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Joined 11-22-08, id: 1748656, Profile Updated: 06-11-10
Author has written 2 stories for My Little Pony.

Gears of War: The Beginning Of The End.

Update 6-11-2010

Man, it HAS been a while. I guess I'll start with why I have not posted any new chapters for...*gasp* more than a year. Combinations of writer's block, real life happenings, and some personal stuff. Some have left reviews that my story doesn't follow Gears of War cannon; this is true. While I was working on this FanFic, I was also reading Gears of War: Aspho Fields. The writer's block ensued when I realized my interpretation of Dom, and his family, did not go with what I was writing. With the other main character, the Master Chief, I was not sure how to introduce him to the Gears. Just a great many factors that prevented me from pursuing this fanfic.

However, reading some recent reviews makes me want to continue. But I want to avoid the same problems. I'm not just going to continue this story, I'm going to edit and re-vamp the existing chapters, because now I can barely read my own story with all the grammar and spelling I missed. It will be a while yet, but I will continue Gears of War: The Beginning Of The End.

Motto: Like a good story, I do.

Name: Steve

Age: 18

Location: Arizona, U.S.

Hobbies: Sci-Fi Game Novels (reading. Omg what a concept...), Playing games, Watchin' movies, reading/writing FanFiction (Durh).

Games I Play (Xbox 360): Halo 3 (rarely), Call of Duty 4, Call of Duty: World At War (not really, I rented the game and I hate it), Left 4 Dead, Dead Space, Saints Row 2, Gears of War, Gears of War 2, Mass Effect, Lost Odyssey, Quake 4 (rarely), Chromehounds (rarely), Bioshock, Timeshift (rarely), and The Elder Scrolls IV: Oblivion.

Games I Play (Xbox Originals): Halo 1 & 2 (is that really surprising since Halo 3 is up there?), Star Wars Battlefront 1 & 2 (best Star Wars games in my own opinion), Call of Duty 2: Big Red One (the best Call of Duty, other than CoD 4, in my opinion)

Games I Play (PC): Diablo 2: Lord of Destruction (not anymore, I've quit for the last time! ).

Books I've Read: Diablo Sin War Trilogy, Diablo: Legacy of Blood, Diablo: The Black Road, Diablo: Kingdom of Shadow, every Halo book (even the HGN), Warcraft, War of the Ancients Book 1: The Well of Eternity, Mass Effect: Revelation, Starcraft Ghost: Nova, Starcraft: Liberty's Crusade, and the Alex Rider series.

I tend to look harshly at FanFiction. Why? Because things like grammar bug me. No, I'm not OCD, but I cannot focus on a story if every other freakin' word is spelled wrong or if the story has been poorly typed. If I see something wrong, I'll leave a review with criticism. No it isn't to be a jerk, but I'm giving constructive criticism so you can make your own story better. And so my eyes won't bleed when I read it...

If you see something wrong with one of my stories, give me advice on what you don't like and I'll (maybe) fix it. It all depends on what that something is. If it's, say, a spelling error a paragraph that doesn't fit right, then OK i'll fix that. But if you don't like the story then I'll likely say "Well, go read something else or write your own".

I leave my Anonymous comments on but if all you say is "your story sucks" or something stupid and shallow like that, then you will be ignored. The same goes for "your story rocks". Tell me what you liked or didn't like. I hate when people say stuff like that and give no reason, explanation, or constructive criticism.

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