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Joined 06-30-08, id: 1619850, Profile Updated: 07-29-13
Author has written 16 stories for Dynasty Warriors, Secret/Legend of Mana, and Kingdom Hearts.

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29 July 2013: Bai Di Castle Phoenix FORM Series UPDATE!

(ENGLISH & INDONESIAN)

1. Bai Di Castle (section perspective) Phoenix FORM Series version:

2. Bai Di Castle (section) Phoenix FORM Series version:

3. Bai Di Castle (site plan perspective) Phoenix FORM Series version:

4. Bai Di Castle (bird-eye view perspective) Phoenix FORM Series version:

5. 3. Bai Di Castle (Entrance) Phoenix FORM Series version:

6. CHAPTER 58 Bai Di Castle (floor plan sketch) Phoenix FORM Series version:

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14 July 2013: Sun Shi... KOEI, onegai?

(ENGLISH)

While thinking about Dynasty Warriors 7 and 8, I realized that female characters has been increasing tremendously almost to the level of Tekken. This seems okay at some point. But, when we look at those fem-charas, one could conclude that they are made into character JUST BECAUSE their husband is there. Look at Lian Shi. If she isn't Sun Quan's spouse, she wouldn't be made into a playable character. And Wang Yuanji, Bao Sanniang, everyone? Only three female characters didn't really fall into this category: Zhen Ji (although Cao Pi is also a playable character, note that Zhen Ji became one in DW4 while Cao Pi in DW5), Cai Wenji (she's Da Qiao's Wei at first. But if we look at her character thoroughly, we could find that she is A LOT BETTER than Da Qiao. She's one of my fav after I became Da Qiao-hater (explained bellow)), and Wang Yi (though not my favourite type of character, I still think she's one of the best female character).

Actually, since the release of DW6, I have a rather selfish wish about a certain female figure to be a playable character. And that's Sun Ce's daughter AKA SUN SHI. Note that I rather call her 'Sun Ce's daughter' than 'Lu Xun's wife'. Why? Because I want her to be portrayed as a daughter, rather than an annoying wife (i.e. Xiao Qiao, Bao Sanniang, Da Qiao, insert-name-here). At some point then, she married Lu Xun.

In the beginning, there was this Sun Shang Xiang as Sun Jian's daughter, and she's fun. Then Da Qiao and Xiao Qiao followed, as Sun Ce's and Zhou Yu's wife. Then the nightmare started. for every installment, KOEI screwed up with Sun Shang Xiang's personality until she's reduced to be nothing more than Liu Bei's emo wife (though in RoTK, she's portrayed as this in the end of Battle of Yi Ling. Had it not for this suicidal act, she will be my fav female chara instantly). WHERE'S SUN SHANG XIANG, THE TOMBOY WU PRINCESS AND SUN JIAN'S BADASS AND AWESOME DAUGHTER? Now it's just Sun Shang Xiang's, the wife of Liu Bei. That's sucks.

I want Sun Shi, not merely because she's Lu Xun's wife, but more importantly because she's Sun Ce's daughter. I really wish that Sun Shang Xiang's personality in the previous installment would be revived through Sun Shi. I didn't say I want her to be a tomboy, though (although it would be nice, considering Sun Shang Xiang's no longer a tomboy). I hope at least she's not Da Qiao-ish or Lian Shi-ish or Xiao Qiao-ish or Bao Sanniang-ish. I really wish she has her father's (Sun Ce) and grandfather's (Sun Jian) personality, and that would make her a fun character (somehow... I want her to be like Leo Kliesen AKA ELEONORE Kliesen in Tekken 6. And like Leo, when her father was killed (in Leo's case, it's her mother), she will seek vengeance. But that's just me and I will kill myself because of this screwed up idea).

In short, I want Sun Shi to be:
1. A playable character (pleaseeee... what can be more fun than seeing our funky Sun Ce become a papa?)
2. Portrayed as daughter rather than wife (this would make Wu even a bigger family!)
3. Have a fun personality, like his father (AND IF SHE'S LIKE DA QIAO, SCREW YOU, KOEI!)

That's my wish, KOEI... please make Sun Shi a playable character...

"Don't worry, mom! I swear I'll find your murderers!" - Eleonore 'Leo' Kliesen, Tekken Tag Tournament 2

(In Sun Shi's case would be: "Don't worry, dad! I swear I'll find your murderers!")

(INDONESIA)

Kayaknya DW7 dan DW8 makin menambahkan banyak chara cewe, ya? Well... sampe2 jadi kayak Tekken. Hohohoho Emang sih bagus juga... tapi kayaknya rada cacad soalnya cewe2 ini ditambahkan HANYA karena suami2 mereka ada di sana. Misal: Lian Shi. Kalo semisalkan dia bukan istrinya Sun Quan, pasti nggak jadi playable. Dan bagaimana dengan Wang Yuanji, Bao Sanniang, dsb? Cuma ada 3 cewe yang nggak kayak gini: Zhen Ji (yups, dia istrinya Cao Pi. Tapi Zhen Ji jadi playable pas dia di DW4 sementara Cao Pi di DW5), Cai Wenji (versi Wei-nya Da Qiao. Seketika saya pindah ke Cai Wenji gara2 sekarang saya adalah Da Qiao-hater), Wang Yi (bukan tipe chara cewe favorit saya, tapi seenggak2nya dia termasuk yang terbaik).

Benernya, sesudah DW6 rilis, saya dengan egoisnya kepengen banget seorang cewe dijadikan playable chara. Siapakah dia? Dia tidak lain dan tidak bukan adalah anak cewenya Sun Ce, SUN SHI. Saya nyebut dia anaknya Sun Ce, bukan istrinya Lu Xun. Napa? Soalnya saya pengen dia lebih seperti 'anak' daripada 'istri' yang notabene nggak penting banget (misal: Da Qiao, Bao Sanniang, Xiao Qiao, masukkan-nama-disini). Beberapa saat kemudian, dia nikah ama Lu Xun.

