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Joined 01-24-08, id: 1483425, Profile Updated: 09-11-08
Author has written 10 stories for Naruto, Harry Potter, and Ranma.

Hi, if anyone's reading this it probably means I've left them a review they didn't agree with and their reaction was probably 'So what have you written that makes you such a critic?' That's fine, I personally would have that reaction to a bad review unless I looked at what they'd said and could honestly not disagree with them. I will admit I opened this account so that I could leave signed reviews for the stories I like, dislike or anything in between.

Why signed reviews? Well that's rather easy to answer, and that is so that the author can contact me and ask questions, or abuse me as the case may be, lol. When I opened the account I would have said it was unlikely that I'd write my own stories but it seems I've proven myself wrong as I have to date started five stories on this site and have the first chapter for another six or seven stories waiting inspiration on my hard-drive.

I'm an Aussie, I'm a bloke and I'm getting on in years. I also really like Fanfiction and the original works they are based off of but mainly fanfiction which is ever changing, or at least it should be. I admit that with several hundred thousand Harry Potter stories out there it's hard to come up with something completely original and believable but I don't think it's impossible.

I don't know how many stories I've read to date with a shopping trip in them, I will say that it's so many that I can recite the items he'll buy in any story. Firstly he buys a top of the line traveling chest, though the features will differ in small regards such as whether there's a completely fitted apartment in there or just several large compartments that can be converted. Next on the list is numerous books since he spontaneously decides that knowledge is power. From here the lists diverge, he either goes for armour, or magical weapons that have features that make their wielder the next God of War and an unassailable warrior. Location is optional as well, he either visits Diagon or Knockturne Alley's or his family's vault where he finds everything an aspiring warrior for the light, or dark could possibly need.

Oh and lets not forget the 'New' wand that the ministry of magic can't track

Things I don't like:-

I'm not a fan of Yaoi fiction, I don't see the need to turn a character into something that they're not, unless there really is the possibility that they might be. Take Orochimaru for example, he could either be gay, or a pedophile based on the way he acts. Naruto or Sasuke? Nope, I don't see it. It's not that I dislike gay people either, some of my better friends are gay and I've got no problems with meeting their significant others, acts of public affection such as hugging and kissing don't bother me, so go figure.

I don't think my dislike of Yaoi has anything to do with the described acts, more to do with the fact that ninety percent of the fiction written about it is badly written, or they don't justify why a seemingly hetero character is suddenly locking lips with what you would normally define as their worst enemy or rival. I have to say that it's the same for all plot devices though, if it doesn't make sense to me then I'll probably stop reading it as inconsistency in a story makes my teeth itch.

Another thing I dislike are authors who don't use a spell checker at the very least. Poor grammar makes the story harder to read and understand the intent of the author. Some of these I'll continue to read if I can see a good story idea beneath the surface but normally it's not worth the hassle

Nuff said, since I doubt anyone will actually read this anyway.

