Author has written 15 stories for Aliens/Predator, Jurassic Park, Species, Naruto, Rosario + Vampire, Singularity, Star Wars, Omamori Himari/おまもりひまり, Claymore, Witchblade, and Starship Troopers.
Introduction About Myself:
I would say I have a variety of stories I love to write, and I have many childhood movies that will never die. I enjoy Jurassic Park since I was younger in the days where I said dad,and mama as my first words. There was something in me that just wanted to create a whole new concept of Jurassic Park, and hell yeah I did. It's popular in the Jurassic Park sections, and it receives good feedback from most. I love it, and its my personal life long movie series of all time.
I'm also an AVP fan which is odd considering I love dinosaurs, which goes from the past to the future on Earth. I find that peculiar as most don't have that sort of range, and can write decent stories to begin with. Maybe it was the section I read first that got me into it a few years back. Quite amazing how time can fly when you start at the tendering age of 14 in writing. Over the years I look back, and my time to finish these are soon. It's just based on life I guess, or I'm somewhat lazy to think thoroughly. Who knows eh?
I also like anime, though I am not a fanatic unlike some people in this site who believe this should be incorporated in reality. Anime is fiction, and just a series of cartoons but some have a realistic background, and can be pretty convincing. I like Naruto but do not take it seriously, as I have that with Claymore. In my mind I like these two animes together as a similar time-frame of swords, elemental energy, supernatural junk, and so forth. There's just something that gets motivated to have a shinobi kill the hell out of a demon, and yet be mysterious all the while. I like Character depth, and build ups as the small quick Gun Ho thing doesn't suite me. I'll read it but not be motivated to right something like that I suppose.
About me In General:
Tall roughly 6'0 now.
Fit for most men my age because of my stint in the US Armed Forced tended to that.
Hazel eyes that are on the greener side nowadays.
Young: I'm 19 and counting to the Big Two One.
Personality: Well I'm one of those people who practically get along with everyone. I rarely hold grudges since personally its kind of against my personality. I'm a nice person to chat with. I take advice to heart and when it includes my writing I focus on the advice to improve it in any way possible. If you want a name your not getting it.
Other Gaming Accounts: This is primarily if anyone wishes to contact me, or perhaps just face me in other games. I have some other games i play routinely to get me loose. So if any have a few of these games perhaps you'll face me down the barrel of a sniper, or maybe dueling magic with. I don't know anything about anyone but I do know i maybe have fought some of you out there without realizing it. So if your bored, or want to chill out I'm on these often Online, and battling for what not I don't know either. Pretty much anything with "Maru..." is basically me.
Combat Arms : Maruson310
Battle of the Immortals: MaruKingz
Alliance of Valiant Arms(AVA): Maruson310
Xbox Live Gamertag: Marutectz711
List of Challenges or Idea's for other Authors to attempt if they have trouble in starting out with basic skeleton format story.
The Malice of the World
A little challenge for an author who is not really lacking imagination but merely drive for a plot to work up on. Something rather simple as you read but when you decide to envelop yourself in this, the world will not be a black and white for the Narutoverse. Personally what doesn't kill you just makes you stronger in my opinion. In essence this will be the story were deception, greed, honor, duty and cruelty become what a Shinobi is. The one of the shadows, to obey and just to obey the order given from the leader. What I'm doing is making the Militaristic
Society of the Hidden Village come to the light of this site, let yourself be submerged in the shoes of the Protagonist.
So here's the skeleton of the plot:
(1.) Naruto has become more subdued from the village more than ever, times are changing as he looks at the villagers seeing them scurry with their normal lives always knowing that demons beneath those 'kind' faces are but naught to rise against him. So he's very paranoid.
(2.) The young Jinchuuriki is very interested in the arts of Genjutsu but has the ideal desire to master a blend of elements because he saw some Jounin(Grey character) practice at a training ground outside the village. Due to the encounter Naruto wants to see if he can literally combine Water and whatever element he has, so he has a drive to become a dual ninjutsu specialist. Note the water element was an example so it has to be on the major five plus his own when he discovers it down the line. How you do it, well asking an elder Ninja for some advice could prove rewarding good or a ticket for the Hokage.
(3.) Naruto is not some ultimate god like thing, if you wish to make him on (estimation)paper strong like when he graduates the Academy he's Chunin strength then that is the ideal goal for it, so when he reaches another promotion of a year or two down the line he'll likely be Jounin or maybe Kage if you make it realistic in that sense. So remember his drive is what makes him stronger. Let it be paranoia of the village wanting to get him or wanting to get stronger to defend himself. Whatever it does to it.