Pada mulanya (halah) adalah Sun Shang Xiang, anak cewenya Sun Jian dengan personalitynya yang menarik bener. Trus datanglah Da Qiao ama Xiao Qiao sebagai istrinya Sun Ce n Zhou Yu. Dan... mulailah kejatuhan sang Wu Princess. Untuk setiap seri, Sun Shang Xiang jadi tambah nggak banget dan berakhir menjadi istrinya Liu Bei yang emo dan sedih2 (Benernya di RoTK dia juga kayak gini pas selesai Battle of Yi Ling. Coba dia nggak bunuh diri, kali aja dia bakal jadi chara cewe favorit saya). Sekarang, DIMANA SUN SHANG XIANG, SANG PUTRI WU NAN TOMBOY PLUS ANAK CEWENYA SUN JIAN YANG KEREN BEUTZZZZ? Sekarang ini cuma seorang 'Sun Shang Xiang, istri Liu Bei'. Menyedihkan...

Beneran, saya pengen Sun Shi bukan gara2 dia istrinya Lu Xun, tapi yang lebih penting adalah karena dia anaknya Sun Ce. Saya harap personalitynya Sun Shang Xiang di seri2 sebelumnya bisa dibangkitkan melalui Sun Shi. Tapi, ini bukan berarti saya memaksa dia harus jadi tomboy (meskipun menurut saya ini lumayan bagus. Soalnya ketomboyan Sun Shang Xiang sudah mati). Tomboy ao nggak, terserah. Yang penting jangan kayak Da Qiao, ato Xiao Qiao, ato Lian Shi, ato Bao Sanniang). Saya kepengen dia segokil buapaknya (Sun Ce) dan engkongnya (Sun Jian), dan itu bakal bikin dia jadi character yang gokil (entah kenapa... saya pengen dia jadi kayak Leo Kliesen AKA ELEONORE Kliesen dari Tekken 6. Dan kayak Leo, pas bapaknya dibunuh (kalo Leo, mamanya yang dibunuh), si Sun Shi bakal pengen balas dendam. Tapi... well... ini cuma imajinasi gila saya dan lupakan sebelum otak anda kena kanker. Dan kalo sodara nggak setuju, silahkan bunuh saya sesudah saya menamatkan Phoenix FORM series...)

Kesimpulannya, saya pengen Sun Shi:
1. Dijadikan playable characyer (pleaseeeee... ngga ada yang lebih seru daripada ngeliat Sun Ce, The *coret*Funky*coret* Little Conqueror jadi papa)
2. Lebih digambarkan sebagai anak daripada istri (dan ini akan bikin Wu jadi bener2 kayak keluarga besar!)
3. Punya personality yang asek, kayak buapaknya yang kuuueren abiz (dan kalo sampe Sun Shi dibuat kayak Da Qiao... *panjang tiang bendera buat bunuh diri*)

Please, KOEI... jadikan Sun Shi seorang playable character...

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1 July 2013: I OPPOSE ALL LU XUN-HATERS!

(ENGLISH)

STOP HATING LU XUN JUST BECAUSE HE'S SUCH A GOOD CHARACTER THAT HE HAS A HUGE FANBASE! It's funny how I find many Lu Xun-hater, especially among Western-gamer, who are acting like a jealous crybaby. JUST because your girlfriend likes him, doesn't mean you can hate him, you idiot gamer! What? You say he is one sissy character with an unidentified gender because of his good looks? For me, he is TWICE THE MAN YOU ARE, COWARD! His popularity is something natural, since he is a great strategist and general as well as civil advicer (historically), he has a good seiyuu, he is good-looking, AND especially he is a person with such inspirational deeds (both historically and in-game)! It's not like all of you! So shut up and get a life already!

For those who hate him because of Romance of Three Kingdoms (Sanguo Yanyi) or any crappy Three Kingdoms manga out there, I will laugh at you with no regrets, people! Read Records of Three Kingdoms (Sanguozhi) before you speak! Your unreasonable hate toward Lu Xun disgust not only me, but many of his fans!

And not only Lu Xun. Some would hate Zhao Yun just because he's the poster boy. JUST BECAUSE HE IS THE POSTER BOY! THAT'S SO DAMN RIDICULOUS EVEN TO A TODDLER! If you don't like Zhao Yun then you might as well stop playing Dynasty Warriors.

And I may add, the same happen to Wang Yuanji. I don't really like her, and yet I think she deserves all the popularity since she's created for the sole purpose of fan-service, plus historically she's the first Empress Dowager of Jin Dynasty! Just because she get the first place in character popularity poll instead of any of your favourite character, doesn't mean you can hate her!

Lastly, this is my deepest regret in life. Da Qiao has been my favourite female character since Yue Ying was chickificationed in DW6. I like her DW6 XL and DW7. But then ALL YOU RABID DA QIAO FAN STARTS ALL YOUR BITCHING ABOUT HOW DA QIAO IS BETTER THAN WANG YUANJI AND DESERVES THE FIRST PLACE. What's with all of you, people?! You don't like Lu Xun and Wang Yuanji's rabid fan, but giving excuse for Da Qiao? Da Qiao's rabid fan makes me ashamed to even like her. Now she's on the bottom list of my fav character, along with Xiao Qiao. It's your fault, rabit Da Qiao fan.

After I think about if for a while, I never really did HATE Koei. I love how Koei mixing both Romance of Three Kingdoms, Records of Three Kingdoms, and their own creativity. But seriously, Dynasty Warriors gamers out there, ESPECIALLY YOU, WESTERN, are what disgust me to the point of hating the game itself. Sometimes I feel sorry for Koei..

