Announcements:

Hi all,

I have recently setup a discord for all my stories. If you wanna hang out and chat for a while, consider dropping by: discord. gg/awaRh4baQv

I have recently published an original story online titled "These Heels Step Heavenward", a Jade Beauty's Isekai Gone Wild. This is a comedic take on the adventures of a xianxia cold beauty in an otome / high fantasy / victorian regency setting.

Summary:

What is a woman to do after reincarnating? Her cultivation crippled, the realm she inhabited foreign, and even her old name lost to her. There was one familiar comfort left to Daphne in these trying times: shopping.

There were some fates worse than dying Daphne supposed. She could have been poor.

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I also have another more serious story in the works called "The Lady's Handbook of Intrigue and Murder" (HIM), a high fantasy setting rich with magic and rife with political intrigue. Think Harry Potter and Game of Thrones smashed together, now out in RoyalRoad and Spacebattles.

The daughter of a dying house is summoned to the Imperial City to meet and perhaps marry a handsome prince. It sounds like a fairy tale.

Except Mydea doesn’t have the advantage of a half-forgotten childhood encounter, supreme magic to match the highest echelons of society, or even the privilege of an ally and confidante. In order to survive and make a name for herself, she must beat the Imperial Court at its own game.

Self-Assessment:

1. Prodigy’s Ascension – 0/5
-Technical Writing – Unreadable
-Dialogue – Stilted as Fuck
-Plot – Crappy, Contrived and Cliched (not the good kind either)
-Worldbuilding – Average, but Info Dumped. Nothing new.
-Characterizations – 1D
-Additional Notes: Upon further consideration, this story is total shit which contributed nothing to the fandom. Do not read.

2. Prodigy’s Reign – 1.0/5
-Technical Writing – Barely Readable
-Dialogue – Meh
-Plot – Requires immense suspension of disbelief and reading through #1.
-Worldbuilding – Average, sometimes Info Dumped. Better than the first, not that that says much.
-Characterizations – 1D
-Additional Notes: While a huge improvement over Prodigy’s Ascension, it still suffers from having started as a shit premise in the first place. Do not recommend.

3. Making A Difference – 1.0/5
-Technical Writing – Readable, but rife with mistakes
-Dialogue – Average, somewhat funny at first. Stupid later on.
-Plot – What Plot? It’s semi-crack.
-Worldbuilding – None to speak of
-Characterizations – Protag is an asshole. Everyone else is 1D.
-Additional Notes: Crack that takes itself too seriously later on. Would score higher if it didn’t.

4. Magnate (1st Version) – 1.5/5
-Technical Writing – Readable, few mistakes
-Dialogue – Stilted.
-Plot – Requires suspension of disbelief
-Worldbuilding – Average, but Info Dumped
-Characterizations – 2D though some characters are 1D

5. A King Without a Crown – 2.0/5
-Technical Writing - Readable
-Dialogue – Ok most of the time
-Plot - Average, but plenty of OCs. Can get confusing.
-Worldbuilding – Somewhere between Average and Above Average
-Characterizations – 2D mostly, but with bits of good in it
-Additional Notes: There are some more problems with this in my opinion. For the most part, the unnecessary amount of OCs I've introduced. Most of these aren't characters at all, just cardboard cut outs, and this is because there are simply too many to dedicate a scene to. Some plots feel a bit too contrived for me as well, upon rereading now.

6. The Magnate (The Rewrite) – 3.5/5
-Technical Writing – Decent
-Dialogue – Above Average
-Plot – Massive AU. Can get confusing
-Worldbuilding – Above Average
-Characterizations – 2D, may have some 3D on occasion
-Additional Notes: My best work so far.

7. Gamecraft - 2.5/5
-Technical Writing - Readable
-Dialogue - Average
-Plot - AU, but easy to follow so far.
-Worldbuilding - Average
-Characterizations - Considering the fandom, fairly decent.
-Additional Notes: However, difficult to write as it is the first time I have ever done First Person.

8. Resonance - 3.0/5
-Technical Writing -Readable
-Dialogue - Average
-Plot - AU, easy to follow
-Worldbuilding - Not great
-Characterization - Minor characters are better received than the protag
-Additional Notes: While there's nothing strictly wrong with this, it just isn't a very compelling read, I guess.

9. The Book of Bastard - 3.0/5 (Can be Found on Spacebattles or SufficientVelocity)
-Technical Writing - Good
-Dialogue - Good
-Plot - OC Cast set during the War of the Ninepenny Kings. Can be difficult to follow at first
-Worldbuilding - Average
-Characterization - Decent

10. What Wicked Warthings - 3.0/5 (Unpublished)
-Technical Writing - Good
-Dialogue - Good
-Plot - Best described as a fusion between HP and RWBY. No RWBY characters are used, instead elements of the RWBY world are placed into HP so I have a reason to write magical zombie apocalypse.
-Worldbuilding - Excellent
-Characterization - Good