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I am not a fluffy, lovey-dovey teenager. I don't gush over fanfics with bad characterization, poor use of grammar, spelling errors, and just general, slip-shod crap. Just saiyan... (Haha get it? "Saiyan?" Anyone? =P )

You may have looked at my profile because I reviewed one of your stories. I created this account for the sole purpose of posting harsher reviews and sparing my actual writing account a bunch of angry responses. (Though I will post a story or two on here for the sake of following the TOS...eventually.)

I critique in an attempt to help writers see how they can improve, or continue what they are doing well.

While my reviews may be hard, I DON'T FLAME. Maybe I wasn't one of those preteens gushing over some spazzy-crack romance story , but I try my best to say something positive, no matter how much I hate a story. I give criticism, usually constructive, but this is not a account for flaming or trolling users. I am here to give my opinion to help better the content of this site.

If you have a legitimate response to one of my reviews, or you are defending what you wrote, by all means, contact me. Don't curse at me or be rude, and I will read what you send. Who knows? You might change my mind about your writing.

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The Ambush by Lady Stars reviews
Jak and Daxter are exploring the sewers when a metal-head army attacks. This is a friendship fic, slight Kiera x Jak. R & R!
Jak and Daxter - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,209 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 6/7/2009 - Published: 11/9/2008
Permission by TaleBearer reviews
Hakkai has fallen in love with Sanzo and wants to tell him so. Will Sanzo accept? Or is there something else Sanzo wants even more than Hakkai's love?
Saiyuki - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18,255 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 53 - Follows: 5 - Published: 3/8/2008 - G. Sanzo, Hakkai C. - Complete
A Choice by SquirrelGirl13 reviews
When Phantom is heavily wounded protecting Maddie from a ghost, she has a decision to make: stand there and let him die or going against everything she believes, take him home and stabilize him. Which will she choose? And will she choose in time?
Danny Phantom - Rated: T - English - Family/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 883 - Reviews: 64 - Favs: 138 - Follows: 21 - Published: 8/8/2007 - Maddie F., Danny F. - Complete