(INDONESIAN)

JANGAN BENCI LU XUN CUMA GARA2 DIA TUH CHARACTER YANG OKE PUNYA PLUS PUNYA BANYAK FANS! Heran... kok bisa2nya ya ada banyak Lu Xun-hater, apalagi dari kalangan gamer2 bule yang cengeng bin iri bin dengki (meski saya yakin gamer Indo sendiri banyak yang nggak suka Lu Xun, khususnya cowo2 yang pacarnya lebih suka ama Lu Xun daripada ama dia). KENAPA? You cemburu gara2 cewek you suka ama Lu Xun? Gara2 cemburu, trus anda bilang Lu Xun tuh character hombreng dengan gender nggak jelas? Maaf aja, buat saya, LU XUN ITU JAUH LEBIH COWO DARI PADA ANDA-ANDA YANG PENGECUT! Lu Xun terkenal itu ya sesuatu yang otomatis banget, ya. Dia tuh dalam sejarah adalah ahli strategi, jendral, dan mentri yang baik. Plus dia punya seiyuu yang keren di DW. Dia cakep. DAN TINDAK-TANDUKNYA ITU INSPIRASIONAL BANGET! Kayak anda! Emangnya apa yang bisa anda bangga2in dari anda, hah?

Trus, bagi anda2 yang benci ama Lu Xun gara2 teracuni novel Samkok ato manga2 nggak mutu lain tentang Three Kingdoms, PLEASE! Nggak penting banget sih anda ini?! Kalo emang anda merasa hebat dan pinter, baca tuh Records of Three Kingdoms sebelum banyak bacod! Jijik tau nggak anda itu, sukanya benci sana sini tanpa alasan!

Nggak cuma Lu Xun. Beberapa juga nggak suka Zhao Yun cuma gara2 dia poster boy. CUMA GARA2 DIA SEORANG POSTER BOY! BENER2 NGGAK MASUK AKAL! Well, saya nggak pernah menyampaikan hal ini di KOEIndo tapi saya nggak suka mereka2 yang benci Zhao Yun karena alasan seperti ini. Kalo anda nggak suka Zhao Yun, jangan maen Dynasty Warriors.

Hal yang sama berlaku buat Wang Yuanji. Jujur, saya nggak begitu suka dia (meski marga kami sama *dibacok*), tapi dia emang berhak untuk terkenal karena selain dia ada untuk fanservice, dia juga dalam sejarah adalah Ibusuri pertama dari Dinasti Jin! WOI, anda nggak berhak benci Wang Yuanji cuma gara2 dia yang jadi character favorit nomor satu dan bukan character favorit anda! CUIH!

Terakhir, ini adalah penyesalan saya terbesar dalam hidup (ya nggak segetu juga kaleeee). Da Qiao tuh chara cewe favorit saya sejak Yue Ying jadi nggak genah di DW6. Jujur, saya suka Da Qiao DW6 X: dan DW7. Tapi kemudian ANDA PARA FANS DA QIAO YANG GILA SELALU CING-CONG BAHWA DA QIAO LEBIH BAIK DARIPADA WANG YUANJI DAN DA QIAO BERHAK JADI NOMOR SATU (CUIH!). NGGAK SALAH?! Anda nggak suka fans2nya Lu Xun ama Wang Yuanji. Tapi anda oke sama Da Qiao? Sumpah, fans2 Da Qiao yang nggak logis dan nggak beralasan membuat saya MALU pernah jadi fans seorang Da Qiao. Gara2 anda, sekarang saya nggak suka Da Qiao sama kayak adeknya, Xiao Qiao.

Jadi, sesudah saya pikir2, saya nggak pernah nggak suka Koei. Saya seneng Koei menggabungkan novel Samkok, Records of Three Kingdoms, dan imajinasi mereka masing2. Tapi sumpah, para gamer Dynasty Warriors-lah, APALAGI GAMER BULE, yang membuat saya jadi jijik setengah mati sampe2 jadi benci game ini, meskipun benernya saya cinta mati ama ini game. Kadang2, saya kasihan ama Koei...

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26 June 2013: BIBLE CATEGORY!

(ENGLISH)

WHOOOAAAHHHH

I never knew that Fanfic has 'Bible' category before! Seriously, this is fantastic! I mean, really? You can make your fanfic about Bible? And some even twist the story. Wow. Just WOW. Okay, it's not like I have anything against it. In fact, some fanfics are pretty good and they make us understand the Bible more. BUT, I really hate it when 'Bible' category filled with hate message and blasphemies. On the other hand, I dislike how some author make a fanfic which is just a plain sermon, or a story about their own experience with God. Come on! This is BIBLE Fanfic! You make a fanfic based on the Bible, not based on your OWN experience! (and not being a jerk, just who cares about your experiences, anyway?! We want to know about the Bible, not YOU!)

What I like most is something like a metaphorical fanfic with a Christ-allegory inside, which (I hope) not only simplified Christian theology to the point it's understandable by even a child, but also will move someone hearts into believing and even has his life transformed. Oh, and I also love fanfics that retell the Gospel but in the modern world. I find some of them and they are pretty good! I'm okay with high school style, as long as it doesn't ridiculed some characters.

Still, I can't stand Marry-sue/Garry-stu...

As for my favourite character in this category is... seriously, IS THERE ANY NEED TO BE SAID? I mean, that's too obvious that the question itself sounds really stupid! I refuse to answer!

I'm thinking of writing a fanfiction for this category too! Sadly, how can I even write one WITH SUCH A BROKEN ENGLISH? And... considering I still have a fanfic to be done... maybe it will be a long time...

