Magnus Prime
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Joined 01-20-02, id: 157655, Profile Updated: 11-10-17
Author has written 20 stories for Lunar: Eternal Blue, Dragon Quest Series, Breath of Fire, Mega Man, Slayers, Street Fighter, Clannad, Fallout, and Pokémon.

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ANOTHER NOTE: If you're interested in knowing what I'm up to writing-wise, you can find me on Facebook and MeWe; just look for 'Magnus Prime' without the quotes.

ANOTHER ANOTHER NOTE (_;): I've recently started streaming my composition efforts. It's not very exciting, of course, but if you're interested you can find me on Twitch as magnus_prime01. I tend to stream after 9 PM PST.


(February 29, 2016)

With 'After Story: Devotion' under my belt, it's time to move on to Kyou's After Story, voted on by the "Clannad ~After Story~" group on Facebook. The tentative title will be 'Reconciliation'.

I'll still work on Fuuko's AS, but it will be editing for typos, as well as looking for any continuity problems. The story is complete, though I have been considering adding a post-epilogue-type one-shot.

If any reviewers find any of those kinds of errors, please PM me so I can fix them.

Take care and God Bless you all.

Magnus Prime


(December 19, 2015)

Not as much of a gap between updates, but still...

Thanks to my recent exposure to a most excellent visual novel, I have been motivated to write again.

'Fuuko After Story: Devotion' is the result of that.

Merry Christmas (and Happy Birthday to Furukawa Nagisa-chan) and Happy New Year!

Magnus Prime


(March 7, 2015)

It has been a LONG TIME!

In February 2006 I married my Wifey, then joined the Army that same year due to financial difficulties. Got out in 2009 on a Medical Discharge (honorable) and immediately started attending seminary. Earned an MDIV in 2012, and am now about to earn a Christian Counseling degree.

But, I miss the fanfiction, so I'll be trying to update my works over the next few weeks. In fact, I have just posted a huge update to Slayers: Loss.

Take care and God Bless you all.

Magnus Prime


2004 was an interesting year for me.

At this point, I don't know what's going to become of my incomplete works. I have too many things on my plate, many responsibilities. As a result, I cannot be available for any editing work.

Feel free to e-mail me with any questions regarding spelling or grammar, but as far as reviewing any works...I'm sorry, I just don't have the time or energy to spare any more.

Many thanks to those who have taken the time to read my works, and more thanks to those who took the time to submit a review.

If I find myself with the appropriate resources (time, etc.) I'll try to get some of this done ('A New Challenge' comes to mind).

Take care and God Bless you all.

