I personally am not very good at written stories but I can help you improve your story as I've done with all my friends that write fanfic.
I'm crazy and weird, can't use proper grammar right to save my life. I was known as 'The Bookworm' in school. I love to read and I'm currently trying to write a series of books with my older sister. I have a hard time getting the motivation and/or inspiration to really write anything or what I do write isn't good. (I don't know how you people write such good stories)
If you ever have problems knowing what a term means or what to use then please go to this website. It has the most complete list of terms that I hve been able to fine. Just take out the spaces.
http : // www . angel fire . com / falcon / moon beam / terms . html
Personal Info About myself
Avatar Name: dragon91260 formally known as Arymay
Real Name: Learn some Pig Latin and you can figure it out.
Gender: What do you think?
Eyes Color: Grey, but they change color all the time, so not really sure...
Hair color: Red
Weight: I'll never tell
Blood type: A
Favorite Colors: Sapphire Blue, Emerald Green, & Silver
Favorite Gemstones/Crystals: Sapphire and Emerald
Eastern Zodiac: Monkey
Western Zodiac: Aquarius
Favorite Books: Harry Potter, The Inheritance Series, all of Tamora Pierces series but Beka Cooper (haven't read them yet), Maximum Ride, Alex Rider series, The Bartimaeus Trilogy
Favorite Movies: Harry Potter!, Van Helsing, Indiana Jones, Grease, Mama Mia, all Stargate movies, all Digimon movies, all Inuyasha movies, Lord of the Rings, Spirited Away, all Marven Marval movies
Favorite Anima/Manga: D N Angel, Salior Moon, Inuyasha, Blood Plus, Naturo, Bleach, Yu-Gi-Oh, Wolf's Rain, Gundam Seed, Trinity Blood, Digimon, Full Metal Alchemist, Code Geass, Spirited Away, SCRYED, Dragon Drive
Favorite Music: Country, Classical, Celtic (Irish)
Personal Opinion About Things/People I don't like
Judgmental People: If your not a official judge and I didn't murder anyone stay out my face
Rude People: Just don't like them
Vain People: Just because I don't look like you doesn't mean I'm ugly
People who Abuses Others: It takes a cruel person to watch someone cry then smile and laugh in their face
Homophobes: Come back and tell me how you feel when someone tells you that the way you love is demonic.
Things that I will do and not do when I become an Evil Overlord.
1. My legions of terror will have helmets with clear Plexiglas visors, not face-concealing ones.
2. My ventilation ducts will be too small to crawl through.
3. My noble half-brother whose throne I usurped will be killed, not kept anonymously imprisoned in a forgotten cell of my dungeon.
4. The artifact which is the source of my power will not be kept on the Mountain of Despair beyond the River of Fire guarded by the Dragons of Eternity. It will be kept in my safe-deposit box.
5. I will not gloat over my enemies' predicament before killing them. I will just Kill them and be done with it.
6. When I've captured my adversary and he says, "Look, before you kill me, will you at least tell me what this is all about?'' I'll say, "No.''
7. After I kidnap the handsome prince, we will be married immediately in a quiet civil ceremony, not a lavish spectacle in three weeks' time during which the final phase of my plan will be carried out.
8. I will be secure in my superiority. Therefore, I will feel no need to prove it by leaving clues in the form of riddles.
9. I will never employ any device with a digital countdown. If I find that such a device is absolutely unavoidable, I will set it to activate when the counter reaches 117 and the hero is just putting his plan into operation.
10. No matter how well it would perform, I will never construct any sort of machinery which is completely indestructible except for one small and virtually inaccessible vulnerable spot.
11. My pet monster will be kept in a secure cage from which it cannot escape and into which I could not accidentally stumble.
12. I will not imprison members of the same party in the same cell block, let alone the same cell.
13. Once my power is secure, I will destroy all those pesky time-travel devices.
14. I will hire a team of board-certified architects and surveyors to examine my castle and inform me of any secret passages and abandoned tunnels that I might not know about. After which I shall kill them so they may not be bribed by my enimies some time in the future.
Things not to do. Copy and paste if you agree. (To be honest I would probably do some of these for a laugh)
1.Do not introduce self as role-playing character in public.
2.Do not talk to fictional characters in public.
3.Do not answer fictional characters in public.
4.Do not talk to inanimate objects in public.
5.Do not go out in public.
6.Disregard above note.Perform numbers 1 to 4.
8.Don't die alone. Take many people with you.
9.Floor is slippery when wet.
10.Lake is slippery when dry.
11.Only talk to strangers you know.
12.Strangers you don't know are spies... Kill them all.
13.For legal purposes be sure to delete above note.
14.Tell people about the spies that are trying to kill you.
15.Kill them for security purposes.
16.Crying does not solve anything. Try violent mood swings.
17.Make a scene whenever humanly possible.
18.The men in white coats are not your friends.
