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Joined 01-11-09, id: 1800919, Profile Updated: 04-24-09

Hello everyone!
I'm MortalTwiligt23, and I'm an active reader of fanfiction.


My favorite series is the Twilight series, so naturally I read a ton of Twilight fanfic. Other series that I love reading are the Harry Potter series, The Mortal Instruments, The House of Night Novels, Vampire Academy, The Blue Blood series, the Wake trilogy, The Vampire Diaries, and the Evernight series. I read a lot of fanfiction having to do with all these series. I love reviewing peoples stories. I try to give them new ideas, some helpful suggestions, or tell them what my overall oppinion of the chapter is.


I might write some fanfiction in the future. I have a few ideas for some Twilight ones so I'll propably end up creating a few stories, and if the reviews for them are good then I'll continue writting.

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An Introduction to Swirl and Daisy by m81170 reviews
A first kiss, a first dance, a first curse word shared between best friends. This is the tale of a boring, young geek and the social pariah who thought the world of him. A tale of growing up. A tale of a Non-Romantic Romance.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 39 - Words: 212,915 - Reviews: 14751 - Favs: 7,390 - Follows: 7,024 - Updated: 1/4 - Published: 1/4/2010 - Bella, Edward - Complete
Wanting The Impossible by Lzielkalollypop reviews
Set after Edward leaves in New Moon. Bella is contantly on the run and has her own guardian angel looking out for her. But things change when she comes face to face with her angel for the first time in years.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 23 - Words: 49,147 - Reviews: 283 - Favs: 249 - Follows: 334 - Updated: 6/26/2013 - Published: 9/4/2010 - Bella, Jasper
Something Gone Wrong by me38242 reviews
Max and Fang are half-brother and sister who have never met before, until they're suddenly thrust into the same household together. What happens when they're caught in a forbidden romance? Taboo. AU.
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Family/Romance - Chapters: 35 - Words: 127,607 - Reviews: 1313 - Favs: 324 - Follows: 247 - Updated: 11/23/2012 - Published: 6/27/2009 - Max, Fang - Complete
To The Void, May I Surrender by Samurai Smee reviews
Edward x Jasper. A lonely and somewhat demented Edward longs for Jasper to belong solely to him. A twist of fate brings the two together, and now Edward will do anything to keep his fairytale from ending.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 19 - Words: 37,943 - Reviews: 258 - Favs: 85 - Follows: 110 - Updated: 3/5/2012 - Published: 7/7/2011 - Edward, Jasper
Lessons Unexpected by Alexis.Danaan reviews
Bella's life has been vampire free for 4 years and shes content with that. That is, until a vampire walks calmly back into her life. Can Bella accept the lessons life is trying to teach her? Or is her life to be dictated by her past?
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 23 - Words: 81,877 - Reviews: 1863 - Favs: 1,571 - Follows: 796 - Updated: 9/21/2011 - Published: 8/4/2010 - Bella, Jasper - Complete
Romance Is Dead by Kat097 reviews
Bella had a feeling that she was going to die young. She just didn't expect to be a ghost afterwards but these things happen. So do vampires, who can not only see you but take an interest in your afterlife. "You're dead." "So are you. What's your point?"
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 28 - Words: 116,220 - Reviews: 1469 - Favs: 1,618 - Follows: 772 - Updated: 8/24/2011 - Published: 12/18/2009 - Bella, Edward - Complete
Stay by avioleta reviews
3rd place in the Slash/Backslash 2.0 Contest. A literature student. A biology professor. A few works of fiction. And a lot of black tea. 'We should have sex.' 'What on Earth for' Edward rolled his eyes. 'Should I draw you a chart' E/C SLASH, AH
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 6 - Words: 24,292 - Reviews: 385 - Favs: 477 - Follows: 214 - Updated: 7/18/2011 - Published: 7/25/2010 - Edward, Carlisle - Complete
Bella Hale by JulesSC reviews
Six year old Isabella Swan was orphaned after a car crash took her parents away, and Edward and the Cullens find her. Alice decides to keep her, and Edward tries to protect her. Family drama and hilarity ensues as Bella grows up and ExB happens.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Family/Humor - Chapters: 51 - Words: 386,995 - Reviews: 13365 - Favs: 8,090 - Follows: 6,018 - Updated: 7/8/2011 - Published: 11/21/2008 - Edward, Bella
Maximum Ride: Feel the Music by SarahBelle96 reviews
I hummed the tune and smiled as the calm feeling flowed through me. I slowly started to play my guitar. The melody sounded just about right. I took a deep breath and began to sing. . . SongFic! All human! Max's life as a human! FAX! Plz R&R! Thanks!
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 58 - Words: 103,680 - Reviews: 1549 - Favs: 361 - Follows: 218 - Updated: 5/22/2011 - Published: 9/28/2009 - Max, Fang - Complete
