Sex: Male (And yes please)
Location: In front of my computer
Anime & Manga: Naruto, Bleach, Death Note, One Piece, Code Geass, Liar Game, Bakuman, Soul Eater, D. Gray-Man, The World Only God Knows, Kimi no Knife, Deadman Wonderland, Full Metal Alchemist, Psyren, Enigma, Elfen Lied, High School of the Dead, Pokemon Adventures
Games: Mario, Sonic, Fire Emblem series, Pokemon, Zelda, Okami, League of Legends, StarCraft II, Tales of (Insert Variation Here), Final Fantasy Tactics series, Chrono Trigger
This is an idea for a story I've had for...a long ass time. I am not a writer, I can't make a story flow. As such, this is up for adoption. My only request is that you PM or Email me when you start it, as I want to read it. If I like it, we could bounce ideas off each other or something, heh.
Radiant Bonds (Working Title)
Crossover- Naruto and Fire Emblem 9 & 10
Long Summary: Nearly 1000 years after the defeat of Ashera, The Priestess of Dawn, near the end of her long life, foresaw the destruction of the world at the hands of her newly born descendent. In defense of their hard won peace, he was sealed away, into a pocket dimension. Reyson volunteered to be sealed into the child, to be his mentor. When the Kyuubi was sealed, that dimension was torn asunder, and in a blinding flash a Laguz baby with the blood of Hawks, Ravens, Herons, Cats, Tigers, Lions, Wolves, and Dragons descended to Konoha.
Plot (my take on the progression of the story. Feel free to ignore or change it.):
Note: You can make Naruto the baby instead of Shiro. You just have to deal with Kyuubi. Like the 4th summons the Shinigami, that rips the dimension open, then the Shinigami seals it into Naruto instead of whoever else. Then Reyson and Kyuubi duke it out, and Reyson uses the Galdr of Rebirth to suppress him or something.
The general plot of this story would follow Shiro, named after the white light he appeared in, as he grew up in the orphanage. Due to the time of his appearance, the village tends to try to ignore him as they do Naruto. When he is four, Shiro is adopted by a Chuunin, a single father. During the Uchiha Massacre, Shiro is taking a walk with his dad and Itachi kills his dad when he goes to see what the commotion is. Upon witnessing his father's death, Shiro awakens his dormant Laguz traits, running into the forest, where he collapses and meets Reyson. He can fully transform into a cat and a raven at this point.
He then goes through the academy, making friends with Sasuke over their mutual loss, and Naruto for similar reasons. Bonds form, and team placement is canon. Shiro gets paired with fangirl and incompetence, with Anko as they're sensei, and they're failing the test when Shiro, pinned down by Anko's snakes, transforms into a Hawk and rushes her. When he gets close, Shiro Halfshifts to a cat (basically just human with claws and fangs, reflexes etc. Halfshited bird has wings on the back and increased sight/hearing, dragon gets armored scales, a tail, and breathes fire.), inadvertently impaling himself on Anko's kunai. With a punctured lung, Anko rushes him to te hospital, then takes Shiro on as an apprentice.
And it goes on like that, largely following the main storyline. Shiro slowly gains more forms, the most powerful of which are Black Dragon, Lion, and Heron, because Galdrar plus Chakra has fun effects and stuff. Lion is probably as powerful as a White Dragon, so Black Dragon has the most brute strength, but Lion has some mobility. As Shiro himself grows stronger, so do his forms.
My initial ending was for Shiro and Sasuke to fight at the Valley of the End. The final clash would be Curse Seal level 2 vs Heron Halfshift, which is very unstable for Shiro. Shiro uses his magical powers to purge the Curse Seal from Sasuke, but at the cost of his own life. As such, there were no plans for post time skip.
I believe as long as one person liked the fic you wrote, then you haven't wasted your time.