19.Ask them for a room with lots of sharp, pointy objects.
20.When that doesn't work, ask for a designer jacket.
21.Chicken soup, although good for colds, is not the best cure for drowning.
22.Flammable and inflammable mean the same thing.
23.Unlike fine wine, milk does not get better with age.
24.Always remember, um... um... Damn.
25.Train army of flying monkeys.
26.Goldfish don't like milk.
27.Do not maim people. If you already have, kill them to avoid lawsuits.
28.Find out who invented the word "pianist".
29.People are staring at you.
30.So act insane.
31.People are weird, but not as weird as me.
32.Do not taunt animals at zoo. They have feelings... And teeth.
33.Little people are aggressive. Stay away from little people.
34.Going through other people's stuff is a bonding experiance. Do this as much as possible.
35.You'll sometimes notice shadows late at night. Don't worry. It's only me... Bonding.
36.Never pet a burning dog.
37.Never make eye contact with a naked man. Especially if you are wearing a parka.
38.Naked men dig parkas.
39.Beware the naked man who offers you his parka.
40.You know what would look good on you?
42.Don't worry. It's only a harmless pimento bug.
43.The size of Danny DeVito.
44.Making an amusing facial expression. Like this.
45.Numbers are evil. Count in clovers.
46.Stalking is fun. Do it more.
47.Make a large sign saying, "Look at me, I'm a gumnut tree!"
48.No matter what anyone says, there is a way to get to your fantasy world.
49.That way is rum.
50.Constipated people don't give a sh-t.
52.You cannot kill the snow.
53.The snow can kill you.
54.Grass can also kill you.
55.The leprechaun on the cereal box said I can't get his lucky charms...
56.Catch and castrate leprechaun.
57.HE is real... No matter what the men in white coats say.
58.Staple paper in the middle of the page.
59.In case of blank looks, laugh maniacally.
60.You are not haxxor l337 or an uberhacker or anything like that.
61.Pretend to be so around teh n00bs.
62.Do not go out with voice #7. He is a sadistic, soul sucking demon. (Aw...)
63.Disregard last note. Go out with demon. Who needs a soul anyway? (Yes! )
64.Ask Senior Diablo for a bigger pitchfork.
65.Remember to kill HIM...
66.Tell the small children in Toys 'R' Us that the dolls have an insatiable thirst for blood.
67.Note reactions. Avoid parents.
68.The blood of infants gives unholy superpowers according to Jhonen C. Vasquez. Test theory.
69.Scream, the doctors don't like it, they'll give you a shot of something nice.
70.Hide the bodies, otherwise people ask embarrassing questions.
71.Eat the evidence.
72.But not if it's broken glass.
73.When in the presence of someone much wiser than you, point in a random direction and yell, "Look, a distraction!" Then run.
74.Do not tell children that Santa is fat because he eats kids.
75.Disregard last note.
77.On average, 100 people choke to death on ball point pens every year.
78.Stock up on ball point pens.
79.Learn to fly. Tell no one.
80.The secret to flying is throwing yourself at the ground and missing.
81.Do not stick fingers into blender.
82.Blender... Bad... Ouch.
83.Blood loss is bad.
84.Find way to re-attach fingers.
85.Scream as much as humanly possible at 2AM.
86.Answer every question with a question.
87.Ask people what gender they are.
89.Refer to people as "mortal".
90.The Seagull From Hell is out to get me.
91.Kill all enemies in most disturbing way possible.
92.Start by drowning them in fire ants.
93.Find the creators of pop-up messages.
96.Teachers don't like finding notes on world domination.
97.Dunk head in boiling water.
98.Disregard last note. Was written by Voice #7.
99.Gullible IS written on the ceiling!
100.Investigate this whole "critical mass" thing when the klaxon dies down...
THINGS I SUPPORT OR I APPROVE OF OR I HAVE DONE!!
