes on between characters, the way the characters act in certain situations, and how the story flows. Afterwards, do your research on the culture of what you’re writing about. Sites like the numerous fan Wikis and TV Tropes help with this immensely. It also helps to read official scripts, which can sometimes be found online, or reading any books based on the work or vice-versa.

3. 3. LEARN MORE. When you get to the point where you can write fanfiction with ease, start looking into related topics and research them. For example, if you write Harry Potter or Naruto fanfiction, do some research on famous magicians or the history of ninjas, then implement that knowledge into your story. This is partly how I write Space Dandy. I do research on topics related to space travel, or science fiction and try to implement them into my stories.

4. 4. WRITE FOR YOU. Yeah, it’s nice to have 500 reviews, 1,000 followers, and a million views, but don’t write just to please the masses. You should write because you want to, not because other people want you to update your story. Over time, your story starts to become whatever everyone else wants it to be, and less and less about what you want it to be. We all know the story of the father and son that tried to please everyone.

5. 5. BE YOUR OWN BIGGEST FAN. Love what you write, and write what you love. If you don’t love what you’re writing about, then you’re not going to want to continue. Then, you’ll get discouraged and quit. Don’t just update your story and leave it. Post it on other writing/fanfiction sites, share it with your friends on social media, hell you can even record yourself reading your story and post it as a video on YouTube! A story isn’t much of a story unless it has an audience, even if it’s just a few people. Just, don’t spam it everywhere, otherwise, you could face some serious backlash. I myself have learned to do this, and trust me, it makes it more fun to write if YOU are one of the people eagerly anticipating the next chapter.

6. 6. ACCEPT CRITICISM AND LEARN FROM IT. Regardless of what everyone says, criticism is good, even if it’s negative. Let’s face it, you’re not Earnest Hemingway or C.S. Lewis. If you were, you certainly wouldn’t be on this site of all places. Use criticism to learn what works and what doesn’t. Your readers often pick up on things that don’t work. However, be mindful of people that just hate what you wrote, but at the same time, remember the advice from #4. The world is full of people with different likes and tastes, and not all of them are going to like what you write, and there’s no shame in that. Also, don’t be defensive of criticism, and don’t be too proud to accept it. That’s why we get characters like Jar-Jar Binks. Learn what works and what doesn’t from your readers.

7. 7REMEMBER FORMAT AND GRAMMAR. I know this is a site for fun, but do use a dictionary or Google for spellings and word meanings, and keep basic punctuation rules in mind. Keeping your writing free from glaring spelling mistakes and grammatical errors show the readers that you are enthusiastic about your work. I know this takes time, but if you really enjoy what you’re writing, you’ll want it to look sharp. However, don’t be afraid to bend any rules. I’ve seen writers use wacky spellings to emphasize speech patterns, or use bad grammar to add to a character’s Southern background. But remember, you can’t bend the rules if you don’t know the rules, and the best way to know something is to put it into practice.

Me elsewhere: MasakiMiyamoto21 AKA HalfWitEdBoy AKA SamuraiHalfWitEdBoy AKA Shogun Studios

In the future, I hope to be an animator and make Americanime (impossible, yes?). If you like my stuff here, you'll love my original stories posted here! http://www.fictionpress.com/u/756050/MasakiMiyamoto and here

