KitBeast
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Joined 07-08-07, id: 1320547, Profile Updated: 10-09-12
Author has written 3 stories for Stargate: SG-1, Naruto, Halo, Dragon Age, and Mass Effect.

Name - KitBeast (Formerly drag0nsclaw)

Age - 21

Sex - Male

I like all sorts of things. My Favourite Genre is Sci-Fi, although i do like most genres.

Fav shows are - Stargate Sg1/Atlanstis, Battlestar Galactica/Battlestar Galactica 2003, Mythbusters, Deadliest Warrior, Bleach, Naruto, One Piece Ect.

Fav Books are - The Silmarillion, Lord of the Rings, Annan Water, Eragon/Eldest/Brisinger, War and Peace

Fav Manga are - Rosario & Vampire, Hajamee no Ippo, Bakuman

There are things that each person believes destroy a story. for me it's quite easy because i can only think of three things.

1. Repeating your self. I don't want to read 5 chapters of the same stuff.

2. No back story. i can accept in certain things ect. oneshots theres no time for back story but in a proper fanfic which is 20 - 30 k words long for example, no back story is just the author being lazy.

3. O.C's. Now im sure your all thinking what's wrong with o.c's we put alot of effort into making them. WELL THATS THE PROBLEM. since authors put so much effort into them they can't stand not to have them play a big part of the story, So the main characters get sidelined by what is supposte to be a non-important o.c.


Naruto: Knight of Highever

This is a story that I have wanted to do for a long time. However it took me a while to work up the nerve after my last multi-chapter story, Rumours of a Shadow Fox was a failure. I mean failure because I had to abandon it. Something that I'm not proud of but it was what needed to be done at the time. This story however will NOT be abandoned. There may be a time where updates become a little chaotic, but it wont be abandoned.

As for the story itself, it was based of a very loose idea I had when I was playing the Dragon Age game. Having the idea I immediately set out reading the Naruto X Dragon Age crossovers, and i was kinda disappointed. They had it where Naruto either abandoned his shinobi background or he became all powerful, and conquered the blight in a day. I've tried to do it where he still gets to keep his Ninjutsu while learning new techniques from the Dragon Age Universe. And of course he will combine the two skill sets in future. While still being human and has the possibility of defeat.

There is also a very detailed backstory planned for how it was Naruto who ended up in the Dragon Age Universe, and not someone else. It wasn't an accident people. A coincidence yes, but not an accident.

And there will be a romantic pairing. However i'm currently undecided on whether there should be Lemons in the story.

Oh and yes Naruto will be returning to the NarutoVerse.


Okay I'm going to have a little rant here so please bear with me, and if you don't want to then feel free to skip this section.

Why do people think that I have Under powered Naruto? They all seem to think that being a Shinobi means that Naruto should be a God in the Dragon Age universe. Well guess what. He's Not.

I'm absolutely sick and tired of people saying that Naruto should be able to completely destroy the blight and such single handed. So I'm going to point out a few things for you that might make it so you actually think before whining.

1. It HAS been shown in the Naruto Manga that a fully trained Swordsman, i.e Samurai is capable of defeating a Kage. Now a Kage is the strongest shinobi in a village so if a Swordsman can defeat the strongest then he can defeat a Genin. And since the Samurai of the Naruto Verse are practically identical to the Warriors of the Dragon Age Verse what makes you all think that Naruto a Genin should be able to defeat a Fully trained Warrior?

2.Naruto single handedly beating the Blight. Are you absolutely mental? The Darkspawn are shown to be equal to at least a half trained Warrior, so I'm guessing maybe the same strength of a Chunnin from the Naruto Verse. While I admit that there are people who are strong enough to defeat thousands of Chunnin at the same time I.e Pein you have to remember a couple of things. The first is Naruto isn't Pein. He doesn't have a Legendary Doujutsu, nor does he have 5 other bodies to fight with, nor was he as strong as a Kage when he left the Naruto Verse. One on one then yes Naruto would be able to defeat practically all the Darkspawn, however Darkspawn don't fight one on one they fight in hordes so not possible, except maybe with Kage Bunshin.