Admitting you are weird means you are normal. Saying that you are normal is odd. If you admit that you are weird and like it, copy this onto your profile, and add your name. KaidaThorn, Gingerstar14, Spottednose, Pink Kitty Cat, Snowfeather, Spottedheart, Maplepelt, Moonfeather, SoujaGurl, EzGoEr, dragon91260,
If you love FANFICTION.NET, add your name and copy and paste this into your profile. Rainstorm007, Littlewhisker... Snowfeather, Hollyleaf, Moonfeather, karen1011, EzGoEr, dragon91260,
If you approve of gay-marriages put this on your profile and add your name to the list. Gaara's-pandachan101, art-is-a-BANG-2-hard-to-resist, Lee-All-The-Way, Starchip13, Wistful-Dreamer, DaggerMutt, dragon91260,
Ninety-five percent of the kids out there are concerned with being popular and fitting in. If you're part of the five percent who aren't, copy this, put it in your profile, and add your name to the list. AnimeKittyCafe, Hyperactivley Bored, Gem W, Bara-Minamino, Tsuyu Mikazuki, WeaselChick, Revenant666, darkflame1516, AirGirl Phantom, Agent of the Divine One, pointless people of Pluto, itachikakashi, xXxLuna-of-the-ChosenxXx, KunoichiKagi,fallen tenshi412, Mangafan13, DaggerMutt, Queen S of Randomness 016, Queen B of Randomness 016, AnimieKittyCaffe, The Gypsy Pirate Queen, That Bloody Demon, The Astrology Nerd, Shadow929, Crazy Billie Joe Loving Freak, Yavie Aelienel, Hyperactively Bored, Spymaster E, Shanny-Boo, Gem W, Brown-eyed angelofmusic, piratesswriter/fairy to be, Bara-Minomoto, Em Quagmire, Buffy The Mary-Sue Slayer, Random Little Writer, SamanthaFantasyFan, Crash923, Silver Wind Kitsue, Wings of Water- SKYE, 2ndsly, Insane Winged Girl, Faxness-Fan48, imaginarylullabyes, ReadingRobyn, dragon91260,
93 percent of American teens would have a severe emotional breakdown if someone called them a freak. If you are part of the 7 percent that would ask the person "What was your first clue?", copy this into your profile and add your name to the list: Sunlit Goddess of the C.O.C.A., Moonlit Goddess of the C.O.C.A., Evil Genius of the COCA, Invader Miley Phantom, dAnnYsGiRl777, BloodySalvation, Lady Lost-A-Lot, bellabookworm9, Bella Masen Cullen, Vampire Scooby, Alannaswarrior, SpottedLilly, Alleyanna Cullen, hugs.for.all.the.emo.boyz, I'll have some stupid cliche, rainxface, maximumride24, Flyer without Wings, Rowena of Naxen, dragon91260,
If you have ever fallen up a flight of stairs, copy this, put it in your profile, and add your name to the list. Ghetto Anime Princess, AnimeKittyCafe, (actually I have) Hyperactivley Bored, Gem W, Bara-Minamino, Tsuyu Mikazuki (I do all the time!), WeaselChick, Celyna ( i fall up the steps to school every time i go up them... sadly...) EverD, (When I did it, my friends said I defied physics. I don't know why though...) Wishing_for_a_Zoro_plushie (err... people laughed, and not to mention I was wearing a skirt XD ) Sangorulz(in school while wearing heels...clutz), AmethystDreamer (I run into things alot.) Seekerchick (sigh yes, yes i have), Bookworm81818(unfortunatly, i do this very often), Stormypoodle (I also have done this), Rowena of Naxen (and peole laughed...), dragon91260 (Sigh... twist my ankle every time),
I cdnuolt blveiee taht I cluod aulaclty
I am not afraid of the dark,
I am afraid of what is lurking in it.
I am not afraid of heights,
I am afraid of falling.
I am not afraid of falling in love,
I am afraid of not being loved back.
You hate stereotypes and think people should just shut up and stop, put this in your profile.
I'm SKINNY, so I MUST be anorexic.
If child abuse makes you sick and you think it's horrible and should be stopped, put this poem on your profile.
Post this on your page if you support homosexuals and think people need to get over themselves and realize that those that like the same sex are people too.
I am the girl kicked out of her home because I confided in my mother that I am a lesbian.
I am the prostitute working the streets because nobody will hire a transsexual woman.
I am the sister who holds her gay brother tight through the painful, tear-filled nights.
We are the parents who buried our daughter long before her time.
I am the man who died alone in the hospital because they would not let my partner of twenty-seven years into the room.
I am the foster child who wakes up with nightmares of being taken away from the two fathers who are the only loving family I have ever had. I wish they could adopt me.
I am one of the lucky ones, I guess. I survived the attack that left me in a coma for three weeks, and in another year I will probably be able to walk again.
I am not one of the lucky ones. I killed myself just weeks before graduating high school. It was simply too much to bear.
We are the couple who had the realtor hang up on us when she found out we wanted to rent a one-bedroom for two men.
I am the person who never knows which bathroom I should use if I want to avoid getting the management called on me.
I am the mother who is not allowed to even visit the children I bore, nursed, and raised. The court says I am an unfit mother because I now live with another woman.
I am the domestic-violence survivor who found the support system grow suddenly cold and distant when they found out my abusive partner is also a woman.
I am the domestic-violence survivor who has no support system to turn to because I am male.
I am the father who has never hugged his son because I grew up afraid to show affection to other men.
I am the home-economics teacher who always wanted to teach gym until someone told me that only lesbians do that.
I am the man who died when the paramedics stopped treating me as soon as they realized I was transsexual.
I am the person who feels guilty because I think I could be a much better person if I didn’t have to always deal with society hating me.
I am the man who stopped attending church, not because I don't believe, but because they closed their doors to my kind.
I am the person who has to hide what this world needs most, love.