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Joined 02-17-08, id: 1502619, Profile Updated: 12-27-13
Author has written 11 stories for CSI, Twilight, and Harry Potter.

My name's Fernanda and I'm a 26-year-old English as a second language teacher. My penname is a mix of two of my favorite TV shows. CSI - Sara Sidle was/is one of my favorite characters - I especially loved GSR! - and Charmed, with the Halliwell sisters. It is and will always be my favorite TV show. It taught me a lot and brought me the best friends a girl could ask.

I'm a huge bookworm, and I love music.

I often base chapters off songs I'm listening to, usually the mood. Upbeat song means a more upbeat chapter and such. Books and things that happen around me help with inspiration as well. Being a teacher is quite a good thing for the mind haha.

My stories will usually be mostly fluffy, light with some drama. I'm not good at writing angst as I think there's already too much of it around me, and I want to let go of it. I love reading angsty stories sometimes, but it starts getting to me too easily. So yes, sometimes my stories are pointless, aww-worthy (or cringe haha) instead of anything else I could write. It's just how I am.

I love reading books. The last one I read was Pride & Prejudice and Zombies, and it was one of the best I've ever read. I laughed so much. I finally got around to The Hunger Games trilogy and was amazed by it. Just started on The Game of Thrones, and it's been awesome so far!

My favorite books are the Harry Potter series, and some classics such as Dracula, The Turn of the Screw, and even the Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy. I like Twilight okay, but some fanfics here are better written than them. I read them during a time where I needed a distraction (I was writing my college thesis) so that's probably why it stuck, but it could do with some improvement.

Harry Potter is my favorite book series. Ever. It has a very special place in my heart. Seeing HP and Twi fans 'fight' over which's best is just ridiculous as they are two completely different things, and shouldn't be compared to each other. J.K. Rowling has a better way with words and she surely can write a lot better than S. Meyer. Meyer just seems to want to please everyone and it just doesn't work. Rowling just wasn't afraid to kill off characters, especially the ones we all loved.

Twilight is my favorite for fanfics! I like Bella and Edward and I really like Renesmee too, I don't get why people didn't like her... she's adorable! Jacob Black annoys me though. Especially the whole imprinting thing. That storyline was really creepy, and I hated how Meyer wanted to give everyone a happy ending, so Jacob got to fall in love with Bella's daughter. It just doesn't sit right with me. He claims a baby before her own mother had the chance to meet her.

I'm team Edward all the way, and in all my stories, Jacob is either non-existent or the bad guy. I have a problem with the wolf pack... They have their beliefs and I respect that, but I can't stand the way they judge others. They are filled with prejudice and seem incapable of changing their minds. Seth is the only one that can actually think in that pack. That's why mostly I don't include them in my stories.

BTW, if anyone else comes to me saying Jacob would never hurt Renesmee because he imprinted on her and blah blah blah... how did Emily get her scars again? Yeah, thought so. If you like Jacob, good for you; I don't. Jacob for me is an annoying teenager that thinks he's all that, a manipulator, verbally and emotionally abusive and just plain disturbing. He preyed on a girl when she was at her worst, made her believe he'd kill himself if she didn't give what he wanted, and tried to break up a couple because he didn't like it. Edward could be controlling at times, and a bit too protective, but knowing he could hear whatever Jacob was thinking, I think he had some rights to protect what was his. (doesn't justify trying to control who Bella could see, simple communication goes a long way).

And I hate the whole 'imprint' concept. For me, it's just a way to take someone's will away, deny them their freedom. And also, just because he imprinted does not mean she would love him back.

I would really appreciate if my opinions were respected. I get one too many reviews about Jacob, and that's with the warning that stories are not for Jacob lovers. Tired of it.

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My stories translated:

Nessie's First Halloween, Momma? and Happy Mommie's Day were translated by carliitha-cullen to Spanish. Go check it out!

Brothers & Sisters is being translated to French by an angel's whisper. She does have my permission to keep translating it.

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I absolutely love it when people review stories complaining about the 'grammer' that is too bad! I like helping people with their stories, but sometimes it gets to be too much. I just can't help but laugh. I don't know which one is worse though, the writer that doesn't even bother getting their chapters spell checked before posting, or the reviewers that complain in such poor spelling as well. Oh, and if you can't even spell correctly on you summary, I just don't even bother clicking on your story.

