Dieuwtjin
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Joined 03-09-08, id: 1519960, Profile Updated: 01-03-19
Author has written 5 stories for Tales of Vesperia, Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney, Radiant Historia, Fire Emblem, and Steins;Gate/シュタインズ ゲート.

Updated 03-08-2018:

Happy new year everyone!

Hey everyone, it's been a while since I updated the profile. Well, here is a small update concerning the two fics I will work on in the near future:

Progress report on Temporal Closure Chapter 7 and 8:

I hope to finish both of these this weekend and post them before my vacation ends. It's a very tall order, but the work count is at around 12000 out of roughly 16000. Most of the story and dialogue has been written and it's in the revision phase. Chapter 7 constantly kicked my ass since Mayuri, to me, is very hard to write. She is like the anti-me, but then again not entirely. Her intelligence level to me is hard to estimate. It is portrayed to be lowish but at the same time she is the only one to figure out that the seemingly random letters on the labmem badges are everyone's initials, and she is the only one to deduce that Daru is Suzuha's real father. This is when her competition consist of Okabe, Kurisu anmd Daru, who all all genius-level of intelligence. On the other hand, this is seemingly the only occurence where this shows, so maybe it was a fluke. You could argue that this shouldn't matter when writing her, and in some situations it might not, but if you put her ina situation where weird or worrying things are occuring then it becomes a question to how perceptive Mayuri would or should be and how it would affect how she acts.

In this regard, Daru, at least, is easier. When it comes to writing him, the more perverted he is, the more accurate he is. I mean, seriously... according to SG:O (the VN), he insisted on constantly taking baths with his own daughter, Suzuha, when she reached puberty. I mean, COME ON MAN. I get that the writers have to give you flaws to not overshadow Okabe too much, but this is really streching suspense of disbelief...

Progress report on nobility, final chapter:

This will be completed after temporal closure part 1 finishes (meaning chapter 7 and 8 are finished).

Personal information

Ah, i see someone is for some reason interested in knowing a little more about the enigmatic reviewer that is known only as Dieuwtjin. I guess i must have made a good impression somewhere O_o

Anyway, you have come to the right place! Come and sit down on this comfy chair here. Can i get you something to drink? Well, anything non alcoholic in any case? Alcohol isn't really my thing... and you wouldn't want to hear me embarras myself with who knows what kind of stories i might tell if i were to be drunk, right?

No, i thought so... but now that we are comfy with drinks and all, what is it that you would like to know?

Real name:

Ow, come on... Dieuwtjin isn't that hard to spell. Actually, Dieuwertje is a real name here in the Netherlands. If you really do not want to use Dieuw, you can call me William, which is a name that does have a close relevance to my real one.

Age:

' I'm an old fossil, since I'm 22' was what my profile originally said. Well, that was a long time ago... I'm now roughly 10 years older and probably too old for this. Or aren't I? Hmmm... what do you think?

Gender:

Can't you tell...? I mean, we're in the same fictional room enjoying equally fictional drinks... hold on, i didn't accidentally grab some extremely potent alcoholic beverage belonging to my housemate, did i...? Well... anyway, i'm male, just to straighten that out.

Physical appearance:

I went to a camp with some friends that i knew only from the internet once (my guild from an online MMOrpg that i once played), and a lot of them (including the girls) seemed to think that i resembled Clark Kent from the Smallville series. They even went as far to make me a special hat with the superman symbol on the front. So depending on whether or not you believe them, you might now find yourself having a drink with a younger version of superman.

Nationality/Occupation:

I'm a physician from the aforementioned Netherlands. Did i always want to be a doctor/medic? Well, i was in doubt for a long time on what to do, as economics, law school, dentistry and medicine all seemed to be interesting, and i was equally good in everything. In the end, i chose medicine as it was the most practical and direct way to help other people.

Interests:

I guess i can say that i'm totally addicted to RPG's, anime's, gaming, sporting, reading, writing (for fun), studying (the interesting topics) and working (gotta earn some money to avoid having to live locked up in my room while eating just water and bread!), in no particular order :)

If i had to name a few good rpg's, the best and most memorable ones i have played are final fantasy 7, lufia 2, tales of symphonia and tales of vesperia. In fact, the two tales games are probably the best rpg i have ever played. Thus, it was no real surprise that i chose those to write a story about. For more recent releases I would recommend pillars of eternity 1 and 2 on PC and pathfinder: kingmaker.

For good professional writers, i can recommend Raymond Feist, Robert Jordan, David/Leigh Eddings and J.k. Rowling.