(INDONESIAN)

WOOOGGGHHHHH

Asli seasli-aslinya saya nggak pernah tau kalau FFn juga menampung fanfic 'Bible'. ASTAGANAGABONARJADIDUA... Sumpeh, lo? Bisa bikin fanfic Bible (yang malah notabene beberapa sampe nge-twist ceritanya jadi kacau balau). DEMI APA? Ini hebat banget Hmmm... bukannya saya menolak ato nggak setuju. Malah saya mikir bahwa sebenernya guna juga sih fanfic2 tsb. Maksud saya, beberapa bisa bikin kita makin ngerti. Nah, yang saya benci itu kalo misalkan ada fanfic2 yang notabene tujuannya cuma menyebar kebencian (halah!). Dan sebaliknya, saya juga nggak suka author-author yang nulis fanfic isinya kotbah melulu ato malah lebih parah, pengalaman pribadi. WEWWWWW... ini fanfic 'Bible'! Isinya adalah fanfic-fanfic berdasarkan Bible, bukannya kehidupan pribadi! (dan, bukannya bermaksud jadi antagonis, tapi kita mau tahu tentang BIBLE, bukan tentang hidup lo! Hidup lo mau beginilah-begitulah, emang masalah buat gue?!)

Yang saya suka adalah fanfic2 yang ada metafornya getu. Kan keren getu, ya? Saya harap fanfic2 ini nggak cuma menyederhanakan doktrin2 yang lumayan mbuletisasi abiz, tapi juga bisa bikin orang jadi lebih baik getu saya juga lumayan enjoy baca fanfic yang mengisahkan Injil tapi dalam setting modern. WOAH saya pernah ketemu beberapa yang keren abiz Mengenai High School style, saya oke2 aja selama nggak ada character yang di-bashing...

Dan mau di Bible category ato dimanapun, saya tetep nggak suka Marry-sue/Garry-stu...

Mengenai character favorit saya di kategori ini... WHAT? SUMPEH LO? Kayak gini perlu dikasih tau? Sesungguh-sungguhnya ini pembodohan sampe-sampe pertanyaannya jadi kedengeran bodoh juga. Ini mah udah obvious banget!

Asyik juga sih kalo bisa nulis fanfic di kategori ini... Sayangnya, dengan Inggris yang lumayan ancur2an, demi apa saya bisa nulis? Plus... *lirik Phoenix FORM series yang nggak kelar-kelar*


Hi, everyone! I’m PyroMystic and I love fire, Lu Xun, Dynasty Warriors and Physics.

NAME: Devina

CHINESE NAME: 王慧鸑 (Wang Hui Yue) Quite based on my OC Huiyue...
王 (Wang) is my family name
慧 (Hui) means wise, brilliant
鸑 (Yue) means little Phoenix

I change the 'Na' to 'Yue' *straighthrough*just because it sounds cooler*straightrough* because 'Na' (which means 'delicate') doesn't suit me at all...

ME ON FACEBOOK!
Email: xunie_pyro@yahoo.com
Name: Devina Benlin

NICKNAME: I usually called Pyro or Hui Na. But you may call me anything you wish.

LIKES: Playing any kind of games, writing, drawing, imagining, daydreaming, bullshiting

DISLIKES: University, the profesors (no, not all of them of course), doing homework, getting up early, being forced to do something I don't want

FAVOURITE GAME:
- ALL Dynasty Warriors Series, especially Dynasty Warriors Strikeforce. (Man! KOEI is so great at this!)
- Warriors Orochi (just because Lu Xun is there...)
- Kingdom Hearts II (But, anyway, Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories is sucks!)

FAVOURITE ANIME:
- Yu Yu Hakusho (I love it. Really...)
- Yu-Gi-Oh! (I love them all. 5D's FTW!)

FAOURITE CHARACTER:
- Dynasty Warriors: Lu Xun (don’t mess up with him or WE WILL BURN YOU TO DEATH! MWAHAHAHAHA!!), Zhao Yun (typical hero, but he’s so damn cool in DW6), Jiang Wei (another young strategist. Heh, I like strategist), Cao Pi (the first villain-ish character I like, especially after the rather 'questionable' cutscene of him with Lu Xun in Warriors Orochi 3), Xiahou Ba (the embodiment of cuteness), Zhang Bao (same as Xiahou Ba)
- Warriors Orochi: Lu Xun (yet again...), Yoshitsune Minamoto (what? He has coolmovesets and weapon), Taigong Wang (good-loking, but he’s a jerk), Kunoichi (so fast!)
- Kingdom Hearts: Riku (he has the same Japanese name with Lu Xun SMACKED), Roxas (the one and only good guy in Organization XIII, oh, except Axel), Axel (because he’s Pyromaniac, like Lu Xun SMACKED)
- Yu Yu Hakusho: Kurama AKA Minamino Shuichi (he loves his mother, though he was once a heartless Youko), Hiei (because he can control fire, like Lu Xun SMACKED)
- Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's: Yusei Fudo (Who wouldn't love him? He's kind, cool, clever, and most of all: HE HAS VERY EPIC crab-style HAIR) plus all Team Satisfaction (that's Jack Atlas, Crow, and Kiryu)
- Yu-Gi-Oh!: Ryou Bakura (was it me or is he really looks a lot like Kurama?), Yami Yugi (he’s cool, though his Hikari is kinda... well, you know...)


MY STORIES:

Don’t bother to read this section if you actually have read all of my stories

--ENGLISH FANFICTION--

1. When the Door Unlocked (Dynasty Warriors 5 and Kingdom Hearts Crossover)
This story is a total crap. My English was so bad I think I should just delete this story or re-write it someday...

"Xemnas found a hat which later he found out it belonged to a strategist from China in the Three Kingdoms era. The hat was then found by Mulan, who gave it to Sora and asked him to return it to whom it belonged to. At the same time, Lu Xun was desperately looking for his lost hat. As he was lost in the forest, he encountered some creatures which could be slain by normal weapon. At the very uphill situation, he met Sora and then... two Keyblades appeared and soon the Wu strategist found himself the new master of the Keyblades. This drew attention to King Mickey and Riku. Curious, the two decided to go to China to see the new Keyblade master themselves."

