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Greetings! I didn't think I'd be making another update for the rest of the year, but even after I updated (and completed!) Sakura's New Present, I managed to whip out a revision for Sakura's New Past Ch. 17. If you haven't already been checking out the revisions, I truly suggest you do, I've kind of been changing a lot of things around and basically revamping my writing. I hope to finish the edit for Sakura's New Past Ch. 18 sometime within the next week or two just so I could have everything flow smoothly again, but we'll see. Other than that, as I said before, I will be focusing on another update on Somewhere We Belong.
Happy New Year everyone!
Hi everyone! i know its been a while since I have you any updates but I promise I'm still working on everything! I recently updated Somewhere We Belong and The List, and today I just made an edit/post for Sakura's New Past Chapter 16. It's taken me so long to post it, but I was unhappy with the way I was writing it up so I spent so much time basically rewriting until I was happy with the content and the way it flowed. As of now, the story 85% matches up, I know I got a lot of PMs that there was a huge discrepancy between chapter 15 and 16, and hopefully this addition kind of helps it flow more smoothly. I hope that the next edit will not take me nearly as long.
In other news, I just have a little bit more editing to do for the final chapter of Sakura's New Present, which I will hopefully have out within the week, I just need to get through finals week. The TNO sequels may or may not be updated by the end of the year -if not, expect an update for both something in January.
That's all for now, and if you don't hear from me by then, Happy Holidays to everyone!
Hi everyone! I know it's been a while since I've made any updates or posted anything in regards to my progress, and I am truly sorry for that! I'm currently working on the final chapter of Sakura's New Present, and I've been taking my time on this to make sure I squeeze in everything I want to. But truthfully speaking, I was hoping to have all of the reconstruction/editing of Sakura's New Past done by now and I haven't, which is why I think for the next month or two that I'm simply going to be working almost exclusively on this. I just edited/added Ch 15: Tension, all new in content, so if you haven't already you should check it out. the TNO sequels are still being worked on slowly, but I can't give you an exact time on when these will be updated. Perhaps the closest thing to being updated will be Somewhere We Belong, I'd say I'm about 1/3 of the way done with that. If I can get a couple more chapters edited in Sakura's New Past in the next 3-4 weeks then I'll start working on the TNO sequels and Somewhere We Belong. That's all for now, and I'm truly sorry to all my readers.
I know it's been a while since I've made any updates, but truth be told, progress has been really slow. I just recently updated/revised Sakura's New Past Ch 13, entirely new in content, so for any of those who haven't checked it out yet, I suggest you do! The next chapter will hopefully be out/edited within the next week. Other than that, I hope to make an update on Sakura's New Present within this week (it is nearing its completion!). Afterwards, the next thing I will be focusing on will be Somewhere We Belong and once more Sakura's New Past, and then afterwards I'll try and make updates to the TNO Sequels.
CHANGES TO SAKURA'S NEW PAST:
Originlly Ch 3 & 4, now Chapter 3: Made into one chapter and edited, but content is still the same.
Originally Ch 5 & 6, now Chapter 4: Made into one chapter. Previously named Sasuke, Sakura, & Naruto, this chapter is now being called Assignment. Sakura does not meet her younger self here. I am avoiding their meeting up until the end of the story.
Originally Ch 8 & 9, now Ch 6: Ayame's death has been revised: instead of a katana through the heart, it is left sort of up in the air. In addition, the story of Kikyou Haruno has been revised. (I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THAT PEOPLE REREAD THIS CHAPTER).
Originally ch 9 & 10, now Ch 7: Itachi has no inner. Made the plot completely unfeasible and less professional than where I want to take it. In addition, considering the background behind inner in this story, it simply makes no sense. In addition, the OC's were removed and edited.
Originally Ch 11, now Ch 8: Content of the dream changed, and mission to Suna altered. Recommended Read.
Originally Ch 12, now: DELETED. Filler chapter with no sustainable help to the plot, and also developed their relationship too fast.