(4.) This is back to his darker childhoods, there has to be an event where something happened to him where he's developed PTSD (Post Traumatic Stress Disorder: look it up) that his personality is really quieter from his canon self, if you wish for him to do pranks make it a darker aim in what he does. Honestly if you have a prominent scar on his face, it'll be very simple for him to remember this. (I'm a fan of scars on his face, I found it simpler for authors to get it done but the scenes in what they make it happen are extraordinary)
(5.) Another potential bonus, have Naruto be adopted or better yet sheltered by a clan you don't normally see in the anime/manga often. A clan where you can explain in-depth lives of, I'm recommending the Abruame Clan or maybe even the Nara because you hardly see them. Use Logic, Political Moves, foreshadowing into this if you want it to happen. I beg of anyone go in depth with details, don't be worried if it seems strange because the lack of information on these clans is alright.
Use Common sense, get some help from really imaginative authors who have great thoughts. Don't be shy about it, there's only two outcomes: They say No or Say Yes.
(6.) Are you willingly to make the Third Hokage and Danzo neutral characters in terms of using the Jinchuuriki to improve the village through their ideals. Intelligence and potential in the greatest game of human chess! Doing deeper into the core of the dark-side of Shinobi, Danzo the Ne(Root) Vigilante protecting the village as it's hidden Blade, the Shadow Ops where rules hold no bound? Or will Sarutobi the Third Hokage, Leader of the Official side where threats are signed to be dealt with under his permission?
Leaders of views on opposite sides with one goal: Keep Konoha the strongest of the world.
If you want some examples of these characters(Look) Weight of the World by Puffdadder The Sensei by HollowRedBlood Scorpion's Disciple by nobody102 Patriot's Dawn/Hurricane Suite by The Pro Naruto the Specialist by Vaanarash The Nidaime's Heir by adrien Skywalker
(7.) Will you make Naruto the Leader of the Leaves, where destiny and fate slowly bring him down the path of leadership? Will he be the Villian of becoming a Missing Nin to escape the spiders web or will he become the Vigilante with the Roots of the Great Tree, becoming an heir of shadows? Akatsuki looming, will he start anew and create a village of his own to power his ambition to become a world where all Jinchuuriki will stand against the threat of humanity itself?
Many possibilities in one is who bring the Next Coming of the World, a child of destiny making the world into something anew.
(8.) Go indepth when you start Naruto's ninja carreer, it's just like the Military in whatever country today. There is no simple Assault support, defense or even mopping the floors. There are many things in this society you can create, logistics, Administration, Diplomacy, Engineering, Ninjutsu Dualist, Genjutsu Supporter, Taijutsu Instructors, Hunter Squadrons-Platoons to Divisions, DO NOT make all ranks the same generically, everyone is specialized to a degree in a subject.
Get into the Medical Fields because Medic Nin are so underrated, Naruto could show an interest perhaps: maybe Kabuto as an interesting teacher could make his views onto his 'student'
(9.) Speculation, Political Gains and the endless web of half truths are the true evil of the council, the Civilian Side is merely puppet heads of the Clan Heads which include the reason why the Third couldn't disband them after the Kyuubi attack but he's somewhat approving of thinking that 'average civilians' have the guise of power over there own people.
Think in today's terms when the President Appoints a cabinet or even figure heads are put in place.
(10.) Pairings: Why would any clan Heirless want with the orphan, why are all the clan heirs in the same class and what is the truth of the Namikaze? I do not mind pairings but if you want to do something like Hinata, please don't even try it. I get tired of that pairing so much I feel like punching the person who even considered putting these two together, I just really can't see it ever happening.
Do something rather intriguing as well: Could a Foreign Shinobi capture the heart of our Protagonist, foreign relations in the long run or maybe something more? (Oto: Tayuya, Kumo, Iwa, Kiri and or even something else?)
(11.) Personality of the Shinobi: think of Professional Soldiers today, formal towards civilians and to each other are very stern with rules. Saluting or even giving light respectful bows to people of higher rank, none of this simple bull where they act like hoodlums, you DONT see Soldiers in public view in full Uniforms acting like goofballs often.
(12.) Always have a bigger foreshadowing behind Naruto or anyone's path, everything has a reason for happening and for Naruto to grow something will happen because of pressure. Loom of wars, potential political decisions and even more so the fate of a country against the world again.
(13.) If you want even more of a challenge: Konoha is at War with either Kumo or Iwa and a brush fire war has started up when an incident by the aggressor (Iwa) was deined when their Shinboi literally destroyed an Outpost on the border without orders but the Kage of that Nation will not do any harsh reparations against his soldiers. For example handing them over to Konoha who become enraged enough to invoke this Declaration of War making the world watch in shock to see them furious, Iwa Against Konoha in another Grudge Match of the Century.
Maybe Naruto could be used here literally in all the things above, The Malice of the World becomes Real.
(14.) ASK ME ANY QUESTIONS/HELP IF YOU WISH TO DO THIS, I WILL NOT TURN ANYONE AWAY FROM THIS.
Summary: They say whatever turns about to be, always once had a choice. Well things can have a choice for a price, an eye for an eye or better yet one life for thousands? Many have found that to be so, to make a great change a life must be altered so great to withstand the change of time. Fate decrees this but what will One boy have a say against fate, everything and stand up against the one thing that the world demands of him: Malice.
