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Joined 10-17-07, id: 1400819, Profile Updated: 01-26-08
Author has written 3 stories for Naruto, Prince of Tennis, and D N Angel.

HeyHey!! People of FanFiction!
I'm the CriticismWiz((a.k.a. Alter-ego of Strawberries-and-Cherries a.k.a. Belima~)) I know how aggravating it is when people review but they don't really /review/ So I am here to fix that problem!!!! Ya got a story? Let me read it and I'll give you a /real/ opinion!

Warning: I /am/ honest so you might here stuff you don't wanna here. Be prepared, and don't take my criticism personally, I'm just trying to help.

Well I guess I'll describe myself...
I am extremely random, can't stand math, I look out for my friends, HATE grammar ((the class that is...)) I love to read and make my own designs, I am commited to my grades, I even go to MATH tutoring ((EWWWW)) I love anime!! We have an anime club at our school its Kewlie!! First impression of me would probably be: Quiet, shy, pushover, cry-baby or wimp. Boy how wrong those people are. HAHA! I really am loud and kinda oblivious when it comes to certain things, I can be a bit bossy and nosy at times, but overrall I think I am a lovable person...

Now lets describe Belima~
I'm quiet and distant, but thats because people bug me; I'm not that shy-timid type girl. I don't like being in rooms filled with people and I hate elevators. Normally I can just let things slide by, but if you annoy me enough, I promise I will make you suffer. If I had to pick one thing that I hated about school, it would be all the students that go there. Everyone there is either immature or a complete idiot or cannot keep their mouth shut longer then two minutes. I prefer to stay at home and lose myself in a good book then worry about going to the lates parties or hangin' with the 'in-crowd.' Those backstabing bastards will never get anywhere in life. I like to go the extra mile with my assignments, my biggest problem is public speaking and I plan to fix that this year.
Well, I guess that's all you need to know about me...Oh and I love anime too...

Well, this profile is going to have all my story ideas on it that I don't feel like putting on my Strawberries-and-Cherries profile, so you might come to this page more for story updates then my other one...hehe;

Well like I said before, I love anime, here are some of my favs.

Prince of Tennis~
Mamotte Lollipop~
Kitchen Princess~
Shuga Chara~
Vampire Knight~
Angel Diary~
My Heavenly Hockey Club~

Now my favorite books:

Twilight ((New Moon and Eclipse))~
What if...((series))~
I'd tell you I love you but then I'd have to kill you~
The Notebook Girls~
Saving Zoe~
Avalon High~
Megan Meades Guide to the McGowan Boys~
TTYL ((TTFN and L8R, G8R))~
Bermudez(SP?) Triangle~
The Little Prince~
This Lullaby~
Hacking Harvard~
The Book Thief~
Blue is for Nightmares~

Behold!! The list of kewliocious inside jokes!! Some are from animes and some...well, I'm not sure how we came up with them...I guess it's just 'cause we're random!!!

1) "You're...a man?!"--Chibi Vampire
2) "I will be your slave,"--DNAngel
3) "Baka Baka! Baka Loafe knight!"--Pretear
4) "My little pony, my little pony, has died because of Daaaark!"--DNAngel
5) "He obviously got shot and had to get surgery!"--Dallas from Spanish class ((Big pain))
6) "Mr. Lindsey won't wait forever!"--Sarah, my BFF
7) "You haven't been hit by every ball in the world..."--Philip ((a.k.a PHILIPE!!!))
8) "Kar! What's up Kar?"--Sarah
9) "Hotness is too great!!"--Naruto ((You'd have to be there...))
10) SPLAT "...That...was uncalled for..."--Toma-chan!
11) "Skittles! Taste the rainbow!!"--Naruto
12) "What the--There's no way the human stomach can expand that big!" pulls away shirt "MEOW!" attacks--Prince of Tennis
13) "GOONG!"--Me
14) "Too bad. I will become more powerful then any jedai!" ZOOM--Village of DDR
15) "He's a baaaaad St. Bernard!"--Twilight
16) "F--ing Brian's coming..." "What?!" "F--ing Brian's coming!!!!"--Dane Cook
17) "Why won't you love me?! It's because I have glasses isn't it??"--Kabuto (Naruto)
18) "Oh, a sadistic vampire bent on torturing her to death, sure no problem! She goes off to meet him. An IV on the other hand..."--Twilight
19) "Are you dead? Please be dead! He's still breathing...damn..."--DNAngel
20) "Evil Syusuke lives in Bleach!!!"--Me wOOt!
21) "Tim is lime a fune peson!"--Me and Sarah ((hehehehehehehehe))
22) "I have a feeling the South shall riiiise again!!"--Will Smith
23)"Who would want to date me anyway? I have no job, no sel-esteem, I'm useless--" "Shutup! I'm trying to watch TV!"--Fresh Prince of Bel Air

I Am
I Am Me
I Am

Tenimyu is kewlie-awesomness! No matter what people say!!!

and that's pretty much it, if you hve any questions, just message and ask...

