Author has written 4 stories for Pokémon, Kingdom Hearts, Bartimaeus Trilogy, and Eversion.
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Hello. All fic posted here is dead. They were intended as writing exercises to help me grow when I was younger, and I have since moved beyond them. If you're interested in my current work, I've now moved to Archive Of Our Own. You can see my new profile at archiveofourown.org/users/Fool -- just copy and paste that into the address bar.
If my review is critical, please understand I'm not trying to flame you or anything. Any criticism is honestly an attempt at pointing out problems I had that I think could be improved. I don't use the "praise sandwich" method, because I feel that it creates a situation where you can never be sure if any praise is true or not. If I say I liked something, I really did! Because of this, I will try to be as polite as possible, but I will not sugarcoat anything. On the upside, this means that if I don't mention something at all, it wasn't that I hated it but couldn't think of a positive to bring up at the same time.
If you do choose to take my advice I will be glad, but you don't have to feel like I'm making demands of you. I usually try to point out things that could help with future stories, so they can be useful even without the author editing the current story.
You can also look at Farla's NaReWriMo FAQ, as many of her answers to those questions are similar to mine.
And yes, I'm aware that I'm using some of Farla's autocorrect paragraphs (though some are modified). If you have a problem with this, I invite you to do as I do and review every fic in the category for multiple days straight. Show me how it's done! Give those poor, beleaguered authors the specialized attention they deserve! We can discuss methods afterward.