Ok that's that, Now if some are wondering in why I can't right this, I have too many stories to write, and keep up with, maybe if all my stories were completed I would try this, though I want someone to have the guts or the balls to do a realistic Naruto, its doesn't have to be a masterpiece I WILL ALLOW MULTIPLE authors to write this under different titles, just basic guidelines.
This is a challenge to any author who can't come up with ideas or wants a challenge.
Prequel to Proeliator of Rutilus Diluculo Challenge
This is a story that I'm truly not very comfortable with in letting a person do this, personally I think it's too early to really come up with something of this caliber. All in all this is just one challenge that I highly recommend you think to yourself very seriously. Due to not one, not two but three PM's requesting me to develop a prequel since the author's in question politely, curiously, and had interesting justification to create this. Personally again I think it's too early but this is something I'm telling to an author who wants to create an epic novel here, this is no fucking bullshit or beginning author's challenge now. I'm letting all people who read this not take this lightly, I value experience, imagination, and telling of the story to be in a character's shoes at this point. To begin I'm listing off the skeleton here to follow, this is not something I'm going to take lightly on, you better be ready to write at your fullest with a your "thinking cap" or mental power or that piece of fucking organ of a brain you have. I'm not offending anyone here but I'm fucking serious on this matter now...
(1.) This story will NOT begin with the basic cheesy "Kyuubi attacks Konoha with the Yondamie on Gamabunta's back" if you even tempt that opening I'm shooting you down. Don't even pull the random fucking "Mob" thing please, too many of that happening. If you want an example of a good opening read the prolog's the following stories here for some creative inspiration, literally. "Houses of the Holy", or "Nine Tail Serpent", or if your ademant on the Kyuubi Minato opening, "God of Illusion, Birth of the Devil's Arm." If you want use the manga's revelation of the sealing, and birth of Naruto with Madara attacking go on ahead make it good. This is not a walk in the park here my friends, these trio are just some of the best I have in my favorites, look in them before attempting this now.
(2.) Naruto will be slightly AU, he's just a year older here now. Why? With that one year the rookie nine are not aware of the fact of the Kyuubi attack on their age group, this allows more room for something to occur now. With the fact that Sasuke is a year younger since I stated in my "Proeliator" that the blond was the elder of the two, Itachi elder to them as it went on. This creates a lot of time to develop a bond here between Itachi, and Naruto though it won't be borderline insanity here. Take your time, let the chapters be months instead of a time skip again look to those stories up top for some guidiance here. If not check others that are that are great. Everything is bumped one by one year, and one alone. A LOT of things can happen in that lone year...
(3.) Now when the scene for Itachi comes, it won't be saved from the Mob, or not even the lone Clan Member going insane with hatred, oh no no. I want you to make this out of the box here yet making it more entirely not unreasonable now. Naruto meet's Itachi out in the forest where he trains or you can make it accidental that the young container see's the Uchiha prodigy doing his ANBU or Jounin (if I remember what his rank was at age 7?) Simply put make Naruto just awed at the elder preteen's skills of a shinobi. Please make it well descriptive in how you would see it first hand, and I ain't talking about "All there was a brief wind, and the sound of kunai's clashing together." Please make it as if it was in real life, I implore you now on that matter.
(4.) Just to be Clear Naruto will have a fascination with Genjutsu due to Itachi who is well gifted at creating them, and we all now at some point the man unlocked the Mangekyo Sharingan with Tsukyomi. Again if you want a lesson schooled from a ninja read "Houses of the Holy". The chapter were Pein, and Naruto in that story have that first lesson. I hold a lot of respect for that story, and still hope to whatever thing out there for it to be updated again. If that doesn't help, "God of Illusion, Birth of the Devil's Arm" on getting information on genjutsu here or create you own. I hold tremendous respect for these two author's without a doubt on the matter, when it comes to bringing the complexity of ninjutsu arts to reality here.
(5.) As to how Naruto lose's his eyes, its going to be during the Uchiha Massacre. You can have Itachi act strange around his brief "student" when the Mangekyo incident comes around with Shinji or whoever the friend of Itachi was. It has to be along the lines of where Naruto is near the Massacre as it is. You can have that clince thing where he goes to it untimely but go out of the box with it, making him studying chakra signatures, genjutsu or chakra control I don't know something like that. One Uchiha or some random civilian Uchiha ninja, or MP can slice his eyes out due to the fact he was there. You have to make it like your going to be like, Oh my god that he gets there at the wrong time, wrong place, and the wrong person with the mentality of blaming something so irrational half dead or not. It can be a random civilian or ninja as a collateral during that night...
(6.) Now when his eyes are out, Itachi can come in along seeing this happen. Make him go Ape shit as he views Naruto as both the heir to Kushina, and Minato. I know for a fucking fact that Itachi has met Kushina, you all know that's possible along with the Fourth Hokage Minato himself. I know that the former container was friends with the matriarch of the clan Mikoto I think her names was. So add that in to the factor before the poor fucker who cut the eyes is dead. For the eyes it is one of the best friend who Madara allows his pupil to keep, and his lover as a reminder of his mortality or something along those lines. Justify, and make it well thought out now, please I beg you on that...