I ENJOY MY LITTLE PONY: FRIENDSHIP IS MAGIC. YOU SHOULD TOO! *BROHOOF*
"Shadow and light are two sides of the same coin; one cannot exist without the other." – Zelda, The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess
"A sword wields no strength unless the hand that holds it has courage." – Hero’s Spirit, The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess
"When one attempts to master something, it either ends in success or failure. But it is the attempt itself where you find true value. Believe in your own power and walk your own path." – Oki, Okami
"I don’t have the energy to kill everyone who pisses me off…sometimes I have to hire people." – Josef, Moonlight
FrozenSin's MAJOR gripes on Naruto Fanfiction (and Fanfiction in general):
1. I don't care if your spell check doesn't work. I don't care if it DOES work. Proofread your story. Make an effort to use correct grammar. Distinguish between 'your' and 'you're'. Make sure the punctuation is correct, and in the correct places. And for the love of Jashin, use paragraphs.Text walls are the devil.
2. If a character is OOC, make sure you remain consistent in that character change. Too many times, I've seen people make the Third Hokage into the bad guy; a real pragmatic guy who just pretends to like Naruto or outright hates him. If this is the case, Orochimaru cannot be alive. Hiruzen spared him due to his kind heart. In the absence of that kindness, The Third and Orochimaru would have fought to the death, unless otherwise specified.
3. Naruto was never beaten in canon. This is a popular notion in Fanfiction, because we're all sadists at heart, but the worst Naruto got was neglect and distaste. He was never physically harmed. This kind of ties in to Jiraiya bashing. Jiraiya manages a vast information network. He very likely has access to very minute details for every village. I would also imagine Jiraiya would report to the village himself from time to time. Assuming he gave a shit about his prized pupil's son, he would at least check and see if he was missing a limb or two before leaving. If not, bash away, but flesh out why he's so horrible. Which leads me to my next point.
4. Don't coddle your readers. Don't outright tell me what the characters are feeling all the time. Instead of saying:
'Naruto was angry when Sakura said that.', say:
'Her words caused Naruto's lips to purse into a thin line. His knuckles turned white, and his eyes narrowed.'
It's just a better writing technique, using imagery to make the reader envision and assume what Naruto feels. It's a little insulting when you don't because it looks like you think we, the readers, aren't capable of independent thought.
If you hate stereotypes and think people should just shut up and stop POST THIS. Pick the stereotype that fits you.
I'M SKINNY, so I MUST be anorexic.
I'm EMO, so I MUST cut my wrists.
I'm a NEGRO so I MUST carry a gun.
I'm BLONDE, so I MUST be a ditz.
I'm JAMAICAN so I MUST smoke weed.
I'm HAITIAN so I MUST eat cat.
I'm ASIAN, so I MUST be sexy.
I'm JEWISH, so I MUST be greedy.
I'm GAY, so I MUST have AIDS.
I'm a LESBIAN, so I MUST have a sex-tape.
I'm ARAB, so I MUST be a terrorist.
I SPEAK MY MIND, so I MUST be a dick.
I'm RELIGIOUS, so I MUST shove my beliefs down your throat.
I'm ATHEIST so I MUST hate the world.
I don't have a RELIGION, so I MUST be evil and have no morals.
I'm REPUBLICAN, so I MUST not care about poor people.
I'm DEMOCRAT, so I MUST not believe in being responsible.
I am LIBERAL, so I MUST be gay.
I'm SOUTHERN, so I MUST be white trash.
I TAKE (or used to take) ANTI-DEPRESSANTS, so I MUST be crazy.
I'm a GUY, so I MUST only want to get into your pants.
I'm IRISH, so I MUST have a bad drinking problem.
I'm INDIAN, so I MUST own a convenient store.
I'm NATIVE AMERICAN, so I MUST dance around a fire screaming like a savage.
I'm a CHEERLEADER, so I MUST be a whore...
I'm a DANCER, So I MUST be stupid, stuck up, and a whore.
I wear SKIRTS, so I MUST be a slut.
I'm a PUNK, so I MUST do drugs.
I'm RICH, so I MUST be a conceited snob.
I WEAR BLACK, so I MUST be a goth or emo.
I'm a WHITE GIRL, so I MUST be a nagging, steal-your-money kind of girlfriend.
I'm CUBAN, so I MUST spend my spare time rolling cigars.
I'm NOT A VIRGIN, so I MUST be easy.
I FELL IN LOVE WITH A MARRIED MAN, so I MUST be a home-wrecking whore.
