Author has written 3 stories for Harry Potter, and Phantom Stallion.
I strongly recommend reading BlueOwl's story Harry Potter: Dark Memories
Some things I really hate or get annoyed with on FF.net.
1 -- People put responses to reviewers on their story pages, when they can reply to the reviews. That's why there is a REPLY button.
2 -- People mix up words. I understand how easy it is to do that, but that's why you have spellcheck.
follow NOT fallow. It may sound right, but it's not spelt that way.
Definitely and Defiantly. -- They are completely different! I've see that in so many stories that I've gotten used to skipping over it when I see it.
3 -- Poorly written and spelt stories. Again, that's what spellcheck is for.
4 -- When a story is taken down, and the author doesn't tell the readers. All it would take is an Authors Note saying 'I'm taking the story off...etc...'.
5 -- Authors mixing up their, there, and they're.
--Their refers to something possessive. Ex: They have lost their keys.
--There refers to a place or to indicate existence of something. Ex: There are horses over there.
--They're is a contraction of They and Are. Ex: They're eating some pie.
6 -- When I'm reading a BDSM story the author mixes Dominant and Dominate.
-- Dominant: ruling, governing, or controlling; having or exerting authority or influence: dominant in the chain of command.
-- Dominate: to control, rule, or govern (someone or something)
The Prisoner in the Iron Mask was never found.
It was whispered that he recieved a Royal pardon and lived quietly in the country, visited often by the Queen.
The King known as Louis XIV brought his people food, prosperity, and peace.
He is remembered as the greatest ruler in the history of his nation.
Man in the Iron Mask(1998).
'From Santi's earthly tomb with demons hole
'Cross Rome the mystic elements unfold.
The path of light is laid, the sacred test,
Let Angels quide you on your lofty quest.'
-Angels and Demons.
The Holy Grail 'neath ancient Roslin waits
The Blade and Chalice guarding o'er her gates
Adorned in Masters' loving art she lies
She rests at last, beneath starry skies.
Da Vinci Code
'And so Mowgli chose to run with the wolves
For he knew his strength was with the pack.
So listen carefully to the Jungle Call
And good rest to all that keep the jungle law.'
Rudyard Kiplings' The second Jungle Book; Mowgli and Baloo.