Pairing: Lu Xun X Sun Shang Xiang, Sora X Kairi, Riku X Xing Cai

2. Will the Door Ever Be Closed? (Dynasty Warriors 5 and Kingdom Hearts Crossover)
Sequel of ‘When the Door Unlocked’. Just as bad as its prequel. Kill me already...

“Lu Xun and Sora must start another journey even when there aren’t any enemies anymore. But they didn’t fight against Heartless or Nobody...”

Mostly it’s about Friendship between Sora and Lu Xun.

3. What’s With the Fairy Clothes? (Dynasty Warriors 6)
I hope I made progress in my English...

"Why Shang Xiang wears fairy clothes in DW6? Pairing will be Lu Xun x Shang Xiang. Zhou Yu and Sun Ce were trying to make Shang Xiang to be more like a girl, but a misfortune happen. Not only to Shang Xiang but to Lu Xun as well. Join Lu Xun adventure in convincing Shang Xiang to wear the fairy clothes and become more... lady like (Shang Xiang in DW5 is much more tomboy than DW6, isn't she?). No, of course not that adventure you're thinking..."

This will be my last Lu Xun X Sun Shang Xiang Pairing FanFic. Do not protest

4. The Two Pyromaniac’s Birthday (Dynasty Warriors 6, but kinda AU)
My last English FanFic for now. I’m going to take a break to write in my own language. Well, everybody loves their country, right?

“Based on a QUITE true story. I was celebrating my sweet seventeen birthday when I was in China. And guess whom I met? Lu Xun!”

NO PAIRING! Just a Friendship story between me (an OC called Hui Na) and Lu Xun.

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--INDONESIAN FANFICTION—
I will write in English in case if you want to know what the FanFic is about. If you’re interested if want to read in English, PM me.

1. Xanthic Flower (Dynasty Warriors 5)
My friend SyahBana’s request.

"Wu had been totally crushed and destroyed by Shu after a great war. Only 3 children and a young general survived. That's Sun Ren, Lu Yi, and Ling Tong. The young general was Lu Meng. Ten years later, there was a small group of fighter which job is to protect the village from the raider, to slay bandit, and sometimes worked as mercenary. The leader was Sun Ren, whose name changed to Sun Shang Xiang. Ling Tong helped her as one of the general while Lu Yi, whose name changed to Lu Xun, helped her as the strategist. Lu Meng, the oldest one helped both as general and advisor as one of the most loyal officer of the Sun family. One day, the group faced a famous pirate named Gan Ning. That's when their journey began..."

Pairing is still a mystery. Sadly, it's discontinued.

2. Orbital Speed: 29,783 km per sekon, So Fast! (AU, characters belong to Dynasty Warriors 6)
I plan this FF to be a trilogy. But I’m stuck now. Credits to silvermoonarisato for the idea. Pairing will be Zhao Yun X OC (silvermoonarisato herself), Ling Tong X OC (silvermoonarisato’s sister), Lu Xun X OC (me), Cao Pi X OC (silvermoonarisato’s friend)

“How can a group of four girls found their love? One of them is sweet and shy girl, and she met Zhao Yun. One of them is hyper and funny, and she met Ling Tong. One of them is stubborn and nerdy, and she met Lu Xun. One of them is courteous and kind, and she met Cao Pi. They are like the four season, the Spring, Summer, Autumn, and Winter. But still, their stories are worth read.”

Hiatus. I’m stuck

(Side Story: I Know, But...)

3. Before Long (Legend of Mana)
Sorry... I was REALLY bored when I wrote this. Legend of Mana was NEVER my favourite, and I’m still wondering why I use my precious time to write about it. And I’m not going to waste my time to just write the summary here again. If you want to read, just go ahead. If you don’t want, I don’t care either.

4. Lu Xun is Coming to Town! (AU, characters belong to Dynasty Warriors 6, Kingdom Hearts, Yu Yu Hakusho, and Yu-Gi-Oh)
MULTI-CROSSOVER. Just like ‘The Two Pyromaniacs’ Birthday’, this one is Christmas Special Edition for everyone. OC will be me, but not called Hui Na anymore. My name is Keina here (since it’s Japan, not China). Crossover between Dynasty Warriors 6, Kingdom Hearts, Yu Yu Hakusho, and Yu-Gi-Oh. I mix my favourite characters here.

“I listen to the song ‘Santa Claus is Coming to Town’, but I never believe it. I’m always alone, even in Christmas. I have no friends and my parents never really care about me. Well, but in my fourteenth Chirstmas, I get some unexpected, but weird presents from Santa Claus. But then something happens. Three strangers called Sora, Kurama, and Yami Yugi are somehow in my house and think I’ve stolen their possession. Well, that’s when the Santa Claus shows up...”

A bit romantic. Between Lu Xun and me, but it’s according to your own intepretation. Could be a plain friendship.

5. Fragrance of Paddy (Dynasty Warriors 6)

It's a GiftFic for Mocca-Marocchi! Happy birthday!

"Yan Lu, an apprentice strategist, give up on strategy. What does Jiang Wei, her friend, say? Is he able to cheer her up again?"

Yan Lu (NOT MINE! SHE'S Silvermonnarisato's and Mocca-Marrochi's OC!) X Jiang Wei


PHOENIX FORM SERIES

1. Phoenix FORM: Gentle Flame (Dynasty Warriors 6)
Finally my dream comes true! My first Lu Xun X Sun Ce’s daughter pairing (so it’s OC)! Her name is Sun Yangmei here. Oh, and most importantly, this will be my MAGNUM OPUS, my greatest FanFic among all FanFic I’ve writen (or hopefully so). This will be trilogy, but it’s just the first one.

“Phoenix, which known as FengHuang in China, was always described as a gentle creature, alighting so gently that it crushed nothing, and ate only dewdrops. It does not exist in nature, it is the mythical bird of fire and represents virtue, duty, propriety, beliefand mercy. When there was a Phoenix, there was always peace. When it left, the war started. So, what if one day the Phoenix descend from Heaven to earth, to the place called China where war never ended, as a mortal human being to bring peace?”