I'm a TEENAGE MOM, so I MUST be an irresponsible slut.
I'm POLISH, so I MUST wear my socks with my sandals.
I'm ITALIAN, so I must have a big DICK.
I'm EGYPTIAN, so I must be a TERRORIST!!
I'm PRETTY, so I MUST not be a virgin.
I HAVE STRAIGHT A'S, so I MUST have no social life.
I DYE MY HAIR CRAZY COLORS, so I MUST be looking for attention.
I DRESS IN UNUSUAL WAYS, so I MUST be looking for attention.
I'm INTO THEATER & ART, so I MUST be a homosexual.
I'm a VEGETARIAN, so I MUST be a crazy political activist.
I HAVE A BUNCH OF GUY FRIENDS, so I MUST be gay.
I HAVE A BUNCH OF GIRLS WHO ARE FRIENDS, so I MUST be fucking them all.
I have BOOBS, so I MUST be a hoe.
I'm COLOMBIAN, so I MUST be a drug dealer.
I WEAR WHAT I WANT, so I MUST be a poser.
I'm RUSSIAN, so I MUST be cool and that's how Russians roll.
I'm GERMAN, so I must be a Nazi.
I hang out with GAYS, so I must be GAY TOO.
I'm BRAZILIAN, so I MUST have a BIG BUTT.
I'm PUERTO RICAN, so I MUST look good and be conceited.
I'm SALVADORIAN, so I MUST be in MS 13.
I'm POLISH, so I MUST be greedy.
I'm HAWAIIAN so I MUST be lazy.
I'm PERUVIAN, so I MUST like llamas.
I'm a STONER so I MUST be going in the wrong direction.
I'm a VIRGIN so I MUST be prude.
I'm STRAIGHT EDGE so i must be violent.
I'm a FEMALE GAMER, so I MUST be ugly.. or crazy.
I'm BLACK so I MUST love fried chicken and kool-aid.
I'm BI so I MUST think every guy I see is hot.
I'm a GIRL who actually EATS LUNCH, so I MUST be fat.
I'm SINGLE so I MUST be ugly.
I'm ASIAN so I must be a NERD that does HOMEWORK 24/7.
I'm CHRISTIAN so I MUST hate homosexuals.
I'm MIXED so I must be fucked up.
I'm MUSLIM so I MUST be a terrorist.
I'm in BAND, so I MUST be a dork.
I'm BLACK so I MUST believe JESUS WUZ A BROTHA.
I'm MORMON so I MUST be perfect.
I'm WHITE and have black friends so I MUST think I'm black
I'm GOTH so I MUST worship the devil.
I Love SHOPPING so I must be rich.
I'm an OG so I must be Mexican.
If you hate stereotypes and think people should just shut up and stop, POST THIS.
You know you live in 2011 when...
1.) You accidentally enter your password on a microwave.
2.) You haven't played solitaire with real cards for years
3.) The reason for not staying in touch with your friends is they don't have a Facebook or Twitter
4.) You'd rather look all over the house for the remote instead of just pushing the buttons on the TV
6.) Your boss doesn't even have the ability to do your job.
7.) As you read this list you keep nodding and smiling.
8.) As you read this list you think about sending it to all your friends.
9.) And you were too busy to notice number 5.
10.) You scrolled back up to see if there was a number 5.
11.) Now you are laughing at yourself stupidly.
12.) Put this in your profile if you fell for that, and you know you did.
Ninety-eight percent of teenagers have tried smoking pot. If you're one of the two percent who hasn't, copy this and paste it in your profile.
Ninety-five percent of the kids out there are concerned with being popular and fitting in. If you're part of the five percent that aren't, copy this, put it in you profile, and add your name to the list. AnimeKittyCafe, Hyperactivley Bored, Gem W, Bara-Minamino, Tsuyu Mikazuki, Weasel Chick, Revenant666, dragonsroar, foxdude33, FallenLex, Soelle, Akihiro Asamoto, Corvin, 9tail_Naruto, FlameKaiser, NoNameNeeded, Frozen Sin
I am the girl kicked out of her home because I confided in my mother that I am a lesbian.
Re-post this if you believe homophobia is wrong. Please do your part to end it
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