Originally Ch 13, now Ch 8 & 9. Entire Suna plot is changed. Part of its contents were edited and incorporated into Ch 8, and others into Ch 9. (Somewhat of a filler, but the plot for the Suna mission is entirely changed. As such, I HIGHLY RECOMMEND REREADING THIS CH)
Originally Ch 14, now Ch. 9: Now named Yashamaru. Part of the original ch. 13 incorporated. In addition, Itachi thinking about the clan massacre omitted -I don't want readers to get into this part of his brain yet. And absolutely nothing to do with a fever or remotely close to ItaxSaku romance. Continues the plot of the Suna mission and ends the Suna arc, as such I also RECOMMEND READING THIS CH!
Originally Ch 15, now Ch. 10: Now Named Shisui. Sakura is introduced to Shisui early on. No mention of home-sicknesses from Sakura, or mentions of Hiroto. And absolutely no jealousy on Itachi's behalf. Shisui and Itachi converse over how Sakura's story and emergence does not add up, new content that was not in the original version. Recommend reading this one.
Originally Ch 16, now Ch. 11: Now Named Hiroto. Kikyou and Matsuro do not speak to Sakura about retrieving Taiyou yet. Hiroto does very briefly talk to Sarutobi, but no talks of the Haruno Clan Ritual is mentioned. Although curious about the appearance of Hiroto, Itachi is not jealous.
Originally Ch 17, now Ch. 12: Now named Hana no Ketsugo. Rework on how Himawari & Sakura obtain their Contract with their flowers. For now, I am stalling Himawari's obtainment of it, while also changing up Sakura's trial with her cherry blossom. Before it centered around Itachi & Sasuke, now it centers around Sasuke and Naruto. Also, Sakura does not receive substantial injuries or is sent to the hospital. Furthermore, her training will be sandwiched into 1 chapter, instead of two (ch. 13.)
Originally not a chapter, now Ch. 13: Now named Duo Mission. A completely new installment into the story to help progress their friendship and what-not. I HIGHLY RECOMMEND READING THIS.
Originally not a chapter, now Ch. 14: Named Duo Mission Pt. 2. Second and final arc to their mission, all new in content and furthers character development. I HIGHLY RECOMMEND READING THIS.
Originally not a chapter, now Ch. 15: Named Tension. All new content, follow up of Duo Mission Pt. 2. I HIGHLY RECOMMEND READING THIS.
Originally Ch 19, now Ch. 16: Renamed Crossing Paths. Basically revamped edit of how Sakura got her Taiyou Retrieval Mission, met Kisame, and let slip the fact that she was a Haruno. In this, there are no mentions of Itachi being upset with Sakura. I HIGHLY RECOMMEND READING THIS.
Originally Chapters 20 & 21, now Ch. 17: Now Named Artifact Retrieval Mission. A whole bunch of filler plot that I'm cutting out, because Sakura has not yet written a report to Tsunade. Will basically commence Sakura's Retrieval mission, same essential mission with different execution. Kisame will be sticking around for a while longer :). Kind of gets into her kidnapping which is technically not seen until the next chapter, so right now it kind of repeats, up until I edit Ch. 18. I HIGHLY RECOMMEND READING THIS.
Originally Chapter 21, now Ch. 18: Previously named Taiyou, now named Sakura Retrieval Mission. Will deal with Sakura being kidnapped and interrogated by Orochimaru. A little bit of Marika, a little bit of Itachi, and a whole lot of Kisame :) A good portion of this was originally in Ch. 19, but it'll be smoothed out. Recommended read.
Originally Chapter 22, now Ch. 19: Previously named Fleeing, now named Rescue. The content of this chapter and the following chapter are essentially the same from the non-edited version, save for a few tweaks here and there. Titles were switched simply to follow the happenings of the chapter. Better character development for Kisame and foreshadowing for the sequel that follows it.
Originally Chapter 23, now Ch. 20: Previously named Rescue, now named Fleeing. Read the above statements . Miniscule, microscopic ItaxSaku fluff, so if you care to read it go ahead. Has a little discrepancy with the unedited following chapter but that will be smoothed out with the edit.