Well I also have a FictionPress account, my name is-- DorksOfAmerica-Unite
When you have a chance, check it out. I have published my first story today!! wOOt~


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Phantom by PinkFalcon reviews
[AU] Misty's Training to be a Master in a large, ancient Stadium, but it isn't easy. First the Battle Ghost gets its greedy hands on her Totodile, and now her old friend Rudi is trying to court her. But the Ghost doesn't like that...PokéShippy.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 19 - Words: 146,235 - Reviews: 463 - Favs: 299 - Follows: 234 - Updated: 4/6/2013 - Published: 8/19/2005 - Ash K./Satoshi, Misty/Kasumi
The Perfect Candidate by MissLe reviews
So when a girl's down on her luck, forced to live with her cousin and his frustratingly meddlesome wife and facing a divorce with her husband, what's she to do? Enter a contest to win the love of the world's biggest heart throb, of course. SasuHina.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 33 - Words: 89,174 - Reviews: 1471 - Favs: 665 - Follows: 696 - Updated: 12/14/2011 - Published: 1/13/2007 - Sasuke U., Hinata H.
If I let you go by burningSunset reviews
He was irresistible. She was naive. But who could blame her? She thought she had found HIM, but all she did was to fall deeper and deeper into his love trap, until all she could do was to cry, and cry some more. FujixOC. Completed
Prince of Tennis - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 27 - Words: 154,753 - Reviews: 395 - Favs: 159 - Follows: 62 - Updated: 9/6/2011 - Published: 7/8/2007 - Fuji S., Kikumaru E. - Complete
One Week till Marriage by Kisaiyo reviews
The hours are going by quickly, and there's only one week until Dark and Riku are finally married. However, Dark is becoming more and more perverted, while Riku is still as feisty, and violent as ever! 2nd story arc for Arranged Marriage. UPDATED
D N Angel - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 6 - Words: 12,246 - Reviews: 84 - Favs: 52 - Follows: 39 - Updated: 11/16/2008 - Published: 5/8/2007 - Dark M., Riku H. - Complete
Molesting the Facts by Sweet Obsidian Rain reviews
HIATUS. We've decided that Fuji san and Yuuta san will be staying with you in this house. And you're a girl.' Ryoma had never been more bewildered in his life. FujiRyo.
Prince of Tennis - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 10 - Words: 29,083 - Reviews: 86 - Favs: 47 - Follows: 60 - Updated: 7/27/2008 - Published: 8/13/2007 - E. Ryoma, Fuji S.
Sasuke's reward by rcr reviews
SasuHina KabuHina. Hinata is brought as a reward for his loyalty by Orochimaru. Sasu, even though he wants her, rejects her and that leads an opening for Kabu. what will happen when Sasuke notices that something is going on between Kabuto and Hinata?
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 13 - Words: 17,870 - Reviews: 309 - Favs: 79 - Follows: 89 - Updated: 10/20/2007 - Published: 7/5/2006 - Hinata H., Sasuke U.
Arranged Marriage by Kisaiyo reviews
What happens when Riku gets an arranged marriage to Dark? Chapter Twenty Five up! Arranged Marriage is finally complete! Part II, One Week till Marriage, has been posted!
D N Angel - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 25 - Words: 39,505 - Reviews: 266 - Favs: 83 - Follows: 53 - Updated: 5/4/2007 - Published: 3/28/2006 - Dark M., Riku H. - Complete
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Love conquers Darkness, Hate conquers Love reviews
A marriage between 5 kingdoms. It was a tradition, to marry the prince/princess of a neighboring kingdom to keep them all united. Unfortunately the marriage planning isn't exactly going according as planned, what with all the kidnappings and thievings.
D N Angel - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,349 - Reviews: 4 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 2/6/2008 - Published: 2/1/2008 - Riku H., Daisuke N.
One man's mistake is his own adventure reviews
It's time for one of Fuji's grand masta schemes to backfire on him. So now he's stuck going to an all girl college filled with toenail painting, hair crimping college girls. Every guy's dream right? NOT! The worst part? He falls for his roommate.Plz R&R
Prince of Tennis - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,793 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 12 - Updated: 1/9/2008 - Published: 11/13/2007 - Fuji S.
Naruto in our world! Wanna see what happens? reviews
Camryn and Jessica are tormented at school because of their religion and curious to if there's life outside earth.They perform a ritual to open the gates between worlds and meet some of our favorite shinobi's.Drama,humor,and possible romance. Please R&R!
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,265 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11/1/2007 - Published: 10/27/2007 - Neji H., Tenten