Hello all! I'm PanickedSerenity. If your story needs work, I'll tell you that it does. I won't just say that, I'll give you reasons and suggestions for improvement. If I like it... well you get the point.
Some of my all time favorite quotes!
"Liu, I hate this place. I hate it.
The Rest are all Yu Yu Hakusho
"HELP! I’m in a pick up truck full of psychic cannibals!" – Kuwabara
“Go ahead, save the world, or don’t, I don’t really care. Either way I’m fine with the outcome” - Hiei
“As much as I can’t stand humans, I loathe tourists even more.” – Hiei
"Kurama! Take off your clothes!" - Yusuke
(Haven't got to this one yet, but I'm dying to find out why he says it)
"I'm sure your minty-fresh breath was well worth the delay." - Hiei
Kuwabara is being chased by four beasts trying to eat him and he's on a wrap around balcony that's around a round turret.
"That's it! Using my head as a trampoline is where I draw the line!" - Kuwabara
"I thought I was crazy, Urameshi, but you'll take the prize. The hell was that? You don't make bombs go boom in your face!"- Jin
(I don't know about you, but I can't get enough of his accent!)
"After all the explosions, stink wakes him."-Kurama
"If that happens, all we have to do is kill everyone else on the ship before we reach the island. We'll say we're the right team and no one will complain. "-Hiei
"Why don't you show this young whipper snapper how it was done in the old days?"- Yusuke
"Listen to me as closely as you can you two: I'm trusting you against my better instincts only because I have no other choice. Take care of the Toguro brothers. If I wake up and we've lost I swear I'll kill you all."-Hiei
"If you had used that lump three feet above your butt you would've held on to your soul. (looks at Hiei) Make that two feet for you."-Genkai
"Sorry, but I don't have time to be arrested."- Kurama
"Yusuke Urameshi, age 14. Survived by his mom and everybody. After going through this big ordeal to get his life back, Yusuke had a brief second chance until he was eaten by a fish! That's right! No heroic death! No fighting evil villians! Fish food!" - Yusuke