(7.) The Kyuubi's powers here that I didn't mention with the fascination with Genjutsu here is that of Kitsune. I want to make the Fox have the powers of the mind, cause if the formation of a "Jyuubi" here is right the nine tails has the eye component to make the create even cast the damn eternal night illusion on the moon. The whole concept of creating earthquakes or Tsunami's it can be due to the fact of the large tails or the demonic energy on Nature. That is grey territory, what I mean by grey is that there is little info to really grasp that. It's pretty mind racking, it can cause headaches which I can vouch for, a lot...
(8.) Ok now for Danzou, and Sarutobi these two people are not defined as "good" and "evil ". Both of these men I consider to be the grayest of characters since they work in parallel for the story but with different methods here. I know for a fact that Danzou with his "Ne" Faction of ANBU are not after Naruto's life here. It's utter Bull shit in some stories others just have some point to extend the plot. These men have factors not just the whole, "Minato I failed your promise" or "I want the perfect living weapon" ideas. Think of modern politics of what the gains of having a rich, successful, political family, and a soldier or warrior on your side to run things. Naruto is the heir to the "Namikaze" and "Uzumaki" clans here. A big One Two punch of sealing, and powerhouses here. Both men want Naruto in Konoha for a basic idea, "Keep the village strong" methods are a mute point, it's the mark that counts. Think of politics and some of the utter shit both Democrats and Republicans spew in congress. Alliances will be made to get Naruto under their thumb, you can he's the knight in chess so to speak.
(9.) Now for the future during till he meets Emiko. Naruto's level of strength I will ask to be Chunnin to Middle Chunnin due to him rigorously searching for ways to improve his combat. I recommend you come up with a chapter of two getting him into the new life of his since the entire village will blame him for the Massacre since he was found near the body(s) pending your decision again. This is where the whole time frame till he meets Emiko, which can around age 10. All the rookie nine are age 9 so you have about three years or so for them to graduate. Age is 12 now, but Naruto is a prodigy he'll have to be a Genin, solo with teams of Chunin or other existing OC teams for missions. Again think Political moves on this matter, keep him under surveillance. The ANBU trailing him are professional, and completely can neutralize Naruto without too much effort in a team. These are the "Elite" and the Black Ops now, don't make them fucking die instantly, there's a reason why there around.
(10.) For Emiko make a very through back story here, I did mention her parents were non Konoha natives, and the village did not openly accept her as an orphan. She has friends, and how they live their lives is up to you, I'm being serious for the matter. Don't blow this off else why would there be a reason why Naruto think of himself before his eyes were cut out, she's basically a reincarnation of him. Hell you can make them distant relatives for stunning revelation, or make her from Kumo to essentially blow my mind while keeping it within reason. "The Raikage" Use that story for an author who is probably the most diverse creator of OC characters ever. Simply wow, oh wow.
(11.) Just to be clear, ANBU are not push overs ever. You can have Yuugao be one of the routinely members to track him, I think it'll be interesting with Kakashi to see how his sensei's son is becoming. More drama or horror of the character.
(12.) Now when ever you have Naruto's daughter Emiko killed, this is something I bet not a soul can realize. The most dangerous of political game, the murder, and it's a the unknown third part. Yes A third party of extremists be it Civilian or Shinobi Council to see their greatest soldier, pawn political ally, or savior be potentially swayed away to go back to the home country of the adopted child, or ward. The ramifications of this third part please be in detail, and to pay one of their one be it "Ne" or "ANBU" or "Jounin" to kill the daughter of Naruto Namikaze. They think it will eliminate the possibility of him leaving the village of course Danzou and Sarutobi try to do damage control. Basically when Naruto see's it...He goes fucking omega Ape Shit on that building burning it to the ground, and oh please make it story turning moments of such.
(13.) As for when he joins Akatsuki I'll be expecting well thought out characters, plans, and potential for Madara when he hears about all of this. Although before Naruto officially comes out of hiding from the shadows Madara and Itachi will train him on subjects of their profession. Sealing, illusions, and their views on humankind. I have counties frequently mentioned in my Proeliator story, and I implore you do them in a series of fours years when Naruto hits the age of 17, and 18 to have the Biju collected in that span. For him to survive the sealing of the Kitsune, and how he gets these mysterious gifts you and I will be speaking about it. I will have versions made out when you wish to send yours in to me.
(14.) The ending of the story will be this, a spoiler for my story right now. The biju come together, the Raikage comes around you know that drill disrupts it. A black hole sucks Naruto into it while saving Madara from being killed off, I implore you make it in first person view on his final moments before "dying" make it graphic, and painful on the matter for him. After this do a short epilogue of him arriving in the forest tired, exhausted mentally to fight bandits. Give it a few hours before he sleeps, and moves to see that there is a village from where he is, then end it. Simple as that...
