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Author has written 5 stories for Stargate: SG-1.

28/04/09 - Thank you to everyone who wrote a review for my previous stories, you may want to check out my new one 'Can't see Jack'. It's a work in progress that I'm updating as soon as possible after Beta reading. If you've already read some, thanks for dropping by, and double thanks for the reviewers. There will be more soon, promise!


After a number of years hiding in the back of a dark sci-fi closet I have finally discovered a place where there are other people like me with an inner geek...yay!

My favourite stories are well thought and make you really care about what is happening to the character(s). It's a real skill and one I hope to acheive one day! I love twists in plots that refer back to events at the start of the story, and cliff hangers that keep me guessing. Fan fiction is great for getting that extra fix of your favourites when it's writen well. Especially when your favourite TV show gets cancelled. What I can't is stand poor spelling, making fully grown adult characters behave like children, thin plots veiling cliche behaviour (yes, yes, I know I've writen one - who hasn't?), anything that wildly steps outside of cannon, and forgive me but no new central characters that save the day. What is that known as? Mary Tyler Moore story telling, or something?

After reading a lot of fan fiction, some of it absolutely amazing, I decided to flex some long underused writing muscles of my own. I used to write short bits and bobs to continue stories, fill a gap or answer questions. Now after a break to build drabbles into ideas for longer projects, I'm back working on some stories. A little less shippy and a bit more team, because as much as I like a bit of shipping it can get done to death. I really miss the classic explore, find trouble, get out, get home. Of course you can't beat a juicey episode tag either. I'm not sure why I write, but the creative process is fun. What can I say? It keeps me out of trouble.

At the minute it's just SG-1, but in the future who knows. All my other stuff got burned years ago before anyone found it...

I'm English, so if you think my spelling is wonky, that I use and s instead of z here and there - that's why, but that's where it ends. I try to keep the dialogue American and stay true to the characters of the show. I'd love to hear from anyone if they enjoyed my stories, or not and why. As always constructive feedback is welcomed.


A quick guide to reviewing:

We all read a totally amazing fic now and again and writing a review is easy, but what about the rest? The ones you didn't add to your favourites. Some of us have even written them (eeek!)

All writers love feedback, so how do you write constructively?

First of all, what did you like about the fic? There had to be something even if it was just the tag line. Start with this, a complement should always begin your review.

'I really liked the way you ...'

Second, what didn't you like and why? Was it poor use of English? Spelling, grammar and punctuation are basics but can turn a reader away from a story very quickly if not done well. Perhaps the characterisations seemed off, or cannon incorrect. You must be articulate with the parts you didn't like or you can't move on to part three. However, if you just didn't like the story idea you should consider why you read it. Who knows, it may stir a plot bunny for you!

'I noticed that you ...'

The third part of a good review is a suggestion to help the author next time they write. Maybe your encyclopaedic knowledge of the genre, character discussion or web references could help the author on the next story. Pointing out the benefits of a beta reader could help prevent small mistakes - you might even want to offer your services!

'...I suggest that you ...' or '...have you considered ...'

Lastly, you should remember that someone took the time to write a story, if they got you to read it that is an accomplishment. Be polite in your reviews because if you can't write a good one, then you can't in fairness critique a story by someone else.

Happy writing, reading and reviewing!