Well, you won’t find out unless you read... It would be a series which contains of three series. This one’s the first. COMPLETED FINALY!!!

(Side Story: Wo Ai Mama)

2. Phoenix FORM: Unbroken Thread (Dynasty Warriors 6)

The second story of the trilogy. Sequel of ‘Phoenix FORM: Gentle Flame’. I change the title because I think the first one was WAY too long... and crappy...

“Even he was once a Phoenix, he was now nothing more than a weak human, which could be hurt, wounded, and even tortured. He could feel the pain, sorrow, and anguish just like everyone. He knew how it felt to be rejected and hated by the one he loved. And yet, he had to sacrifice everything for her, position, glory, blood, tears, and even life. But even so, why did he do it willingly?”

Once again, you won’t find out unless you read... This one’s the second. COMPLETED FINALY!!!

(Side Story: Wo Ai Baba)

3. Phoenix FORM: Coloured Glaze (Dynasty Warriors 7)

The last story of the series. Sequel to ‘Phoenix FORM: Unbroken Thread’. Finally found a good title...

“People say: ‘when someone betrays you for the first time, it’s his fault. But when he betrays you for the second time, it’s your fault’. So, have you ever felt how it was when someone so close, someone you cherished as friend and never thought would do bad to you, suddenly turned your back against you and betrayed you? And after you forgave and trust him again, he once again betrayed you for the second time? Well, the Phoenix knew how it felt. But could you forgive him for the second time?"

PS: I FEEL LIKE A CRAP WHEN I SEE THESE STORIES TRAFFIC. SORRY FOR ALL READERS WHO ARE NOT INDONESIAN, AND ALSO THANK YOU SO MUCH. I'M THINGKING TO TRANSLATE THIS FANFIC INTO ENGLISH (AND I'M ASSURING YOU THAT MY GRAMMAR HAS ALREADY IMPROVED.)

MY SOON-TO-BE-PUBLISHED STORIES:

4. Re-FORM-eR (Alternate Universe)

Still not sure. This is just the last bit of 'Phoenix FORM' series. I don't know whether to write this after finishing Coloured Glaze or not.


!!IMPORTANT NOTE! MUST READ!!

Yes, you WILL need some help to read my story, and here you will find what you need:

ROTK Map (THIS IS A MUST):

Smaller version of ROTK MAP:

Gaibang(Beggar's sect)'s clothes MALE:

Gaibang(Beggar's sect)'s clothes FEMALE:

1. Bai Di Castle (floor plan sketch) Phoenix FORM Series version: Or get directly into my Corner in KOEIndo Forum

2. Bai Di Castle (section perspective) Phoenix FORM Series version: Or get directly into my Corner in KOEIndo Forum

3. Bai Di Castle (section) Phoenix FORM Series version: Or get directly into my Corner in KOEIndo Forum

4. Bai Di Castle (site plan perspective) Phoenix FORM Series version: Or get directly into my Corner in KOEIndo Forum

5. Bai Di Castle (bird-eye view perspective) Phoenix FORM Series version: Or get directly into my Corner in KOEIndo Forum

6. 3. Bai Di Castle (Entrance) Phoenix FORM Series version: Or get directly into my Corner in KOEIndo Forum

7. CHAPTER 58 Bai Di Castle (floor plan sketch) Phoenix FORM Series version: Or get directly into my Corner in KOEIndo Forum

And for the FanArt I think you would need, you have to add me on FaceBook then you can freely see all of my fanart in my album! And... I think I should make a DA account... oh well...

That’s all for now. If there is something more, I will add some more helps.


(Thanks to Mocca-Marrochi for this wonderful post! )

WHO IS JESUS?
IN CHEMISTRY, HE TURNED WATER TO WINE.
IN BIOLOGY, HE WAS BORN WITHOUT THE NORMAL CONCEPTION;
IN PHYSICS, HE DISPROVED THE LAW OF GRAVITY WHEN HE ASCENDED INTO HEAVEN;
IN ECONOMICS, HE DISPROVED THE LAW OF DIMINISHING RETURN BY FEEDING 5000 MEN WITH TWO FISHES & 5 LOAVES OF BREAD;
IN MEDICINE, HE CURED THE SICK AND THE BLIND WITHOUT ADMINISTERING A SINGLE DOSE OF DRUGS,
IN HISTORY, HE IS THE BEGINNING AND THE END;
IN GOVERNMENT, HE SAID THAT HE SHALL BE CALLED WONDERFUL COUNSELOR, PRINCE OF PEACE
IN RELIGION, HE SAID NO ONE COMES TO THE FATHER EXCEPT THROUGH HIM;
SO, WHO IS HE? HE IS JESUS!

JOIN ME AND LET'S CELEBRATE HIM;HE IS WORTHY.
THE EYES BEHOLDING THIS MESSAGE SHALL NOT BEHOLD EVIL,
THE HAND THAT WILL SEND THIS MESSAGE TO EVERYBODY SHALL NOT LABOR IN VAIN,
AND THE MOUTH SAYING AMEN TO THIS PRAYER SHALL SMILE FOREVER.
REMAIN IN GOD AND SEEK HIS FACE ALWAYS. AMEN
IN GOD I'VE FOUND EVERYTHING!

The Greatest Man in History, Jesus, had no servants, yet they called Him Master.
Had no degree, yet they called Him Teacher.
Had no medicines, yet they called Him
Healer
He had no army, yet kings feared Him.
He won no military battles, yet He conquered the world.
He committed no crime, yet they crucified Him.
He was buried in a tomb, yet He lives today.
I feel honored to serve such a Leader who loves us!

If you believe in God and in Jesus Christ His Son, you may wish to send it on .. If not, just ignore it.
If you ignore it, just remember that Jesus said.
'If you deny me before man, I will deny you before my Father in Heaven."


Thanks for reading.