This is something I'm letting my leniency of my consciousness in letting someone do this, this is something you need to make a blend of reality, and impossibility. This is for author's who are great, and want to have that spark to start a whole new concept of Naruto or whatever story genre. To have others follow in their writing paragraphs for years or months in truth. It's that surge where an novelist creator knows he's ready to face that challenge of leaving behind a legacy, a legacy of words.
Contact me, if you wish to start the first chapter and I will be expecting a rough draft to inspect first off before my answer on starting the journey of it...
You're a 90's kid if:
You can finish this 'ice ice _"
(respect this passage above, born in 1993 and loved all the years till 2004)
100 Rules of Anime
The laws of Anime is a growing list of physical, universal, and natural
#1 - Law of Metaphysical Irregularity- The normal laws of physics do not apply.
#2 - Law of Differential Gravitation- Whenever someone or something jumps, is
#3 - Law of Sonic Amplification, First Law of Anime Acoustics- In space, loud
#4 - Law of Constant Thrust, First Law of Anime Motion- In space, constant thrust
#5 - Law of Mechanical Mobility, Second Law of Anime Motion- The larger a
#6 - Law of Temporal Variability- Time is not a constant. Time stops for the hero
#7 - First Law of Temporal Mortality- "Good Guys" and "Bad Guys" both die in one of
#8 - Second Law of Temporal Mortality- It takes some time for bad guys to die...
#9 - Law of Dramatic Emphasis- Scenes involving extreme amounts of action are
#10- Law of Dramatic Multiplicity- Scenes that only happen once, for instance, a
#11- Law of Inherent Combustibility- Everything explodes. Everything.
#12- Law of Phlogistatic Emission- Nearly all things emit light from fatal wounds.
#13- Law of Energetic Emission- There is always an energy build up (commonly
#14- Law of Inverse Lethal Magnitude- The destructive potential of any
#15- Law of Inexhaustibility- No one EVER runs out of ammunition. That is of
#16- Laws of Inverse Accuracy- The accuracy of a "Good Guy" when operating any form
#17- Law of Transient Romantic Unreliability- Minimei is a bimbo. (Note: The
#18- Law of Hemoglobin Capacity- the human body contains over 12 gallons of blood,
#19- Law of Demonic Consistency- Demons and other supernatural creatures have at
#20- Law of Militaristic Unreliability- Huge galaxy-wide armadas, entire armies, and
#21- Law of Tactical Unreliability- Tactical geniuses aren’t...
#22 -Law of Inconsequential Undetectability- People never notice the little
#23- Law of Juvenile Intellectuality- Children are smarter than adults. And almost
#24- Law of Americanthromorphism- Americans in Anime appear in one of two roles,
#25- Law of Mandibular Proportionality- The size of a person’s mouth is directly
#26- Law of Feline Mutation- Any half-cat/half-human mutation will invariably:
#27- Law of Conservation of Firepower- Any powerful weapon capable of
#28- Law of Technological User-Benevolence- The formal training required to operate
#29- Law of Melee Luminescence- Any being displaying extremely high levels of
#30- Law of Non-Anthropomorphic Antagonism- All ugly, non-humanoid alien races are
#31- Law of Follicular Chromatic Variability- Any color in the visible spectrum is
#32- Law of Follicular Permanence- Hair in anime is pretty much indestructible, and
#34- Law of Probable Attire- Clothing in anime follows certain predictable
#35- Law of Musical Omnipotence- Any character capable of musical talent (singing,
#36- Law of Quintupular Agglutination- Also called "The Five-man Rule", when "Good
#37- Law of Extradimensional Capacitance- All anime females have an
#38- Law of Hydrostatic Emission- Eyes tend to be rather large in Anime. This is
#39- Law of Inverse Attraction- Success at finding suitable mates is inversely
#40- Law of Nasal Sanguination- When sexually aroused, males in Anime don’t get
#41- Law of Xylolaceration- Wooden or bamboo swords are just as sharp as metal
#42- Law of Juvenile Omnipotence- Always send a boy to do a man’s job. He’ll get it
#43- Law of Triscaquadrodecophobia- There is no Law #43.
#44- Law of Nominative Clamovocation- the likelihood of success and damage done by a
#45- Law of Uninteruptable Metamorphosis- Regardless of how long or involved the
#46- Law of Flimsy Incognition- Simply changing into a costume or wearing a teensy
#47- Law of Mandibular Combustible Emission- All anime characters seem to have some
#48- Law of Electrical and Combustible Survivalism- If you get electrocuted or
#49- Law of Female wrath- If a male character insults a female character, he will
#50- Law of Artistic Perversion- Most (not all) Anime artists are perverts and are
#51- Law of Uninteruptable Nominative Clamovocation- This law is a mixture of Laws
52- Law of Telepathic Obliviousness- Most of the time, some Anime characters
#53- Law of Chromatic Diversity- Air can be any color of the viewable spectrum.
