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Joined 11-20-08, id: 1747435, Profile Updated: 11-24-12
Author has written 33 stories for Three Delivery, and Ben 10.

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Gone Too Far
Chapter: 3. Chapter 3 From: Automail-gHost

... I'm at a loss for words...
That was so amazing...
Your writing is so vivid and so well done, that was absolutely AMAZING! .
The plot was so original, the character acting and interaction was fantastic,
I seriously could not stop reading. Great job! .
I'm gonna go see what other good things you have written, really good job,
keep going! -)

{Shameless Self Promotion} .)

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Something u should know about me before you ask me to read and review your story. Most OC's and crossovers make me scream and run away.

I don't like OCs 99 percent of the time. If they are support characters only needed to move the story along or get killed off, those are fine and necessary just like in the real show. I have a few of those myself, but those are not the OC's I'm talking about. Like the difference between 'Other' Characters and 'Original' Characters, those that the author has an attachment to, where they imagine these character's are really themselves, for example.

When the OC becomes a main character with the others, or even more important than the show's characters; move in with the show's characters or become a love interest, those are the ones i am not fond of. They change the story from the original too much and i like canon.

I say 99 percent because i have written two stories upon request that had the requester's OCs in them. One was fun, the other didn't work out so well.

If you want to make a character patterned after yourself and write a story about yourself and your friends - why don't you make it an original story and plot of your own? I think it would be way more awesome! I might even read it. FanFiction.net has a sister site where you could post it.

Romance and babies coming to charries whom i love from original shows, who are too young to be worrying about such things make me pull my hair out, and worry about the writer.

I am also not fond of crossovers. They rarely make any sense to me, and i never see the point.

I don't understand the point of writing from different character's point of view and i find it confusing. Not fond of stories where half the sentences start with "I". Mostly it just distracts me from the story. I guess what i like is what you would call 'third person'. I like authors that don't do that, like JK Rowling and Douglas Adams best. In fact, writing in the first person is the hardest way to go about doing it.

I would go on and say what i do like, but eh - - if you have read any of my stories or I've faved yours, you know what i like. If you can help me with sentence structure or tell me how to improve my writing skills i would be very grateful.