PyroMystic

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Your Will, Not Mine by Archangel Samuel reviews
"When the time comes, you will watch. But you will do nothing." The angels struggle to follow their Master's orders, even if it means watching Him be tortured and killed before their very eyes. Young Samuel is tempted to disobey. The Easter Story from the angels' perspective.
Bible - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Spiritual - Chapters: 5 - Words: 8,706 - Reviews: 74 - Favs: 41 - Follows: 19 - Updated: 10/27/2014 - Published: 1/12/2014 - Jesus, Michael - Complete
Walking Onto Water by wordlings reviews
"The Lord looked out to the sea again. Peter looked as well, and suddenly there was the memory of water beneath his feet. He did not think of sinking. He thought of that unnameable feeling in his chest; it had carried him out onto the sea with his beloved master. It swelled within him now." -Some things don't require much thought. One-shot based on John chapter 21. Introspective.
Bible - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,147 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 1 - Published: 1/6/2014 - Jesus, Peter - Complete
Upon This Rock by 0Enidan0 reviews
Simon dragged his arm across his brow, wiping away glossy beads of sweat. He typically was not a man of deep contemplation, but one day as he sat and stared at his father across the waters, really taking in his father's aging face, Simon realized that this is not how he wanted to die.
Bible - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,479 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/28/2013 - Jesus, Peter - Complete
Other world, other me by Fansy Fan reviews
Now that they knew who it was, now here comes the bigger problem! More trouble for Lu Xun this time! Besides, it's almost end! Be sure R&R!
Dynasty Warriors - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 75 - Words: 450,368 - Reviews: 60 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 3/30/2012 - Published: 11/7/2009 - Lu Xun, Jiang Wei - Complete
Lu Xun—Thirteen Perspectives by Valiowk reviews
Twelve "quindrabbles" and one "icosadrabble" about the life of Lu Xun, from the perspectives of thirteen people. A Three Kingdoms historical fiction based mainly on Chen Shou's Records of the Three Kingdoms. With companion series "Those Days in Wuchang".
Dynasty Warriors - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 23 - Words: 21,700 - Reviews: 43 - Favs: 9 - Updated: 12/6/2010 - Published: 9/30/2010 - Lu Xun - Complete
The Way of the Lord by StarXEnoch reviews
A modern day reimagining of the teenage years of Jesus. Through the eyes of John the Baptist, we will watch the young Messiah as he attends high school, learns about who he is, and begins his ministry.
Bible - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Friendship - Chapters: 12 - Words: 14,508 - Reviews: 57 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 16 - Updated: 10/10/2010 - Published: 5/8/2010 - Jesus, John the Baptist
I Am Judas by StarXEnoch reviews
The last seven days of Jesus' life on earth told from Judas' viewpoint. Judas wasn't pure evil. Like all men, he had hopes and fears. In this reimagining of the Gospels set in the modern day, Judas' deeper motives are explored.
Bible - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 23 - Words: 27,060 - Reviews: 61 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 5/5/2010 - Published: 4/18/2010 - Jesus
SLCD by Silvermoonarisato reviews
Diamond ending, yang beneran menutup kisah yang panjang nggak penting, sotoy nggak jelas, dll enjoy the last chap
Dynasty Warriors - Rated: T - Indonesian - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 13 - Words: 20,087 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 5 - Updated: 10/11/2009 - Published: 9/2/2009 - Zhao Yun, Lu Xun - Complete
Trinity by SheisNoLongerHere reviews
When a 'million' man army arrives to conquer China, all hopes of stalling their advancement lies within the hands of Gan Ning, Lu Meng, and Lu Xun... Will the kingdoms unite before the defense falls?
Dynasty Warriors - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 14 - Words: 77,696 - Reviews: 68 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 2/1/2005 - Published: 11/2/2003
Proud of my Loneliness by SheisNoLongerHere reviews
Lu Meng learns that something simple as flames can bring peace to anyone... Unfortunately, he finds it too late. Lu MengLu Xun slash. Warning: Malemale content, and blood...
Dynasty Warriors - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,155 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 2 - Published: 4/14/2004
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Phoenix FORM: Coloured Glaze reviews
"Di sebuah zaman yang tidak memiliki kepastian, dimana semua orang hanya berperang dan saling melukai, apakah itu bisa terjadi? Akankah persahabatan itu sesuatu hal yang mungkin?" THE STORY IS NOT OVER YET! Sequel to 'Phoenix FORM: Unbroken Thread'
Dynasty Warriors - Rated: T - Indonesian - Friendship/Adventure - Chapters: 92 - Words: 736,736 - Reviews: 385 - Favs: 31 - Follows: 26 - Updated: 5/25/2015 - Published: 2/10/2012 - Lu Xun, Zhao Yun
Hanya Cerita Biasa reviews
Pada suatu hari yang biasa-biasa saja, hiduplah seorang makhluk biasa-biasa saja yang stress menjalani hidupnya yang biasa-biasa saja. Dan karena itu membuat cerita yang biasa-biasa saja seperti ini. CHECK IT OUT! Featuring DW Bishounens, esp: Guo Jia, Lu Xun, Zhao Yun, Xiahou Ba, Cao Pi, Jiang Wei...
Dynasty Warriors - Rated: K+ - Indonesian - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 6 - Words: 31,220 - Reviews: 39 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 10 - Updated: 12/31/2013 - Published: 12/31/2012 - Zhao Yun, Lu Xun, Guo Jia, Cao Pi
Phoenix FORM: Unbroken Thread reviews
"Benarkah itu? Aku ada... untuk menjadi seseorang yang akan terus disayanginya? Tapi... kenapa aku? Aku kan tidak bisa membalasnya..." THE STORY IS NOT OVER YET! Sequel to 'Phoenix FORM: Gentle Flame'. FINALLY COMPLETED!