#54- Law of Old Man Comic Relief- Comic relief comes in the form of a short, bald,
#55- Law of the Wise Old Man- Little old Japanese men always know how it ends and
#56- Law of Omnipotent Unreliability- Any "Bad Guy" with Omnipotent powers/weapons
#57- Law of Minimum Corneal Volume- Eyeballs may make up no less than one sixth of
#58- Law of Electrical Charges in Hair- Hair attracts electricity in abundance,
#59- Law of Ammunition Accuracy- When there are multiple types of ammunition
#60- Law of Active Female Attraction- In a comedy series, a male character’s
#61- Law of Sweat Pore Variability- When a person is embarrassed, caught in an
#62- The Law of Inverse Training Time- A person who has been training for 3 years
#63- Law of Needs to Few and Many- The needs of the many, outweigh the needs of the
#64- Law of Bad Humor- Whenever someone says something that is intended to be
#65- Law of Extreme Anger- Whenever a female character gets mad, such as seeing the
#66- Law of Differentiated Gravitation-
#67- Law of Conservation of Ambient Dramatic Tension- In any situation where the
#68- Law of Coercive Vehicular Control- No matter how complex or well defined the
#69- Amendment to the Law of Conservation of Ambient Dramatic Tension- In any
#70- Law of The Rushing Background Effect- Whenever something dramatic occurs, a
#71- Law of Interdimensional Hammers- Whenever a female character witnesses a male
#72- Law of Instant Band-Aids- Whenever a character is injured (usually in a head
#73- Law of Universal Edge Defense- Any projectile attack, from a blast of magic to
#74- Law of Intractable Sanity- There is no such thing as insanity in anime. When
#75- Law of Celestial Body Control- At a dramatically correct moment, a hero can
#76- Law of Aura of Forgetfulness- Any hero who wishes his/her identity to remain a
#77- Law of Cool Hair Factor- The hair of a hero will always coalesce into thick
#78- Law of Inverse Coping- Any single event will happen to the ONE character LEAST
#79- Law of Martial Arts Training Invulnerability- The Myth that certain martial
#80- Law of Stereotype Captain characteristics- If a captain of any type of ship is
#81- Law of Shades/Coolness Factor- Shades can make you instantly cool, even if
#82- Law of Hentai Plot- The proper response to any change in the plotline of a
#83- Law of Understatement- Anything that is deemed too impossible will become
#84- Law of Dormant Powers- Anytime a hero is somehow outpowered and/or outclassed
#85- Law of Style Coefficient- In a situation where a Good guy may be in dire
#86- Law of Bad Guy Smugness Factor- Whenever the villain actually succeeds in
#87- Law of Tableware Nonexistence- There IS no spoon.
#88- Law of Goofy Turn-Ons- In Hentai, ordinary , pedestrian objects sometimes have
#89- Law of Penile Variance- All Anime men in Hentai have a ridiculously large
#90-Law of Hentai Female Characteristics- All Hentai women have the following
#91- Law of Vaginal Variance- Hentai Anime women can take penis lengths of 8" and
#92- Law of Hero Identification- All heroes are introduced by way of appearance
#93- Law of Cute Mascots- Any anime either Shojo or Shonen has GOT to have at
#94- Law of The Force- Most Anime heroes are blessed with a unique sort of ability
#95- Law of Naughty Tentacles- All Anime Tentacles are VERY horny and will rape any
#96- Law of Cat-Fighting- Two females with a grudge can and will go at each other,
#97- Law of Healing- Most anime heroes have a Wolverine-like healing factor that
#98- Law of Stereotype Crew Characteristics- All ships, either waterborne or
#99- Law of Sparklies- Whenever a character of the main character’s interest
#100- Law of Anime Events- Much like wrestling, anything and everything can happen
Claymore X Naruto: Naruto has arrived to the verse of Claymore, alone he has little idea how he had entered such a land. Prepare for a Naruto who is silent, deadly, and powerful. Full of intellect he will pited against forces that he has little idea to expect. An interesting idea that I was given by a friend of mine from school to write out, and he enjoys Claymore, and with Naruto Crossovers he kind of bet me to do it, and well here I am. This is a Naruto who will be extremely OOC due to being Trained partly by (My favorite character) Itachi Uchiha, so yeah enjoy that one.
Naruto's Known Weapons:,
Naruto In Cloak With Hair down :
Poll Results for Proeliator of Rutilus Diluculo Akatsuki Members:
(Chapter 14: The Road to Strugeburg has been Posted!)
(3.) Alica and Beth
(7.) Clarice and Miata
(9.) The Assassin
Explanations: NEED TO READ
The Characters are here in order so I'll start off with this group I'm dubbing the "Expectant."
Riful: This is one character that I knew instantly would be in there. What's not to like about her here? The insanity of a child while having the cunning mindset to torture people just to awaken to combat the Northern Abyssal One. Also keep in mind that I find it interesting she'll be making the stature of Lucelia and Rafeal to awake and add that with Naruto's near sub zero tolerance to innocents being killed in this land. So yeah, I'll find a way in hell to get her on board with the shinobi.