If you're looking for my list of favorite ff.net authors, it's complete yet. But in the meantime, if i reviewed your story, it means you're one of my favorites. That doesn't mean i don't consider you a good author if this isn't the case, as i haven't been able to read even remotely all of the stories going on here, much less review all of them, with my time schedule (as i normally try to make long and detailed constructive reviews). So sorry if i haven't been able to read your awesome story yet :)

Dislikes:

Aside from all the standard stuff just about everyone loves to hate, i don't really like going to party's and/or alcohol. I guess i'm way too shy to even remotely be a party animal, and party's are always so crowded and the interaction with everyone is always so forced. And there was this time when i was minding my own buisness when i was suddenly dragged off by a random girl for unknown reasons... (kinda like what happens to Marcus in the first chapter of TDW).

For alcohol, i personally think that anything with alcohol in it tastes a bit like how i would expect dishwasher water (including soap/tablets) to taste. So i don't drink it... and i don't really see the point of being drunk either, as you then just end up doing silly stuff and might even put yourself in danger, depending of where you decide to get drunk. And besides, if you're the last remaining sober person in any given circumstance, you're bound to have a lot of material that you can use to blackmail whoever else was there at the time :P

What got you into writing/reviewing?

Well, for writing, i know a lot of aspiring and talented young writers from my social surroundings. Secondly, I wanted to try writing a story, just to see what it was like... and as i was reviewing a lot of authors here on ff.net, it felt a bit unsportsmanlike to not offer everyone something on which they could completely destroy me in return. Thirdly, just so see how succesful my story/stories would be if i posted it/them here.

For reviewing, i just find it fun to have discussions with non professional writers on writing stories... especially if you both know of the 'story universe', which is almost guaranteed due to this site's categorisation structure. Although the discussions go by reviews/responses/story notes, they are still very entertaining.