What does 'infuscate' means? Apparently the writer was trying to say 'investigate'. Yeah... beats me too.

Defiantly is not the same thing as Definitely.

Collage and College are two completely different things.

Threw and Through do not have the same meaning!

I must be always capitalized, and so must every first word of a sentence. And city names, and people names and nicknames...

Commas and Periods exist, so just use them. If you're asking a question, use the Question mark.

If you're using a contraction, there should be an apostrophe. Can't, won't, shouldn't. If you're saying it belongs to someone, there should also have an apostrophe. It's Bella's. And not, Its Bellas. These sentences have completely different meanings.

If you didn't get it yet, I'm a nerd. I have a problem with poor spelling. There are many spell checkers for free around the internet, just use them.

Oct 24th: I just enabled Anonymous reviews... let's see if I won't regret it ;)

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From my stories:

T-shirt & Tank Top mentioned in A New Beginning

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Freedom of Choice:

Cars:

Edward's Chevrolet Volt

Bella's Porsche

Nessie's Ferrari

Carlisle Honda Accord

Prom Dresses:

Bella

Nessie - front - back

Sara - front - back

Sara's ring

Sara's wedding:

Sara's dress

Nessie's dress

Sara's tiara

Nessie's Wedding:

Nessie's ring

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Brothers & Sisters:

Dresses:

Bella

Esme

Rosalie

Alice

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We Are Broken:

Bella's ring

Dresses:

Alice's and Rosalie's

Esme's

Annabelle's

Bella's front

Bella's back


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Find Us by Ariadnerue reviews
In which Emma learns why she is a miracle, and how she got her lifelong compulsion to find people. Father-daughter feels, oneshot.
Once Upon a Time - Rated: K - English - Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,477 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 42 - Follows: 7 - Published: 5/29/2013 - Emma S., Prince Charming/David N. - Complete
Emma by Ariadnerue reviews
In which Emma learns about her grandparents, and how she got her name. Mother-daughter feels, oneshot.
Once Upon a Time - Rated: K - English - Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,198 - Reviews: 33 - Favs: 73 - Follows: 10 - Published: 5/26/2013 - Emma S., Snow White/Mary M. Blanchard - Complete
Dead of Night by Dessler reviews
Post "Selfless, Brave and True". Sleep eludes Emma after the events of the day.
Once Upon a Time - Rated: K - English - Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,583 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 2 - Published: 4/20/2013 - Emma S., Snow White/Mary M. Blanchard - Complete
Firefly in Summer by primarycolors reviews
Edward finds himself back in the little beach town of his childhood when he inherits the local bar from his uncle. The elusive, pretty girl next door has killer legs, a sketchbook and secrets that are slowly eating her alive.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 47 - Words: 188,377 - Reviews: 9573 - Favs: 6,082 - Follows: 4,237 - Updated: 2/19/2012 - Published: 1/20/2011 - Edward, Bella - Complete
The Christmas Book by ericastwilight reviews
After the loss of his best friends,Edward is responsible for their little girl. Unable to get the child to open up, he takes her to a bookstore. Inside, he finds a loving young woman, hurting from past regrets and the owner of a magical book.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 15 - Words: 25,530 - Reviews: 1750 - Favs: 1,301 - Follows: 725 - Updated: 12/31/2011 - Published: 12/15/2011 - Edward, Bella - Complete
Find My Place by Saxyad18 reviews
Rose and Bella bond, but when the Cullens return from hunting, the new friendship tears the family apart. Can the Cullens salvage the family before it falls into ruin? Who is sacrificed for the benefit of the rest? And who commits the ultimate betrayal?
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Family/Angst - Chapters: 19 - Words: 115,948 - Reviews: 368 - Favs: 462 - Follows: 124 - Updated: 3/25/2011 - Published: 5/7/2009 - Bella, Rosalie - Complete
Parachute by KitsuShel reviews
After finding an abandoned child on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him for five years as her own. What happens to their life when his biological family is found? AU/AH
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 38 - Words: 158,875 - Reviews: 17459 - Favs: 9,111 - Follows: 5,242 - Updated: 2/3/2011 - Published: 6/8/2010 - Bella, Edward - Complete
Take the Ice by bellamarie117 reviews
Competitive figure skater Bella Swan meets NHL hockey player Edward Cullen. Bella's Olympic dreams are crushed by injury. Can he help her find the strength to take the ice again? Will they find love and friendship in the meantime? A/H, M, E/B
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 26 - Words: 425,876 - Reviews: 8063 - Favs: 6,630 - Follows: 3,364 - Updated: 11/17/2010 - Published: 2/24/2010 - Bella, Edward - Complete
Père et Fille by Blood Red Vampress reviews
Bella has a small conversation with Carlisle when she's alone with him and Esme while the others are out. She learns more about his British history and has a mini French lesson from her loving vampire father. Carlisle/Bella father/daughter relationship
Twilight - Rated: K+ - English - Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,163 - Reviews: 33 - Favs: 94 - Follows: 21 - Published: 5/30/2010 - Carlisle, Bella - Complete
Hear No Evil by BlueSea14 reviews
After over a hundred years alone, a deaf vampire Bella finds the Cullen family. With no memory of her human past, and no way to communicate with the world, how can they help her? Canon.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 25 - Words: 97,077 - Reviews: 1568 - Favs: 2,134 - Follows: 780 - Updated: 4/9/2010 - Published: 6/15/2007 - Bella, Edward - Complete
The Nightmare by Saxyad18 reviews
Set during Eclipse. As Esme sits home one evening, Bella struggles through another nightmare. Will this give Rosalie a chance to overcome some of her issues with Bella, or will their relationship continued to be strained? One-shot from Esme's POV.
Twilight - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,860 - Reviews: 66 - Favs: 206 - Follows: 27 - Updated: 1/11/2010 - Published: 4/25/2009 - Bella, Rosalie - Complete
Bella and the Beast by Emiliana Keladry reviews
Bella discovers a hidden castle with a secret that will change her life and the course of another.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 15 - Words: 23,203 - Reviews: 303 - Favs: 234 - Follows: 89 - Updated: 10/5/2009 - Published: 9/17/2008 - Bella, Edward - Complete
Witches of Twilight by raca reviews
Bella discovers a truth about the 'mythical' world long before leaving Phoenix. Seeking out her friends, she finds herself in Forks and surrounded by creatures that shouldn't exist. A retelling of Twilight filled with Magic and staring a powerful Bella.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 31 - Words: 117,547 - Reviews: 1613 - Favs: 1,483 - Follows: 553 - Updated: 9/2/2009 - Published: 4/29/2009 - Bella, Edward - Complete
And They Lived Happily by Chelles reviews
The best part isn't always the ride off into the sunset. Sometimes, the best part comes right before. Sequel to Chasing the Rainbow's End.