3. And I think this is the most obvious thing as to why Naruto isn't underpowered. The ARCHDEMON. Have you all forgotten that the Archdemon is a GOD that has been tainted by the Darkspawn. Not a Demon, a fully bonafide GOD. Therefore the Archdemon would be able to slaughter the Kyuubi and the Kyuubi is able to slaughter Naruto.


Naruto's Current sword - Longsword - http://dragonage.wikia.com/wiki/Family_Sword

Naruto's Current shield - Shield of Highever -http://dragonage.wikia.com/wiki/Shield_of_Highever

Naruto's Current armour - Scale armour set - http://dragonage.wikia.com/wiki/Scale_Armor_Set


Story Update: 20th September 2011

Naruto: Knight of Highever - Every chapter up to and including Chapter 6 has been completed and Beta'd. Chapter 7 is 100% complete and being Beta'd. Chapter 8 is 65% complete.


I don't know why but I feel like having a bit of a rant. I'm sure everyone does it, so I'd be crazy not to get into that action.

The thing that is really bugging me is why every story that I read lately, always makes the bad guys into the good guys?

Take Harry Potter for instance. Draco is a self centred, egotistical, BAD guy. So why is it in every story Author's are making it where he's 'Redeemed' as it where. Now don't get me wrong if done right, and from an certain spot in the Harry Potter timeline, like Philosopher's stone or maybe even Chamber of Secrets, then it is completely plausible. But they don't. The do it during Half Blood Prince, or Deathly Hallows and make him into a good guy with the sun shining out of his ass and bunnies playing around him in one or two chapters. And even worse, everyone accepts this. They don't say 'Wait a second. Wasn't he a bad guy not long ago. What the F!ck has changed?'


Personal Update: 20th September 2011

Okay everyone as of tomorrow I am in informal training, in order to join the British Army. I'm sure some of you are thinking what do you mean Informal training. Well what I mean is I'm training, by myself, at home, in order to get my personal fitness to a level where I would feel confident to apply for the army.

This WILL affect my writing. It wont affect it to the point where I no longer write, however instead of writing for at least 4 hours a week (not a lot but I do have sessions where I can write 2 or 3 chapters in a day) I will only be able to give 1 Hour a week. This will increase the time between Updates.

I'm sure there will be some of you who are displeased with this, and I understand, honestly I do. However I'd like you to understand that becoming a Soldier of Her Majesties Armed Forces has been a dream of mine since I was 7 years old. Therefore I WILL do everything in my power to make it happen. This is my future that were talking about. The career that I plan to support me as I build a family, and to me that is infinitely more important than a Story.

I really do hope that you all understand this. And I do promise you that the story is NOT abandoned, It's just going to take longer than it would have done before.