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The Good Left Undone by Moodle reviews
Tobey is left unsure after the discovery of his real father. He storms out one night and is kidnapped by his loving "father". He is brutally tortured and left on the side of the road. He returns to Wu's Garden only to betray the family he loves so dearly.
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 6 - Words: 4,707 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 10/23/2011 - Published: 1/2/2011
The Abyss Agenda by chilled monkey reviews
Ben is stricken by a mysterious ailment. Benlie.
Ben 10 - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 6 - Words: 6,260 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 18 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 9/7/2010 - Published: 8/20/2010 - Ben T., Julie Y. - Complete
Kidnapped by the Past by WolfieStar reviews
**rewrite of the Kidnapping of Sue Yi** A strange man with an odd relationship to the siblings partners up with Kong Li, and the results aren't pretty. Tobue
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 4 - Words: 4,480 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 8/22/2010 - Published: 7/4/2010
Mr Mom by TeddyLover777 reviews
Tobey's done it again! Because of Tobey's stomach, Sid'll have to suffer! XD Summary isn't that great. Mild SiBey
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 11 - Words: 10,213 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 4/25/2010 - Published: 3/6/2009 - Complete
Coming Back by 68guns reviews
ELF. Will Lucas come back after he's injured in an explosion on board seaQuest?
SeaQuest - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 6 - Words: 8,819 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 3/14/2010 - Published: 3/10/2010 - Complete
Crawling Out of the Darkness by CJane reviews
Set in Season 3, with Captain Hudson in command of the seaQuest. Lucas and Tim O'Neill centered with a smattering of several other characters.
SeaQuest - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 23 - Words: 74,661 - Reviews: 192 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 13 - Updated: 3/5/2010 - Published: 11/30/2009 - Complete
The Kidnapping of Sue Yi by WolfieStar reviews
Kong Li has a new partner, and he's going to give Sue, Sid, and Tobey a run for their money. But he makes something special planned for Sue Yi.
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Angst/Family - Chapters: 15 - Words: 24,053 - Reviews: 32 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 12/1/2009 - Published: 10/5/2009 - Complete
Chinatown Dragon 2: The Alliance by Fudogg reviews
Jake Long. Sue, Sid and Tobey. They're back in this sequel to the original. I don't own Three Delivery or American Dragon.
Crossover - American Dragon: Jake Long & Three Delivery - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 10 - Words: 15,015 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 11/11/2009 - Published: 10/11/2009 - Complete
Sue's Simple Win by Imaginationqueen87 reviews
Something strange is going on with Sue, can they figure it all out before things take a turn for the worst? Slight implied Sidxoc
Three Delivery - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 3,155 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 10/6/2009 - Published: 7/14/2009 - Complete
Time is Running Out by WolfieStar reviews
Tobue. Tobey must keep Sue alive when she falls ill when their both snowed in due to an unnatural blizzard. But as he cares for her, he starts to wonder if this has anything to do with her always working and never resting. Full summary inside.
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Family/Mystery - Chapters: 12 - Words: 16,675 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 9/20/2009 - Published: 8/26/2009 - Complete
Chinatown Dragon by Fudogg reviews
Three Delivery and American Dragon crossover. A recipe ends up in New York! Read to see what happens. I don't own American Dragon or Three Delivery.
Crossover - American Dragon: Jake Long & Three Delivery - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 9 - Words: 10,135 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 17 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 8/20/2009 - Published: 7/17/2009 - Complete
New Beginnings: Orphaned at Sea by JamieLee24 reviews
1st in a series. When Lucas' parents are killed in a plane crash, Bridger and the crew must help him through it. In so doing, they learn some things about their resident boy genius. Warning: spanking.
SeaQuest - Rated: T - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,820 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 3 - Published: 7/26/2009 - Complete
Return of the Jiangshi by Fudogg reviews
Sequel to "Pain From the Past". If you're read that, then you probably know what this is about. If you haven't read the previous one, I would before I read this. Rated T to be safe. I don't own Three Delivery
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Angst/Supernatural - Chapters: 6 - Words: 6,921 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 6/18/2009 - Published: 5/28/2009 - Complete
Pain From the Past by Fudogg reviews
My version of what Tobey's Dark past could be. Inspired by the end of "Fear Factor". Rated T to be safe. I don't own Three Delivery.
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 6 - Words: 8,614 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 5/27/2009 - Published: 5/16/2009 - Complete
There's only one way by withtheemoglasses reviews
Tobey female has always seen Sid as her brother. Until he walks in on her changing. Then she can't help but notice that he is a boy. At the same time Sid is starting to realize that his buddy, Tobey, is in fact female. Shipping: Sibey and Barbue.
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 6 - Words: 3,086 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 5/23/2009 - Published: 4/30/2009
Broken Bones and A Little Bit of Olive Juice SIBEY by TeddyLover777 reviews
SidxTobey
Three Delivery - Rated: K - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 777 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 2 - Published: 3/5/2009 - Complete
A Dark Past by Mariko6 reviews
Three Delivery. The creators said that Tobey had a dark past... but there's no story... here's my version s . Revised. Every chapter is a new version! Version 2.0 is up! T, just in case.
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Family - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,862 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 11/19/2008 - Published: 11/17/2008
Life Without by Lionna Mouri reviews
After series, yoai implications, mainly Duo-focused. Fairly angsty.
Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,984 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 11/9/2000
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One of my cookies is missing reviews
Wrongly accused of stealing one of Nana's experimental cookies, Tobey sulks in his room and missed out on an encounter with what they think is a real werewolf. Later he goes looking for it himself, and is 'turned'. Will Nana and the others figure out how to save Tobey in time to keep him from hurting anyone?
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Horror - Chapters: 3 - Words: 10,940 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 12/16/2012 - Published: 11/2/2012
Three Delivery I Wait reviews
This is a re write in third person of 'I Wait' already posted. And the story has been continued. The story starts immediately after a fight, where, after Tobey had been missing for days, Kong Li . . .
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,972 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 3 - Published: 3/19/2012
The End reviews
written for the Three Delivery Club Contest on DA, the theme is 'the End.'
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 3 - Words: 11,809 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 6/19/2011 - Published: 5/15/2011 - Complete
Tobey's Dark Past reviews
putting this story back online by special request :D angst, violence, my usual warnings
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,214 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 3 - Published: 5/16/2011 - Complete
Three Delivery Cause and Effect reviews
After a really disgusting altercation with Zoey at school, Sue is sick. Sid and Tobey go missing, Nana is who knows where and its up to Sue to save them, no matter what the risks are to her. Requested by Wolfiestar
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 5 - Words: 29,259 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 5 - Updated: 7/31/2010 - Published: 5/5/2010
Human reviews
Angst, disturbing themes, violence.
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 3 - Words: 19,311 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 5/5/2010 - Published: 4/23/2010 - Complete
Ben 10 AF Gone Too Far reviews
How about you do one about Ben being ill and Julie taking care of him until he gets kidnapped, and its up to Julie to find him? Okay, I'll do my best. XD Very mild language violence. Attempted rape, Julie runs into bad trouble too!
Ben 10 - Rated: T - English - Horror/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 3 - Words: 18,858 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 35 - Follows: 8 - Published: 4/8/2010 - Ben T., Julie Y. - Complete
Ben 10 No Grandpa! Don't Eat Those Ants! reviews
Ben 10 universe, when Ben and Gwen were just ten years old. Dr Animo and 11 yr old Kevin were both after Ben and showed up at the same time. Gwen tried to help during the fight, but she and Kevin disappeared. continued . . .
Ben 10 - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,653 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 1 - Published: 3/11/2010 - Ben T., Gwen T. - Complete
Ben 10 AF I Dream of Witches with Long Red Hair reviews
Gwevin and Benlie, action/adventure a little romance. Mild language.
Ben 10 - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 7 - Words: 48,680 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 3/2/2010 - Published: 2/9/2010 - Gwen T., Kevin - Complete
Chinatown Vampires reviews
Request fic from Sanura, sort of I kinda ran away with it. With Sanura's OC 'San'. TobeyxSan, mild language, violence.
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 16,429 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 2/13/2010 - Published: 2/9/2010 - Complete
Green with Jealousy reviews
Sibey yaoi - action adventure violence boyxboy romance. Barnue Ideas for this fic contributed by: loveless kittykat Pandalover Lycan-wolf96 forever tiki Sadie from DA
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 16 - Words: 103,199 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 1/9/2010 - Published: 10/10/2009 - Complete
Sue's Bad Boy reviews
Kong Li finds a recipe that creates portals at random that shrink and transport whatever is caught in them. He unknowingly traps Sue and Tobey. Sid is worried that they were killed, and is captured by Kong Li. Tobue romance and adventure.
Three Delivery - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 14 - Words: 63,611 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 10/4/2009 - Published: 8/23/2009 - Complete
Will Plays Too Real reviews
Sid's friend, Will has joined a 'bad crowd' and gets Sid to join in too. Sid puts himself and his family in danger trying to save Will. Violence, mild language, scary situations, attempted sexual assault. No shippings.
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Suspense - Chapters: 6 - Words: 35,553 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 6 - Updated: 9/15/2009 - Published: 9/7/2009 - Complete
Rabbit Stew reviews
Started 'accidentally' on Three Delivery Message Board, under the Kong Li Topic, edited and posted as a strange little story. I am crystalquirt and Sid62! Tobue, Adventure, Romance, sap and fluff -
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,752 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 4 - Published: 8/10/2009 - Complete
Three Delivery Don't Tell Nana reviews
Sibey / Yaoi - BoyxBoy - Action, angst, horror, romance, mild sexual and violent content, non consensual touching. Takes place after Origins
Three Delivery - Rated: M - English - Angst/Adventure - Chapters: 5 - Words: 24,545 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 19 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 8/4/2009 - Published: 7/30/2009 - Complete
Kong Li Christmas: A Sue Story reviews
Tobue. Kong Li messes up Christmas by trying to take Sue out of the celebration for good. Scary situations, violence, mild language. Action, Romance, Angst, oh yeah.
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 22 - Words: 51,401 - Reviews: 53 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 7/23/2009 - Published: 6/30/2009 - Complete
Ben 10 AFTER Homecoming Sequel reviews
Forever Knights' Scientist Dr. Joseph Chadwick decides to use Gwen and Kevin to get to Ben. Violence, gore - descriptive surgery, non-consensual sexual situations, mild language. Gwenvin and Benlie
Ben 10 - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 13 - Words: 30,534 - Reviews: 39 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 7/3/2009 - Published: 5/28/2009 - Ben T., Kevin - Complete
Ben 10 AF Mermaid reviews