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On the Way to Greatness by mira mirth reviews
As per the Hat's decision, Harry gets Sorted into Slytherin upon his arrival in Hogwarts—and suddenly, the future isn't what it used to be.
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 20 - Words: 232,797 - Reviews: 3255 - Favs: 7,861 - Follows: 9,043 - Updated: 9/4/2014 - Published: 12/26/2008 - Harry P.
The Wizard on the Edge of Forever by rpnielsen reviews
During the fight at the Department of Mysteries, Harry gets taken on the ride of his life.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 20 - Words: 97,800 - Reviews: 579 - Favs: 1,248 - Follows: 1,524 - Updated: 4/2/2013 - Published: 3/24/2009 - Harry P., OC
The End and the Beginning by muggledad reviews
My stab at the Harry travels through time genre. Significant inspiration from "HP & Nightmares of Futures Past" with a twist. Harry/Hermione
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 14 - Words: 144,392 - Reviews: 1390 - Favs: 3,572 - Follows: 2,131 - Updated: 7/24/2011 - Published: 2/28/2010 - [Harry P., Hermione G.] Sirius B., Minerva M. - Complete
Reforging The Past by Paladeus reviews
Naruto and Hinata go back in time with Kyuubi's help when she realizes she's about to die, which would also kill Naruto. In the process, they become Hanyou and they begin building up their comrades to fight the horrors to come.Naru/Hina/Ino/FemHaku/FemKyu
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 11 - Words: 197,147 - Reviews: 641 - Favs: 1,732 - Follows: 1,665 - Updated: 4/17/2011 - Published: 5/27/2008 - Naruto U., Hinata H.
The Forsaken by Paladeus reviews
Missing Hokage challenge by Perfect Lionheart. Naruto is kicked out of Konoha by the Council. In the process, Tsunade and others leave with him, including his new wives, where they become treasure, jutsu and summon collectors. Naru/Hina/Ino
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 46,697 - Reviews: 219 - Favs: 804 - Follows: 857 - Updated: 1/19/2011 - Published: 8/22/2009 - Naruto U., Hinata H., Ino Y.
Harry Potter and the Quantum Leap by Seel'vor reviews
Harry Potter won the Second Blood War and defeated his enemies... and was left with nothing. Decades later, he contributes to the creation of a revolutionary new piece of technology and destroys the future in order to rewrite his own past...
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 42 - Words: 274,521 - Reviews: 4578 - Favs: 6,314 - Follows: 6,429 - Updated: 10/28/2010 - Published: 12/17/2007 - Harry P., Hermione G.
Can't Have It Both Ways by robst reviews
If you are forced to participate in a competition that's reserved for adults only, doesn't that mean you should be considered an adult? Harry gets some much needed help and advice before having some fun by allowing his marauder heritage out to play. H/Hr
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 16 - Words: 106,352 - Reviews: 2738 - Favs: 7,109 - Follows: 2,937 - Updated: 2/14/2010 - Published: 9/26/2009 - [Harry P., Hermione G.] - Complete
Partners by muggledad reviews
Having the right partner can make life much smoother. The right persons can complement each other's strengths and support each other's weakness. Love really does make the world go 'round, especially with a Dark Lord after your blood. HP/DG
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 16 - Words: 166,103 - Reviews: 1258 - Favs: 3,906 - Follows: 1,880 - Updated: 1/31/2010 - Published: 4/22/2009 - [Harry P., Daphne G.] [Neville L., Susan B.] - Complete
Fate's Gambit by robst reviews
Fate looked on as the boy who's destined to lead the fight against the darkness was slowly being broken down until she's compelled to take action that will change his life forever. Pre-Hogwarts, friendship H/Hr/L rating is for Dursleys treatment of Harry
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Friendship - Chapters: 9 - Words: 53,921 - Reviews: 1279 - Favs: 3,188 - Follows: 1,275 - Updated: 8/31/2009 - Published: 7/12/2009 - [Harry P., Hermione G., Luna L.] - Complete
Harry Potter & the Never Ending Summer by Kassien reviews
COMPLETE! - PostOOTP, noHBP or DH. Harry finally grows up over a long difficult summer with a lot of help. Slow moving & Mature Themes. HPNT honks, maybe some HGRW but don't hold your breath. HarryTonks!
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 20 - Words: 208,352 - Reviews: 1040 - Favs: 2,216 - Follows: 1,278 - Updated: 5/25/2009 - Published: 6/20/2007 - Harry P., N. Tonks - Complete
The Law of the Jungle by Roozette reviews
Everyone knows the law of the jungle. NEVER come between a lioness and her cub. Not even death will prevent Lily Potter from keeping her child safe.
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Family - Chapters: 7 - Words: 39,888 - Reviews: 240 - Favs: 364 - Follows: 548 - Updated: 5/6/2009 - Published: 12/27/2008 - Lily Evans P., Harry P.
Breach of Trust by Hlpur reviews
In the days following Dumbledore’s death nothing is as it seems and a second prophesy is discovered. Harry and Hermione learn who they can truly trust as they struggle to fulfill destiny.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 88,757 - Reviews: 411 - Favs: 730 - Follows: 970 - Updated: 4/2/2009 - Published: 10/25/2008 - Hermione G., Harry P.