CSI - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 104 - Words: 473,720 - Reviews: 1973 - Favs: 98 - Follows: 120 - Updated: 8/14/2009 - Published: 9/12/2007 - Gil G., Sara S. - Complete
Stay by crimsonmarie reviews
As an actor, Edward Cullen is surrounded by people that he couldn't really care less about. What happens when he buys a house in the middle of nowhere and meets his new neighbors? AH, AU, ExB, rated M for future chapters and language.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 38 - Words: 276,486 - Reviews: 5483 - Favs: 7,883 - Follows: 2,855 - Updated: 6/27/2009 - Published: 12/30/2008 - Bella, Edward - Complete
Sunshine State by Justine Lark reviews
More than a missing moment, it's a missing weekend from Eclipse! Experience Bella and Edward's visit to Florida from Edward's POV. Can Edward monitor Victoria's attack, pass for human, keep Bella happy, win Renee's approval and stay out of the sun?
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Family/Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 15,058 - Reviews: 435 - Favs: 422 - Follows: 125 - Updated: 12/19/2008 - Published: 12/3/2008 - Edward, Bella - Complete
Wins and Losses by PaintedShadow reviews
When a 10 year old girl, suddenly under Grissom's care pushes him into taking the leap. GSR to come.
CSI - Rated: T - English - Family/Romance - Chapters: 13 - Words: 14,569 - Reviews: 109 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 47 - Updated: 5/1/2008 - Published: 3/14/2008 - Gil G., Sara S.
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Like You reviews
Bella Tonks wants revenge. But she had to flee to Forks with her father to protect him. As she meets Edward and his family, how will they react to her secret? Who's willing to fight for the Wizarding World with her?
Crossover - Harry Potter & Twilight - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 27 - Words: 135,536 - Reviews: 191 - Favs: 190 - Follows: 175 - Updated: 6/10/2013 - Published: 8/19/2010 - N. Tonks, Bella
A New Beginning reviews
Set 20 years after BD. It's a new start for the Cullens, especially Nessie. Will she be able to control herself? Canon, but NOT a JacobxNessie story. Not for Jacob lovers. Rated T for both language and theme. As of 10/10/11, changes have been made.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 25 - Words: 70,152 - Reviews: 213 - Favs: 153 - Follows: 51 - Updated: 10/10/2011 - Published: 1/23/2009 - Renesmee C./Nessie, Bella - Complete
Brick by Boring Brick reviews
Sequel to 'We Are Broken' - A series of one-shots showing Annabelle's life as she grows up. Any kind of situation may occur! Rating T for later - meaning her teenage years.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Family - Chapters: 10 - Words: 55,545 - Reviews: 37 - Favs: 47 - Follows: 23 - Updated: 8/13/2011 - Published: 10/26/2010 - Bella, Edward - Complete
Momma? reviews
"Momma?" she asked, "who's that lady next to daddy?" - Just a silly one shot. Revised and edited as of 06/26/2011
Twilight - Rated: K+ - English - Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,429 - Reviews: 60 - Favs: 120 - Follows: 21 - Updated: 6/26/2011 - Published: 2/26/2009 - Bella, Renesmee C./Nessie - Complete
We Are Broken reviews
Bella has no one left, apart from her daughter. But once she meets Edward and his family, will she learn to trust and love again? AU, slight OOC. Rating for dark-ish themes, nothing too heavy. Canon couples. Now complete.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 17 - Words: 52,887 - Reviews: 182 - Favs: 245 - Follows: 89 - Updated: 10/26/2010 - Published: 3/2/2010 - Bella, Edward - Complete
The day I met my daughter reviews
One-Shot. Bella meets her daughter for the first time. Based on BD, but no Jacob. Rating T for a kiss ;
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,241 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 21 - Follows: 5 - Published: 2/23/2010 - Renesmee C./Nessie, Bella - Complete
Brothers & Sisters reviews
Bella, Jasper and Rosalie are siblings, but got separated and changed under different circumstances. As they find each other again, how will their lives be? Light, love-filled fic, with some drama as well. Alternative Universe. Slight OOC Canon pairings
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Family/Drama - Chapters: 20 - Words: 50,290 - Reviews: 244 - Favs: 467 - Follows: 169 - Updated: 1/30/2010 - Published: 10/17/2009 - Bella, Jasper - Complete
Nessie's First Halloween reviews
Edward and Bella take Nessie trick or treating. Just a cute, fluffly one-shot. Rating T because of some not so friendly thoughts.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,712 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 81 - Follows: 14 - Published: 10/31/2009 - Renesmee C./Nessie, Edward - Complete
Freedom of Choice reviews
Sequel to 'A New Beginning' - It's senior year for Nessie and her friends, and everything seems perfect... or does it? Rating cause I tend to use bad words... NOT A JacobxNessie story, I really hate him! - COMPLETE
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 29 - Words: 94,307 - Reviews: 394 - Favs: 109 - Follows: 66 - Updated: 9/17/2009 - Published: 4/12/2009 - Renesmee C./Nessie, Bella - Complete
Happy Mommie's Day reviews
A late Mother's Day fic... Because a mother isn't just the person that gives birth to you. One-shot, really short and cute D
Twilight - Rated: K+ - English - Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 981 - Reviews: 34 - Favs: 55 - Follows: 6 - Published: 5/13/2009 - Renesmee C./Nessie, Rosalie - Complete
A weird way reviews
Grissom wakes up with an idea... GSR, kinda fluff.. my first story! One-shot.
CSI - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 440 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 4 - Published: 3/18/2008 - Gil G., Sara S. - Complete
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