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The Grim EDventures of Ed, Edd, n Eddy by Technomaru reviews
What if Grim never met Billy and Mandy but Ed, Edd, n Eddy instead, It will result in Chaos and Laughs... Starting with the 49th chapter, the Fourth Ed joins them, resulting in MORE Chaos and Laughs! Grim has invoked... THE WRATH OF THE SPIDER QUEEN!
Ed, Edd n Eddy - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Humor - Chapters: 97 - Words: 302,833 - Reviews: 436 - Favs: 105 - Follows: 39 - Updated: 6/13/2010 - Published: 7/4/2006 - Eddy, Ed
The Ruins of Oz: Starring Samurai Jack by MercutioPuck reviews
Jack is betrayed and Aku sends our hero to a post apocalyptic land of Oz. It's up to him and some familiar faces to help him get back to his world. Chapter Seven is up. Please Read, Review and Encourage me to keep going. It's not bad, I promise!
Samurai Jack - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 7 - Words: 18,958 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 11/21/2007 - Published: 3/22/2007
HallowEd by 42 Zombies reviews
Something strange is happening in Peach Creek. While Eddy and Edd compete to see whose costumes will be better, Double D is being visited by strange forces that seem to be obsessed with him. Will the kids be able to not wet themselves in face of the fears
Ed, Edd n Eddy - Rated: T - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 24 - Words: 33,917 - Reviews: 64 - Favs: 34 - Follows: 10 - Updated: 10/31/2007 - Published: 10/8/2007 - Edd - Complete
Samurai Jack: The Movie by metalguru reviews
The quest ends. Jack must find the three stones which will grant him one wish, while being hunted by his greatest foe. Jumps back and forth between comic on my deviantart page.
Samurai Jack - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 13,006 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 8/8/2007 - Published: 6/11/2007
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Space Dandy- It's a Fanfic, Baby! reviews
Anime: Space Dandy. Dandy and his crew are recruited to star in their very first fanfiction! Follow Dandy and his crew as they travel across the universe in search of adventure, fortune, and boobies! AND YES, I KNOW I'M EVIL FOR POSTING FANFICTION OF AN ANIME THAT'S ONLY PREMIERED TWO EPISODES! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Space Dandy/スペース☆ダンディ - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 12 - Words: 71,448 - Reviews: 75 - Favs: 44 - Follows: 38 - Updated: 8/24/2015 - Published: 1/14/2014 - Space Dandy, QT, Meow, OC
Close Encounters of the Ed Kind reviews
A few years after the Eds find Eddy's Brother, the Eds have resumed their semi-normal lives. On the summer vacation after their sophomore year, a strange vessel crashes in the junkyard, leading to what possibly could be the best summer of their lives. (ON HIATUS FOR A LITTLE WHILE. I'll probably start updating again once college begins winding down, plus I'm working on another fic)
Ed, Edd n Eddy - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 11 - Words: 40,242 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 12/12/2013 - Published: 7/8/2013 - Ed, Edd, Eddy, Eds
Bleach & Kenkaku no Kenkon Crossover
A one-shot crossover I did over the summer for a small competition for a writing group I'm a part of. Ichigo is forced to take care of an unwanted house guest by Soul Society, as well as juggle his other responsibilities as both a high school student and a substitute Shinigami.
Bleach - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,367 - Follows: 1 - Published: 10/24/2013 - Ichigo K.
Panty and Stocking: Xtra Large Robot reviews
When mankind is wiped out by the ruthless aliens known as the Glorft, a brave soldier sends an experimental prototype robot back in time to change the course of history. Unfortunately he accidentally sends it back too far, where it falls in the hands of everyone's favorite acid-tongued, ass-kicking, blonde angel. Labeling as "Complete" for now... Rated T for coarse language.
Crossover - Megas XLR & Panty & Stocking with Garterbelt/パンティ&ストッキングwithガーターベルト - Rated: T - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,596 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 2 - Published: 10/6/2013 - OC, Briefers R./Brief, Panty A., Stocking A. - Complete
Half-Wit's SoulSilver Nuzlocke Adventure reviews
After losing his initial Pokemon license, Mike restarts his career as a Pokemon trainer alongside his loyal companion Pokemon. Will he be able to become the Champion without screwing up like last time? Rated T for some non-Pokemon friendly violence and use of the F-word much later on. Based loosely off of an actual SoulSilver Nuzlocke.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 12,031 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 10/1/2013 - Published: 9/24/2013 - Totodile/Waninoko, Bellossom/Kireihana, Dragonite/Kairyu
ReviewEDs reviews
The Eds and my two original characters rate and review TV shows, cartoons, movies, and video games with special guest appearances. If you'd like to see your favorite TV show, cartoon, or movie reviewed and rated, tell me and it'll be reviewed and rated. On an indefinite hiatus.
Cartoon X-overs - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 9 - Words: 18,322 - Reviews: 53 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 10/28/2008 - Published: 12/31/2007
Samurai Jack: Twist of Time reviews
In an attempt to stop Aku's evil plot, Samurai Jack is killed and given another chance to defeat Aku. But will new allies in a new future be enough to help him on his quest? HUGE CROSSOVER! Discontinued.
Cartoon X-overs - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 9,810 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 5/5/2008 - Published: 4/24/2008 - Complete
Random EEnE Stories and Other Crossovers reviews
A collection of one-shots I've done for school. Some of these made my teacher laugh. Discontinued!
Cartoon X-overs - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 6 - Words: 20,983 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/15/2008 - Complete
Star Wars: Clone Wars reviews
A parody of the animated Clone Wars mini-series with characters from many other cartoons. NOT JUST FOR STAR WARS NERDS! Discontinued!
Cartoon X-overs - Rated: T - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 5,289 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 4/13/2008 - Published: 1/18/2008 - Complete
EEnE's Crazy Holiday Tales reviews
Just a collection of Christmasthemed oneshots, and maybe a few twoshots... Discontinued!
Cartoon X-overs - Rated: T - English - Humor/Supernatural - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,599 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 12/23/2007 - Published: 11/30/2007 - Complete
The Grim EDventures of Team Mar reviews
A crossover between Ed, Edd n Eddy, an animemanga series calle Mar, Billy and Mandy, and a bunch of other random cartoons. Discontinued!
Cartoon X-overs - Rated: T - English - Humor/Supernatural - Chapters: 10 - Words: 27,395 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 12/14/2007 - Published: 7/22/2007 - Complete
A Wizard of Oz Parody reviews
A parody of The Wizard of Oz containing characters from Mar, my Ed, Edd, and Eddy fanfics, Billy and Mandy, and Cow and Chicken. Discontinued.
Cartoon X-overs - Rated: T - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 6 - Words: 12,365 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 11/9/2007 - Published: 8/9/2007 - Complete
Ed, Edd n Eddy's Off the Wall October reviews
I will try to update this every day, if possible. Visit my forum for more information and to tell me if a character doesn't act quite right or if you'd like to see your favorite cartoon character or original charaacter. I disclaim all but my OCs! Discontinued!
Cartoon X-overs - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 10 - Words: 20,424 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 10/31/2007 - Published: 10/22/2007 - Complete
Mar: My way! reviews
A prequel to every fanfic I've put on this website. It answers my question: what would happen if the kids of Peach Creek joined Ginta when he entered Mar? Discontinued!
Cartoon X-overs - Rated: T - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 3 - Words: 13,835 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 10/17/2007 - Published: 9/14/2007 - Complete
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