Galatea: Another choice that I was certain she was in for but it was a double plus situation. Miria knows the third ranked warrior well enough for them to admit a few things here or there. So to me this is critical for Miria to stick around when they search for the Rouge God Eye, also did I mention she'll be honing in on the chakra produced from the blond?
I said in an earlier she couldn't sense Naruto's chakra because there was so much Yoki energy that a human source was covered by the multiple layers of it around in the area. I think this will be a great fit for Naruto and the Akatsuki to benefit from, and her story will be fun to use. Pretty much trying to explain why her eyes were blind after the seven year skip and I have the perfect partner for her.
That's number 5 on the polls, so picture that duo because I'm laughing in sheer anxiety on that subject.
Alica and Beth: I really wanted to stay no to this, without a freaking doubt. However due to me eating too much sugar one night and a few liters of soda I have an idea to get the Black Twins on the Red Dawn's side. All I will say is that this is interesting choice to have but one challenging subject that is practically the organizations secret weapons helping Naruto?
Do they have emotions, or are they just so selfish they only care for themselves and just themselves? So many questions that I will be using when this little "idea" of them betraying the organization might occur during the Strugeburg Arc of the story.
I will say I love this concept of having the Black Twins of Death sticking their awakened forms against their masters, simply unheard of yet plausible. How? Well just your heads and a few illusions of a certain blood line. I've said enough right there.
Priscilla: Oh fucking hell NO! I don't care if she had gotten first place on this poll. There is no way I will have her or two other characters who I name later down nowhere near Naruto. Plainly speaking this is the entire series antagonist here. I don't physically believe or metaphorically think this woman would fit in Akatsuki. For one with it would make Clare actively seek all the Red Dawn Members out to interrogate where Priscilla was.
Not to mention the organization would also take drastic measures to get Naruto with them at all costs, being a mercenary and others things they do "know" people will disappear. I can name a few during this duration of the story, can you guess? No well be shocked that I won't write her in, I have substitutes at the bottom for certain characters.
So my answer for accepting her, is a HELL no. I just can't picture this story going too far with one of the strongest beings on the continent fighting for humans.
Isley: One the most infamous of beings in the lands. I think he is the perfect fit for a person who would be most suited to join Akatsuki for his own benefits along with protecting the two people he considers as a family. Yes mister Isley here is killed off due to fighting the Abyss Feeders or something like that in the later chapters of the manga and boy was I livid at that fact. So the gears in my head are turning with this man being able to join under the impression of: "The enemy of my enemy is my friend."
Mere words just can't describe my anxiety to make this boy to join the Red Dawn. Also do you think Isley would be a great fit for Galatea? I mean the man always loses witty banner with pretty woman as the chapter with Luciela was an indicator, so imagine the conversations. Not to mention the fact that he is slightly noble to match the God Eyes Aristocratic personality.
So c'mon work with me on that regard, will we save Isley from his death? Oh fucking yes we will now...
Rubel: Honest to freaking god I wanted this guy to just be a primary source of information for Naruto to use. I won't make him an active member of Akatsuki since this boy is already a master spy being a Double Agent. I can't make him realistically the Triple Agent. Let's face it he's totally shady at best and I think he should be one of those unexpected characters that drop in to make you know something big is up. So he's going to be an active source for information but really the kind of person I want in the Red Dawn. He's just to illusive for my tastes and having him would compromise his position in the organization during the seven year time frame here.
So a nice choice but not my thing. Moving onward...
Clarice and Miata: A pairing that was, unexpected. I think Clarice would get along with Naruto who would view this an opportunity to see how the Claymore creation process was affected with the woman. He would also find it similar to how his daughter was, innocent and had that drive to be different despite being scorned on by her peers. An interesting choice and as for Miata. Well c'mon people Clarice is her "mother" right and what about her "father?"
Oh yes Naruto will be at some point if I feel like it, sneak into the Organizations HQ to learn of their intentions form outside sources and inside alike. So what if he met the gir during her early years inside the cell she was in or maybe walked into the place where Clarice first met the girl.
Very interesting and I can't offer more than because I'm making quite notations in my mind about these characters.
Raki: Really, it's Priscilla's reasoning why I'm not adding him. Naruto really didn't give a flying fuck about this kid, and neither do I in this story. Well maybe later on when Raki is captured it'll be a concern but not a real crucial person now. Let the kid mature and would Naruto consider it, yes but he has too many cons against the pro's per say.
Raki, Priscilla and Clare is just a threeway mega disaster right in the center of hell, so a no go there. Sorry folks I just don't want to deal with that, personally the kid is fine where he is in Canon and hell it'll be more interesting when Clare is stunned to hear about that.
If new manga chapters are out then I'll read to see what happened to him and her during the Destroyers little rein of hell.
The Assassin: It's going to be a he and he is a human. Interesting Local Contract Killer that I have the back story already written out and having a picture of what he looks like. I can give a name when the time comes but for now this part of OC is done. I got everything nearly finalized when the Arc for the Assassin comes around, though the chapters will be shorter for recruits it'll be worth it I hope.