Magnus Prime

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Another World: Kyou After Story by SeriyuHellwind reviews
An alternate world to After Story featuring Kyou. Follows Nagisa's death and normal story until Ushio's first day of school. From there the path diverges. Please read and review! ON HIATUS, SEE PROFILE
Clannad - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 14,083 - Reviews: 67 - Favs: 82 - Follows: 83 - Updated: 3/8/2013 - Published: 1/10/2011 - Tomoya O., Kyou F.
Knight of the Federation by dan077 reviews
A backup copy of Kitt is discovered in some old ruins of what used to be Los Angeles California.
Crossover - StarTrek: The Next Generation & Knight Rider - Rated: K - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12,290 - Reviews: 51 - Favs: 54 - Follows: 34 - Published: 2/3/2011 - Data, KI2T - Complete
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Alternate Canon: Fuuko reviews
Tomoya's interactions with the hyperactive former coma victim finally come to a turning point...
Clannad - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,895 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/6 - Fuko I., Tomoya O., Ushio O. - Complete
Synchronization reviews
Veteran trainer James Gottum takes his Gardevoir to a tournament and ends up in a situation he would never have expected.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 8 - Words: 23,802 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 23 - Updated: 2/5 - Published: 1/25 - [Gardevoir/Sirknight, OC] Prof. Samuel O./Prof. Yukinari O., Prof. Rowan/Prof. Nanakamado - Complete
Alternate Canon: Kyou reviews
Having finally taken responsibility for his daughter, Tomoya still has another relationship that needs work...
Clannad - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,153 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 1/8 - Kyou F., Tomoya O., Ushio O. - Complete
After Story: Conclusion reviews
An 'After Story' based on the canonical route from the VN 'Clannad'. Summary intentionally withheld; please read my other After Story fanworks FIRST for context.
Clannad - Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,572 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 1/6 - Complete
After Story: Determination reviews
An 'After' story based on Tomoyo's route from the VN 'Clannad'. Two reformed delinquents continue to struggle to overcome their pasts to create a future together.
Clannad - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 34 - Words: 54,728 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 12/30/2017 - Published: 11/8/2017 - [Tomoya O., Tomoyo S.] Kotomi I., Kyou F. - Complete
If I Only reviews
After feeling left out, a certain companion vanishes...
Fallout - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,517 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/15/2017 - Sole Survivor, Cait, Strong, Ada - Complete
After Story: Compassion reviews
An 'After' story based on Ryou's route from the VN/Anime 'Clannad'. The ex-delinquent and the reforming shy girl have much to overcome to create a future together.
Clannad - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 46 - Words: 82,627 - Reviews: 35 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 10/25/2017 - Published: 9/25/2017 - [Ryou F., Tomoya O.] [Kyou F., OC] - Complete
After Story: Selflessness reviews
An 'After' story based on Yukine's route from the VN/Anime 'Clannad'. Tomoya tries to make amends for 'stealing' Yukine's first kiss and ends up on an adventure greater then anything he could have imagined.
Clannad - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 50 - Words: 66,094 - Reviews: 31 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 10 - Updated: 9/14/2017 - Published: 8/2/2017 - [Tomoya O., Yukine M.] Kotomi I., Tomoyo S. - Complete
After Story: Companionship reviews
An 'After' story based on Misae's route from the VN/Anime 'Clannad'. What starts as simple revenge against Tomoya's antics becomes an adventure that deepens the relationships between friends.
Clannad - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 32 - Words: 40,703 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 17 - Follows: 15 - Updated: 7/17/2017 - Published: 4/25/2017 - [Misae S., Tomoya O.] Nagisa F., Tomoyo S. - Complete
After Story: Resolve reviews
An 'After' story based on Mei's route from the VN/Anime 'Clannad'. Mei returns with another plan to help her 'onii-chan' better his life. What kind of antics will she drag Tomoya into this time?
Clannad - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 30 - Words: 35,966 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 4/20/2017 - Published: 3/23/2017 - [Mei S., Tomoya O.] Youhei S. - Complete
A Spell of Good Fortune reviews
A 'What-If' scenario. In Yukine's route in the VN, Tomoya could end up trapped in the gym shed with one of many different other characters, including Kyou, Nagisa, and Akio. This 'What-If' explores what could have happened if Tomoya could have chosen Kotomi.
Clannad - Rated: T - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,615 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 4 - Published: 2/20/2017 - Kotomi I., Tomoya O. - Complete
After Story: Potential reviews
An 'After' story based on Kotomi's route from the VN/Anime 'Clannad'. The two childhood friends have been reunited at last. What kind of changes will they each find as they begin this new chapter in their lives?
Clannad - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 31 - Words: 36,375 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 2/15/2017 - Published: 1/16/2017 - [Tomoya O., Kotomi I.] - Complete
After Story: Reconciliation reviews
An 'After' story based on Kyou's route from the VN/Anime 'Clannad'. Many changes come to Tomoya and Kyou as they grow as individuals and as a couple.
Clannad - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 28 - Words: 31,426 - Reviews: 29 - Favs: 29 - Follows: 34 - Updated: 1/1/2017 - Published: 4/5/2016 - [Tomoya O., Kyou F.] - Complete
After Story: Devotion reviews
An 'After' story based on Fuuko's route from the VN/Anime 'Clannad'. Fuuko is still in a coma and her spirit has not been seen in a long time. How can Tomoya's relationship with her proceed with things the way that they are?
Clannad - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 28 - Words: 36,492 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 23 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 2/10/2016 - Published: 12/16/2015 - [Tomoya O., Fuko I.] - Complete
A New Challenge reviews
Sakura gives Ryu one final challenge...
Street Fighter - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,731 - Reviews: 39 - Favs: 47 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 3/7/2015 - Published: 3/16/2004 - [Ryu, Sakura] - Complete
Slayers: Loss reviews
Book One of Three. Post-Slayers: Try - A wedding, a heartbreak, and a new adventure with an unusual traveling companion...
Slayers - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 11 - Words: 16,161 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 3/7/2015 - Published: 12/12/2002 - Amelia S., Zelgadiss G., Gourry G., Lina I.
MegaMan reviews
An attempt at a 'novelization' of the original MegaMan for the Famicom/NES - When a robotics scientist turns evil, a housekeeping robot becomes a war machine to fight him.
Mega Man - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,930 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 4/17/2004 - Published: 9/10/2002
Evolution reviews
Based on BOF3 Nina decides that Momo 'needs a man'... same continuum as Mint's 'A Wyndian Princess'
Breath of Fire - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 20,327 - Reviews: 51 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 1/15/2003 - Published: 8/14/2002 - [Ryu, Momo] Nina - Complete
Endings & Beginnings reviews
Based on Dragon Quest/Warrior IV - One: Cristo tries to leave Santeem Castle in shame... Two: The hero visits the sisters of Monbaraba in time to fulfill an unexpected prophesy...
Dragon Quest Series - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,230 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 8/24/2002 - Published: 8/5/2002 - Complete
Reconciliation reviews
A former traveling companion of Hiro's deals with an unresolved...issue.
Lunar: Eternal Blue - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,264 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 1/26/2002 - Hiro, Lucia, Ruby - Complete
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