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Aftershocks III by Rachel500 reviews
A series of TAGs for Seasons Five and Six. The team face loss, heartache and change as a new Goa'uld foe emerges from the shadows.
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 45 - Words: 393,990 - Reviews: 805 - Favs: 156 - Follows: 78 - Updated: 3/23/2010 - Published: 9/21/2008 - Complete
The Unsung Hero by Rachel500 reviews
SG1 remember General Hammond.
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,595 - Reviews: 71 - Favs: 87 - Follows: 10 - Published: 10/20/2009 - Gen. Hammond - Complete
Pocket Full of Posies by Annerb reviews
The Ori have gotten to Sam in a way the Goa’uld never did. It scares the hell out of Jack. Eighth in the DC Series. Follows 'Status Quo'. Sam/Jack.
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,486 - Reviews: 37 - Favs: 69 - Follows: 9 - Published: 8/1/2009 - S. Carter, J. O'Neill - Complete
Flowers in Atlantis by Rachel500 reviews
Jack continues to find ways to send Sam flowers even when she's in Atlantis...
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,193 - Reviews: 43 - Favs: 82 - Follows: 7 - Published: 7/28/2009 - J. O'Neill, S. Carter - Complete
Principles of Leadership by ziparumpazoo reviews
After the events on board the Odyssey, Carter needs some reassurance.
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: K - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,506 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 14 - Published: 4/14/2009 - S. Carter, J. O'Neill - Complete
Just a Little Garden Variety BreakandEnter by ziparumpazoo reviews
Your first time, how old were you?" Written for the prompt: Sam and Vala, Break and Enter over at the LJ carivalofsquee.
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 601 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 8 - Published: 3/19/2009 - Vala, S. Carter - Complete
An Unexpected Homecoming by Rachel500 reviews
When Sam reels from an unexpected change of assignment, Jack reminds her that there's no place like home. Spoilers for Continuum and SGA's Search and Rescue.
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,890 - Reviews: 27 - Favs: 47 - Follows: 3 - Published: 8/25/2008 - J. O'Neill, S. Carter - Complete
Cold Comfort by denise1 reviews
After 100 days, Sam faces some harsh reality. And a lot of angst
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,719 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 4 - Published: 7/22/2008 - Complete
Impact by northernexposure reviews
Not sure if this should be SGA or SG-1. Set in Atlantis, but Sam/Jack. Season four. Disaster strikes Atlantis and Carter must rise to the command challenge - just as her old boss arrives for a visit.
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: K - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 20,123 - Reviews: 204 - Favs: 164 - Follows: 64 - Updated: 6/11/2008 - Published: 5/31/2008 - S. Carter, J. O'Neill - Complete
Aftershocks II by Rachel500 reviews
A series of TAGS for Seasons Three and Four. Jack and Sam face their feelings and the mission becomes ever more personal for Daniel and Teal'c.
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 44 - Words: 342,254 - Reviews: 1280 - Favs: 213 - Follows: 113 - Updated: 5/26/2008 - Published: 4/28/2007 - Complete
One of Us by Rachel500 reviews
A mission goes badly wrong for Sam and Vala but is it the beginning of a beautiful friendship?
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 10 - Words: 15,900 - Reviews: 126 - Favs: 58 - Follows: 19 - Updated: 4/9/2007 - Published: 4/2/2007 - S. Carter, Vala - Complete
The Perfect Gift by Rachel500 reviews
Jack searches for the perfect Christmas gift for Sam with a little help from the guys...
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,496 - Reviews: 38 - Favs: 36 - Follows: 6 - Published: 12/30/2006 - Complete
Compromising Positions: Tied Up by Kate McCaye reviews
SG1 has been having a string of bad luck offworld, much to the delight of the SGC betting pools.
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 6 - Words: 19,299 - Reviews: 212 - Favs: 119 - Follows: 31 - Updated: 8/24/2005 - Published: 8/6/2005
Always by KissHerJack reviews
She knows she loves him. But can she risk it? A series of scenes 'not' seen, and extensions of scenes through the episode Threads . . . how it should have been. Status COMPLETE
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 24,118 - Reviews: 68 - Favs: 195 - Follows: 17 - Published: 4/3/2005 - J. O'Neill, S. Carter - Complete
The Honeyheavy Dew of Slumber by Kate McCaye reviews
Summaries are evil. Basically, Carter starts having dreams that are pleasant but distracting. She tries to get rid of them while trying to keep their nature secret. Completed.
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 16 - Words: 26,258 - Reviews: 290 - Favs: 110 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 11/13/2004 - Published: 10/21/2004 - S. Carter, J. O'Neill - Complete
Taps by KissHerJack reviews
When Colonel O’Neill is badly injured, he must put his faith in Captain Carter’s hands. . . literally, in her hands. Posted complete Set in season 1 post Cold Lazarus. The romance is there, if you look for it. :-)
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,739 - Reviews: 61 - Favs: 149 - Follows: 9 - Published: 10/31/2004 - S. Carter, J. O'Neill - Complete
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Can't see Jack reviews
The time that Colonel O'Neill became invisible...what really happened to Jack O'Neill and how did SG-1 convince him that being invisible was a bad idea. Set season 5, cannon. Spoilers for S10 Ep 200. Finally COMPLETE! All reviews welcome!
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 12 - Words: 26,412 - Reviews: 63 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 28 - Updated: 7/23/2009 - Published: 4/22/2009 - J. O'Neill - Complete
P3X595 reviews
What happened on P3X595 where Carter drank that stuff that made her take off... The mission behind the infamous line. Takes place between 'The enemy within' and 'Emancipation' so spoilers only if you haven't seen far into the start of Season 1.
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 6 - Words: 19,794 - Reviews: 32 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 20 - Updated: 11/24/2007 - Published: 10/24/2007 - S. Carter - Complete
101 days reviews
Following Colonel Jack O'Neill's return from being stranded on Edora, Major Samantha Carter struggles to reconcile her conflicting emotions. However, it doesn't go unnoticed. Spoilers for '100 days' and 'There but for the grace of God'.
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,554 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 3 - Published: 9/4/2007 - S. Carter, J. O'Neill - Complete
To old friends reviews
Following the death of his friend Major Kowalski, Colonel Jack O'Neill questions himself and finds and unexpected comfort in someone new. Spoilers for 'Children of the Gods' and 'The Enemy Within'
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,358 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 2 - Published: 9/4/2007 - J. O'Neill, S. Carter - Complete
The way of the Warrior reviews
Team bonding after the loss of Dr Daniel Jackson, post 'Revelations' Season 5 Spoilers
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,168 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 2 - Published: 9/4/2007 - J. O'Neill, S. Carter - Complete