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Naruto vs Sasuke: The Aftermath by Kingkakashi reviews
Sasuke nearly kills Naruto, it affects everyone in many ways. There will be angst, surprises, & romance NarxHin KakxKur JirxTsu & many more. Warning be prepared for the most Evil Sadistic Sasuke ever, & Sakura takes a beating in many chapters. Enjoy!
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 69 - Words: 819,536 - Reviews: 5701 - Favs: 3,076 - Follows: 2,555 - Updated: 10/31/2014 - Published: 5/3/2007 - Naruto U., Hinata H., Kakashi H., Kurenai Y.
Naruto: The Living Shinigami by Traizer reviews
Minato was able to survive the sealing, but at a small cost. Cutting ties with the Namikaze family due to a string of events, Naruto is dragged into the middle of something from before even the Rikudo Sennin. Minato/Kushina Alive! Older/Very Smart Very Powerful Naruto! No Uchiha Massacre. Bleach Elements. Rewrite Coming!
Crossover - Naruto & Bleach - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 15 - Words: 121,223 - Reviews: 387 - Favs: 1,116 - Follows: 1,028 - Updated: 6/16/2013 - Published: 9/16/2012 - Naruto U.
A New Life by Infernal Maelstrom reviews
Naruto/Pokegirl crossover. In an attempt to stave off death, The Kyuubi enacts a ritual, ripping open the dimensional portals and sending Naruto into a world where he learns about these strange new beings that inhabit it and discover more about himself
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 33 - Words: 397,952 - Reviews: 2288 - Favs: 2,529 - Follows: 1,796 - Updated: 4/12/2012 - Published: 10/20/2007 - Naruto U. - Complete
Innocent by VFSNAKE reviews
Luke is accused of being an Imperial spy after the events of Bespin due to his time in absence and is interrogated for it by Madine in a very Imperial like fashion. Vader senses his son's pain and has sent the Noghri to retrieve him.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 10 - Words: 49,049 - Reviews: 314 - Favs: 575 - Follows: 427 - Updated: 11/17/2010 - Published: 4/5/2009 - Luke S., Darth Vader - Complete
Tsunade choice by maverick9871 reviews
A girl appears claiming to be Tsunade daughter but wait, she more then she seems and Kyuubis involved. Lemon Naruto x young Tsunade, Sakura, Yondaime and Sasuke bashing. Some bleach crossover jerry springer.
Crossover - Naruto & Bleach - Rated: M - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 13 - Words: 57,143 - Reviews: 420 - Favs: 576 - Follows: 279 - Updated: 10/30/2008 - Published: 8/19/2007 - Naruto U. - Complete
The Fourth Dojutsu by HistorianoftheKais reviews
The Rinnegan, Byakugan, and the Sharingan are hailed as the three great Dojutsus in the land. What few people realize is that there is one other Dojutsu that equals them in power. It is time for the great bloodline of Whirlpool Country to reveal itself
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 19 - Words: 95,474 - Reviews: 1039 - Favs: 2,255 - Follows: 1,564 - Updated: 7/17/2008 - Published: 1/6/2008 - Naruto U. - Complete
Brown Eyes meets Blue by DarthValgaav reviews
Rin couldn't take losing Obito. She just wanted to go away. So, the Fourth helps her with that.What will happen now that she's back and is still 12 years old. NarutoRin
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 38 - Words: 155,878 - Reviews: 2733 - Favs: 1,842 - Follows: 1,148 - Updated: 7/10/2008 - Published: 2/24/2007 - Naruto U., Rin - Complete
Harry Potter and the Secret of the Ancients by Towrag reviews
What if Harry Potter and Daniel Jackson were the same people just at different times in their lives?
Crossover - Stargate: SG-1 & Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 35,077 - Reviews: 248 - Favs: 501 - Follows: 705 - Updated: 7/7/2008 - Published: 2/16/2008 - Harry P.
Goblet of Ninjas by Gin Ryu No Rai reviews
Naruto Harry Potter Crossover. Naruto, Neji, Shikamaru, and Gaara are sent on a mission to protect Harry Potter iduring the TriWizard Tournament. They all have to protect one of each champion.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 7 - Words: 24,967 - Reviews: 159 - Favs: 193 - Follows: 231 - Updated: 8/2/2007 - Published: 11/22/2006
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History Repeated, Lesson Learned reviews
The Prothean empire left a great many Beacons behind after there fall, there purpose, to warn the younger races of the dangers of the Reapers. Unfortunately no one could understand them. What would happen if someone could.
Crossover - Halo & Mass Effect - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 18 - Words: 51,084 - Reviews: 1025 - Favs: 1,301 - Follows: 1,545 - Updated: 12/10/2013 - Published: 2/20/2013
Naruto: Knight of Highever reviews
Naruto finds himself in the land of Fereldin, and a great many adventures follow. Rated for safety, and possible future content. Pairings undecided.
Crossover - Naruto & Dragon Age - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 7 - Words: 26,128 - Reviews: 113 - Favs: 225 - Follows: 272 - Updated: 6/5/2012 - Published: 2/25/2011 - Naruto U.
Disclosure Failed: Redo reviews
Like the title says its a redo of my earlier story. It's what i think should have happened during the disclosure of the the gate.
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,019 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 6 - Published: 11/21/2010 - Complete