Dynasty Warriors - Rated: T - Indonesian - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 78 - Words: 752,487 - Reviews: 387 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 11/5/2011 - Published: 6/27/2010 - Lu Xun, Zhao Yun, Cao Pi, Jiang Wei - Complete
Wo Ai Dajia! reviews
SONGFIC! Chap 2 is up! Jiang Wei baru saja menemukan bahwa tidak hanya dia seorang yang telah kehilangan ayahnya di masa kecilnya. Side story untuk 'Ubroken Thread'. Please R&R!
Dynasty Warriors - Rated: K - Indonesian - Family - Chapters: 2 - Words: 16,015 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 6 - Updated: 6/25/2011 - Published: 1/3/2010 - Lu Xun - Complete
Phoenix FORM: Gentle Flame reviews
-"Seandainya seluruh dunia ini tidak ada yang mencintainya, ia tetap akan berharga sekali untukku. Yang membuatnya berharga bukan apa yang ia miliki, tetapi sedalam apa aku menyayanginya..."- FINALLY COMPLETED! R&R Please...
Dynasty Warriors - Rated: T - Indonesian - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 46 - Words: 206,685 - Reviews: 118 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 5/29/2010 - Published: 10/11/2009 - Lu Xun, Cao Pi - Complete
Cry in Abandonment reviews
"Aku lebih baik mati daripada tidak bisa menjadi sahabatmu..." SONGFIC 'Friends', Song Lyric by Michael W. Smith. WARNING: Slight OOC, character death, independence timeline and age
Dynasty Warriors - Rated: T - Indonesian - Friendship/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,774 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 2 - Published: 5/13/2010 - Lu Xun, Zhao Yun - Complete
Fragrance of Paddy reviews
Giftfic for Mocca-Marocchi! Songfic lagu 'Dao Xiang'nya Jay Zhou. "Apa yang harus kau lakukan kalau apa yang kau cita-citakan tidak berhasil kau raih?". Jiang Wei x OC. Please R&R!
Dynasty Warriors - Rated: K+ - Indonesian - Friendship/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,557 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Published: 4/17/2010 - Jiang Wei, Zhuge Liang - Complete
I Know, But reviews
GIFTFIC! Apa yang dipikirkan Hui Na tentang teman Shu-nya, dan apa yang dipikirkan Xiahou Fang tentang teman Wu-nya. Please R&R!
Dynasty Warriors - Rated: K+ - Indonesian - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,354 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/7/2010 - Zhao Yun, Lu Xun - Complete
Lu Xun is Coming to Town! reviews
Terinspirasi lagu 'Santa Claus is Coming to Town'. MULTI-CROSSOVER! 3 orang asing mendatangi Keina karena barang berharga mereka hilang. Ulah siapa sih sampai Keina dituduh pencuri? Please R&R! BTW, MERRY CHRISTMAS and HAPPY NEW YEAR, semua!
Dynasty Warriors - Rated: K+ - Indonesian - Fantasy/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18,629 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/24/2009 - Lu Xun - Complete
Before Long reviews
LoM. Apa yang dipikirkan Elazul saat ia kehilangan Pearl. Sebelum misi 'The Lost Princess' dimulai. Elazul's POV. Pairing: Elazul X Pearl
Secret/Legend of Mana - Rated: T - Indonesian - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,044 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Published: 12/4/2009 - Complete
Orbital Speed: 29,783 km per sekon,So Fast!–MIDWAY reviews
Yay! FF DW pertama yang AU dalam bahasa Indonesia! MULTIPAIRING! Dalam kisahnya keempat pasang cewe-cowo itu, ternyata terdapat cerita yang berbeda! Ada yang manis, asem, asin, pahit, pedes, dsb! Mau tahu ceritanya? Baca aja! Please R&R!
Dynasty Warriors - Rated: T - Indonesian - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,441 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 10/2/2009 - Published: 9/19/2009
What's With The Fairy Clothes? reviews
My 2nd story! Summary is what exactly the tittle says. Why Shang Xiang wears the fairy clothes in DW6? And what is Sun Ce's and Zhou Yu's plan actually? And what happen to Lu Xun as the result of their mistake? LX x SSX. COMPLETED
Dynasty Warriors - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 5 - Words: 22,065 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 10/1/2009 - Published: 5/4/2009 - Sun Shang Xiang, Lu Xun - Complete
Xanthic Flower reviews
Wu sudah tidak ada lagi setelah penyerangan besar-besaran oleh Shu. Sun Shang Xiang, Ling Tong, Lu Xun, dan Lu Meng adalah mereka yang tersisa dari kerajaan itu. Akankah mereka dapat membangun kembali Wu pada kejayaan semula? Pairing inside. R&R, please
Dynasty Warriors - Rated: T - Indonesian - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 15,360 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 8/18/2009 - Published: 7/21/2009 - Sun Shang Xiang
Will the Door Ever Be Closed? reviews
... and the answer is NO! Sequel to 'When the Door Unlocked! Lu Xun now has to get through a new adventure in another different world... with Sora! What will happen, then? Please R & R!
Crossover - Dynasty Warriors & Kingdom Hearts - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,182 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 3 - Published: 6/22/2009 - Lu Xun, Sora - Complete
The Two Pyromaniacs' Birthday reviews
“So, today is your birthday?” The girl was puzzled by his sudden reaction but nodded at last. “Today is my birthday too!” He ended it with a laugh of wonder. R&R Please!
Dynasty Warriors - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11,777 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 2 - Published: 6/7/2009 - Lu Xun - Complete
When the Door Unlocked reviews
Dynasty Warriors & Kingdom Hearts crossover! Is the door really unlocked? Or is it always opened for us? So, can we ever meet again? Or are we always connected from the very beginning? FINALLY COMPLETED! Phew...
Crossover - Dynasty Warriors & Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 25 - Words: 195,229 - Reviews: 78 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 2/14/2009 - Published: 7/8/2008 - Lu Xun, Sora - Complete