So congrats on that and we'll see what happens next with the people's opinion on my little warped creation. Yes when I do mean warped, he'll be mirroring a certain character we all have seen and if not well I believe that's my goal to have a new concept.
He will Appear in the Strugeburg Acts as well; a late Add-In that I want to make up for lost time to the readers who wanted him a while back.
Okay now that is settled I have the substitutes...
Rubel / Akatsuki Member - Basically One Character of the Akatsuki from Naruto's Universe comes here! Just ONE and only ONE! I'm borderline realistic with this little detail and it will be very interesting to read, cause we have someone that is just as confused with Naruto in these lands. Who will it be? Suggestions are welcome but I have one person in mind as it is.
Priscilla/The Alchemist - I wanted this creation to be in so bad and now I have the reason. It's simply nearly all written out and the alchemist will be human. The reason why is that this Claymore World is so close to mirror Renaissance Era Europe its not funny. I personally believe that this ideology was in the Claymore verse based on human tendencies to find an answer to something we so strongly believe in as a myth or legend.
Turning Lead into Gold? Or discovering the Elixir of Life?
So many possibilities and who knows could it be a scientist with no regards to human life or Yoma alike?
Raki/OC Awakened Being - I wanted an interesting offer to someone from the Era of Male Soldiers. To me I will probably write this out eventually after I'm done with the other OC's but still I like this idea. The Fourth or Fifth ranked unknown warrior from the time before time? Cliche but hey it'll work for my needs.
Revised Poll Outlook:
3. Alica and Beth
4. The Alchemist
6. Akatsuki Member from Naruto Verse...
7. Clarice and Miata
8. The Awakened Being
9. The Assassin
The Challenge: For Artists and Visionaries on Deviant Art!
Oh and before I go, I have to ask anyone to make something from the bottom of their heart.
Please make a Deviant Art with the Claymore Canon Characters having Akatsuki Cloaks on them, please I can't do it because I suck at art and photo-shop. I just want to make something completely worth while, so people can easily picture these characters wearing the iconic cloaks of a New Dawn for their world.
That's it finally and well have a good year folks because I know I will.
Characters Known In Naruto's Past:
: The still relatively unknown daughter of Naruto Namikaze, is a huge mental trauma, and anchor for him once to be sane. Not much has been concluded yet it's true to say Naruto loved her despite being adopted as her father. Her reasons of death are still shady at best. Her is definitely planned out, and there will be more later as to why it happened. (Note it's not the same girl, it's merely a glimpse)
: The that committed the slaughter of the Uchiha Clan itself, Naruto, and the young captain had a student teacher Relationship due to the blond child meeting him. The stoic elder boy gave some respect despite his cold exterior to the child, and he trained him in secret despite the scorning disapproval from his clan, and the Hokage at the time. It wouldn't be still later when the Massacre happened did some random Uchiha member sliced the eyes of Naruto Namikaze out onto the ground. The ANBU Captain at time nearly stopped in sheer shock to see the image of Naruto with his eyes at his feet. Itachi managed to implant the single eye of Shisu, and another eye to give the Sharingan to the half dead child. The teen hasn't been .
: The Main Master of puppets as he recruited Naruto to the , not much is known except the deal made between the two. The Two Sharingan users did indeed face off but battle is currently unknown. It's said that Namikaze wanted to live through the process no matter what to see Konoha Razed to the ground.
: Very little is known about the friendship or kinship between the two supposed "rivals" in the past Naruto was calmer around the younger Uchiha who both of the two trained together to get their vengeance in later times. What is known is that Sasuke, and Naruto saw each other as brothers united in the darkness. Much will be known later in the story, and one key hint is that Naruto acted as the mature one between their social conversations.
: The female teammate of Naruto, and Sasuke. She developed a clinging hope to the Uchiha to remain in the village. She was at the time to see , and supposedly die years after he left with the Toad Sage. When he arose as the Missing Nin, the Avenger of Hell she nearly went insane at the sight of her two former comrades intent on destroying their home. Much will be revealed on in later dates of time.
: The is the sensei of Team Seven. The Jounin believed he could keep his father figure, the memory alive by passing down his to his Son Naruto , and apprentice Sasuke. Much to his horror it did little to sway either of them much due to Naruto having his loyalty on the life of his daughter, and in the end the man failed extensively. He blames himself for not seeing both fire's of the leaf turn into ash before his eyes. Not much is known on what he personally thought about his students, and his reaction to the betrayals.
: Also known as the yellow flash of Konoha, and is the father of Naruto without a doubt. The man perceived his village as some paradise to seemingly see his son, the container of the Kyuubi to be treated as a hero. However human pain, grief, and desperation sent that ideal after the sealing ended. The Village turned its back on the their former leaders request, and they were damned before long they knew. It's said that Naruto faced the chakra memory of the Fourth in the seal during the Kyuubi's extraction. Naruto destroyed him simply much to his own horror at his son, and more information will be sent later on.
Challenges that I've confirmed who taken them:
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