Author has written 1 story for Fullmetal Alchemist.
Home: Halifax, Nova Scotia
Personality: Serious, calm, blunt, and introspective
I spend most of my time walking, reading, writing, doing yoga, playing video games, and singing. My favourite music is that from video games and anime. I love learning about languages, religion, and personality and my greatest weakness is cats. I work as a legal assistant at a big law firm. I remain ignorant of world events and popular trivia, instead drawn to random and rare knowledge that most people couldn't care less about. I show care through action, not words. I mean what I say and say what I mean. Some people call me sick because I enjoy taking exams, love cleaning, and hold strongly to asceticism.
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I prefer stories that are realistic and fit in with the original canon. If I can believe it, I usually like it. I only Fave stories that I am absolutely positive I want to read again. I don't Fave authors because I think a story's worth is independent of who writes it. I try to leave reviews for every story I read without reading other reviews beforehand. If you would like to hear my opinion on your own work, just send me a message and I'll try to oblige. I like giving feedback when people ask my opinion specifically.
May 19, 2015 - Well, I took on my new position in mid-April and things have been hectic. :( But yay, new chapter! I am traveling to Toronto for two days, so if I don't reply to your review/PM right away, that's why.
Phylactery also got its first pieces of fanart! How cool is that? Be sure to give props to Koliri/Koklico if you have a Deviantart account:
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For myself - A list of fandoms I have an interest in:
Manga/Anime: Inuyasha, The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya, Lucky Star, Digimon (seasons 1, 2, and 3), Avatar: The Last Airbender/Legend of Korra, Fullmetal Alchemist, Naruto, Attack on Titan.
Games: Final Fantasy 6/7/8/9, Fire Emblem, Chrono Trigger/Cross, Golden Sun, Pokemon.
Books: Animorphs, Redwall, The Wheel of Time, Dragonlance, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy.
Movies: X-Men, District 9, How to Train Your Dragon, Monsters Inc., Bolt.
TV: The Big Bang Theory, 3rd Rock from the Sun.
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