Originally not a chapter, now Ch. 21: Named . This is the part where the Haruno Clan Ritual arc originally begins but for now I'm going to hold off and add whole new content. Whereas Sakura came back to Konoha and was met with her Haruno Clan's members, this will also be put off to a later date.
Now, theses are awesome people i have met here on fan fiction! They have become friends or are just awesome people, i am glad to say :) in no specific order!!
Wish Upon A Wall
The Blood Thirsty Silver Wolf
Favorite Naruto Couples:
Sakura x Itachi
Sakura x Neji
Ino x Kiba
Ino x Deidara
Hinata x Naruto
Temari x Shikamaru
TenTen x Neji
Konan x Pein
Anko x Kakashi
Top Ten Favorite Naruto Boys/Girls!
10. Sasuke!! 10. Anko!!
9. Lee!! --9. Shizune!!
8. Gaara!! --8. Tsunade!!
7. Kakashi!! --7. TenTen!!
6. Deidara!!-- 6. Hinata!!
5. Shisui!! --5. Ino!!
4. Neji!! --4. Temari!!
3. Naruto!! --3. Konan!!
2. Kisame!! --2. Mikoto!!
1. Itachi Uchiha!! --1. Sakura Haruno!!
Okay! here is an awesome poem by DarkLilyOfTheNight96 that i read on her profile and really liked
Peaceful settings all around
Green grass on the ground
Beautiful Rivers criss-crossing
All upon the older trees forever mossing
Waterfalls through the shade
The sound of clashing blades
Birds chip never knowing what will happen
Drip Drop Drip Drop There goes rain softly patting
Never hear never speak
It might not last It may never keep
Eternally this place will never fall
Even if we lose it all
War comes short
From older people who at the idea that is without the box always snort
Make the younger fight and die
Never knowing the pain in one little sigh
Thunder is rolling
Waves are crashing
Blood spills with all the slashing
Blood red moon set ablaze
They take and capture slaves
Burning and burning the forest goes
Even the water from the river dries up
The battle of a never ending war
All the animals sing in sore
There goes the moss buning up quick
There goes the trees burning up like sticks
Never caring never noted
The winning side never gloated
Running Running thats all they could do
As the fighting went on and fire did too.
All the animals looked at the remains with sorrow
There would be no forest tommorrow
All was out...But one stained behind...
Just that one bird...Was now a pile of ashes being burried by a girl by the age of nine
The girl was weeping
Her only friend was in the ground forever sleeping...
Her tears the hit grave stone as a warrior missed his target...
Hitting the girl fast without care
He dropped his wepons and looked what he had done
A little girl was laying in a pool of blood
With a smile and a peaceful face she said
Thanks for destroying this one place that was away from from war and none from greed
But this forest will live on only but one seed
She closed her eyes and took one last breath
Soon but quick she was no more
Time seemed to stop when they all saw what had happened
A little girl was laying dead
The forest was just a battlefield
Everyone forgot what they had been fighting about
All had mourned for the loss of the wise little girl
One soldier who had seen this had picked her up with some care
Found a tree that had somehow not been touched
He began digging with a few tears in his eyes
All the fighting was no more just watching made people's heart sore
He gently lay her in with words that stung
"Goodbye my daughter" Is what he said before he placed a single pink rose across her chest
Everyone had heard in the silence that no one broke
Now they began to feel the loss
The war that they had started and this was the cost
After he placed the last part of dirt he let the few teardrops on her grave
Started a fire and threw the flowers into it
They wondered what he was doing but he only said that "she loved flowers"
The ashes of the flowers went up to heaven and into the hands of that little girl
One by one a soldier dropped a different flower in the flames
The animals came back slowly and in a ground began to mourn about a certain little girl..
One by one they dissapeared into the heavens with the little girl in mind
Becoming with the stars they danced in the in the sky
Along with her and her with them
The men watched in awe
That was the thing they wanted most of all.