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Lazy Life on Repeat by Zanmat0 reviews
An ongoing collection about P5's Akira and Makoto.
Persona Series - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 36 - Words: 45,927 - Reviews: 217 - Favs: 394 - Follows: 428 - Updated: 8/14 - Published: 11/7/2016 - [Akira K./Ren A., Makoto N.]
On The Gallian Front: The Gallian Campaign by Heinkelboy05 reviews
March 15, 1935 The Imperial Germanian Reich invades Gallia. What follows shows that a tiny nation could best a military giant. These events will tell a story hidden in the mists of time. A story of friendship and trust, of persecution and hate, and of love blooming even in the flames of war. What follows is a record of this conflict and of those who fought, lived and died. -Jack L.
Valkyria Chronicles - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 124 - Words: 575,603 - Reviews: 411 - Favs: 166 - Follows: 175 - Updated: 7/3 - Published: 2/16/2015 - [Welkin G., Alicia M.] Isara G., OC
Cop and Robber by L.C. Li reviews
Niijima Makoto is tasked to take down the Phantom Thieves. Spoiler alert: She gets her heart stolen. — Police!Makoto. Akira:Makoto.
Persona Series - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Romance - Chapters: 50 - Words: 110,177 - Reviews: 827 - Favs: 945 - Follows: 801 - Updated: 1/27/2018 - Published: 4/10/2017 - [Makoto N., Akira K./Ren A.] - Complete
Of Wyverns and Men by Helvetica Standard Emblem reviews
The story of a wyvern rider and a tactician. Male Avatar (Robin) x Cherche.
Fire Emblem - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 23 - Words: 171,893 - Reviews: 333 - Favs: 491 - Follows: 585 - Updated: 11/3/2017 - Published: 5/5/2013 - Avatar/Robin, Cherche
Just a Dork by LeafyDream reviews
Akira Karsuru is not a cool guy. He's dorky, good-natured, a terrible cook, and enjoys gardening. The swaggerific phantom thief? Just dumb luck. He's a goody-two shoes who just wants everyone to be his friend. He's not a delinquent. He's just a dork. Chapter 11: Makoto's afraid of ghosts, and Akira sweeps her off her feet.
Persona Series - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 11 - Words: 27,637 - Reviews: 114 - Favs: 322 - Follows: 278 - Updated: 10/6/2017 - Published: 4/16/2017 - [Protagonist, Futaba S., Haru O., Makoto N.] - Complete
Deliverance by Lex of Light reviews
A foreign mage seeking to understand her heart, and a tactician following the ideals of a dead monarch. This is their story.
Fire Emblem - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 34,444 - Reviews: 174 - Favs: 301 - Follows: 355 - Updated: 9/22/2016 - Published: 3/31/2013 - Tharja, Avatar/Robin
The Super Soldier Program by HotCrestFanfics reviews
Seeking to exploit the powerful genes of his faithful tactician, Prince Chrom sends Robin on a difficult but important journey... MUxAll 1st Generation Female Lemons! You have been warned!
Fire Emblem - Rated: M - English - Romance/Family - Chapters: 13 - Words: 65,922 - Reviews: 139 - Favs: 202 - Follows: 214 - Updated: 5/27/2016 - Published: 6/27/2015 - Avatar/Robin, Chrom, Morgan - Complete
Potentia Amoris by Lux Aureus reviews
Gangrel lies defeated, but the war for Ylisse has just begun. This story, focusing on the gaps in the story left by the missions of Fire Emblem: Awakening, sheds light on the male Avatar's personal life over the second half of the game.
Fire Emblem - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 23 - Words: 151,999 - Reviews: 332 - Favs: 507 - Follows: 564 - Updated: 7/5/2015 - Published: 5/1/2013 - [Avatar/Robin, Cordelia]
Of Swords and Claws by Draknal reviews
Only when you admit your own weakness can you gain strength through the help of others. Ike x Lethe
Fire Emblem - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 9 - Words: 79,164 - Reviews: 218 - Favs: 150 - Follows: 147 - Updated: 12/25/2013 - Published: 11/9/2007 - Ike, Lethe
Our Love Incarnate by Cynical-Banshee reviews
Every path in life will fork, and the choices one makes will decide their happiness in reality. This is the story of Kazuto Kirigaya and Yuuki Asuna, from the fleeting moments of young love to the evolution into a bond that is truly worth noting. (Discontinued, never to be updated again, dreams are dead, hopes or crushed, the future is never).
Sword Art Online/ソードアート・オンライン - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 24 - Words: 117,143 - Reviews: 293 - Favs: 348 - Follows: 380 - Updated: 10/6/2013 - Published: 2/18/2013 - Kirito/Kazuto K., Asuna/Asuna Y.
The Tides of Change by CyberJordan reviews
Political instability, a pro-NCR terrorist militia, caravan attacks and a mysterious warrior in black. All part of normal life in independent New Vegas...or is it?
Fallout - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 25 - Words: 108,495 - Reviews: 209 - Favs: 183 - Follows: 127 - Updated: 6/21/2013 - Published: 7/18/2012 - Lone Wanderer, Courier - Complete
Between by Sub-Atomic Grape reviews
Time stretches out between attacks, battles, and one war and the next. In those moments and pauses, Robin and Chrom realize the depth of their bond, and what the future might hold for a tactician and her commander.
Fire Emblem - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 14,168 - Reviews: 39 - Favs: 290 - Follows: 76 - Updated: 4/7/2013 - Published: 4/1/2013 - [Avatar/Robin, Chrom] - Complete
There and Back Again by greggsmk reviews
With the Blight and the events in Amaranthine behind him, Aedan Cousland can finally go looking for his wayward lover, Morrigan. Eventually tracking her down to the Dragonbone Wastes, he finds her standing in front of an Eluvian, an ancient mirror. And as the witch explains, this mirror is no mere portal, but a gateway that can take them anywhere, or anywhen...M!Cousland/Morrigan
Dragon Age - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,540 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 49 - Follows: 55 - Published: 12/14/2012 - Cousland, Morrigan
