Author has written 5 stories for Twilight, Little Mermaid, and Beauty and the Beast.
So, I've return to the fanfic world in attempt of fixing one of my stories that I had created during high school. I see FF hasn't change much especially the spacing issue. Good job.
One of my fanfic, Bang? is not advisable for children under the age of 15 who can read my badly written story (if they can, kudos mate) as it is rated M. The purpose of the story was actually a bet which I have won (Yes! Go me! Uh-huh), it was to reach 50 reviews for $50.
Now with 'Bang?' I am aware that it is terrible nonsense but there is a back button if you find it disgusting. Not everyone enjoys these type of stories but some people do.
I tried my best to double space even triple space some paragraph but Fanfic doesn't like it so it usually become wasted effort to do so. Just bear with it if you can?
If you're wondering how can one person come up with all these ideas, it's not just me. It's mostly my friend who made the bet. She just says everything while I type it in. Keep in mind that we actually wrote this when we were 16.
Some of you reviewers (Yes, you. The ones who read Bang? ...Horny Perverts) has noted how my chapters/writing are "jumpy" a lot. There's a reason for that and that is, I write more like a screen writer would instead of a proper author who has time to fill in the gaps between major scenes. I prefer to get right to the point/purpose instead of building suspense & etc.
* Note: I am now continuing this story & hopefully my writing had improved since I had last posted a chapter. Do let me know guys. *
Other reviews notes:
1) Your writing is terrible.
A: Once again, yes I am clearly aware that I have terrible grammer & spelling mistakes throughout the story. It was for a bet, I have redone the whole story so it is a little more easier to read/follow.
2) Will there be another chapter?
A: Yes but they usually uploaded randomly. Example, I would maybe add three new chapters in May then add one in July then 8 in January. (Not literally what I'm doing)
3) You need to double space.
A: As above in one of the paragraph, I do actually double space but for some reasons Fanfic hates my guts.
4) Why don't you get someone to edit the story?
A: Because it seem kind of wrong to go asking someone to edit this messed up story that has no actual purpose.
5A) Why doesn't Edward do anything about Bella and are they together or not?
A: Because he's a wuss (joking). He's concerned and yes they're dating but he just doesn't want to lose Bella to another guy so he just let her do whatever she wants & he has to put up with it.
5B) Alice can see things so how come she doesn't do anything or tell Edward?
A: Because she enjoys it? Seriously...You can make whatever you want out of it.
6) Why isn't Bella pregnant?
A: Because she's on the pill & I disagree with Stephenie Meyer idea of actually knocking Bella up by a Vampire. It's ridiculous just like this lemony story.
7) Who is the stranger on the phone?
A: Stick around & find out.
8) This sucks.
A: Then stop reading it, hit ALT - LEFT & never look back at it again. Simple.
Personal note: I think you're all perverts for even reading a silly lemony story but I am grateful for the $50 ;)