Benvin/Yaoi: Ben and Kevin plan a peaceful day together on the lake. One shot story with Angst, Violence, Blood and Gore, Death, Yaoi/Boy Love, sexual content, mild language. Um . . . Yeah.
Ben 10 - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,032 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 24 - Follows: 4 - Published: 6/22/2009 - Kevin, Ben T. - Complete
Tobey Li reviews
Sibey/Yaoi, angst and possible Fear Factor spoilers. Violence, gore, lots of blood – its grosser than usual, if u are sensitive – do not read. If you read it anyway and get mad, please flame me! At least it is a comment of some kind.
Three Delivery - Rated: M - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16,860 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 2 - Published: 6/20/2009 - Complete
Ben 10 AF Torrence: a request fic reviews
Ghostfreakfan's story request by Crystalquirt, with a special guest appearance made by Ghostfreakfan’s character Tonks. Thinking she is in love with Albedo, Tonks broke him out of prison and brought him to earth to try again to get Ben's Omnitrix.
Ben 10 - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,745 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 6/8/2009 - Complete
Three Delivery The Return reviews
Description - Kong Li thinks he has found a way to infiltrate Wu's Garden and finally get the cookbook. Warnings - mild language, violence, implied nudity.
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Adventure - Chapters: 5 - Words: 16,956 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 5/25/2009 - Published: 5/19/2009 - Complete
Three Delivery Sinister Balls of Fire reviews
Tobey, caught in an innocent situation that looks real bad, is arrested by police for breaking and entering. Because of his 'dark' past, a security guard who blames Tobey for getting kicked off the police force years earlier, causes more trouble . . .
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Angst/Adventure - Chapters: 9 - Words: 44,303 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 4/18/2009 - Published: 4/7/2009 - Complete
Three Delivery New Recruits reviews
In this version, two girls, twin sisters are recruited by Kong Li to catch Tobey and Sid off guard and get rid of them so he can get to Nana and Sue and finally get the cookbook. I think I got everything but the kitchen sink in this! :D
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 16,819 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 7 - Published: 4/4/2009 - Complete
Three Delivery Another Dimension reviews
Finding clues of a recipe being hidden nearby send the kids to the local used bookstore, where they unexpectedly encounter Kong Li. They are sent to a magical dimension where they experience their worse fears. Written before 'Fear Factor' aired.
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Angst - Chapters: 6 - Words: 34,813 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 4/2/2009 - Published: 3/22/2009 - Complete
Three Delivery Aluminum Shine reviews
Songfic – nothing weird to report or warn you of – except maybe Tobey singing.
Three Delivery - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 677 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/15/2009 - Complete
Ben 10 Alien Force Homecoming reviews
Violence and angst. Ben, Gwen, Kevin and Julie went to California to investigate alien tech believed to have been used in a series of crimes, and responsible for a string of unexplained explosions. Of course a little romance – but really – it’s not about
Ben 10 - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 13 - Words: 75,199 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 27 - Follows: 12 - Updated: 2/28/2009 - Published: 1/9/2009 - Complete
Ben 10 I Want my Mummy reviews
Ben, Gwen and Grandpa Max visit a farm where Grandpa Max’s old friend has been having trouble with missing livestock. Grandpa Max is accused of child abuse. Very Loosely based on Under Wraps. A little violence, injury and angst.
Ben 10 - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,639 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 1 - Published: 1/29/2009 - Complete
Three Delivery When Friends Attack reviews
Three Delivery Fan Fiction. What might have happened if Nana had not shown up in time to help them in the battle with Tobey-Nian? And the story continues, Kong Li attacks with the particularly dangerous Purple Venom of Plum sauce recipe.
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Angst/Supernatural - Chapters: 7 - Words: 44,189 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 1/25/2009 - Published: 11/23/2008 - Complete
Ben 10 Alien Force Sterilization reviews
my second Ben 10 Alien Force Fic - the Highbreed Sterilization ship comes for their greatest threats, Ben, Gwen and Kevin. 1/09 edited to fix a couple of spelling errors and a fuzzy place in a description of the action. 2nd ch. has romance by request.
Ben 10 - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 2 - Words: 8,756 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 1/10/2009 - Published: 12/6/2008 - Ben T. - Complete
Three Delivery: Revenge of TobeyRabbit reviews
Tobey witnesses horrible animal cruelty on his way back from a delivery and gets involved. He is deeply affected by what he sees and can’t rest until those responsible are caught. Contains violence, violence against animals and angst.
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Horror/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,164 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 4 - Published: 1/8/2009 - Complete
Three Delivery Keeping It Real reviews
The Teens run into gang members. No pairings/shippings or sexual content warnings. Lots of angst and terror, injuries all around. Revised for errors, slight changes Feb 2010
Three Delivery - Rated: M - English - Suspense/Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 23,046 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 1/1/2009 - Published: 11/24/2008 - Complete
Three Delivery Facing Nana's Wrath reviews
There is nothing fiercer than a parent protecting their young. Sid disappears after he his hit by a drunk driver.
Three Delivery - Rated: T - English - Crime/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,907 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 7 - Published: 12/15/2008 - Complete
Ben 10 AF Alien X Rewrite reviews
Ben 10 Alien Force is not mine, but i love it - this is something to do while we wait for the next episode. I think the Alien X episode needed a lot more angst. I have edited it some and fixed the problem I had with verb tenses since I first uploaded it.
Ben 10 - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,100 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 3 - Published: 12/3/2008 - Ben T. - Complete