Author has written 4 stories for Dragon Ball Z.I've been writing since I was sixteen and still in high school. I've had several years of writing within a group wherein we all gave VERY harsh reviews to each other, and that has been the mainstay of my writing, reciving real, honest reviews of the potential problems of a piece, and fixing them.
So expect my reviews to be as such, very harsh, but truthful. I will point out what I think may be problems, or at least areas that could use some more attention. Take of them what you will, they are not meant to hurt, or to appear jealous, but are there to help.
If you're going to review my work I would ask nothing less. If you are having a hard time reading it, figure out why, and tell me. If you love it, or hate it, tell me WHY so I can do something about it.
Arthur E. King
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