Author has written 18 stories for Naruto, Peacemaker Kurogane, Harry Potter, Revolution, Vampire Academy, Outpost, and Bloodlines Series, Richelle Mead.
While reviewing, I am going to sand you what I liked about your story or disliked. Also stars may be added and suggestions will be added. When I read something and dislike it I just won't right anything. In case I did, it means I think you can do better. Everyone has his different way of thinking and so it is all just my subjective opinion.
Also I am sorry for my spelling. Hope you don't mind. I tried to get a Beta, but it seams non are online any more.
FOR THOSE WHO ARE READING For you to remember:
It is the Family-tree of the Noble House of Black, including Noble House of Lestrange, etc. You will find there some of my OCs and also my predictions of Potters, Prewettsand Longbottoms families. For some undefined characters I chosen names and years. Pleas, dont be too hard on me for that. All predictions are made out of info from HP wikia and also all info are from there. People with red dot are from Griffindor and with green one are from Slytherin.
Also to that is connected my OC. I know I didnt write anything about my older OCs, so hear is something about my newest.
Daughter off Rupert Lestrange and Bett Lestrange nee Bust. First child. Grandchild of Nicolas and Megan Bust and of Richard and Ester Lestrange. Cousinn of Rabastan and Rodolphus, who will change her life, as you can expect. Since it is only beginning of my story, I wont give up all info on her. But at least I can give you her image. Her younger image///_old/images/entries/stacey.jpg) and her older image (http:///wp-content/uploads/2008/07/barbara-meier_germanys-next-top-model_gow_msp.jpg).Sorry, I based her image on photos of Barbara Meier and cant find any photos around 12 years old Barbara.
So, Miraya grow up in wizards household whit some muggle influence. Her father was disowned corse he married that mud-blood and so she isnt part of the old pure-blood society. Anyway she was raised away, she can as well end up in Slytherin as well as in any other house. She can be noble and cunning, brave and strong willed, clever and bright and loyal and talented...
NOTE: I am rewriting some older stories and still looking for Beta.
If you are reading my VA Bloodlines story, hear are at leas some pics for now.
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