Author has written 3 stories for Naruto.
They call me gman391 and no I won't tell you my real name that said, I was a university student. Now I'm broke and looking for a job.
I like anime, sci-fi/fantasy, reading and writing
I dislike well a lot of things i'm working on that though. (Except for Pink i don't like the colour and never will)
Alright reviews are nice provided they are helpful and not filled with random hate. If you have a problem with the story tell me and I will look to see if your concerns are legitimate if they are I will try to fix them if they are not well nothing happens. On a related note if you do flame? make sure it's coherent. And have the balls to leave behind a signature.
Also I will never write slash...ever.
Alright my three promises as a writer
1. I will finish every fic somehow even if all I can do is post a end summary
2. I will never post anything under 4000 words in my multichapter fics (With the exception of how to pieces)
3. I will always attempt to improve my skills.
Edit 04/21/10: Alright I disabled anonymous reviews. Not because of flames. Those are fine if you don't have strength of character to leave a signature thats fine. I won't be listening to you anyway. But because I've gotten more than a few reviews that I've wanted to respond to. Either because I had thought of that criticism already and wanted to explain it. Or because they had good points and I wanted to debate it and see if was legitimate or not.
Opinions are not for my purposes. You can like what I write or not. No one's holding a gun to your head making you read.
For everyone who has been supportive thanks.
For everyone else...go write your own fanfiction.
Okay Challenge time for you guys had a plot bunny and thought someone else would like a shot at it.
The Slug's Apprentice
Jiraiya becomes the Godaime, Tsunade was going to take up the hat but some last minute screwups result in Jiraiya becoming the Godaime. Figuring that one of them should Jiraiya has Tsunade train Naruto. All parties agree but Tsunade takes him out of the village. So what happens? (If you could describe the training trip as well as the Shippuden plot arcs)
1. No Yaoi or NarutoxTsunade/NarutoxHinata (I like NxH pairing but it's been done to death and Tsunade is just too old)
2. Naruto gets a weapon that is not a sword (Staff, Spear, Axe, Mace ect...)
3. If you go the harem route no more then 4 (it just ain't believable after that) I will allow Hinata in a harem provided she isn't the main focus to the exclusion of the other girls no sattelite characters.
4. Naruto comes back about A-class in terms of ability
5. Bloodlines are allowed but it can't be a doh-jutsu or suddenly make Naruto super (Naruto better work for his power or it's really not cool)
6. No overt bashing: subtle digs are fine but writing a paragraph on why character X sucks isn't
7. Gaara and Lee have to be badasses and have one fight scene where they own someone completely.
8. FemNaru is allowed but no NaruSasu either way.
9. The plot ends when Naruto becomes Hokage or the next in line for Hokage.
10. The Akatsuki must remain evil
Other then that go nuts
Currently there has been one attempt that I know of
Challenge II: Kistune Archer
Now I've seen Naruto wielding just about every weapon under the sun except strangely for a bow and arrow. That said rectifying that is the point of this story. Naruto gets trained as a shinobi archer. Using seals (either engraved into the shaft or head) to make his jutsus as well as his arrow supplies. The plot should mostly follow canon events as they would impact from an archer. (Zabuza going boom from an explosive arrow, Orochimaru getting hit with an Ice arrow ect...)
1. No limit on pairings with the exception of no Yaoi. Although I heartily recommend that you come up with a unique pairing rather than NaruSaku/ Naru/Hina
2. Naruto remains on team 7
3. No Team 7 bashing
4. No overpowering the arrows so they can beat wind jutsus
5. An archer based dojustu is allowed but only to the extent that it helps him with shooting.
6. Sarutobi must be useful
7. No council
8. The Clash in the land of snow must also be in the fic.
9. All the villians in the Naruto magna are still evil
10. Plot ends either when Naruto becomes Hokage or after the defeat of the Akatsuki
11. No mary sues/gary stues
12. Naruto's weapon remains unique
And here's the links for stories that do this challenge
Alright people lets get it on!
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