Tales of a Hero and Half Dragon by TheTwilightRurouni reviews
They say Ike went on a journey, and that Soren went with him, neither ever to be seen again in Tellius. But what happens when two people simply walk off the face of the earth? Post RD, spoilers for those who have yet to finish.
Fire Emblem - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 27 - Words: 117,789 - Reviews: 298 - Favs: 98 - Follows: 74 - Updated: 4/22/2012 - Published: 3/19/2008 - Complete
Mass Effect: Requiescat by Bombsquad reviews
Requiescat: A prayer asking that the soul of a dead person might be at rest. There must be an end...to all things, to all battles, to all struggles. Those who have given everything must know peace.
Mass Effect - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 5 - Words: 28,856 - Reviews: 73 - Favs: 99 - Follows: 112 - Updated: 4/8/2012 - Published: 3/12/2012 - Shepard (M), Tali'Zorah
Into the Woods by Lyxie reviews
She's the youngest of seven princesses and a powerful sorceress in her own right. But during a seven day festival in one of the most wild and remote parts of the kingdom, Zelda awakens more than just the guardian spirit of the woods...
Legend of Zelda - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 9 - Words: 70,238 - Reviews: 290 - Favs: 530 - Follows: 178 - Updated: 2/4/2012 - Published: 11/19/2011 - [Link, Zelda] - Complete
Chunin Exam Day by Perfect Lionheart reviews
Naruto finds he is flung back in time and must repeat the entire Chunin exam over and over and over, until he gets it right and possibly saves Konoha in the bargain.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 77 - Words: 344,950 - Reviews: 15619 - Favs: 9,708 - Follows: 7,399 - Updated: 5/22/2010 - Published: 12/4/2007 - Naruto U.
Naruto Hatake by Agent-G reviews
AU. What if Naruto had been raised by Kakashi his entire life and how would raising Naruto change Kakashi's life as well? NarutoHinata, KakashiAnko later on.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 63 - Words: 315,249 - Reviews: 3600 - Favs: 6,351 - Follows: 3,515 - Updated: 1/31/2010 - Published: 9/25/2007 - Naruto U., Hinata H. - Complete
Angelus Tainted by Warlordess reviews
Her feelings for Lloyd were spiraling far out of control. And now Cruxis had turned her away as the one who would regenerate Sylvarant. Colloyd with Gesea and Sheelos moments. Complete.
Tales of Symphonia - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 10 - Words: 71,405 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 11/17/2009 - Published: 4/15/2009 - Lloyd I., Colette B. - Complete
Wasteland Sheriff by ColonelJuice reviews
A story of a vault dweller who became a hero to the people of the wasteland. His growth from that fateful tenth birthday until the day he purified the wasteland. Rated M for all the right reasons.
Fallout - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 14 - Words: 127,125 - Reviews: 180 - Favs: 216 - Follows: 205 - Updated: 7/26/2009 - Published: 2/12/2009
A Mother's Love by lord of the land of fire reviews
Uzumaki Kushina survived her son's birth and the Kyuubi's attack. Now she must do everything in her power to protect him and help him reach his dream, to be Hokage. Naru X Hina X Yugito
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 101 - Words: 376,514 - Reviews: 9307 - Favs: 7,385 - Follows: 3,454 - Updated: 6/7/2008 - Published: 12/1/2007 - Naruto U., Hinata H. - Complete
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Temporal Closure reviews
Immediately following the true ending of Steins Gate, Kurisu and Okabe try to help each other cope with the trauma surrounding the events and aftermath of operation Skuld. It isn't easy, considering she barely remembers anything about him. Can they still succeed, and can anything more come of it? (Okarisu, Romance/humor/hurt/comfort)
Steins;Gate/シュタインズ ゲート - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 7 - Words: 82,902 - Reviews: 57 - Favs: 131 - Follows: 158 - Updated: 2/16 - Published: 2/25/2018
Nobility reviews
An honest attempt at writing an enjoyable story based around a background reversal between Yuri and Estelle. Contains 99.9% original dialogue and scenes, plenty of adventure and humor, a healthy dose of romance, and... Flynn dressed up as a strawberry?
Tales of Vesperia - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 17 - Words: 161,341 - Reviews: 198 - Favs: 188 - Follows: 174 - Updated: 3/30/2018 - Published: 7/10/2009 - Yuri L., Estellise H.
Know your enemy reviews
After losing all of her friends in the future, Lucina is sent back through time in a desperate last attempt to prevent the destruction of the world. Armed with knowledge of Robin's true identity, she sets out to kill him before he has a chance of becoming the fell dragon. Darkish and realistic.
Fire Emblem - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 30,840 - Reviews: 50 - Favs: 81 - Follows: 117 - Updated: 6/15/2014 - Published: 6/23/2013 - Lucina, Avatar/Robin
An earnest desire of grey reviews
Ten years have passed since Heiss was defeated. With the peace holding strong, the joint efforts against the desertification are making headway... until everything goes horribly wrong. Faced with a seemingly all-powerful opponent, the only option is to go to a point in time where even Stocke had never gone before. But how to get there? Stocke/Aht, multichapter.
Radiant Historia - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,229 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 14 - Published: 7/18/2012 - Stocke, Aht
Endurance reviews
What if Maya and Pearl hadn't disappeared for a number of years? A surprise visit to Phoenix reveals how he was disbarred, and to Maya, only one thing matters at that moment: putting things right. Assisted by a nummber of old friends, can they succeed?
Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,814 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 8 - Published: 11/12/2010 - Maya F., Phoenix W./Nick