An Uzumaki Amongst the Dunes by pudgypudge reviews
Having been denied his birthright by the council of Konoha, Naruto forsakes the Leaf Village. He leaves for what he hopes is a better life among the shinobi of Suna, taking his family's scrolls and heirlooms with him.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 29 - Words: 172,558 - Reviews: 4148 - Favs: 6,487 - Follows: 3,254 - Updated: 3/31/2009 - Published: 12/28/2007 - Naruto U., Temari - Complete
The Substitute by BajaB reviews
The magical contract made by the Goblet of Fire inadvertently sets underway events that change everything you thought you knew about the boy-who-lived. AU GOF, depressing and a bit dark.
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 6 - Words: 35,945 - Reviews: 723 - Favs: 1,672 - Follows: 746 - Updated: 12/16/2008 - Published: 11/7/2008 - Harry P. - Complete
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Soul Mage reviews
Pre Hogwarts divergence. Harry has familial powers and three years with a ghostly member of his family to learn them before he enters Hogwarts. How will these powers shape the boy and his life?
Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 3 - Words: 18,357 - Reviews: 88 - Favs: 282 - Follows: 497 - Updated: 5/29/2010 - Published: 5/21/2009 - Harry P., Lily Evans P.
Witchkraft the muggle way reviews
5 year old Harry does magic and when Albus comes to obliviate Harry and who ever witnessed his magic the spell doesn't work for some reason and Harry remembers what he's done and sets out to learn as much as he can. Powerful wandless Harry. no ship/slash
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 10,142 - Reviews: 55 - Favs: 126 - Follows: 218 - Updated: 12/10/2009 - Published: 9/20/2008 - Harry P.
And a day reviews
Harry, irate after the events of fifth year needs to take to control of his life. Hermione offers him some choices. rated for safety, no lemons. May be strong language, violence, character death is also possible though not likely
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 14,538 - Reviews: 48 - Favs: 47 - Follows: 96 - Updated: 8/27/2009 - Published: 8/20/2009 - Harry P., Hermione G.
Terminator reviews
The year is 2029 and the world is about to end. Earths pop.is near 72k. Voldemort is winning, but I plan to change that. Terminator like setting xover, no ship, no slash, back in time-travel fic. Harry Potter like never before or your money back.
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 2 - Words: 17,167 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 37 - Updated: 6/11/2009 - Published: 9/30/2008
Wild Horse of Hogwarts reviews
Ranma in pursuit of martial arts excellence comes to England at the age of eleven and is asked to join Hogwarts at the same time as Harry Potter. Magical gifts and powerful Ranma. Nodoka gifted and magical. Harry Potter taught by Ranma. no ship so far.
Crossover - Ranma & Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 11,856 - Reviews: 34 - Favs: 40 - Follows: 93 - Updated: 2/14/2009 - Published: 10/11/2008
The littlest tree snake reviews
Anko decides that she'll take in Naruto when she sees him being beaten by a mob of villagers. How will this change the destiny of our little hero? Rated M to be safe, nothing to warrant it yet.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 16,119 - Reviews: 106 - Favs: 225 - Follows: 320 - Updated: 1/23/2009 - Published: 2/23/2008 - Anko M., Naruto U.
Hell hath no fury reviews
Revenge fic:Dark:Powerful Harry. When Harry defeats Voldemort he isn't shocked to end up in Azkaban, he is when Ron brings in Hermione and rapes her in the cell next to his. The anger he can't feel for himself he can for his friends. H/Hr eventually
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 7 - Words: 35,867 - Reviews: 169 - Favs: 212 - Follows: 356 - Updated: 9/27/2008 - Published: 8/13/2008 - Harry P., Hermione G.
The Great Escape reviews
Sirius escapes Azkabahn years earlier, knowing that he's innocent. Coming back to the real world he learns how deep the betrayal was and kidnaps his godchild and escapes to a safe place on the other side of the world. non yaoi, mentoring only.
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 48,966 - Reviews: 60 - Favs: 64 - Follows: 122 - Updated: 7/29/2008 - Published: 3/25/2008 - Harry P., Sirius B.
untitled Hinata oneshot reviews
Hinata finds confidence in a new outfit. Just a short omake style oneshot that came to me.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,587 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 3 - Published: 2/26/2008 - Hinata H. - Complete
One fine day reviews
The 'Land of Waves' arc doesn't end anything like it should, find out just how different things end up with a few major changes. Character death, I'll leave you to discover who. Follow Naruto as he becomes what he always dreamed. Ch3 earns the M rating
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 4 - Words: 41,340 - Reviews: 58 - Favs: 50 - Follows: 70 - Updated: 2/24/2008 - Published: 1/27/2008 - Naruto U., Hinata H.