Long Way Down by forthelongestday reviews
When Edward confesses his motivation for leaving Bella she realizes she cannot offer him a second chance. Her insistence for closure is met with the realization that one member of the family has no intentions of leaving her unprotected again. [AU]
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 26 - Words: 165,580 - Reviews: 2466 - Favs: 2,785 - Follows: 1,312 - Updated: 1/10/2011 - Published: 8/15/2010 - [Bella, Jasper] - Complete
One February Friday by LyricalKris reviews
Friday night at a little bar where anything goes. You never know who's going to walk through the door to make life just a little more interesting. Slashy threesome lemons.Edward/Jasper/Peter, J/P, J/E.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 16 - Words: 80,736 - Reviews: 654 - Favs: 342 - Follows: 186 - Updated: 9/24/2010 - Published: 4/20/2010 - Jasper, Peter - Complete
Taking Over Me by JulesSC reviews
When Edward left Bella in New Moon, she never recovered. Saying her final goodbyes to the world, she hopes to get some peace. But something goes wrong and she ends up as a ghost. 75 years later, Edward and the Cullens comes back and finds her ghost. ExB.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 4 - Words: 10,842 - Reviews: 501 - Favs: 418 - Follows: 476 - Updated: 9/23/2010 - Published: 12/17/2008 - Edward, Bella
Save Me by JulesSC reviews
Bella and the Cullens bond over a tragedy-Edward copes with comforting Bella and being there for her. Fluff for EdwardxBella, and fluff for BellaxCullens, but also an angsty edge to it. Romance, family, angst, and slight humor. M for sensitive subject.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 6 - Words: 14,839 - Reviews: 240 - Favs: 233 - Follows: 271 - Updated: 9/23/2010 - Published: 11/20/2008 - Bella, Edward
The Last Mile by catonspeed reviews
8yrs from NM bday party aftermath: It's the final nail in the coffin & Bella is running south after bad news. Where has she been? Meeting the last person she expected to find on the desert roads of Texas, is her life ending or just beginning? Jasper/Bella
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Humor/Angst - Chapters: 20 - Words: 65,729 - Reviews: 1583 - Favs: 1,201 - Follows: 1,278 - Updated: 9/14/2010 - Published: 10/3/2009 - Bella, Jasper
Lust 101 by Chewie4370 reviews
How will Edward handle his sexy new history teacher? Slash-EdwardxJasper
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,101 - Reviews: 30 - Favs: 82 - Follows: 23 - Published: 9/11/2010 - Edward, Jasper - Complete
The Blessing and the Curse by The Black Arrow reviews
By pretending she is falling for Edward, Bella is fulfilling Esme's dying wish. But sexy, possessive Edward can read her mind. Will she ever get into his? Can Bella forget the pain of her teenage years, and can she resist his relentless seduction? AH.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 22 - Words: 140,448 - Reviews: 14241 - Favs: 15,243 - Follows: 8,282 - Updated: 9/10/2010 - Published: 5/31/2009 - Bella, Edward - Complete
A Litany at Dusk by duskwatcher2153 reviews
Edward's been a solitary vampire, hunting on the edges of society. He rejoins his family in Forks, ready to abstain and runs across a young woman praying. A choice must be made between one's heart, one's desires and one's soul. Darkward ExB AU
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 34 - Words: 134,694 - Reviews: 5326 - Favs: 2,840 - Follows: 1,388 - Updated: 8/21/2010 - Published: 8/18/2009 - Edward, Bella - Complete
Swing Swing by finalfantasygirl16 reviews
Edward Cullen was a rebel, bad boy, skater, excellent student and was cheated on by his girlfriend. When Edward breaks up with her can a shy girl mend his heart back together again? Can they be together or will his Ex try and break them apart? AAR songs.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 34 - Words: 92,741 - Reviews: 730 - Favs: 439 - Follows: 376 - Updated: 8/17/2010 - Published: 10/11/2008 - Edward, Bella
Falling Petals by Deany-Bob101 reviews
Jacob and Renesmee are best friends, and always have been. What happens when something comes and rips them apart? WIll their friendship survive? All Rensemee's P.O.V, with some romance chapters between Jake and Nessie. I don't do non-canon relationships.
Twilight - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 27 - Words: 48,916 - Reviews: 115 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 25 - Updated: 7/31/2010 - Published: 11/21/2009 - Renesmee C./Nessie, Jacob
The Hard Way To Learn A Lesson by Stephaniiie reviews
AU/AH Bad boy Edward needs to be taught a lesson. So his teachers come up with a plan- ‘marry’ him to the best behaved girl in school! How will his ego survive spending ‘eternity’ with Bella Swan! Little OOC. NOW COMPLETE!
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 70 - Words: 279,341 - Reviews: 15829 - Favs: 7,025 - Follows: 3,231 - Updated: 7/13/2010 - Published: 6/23/2009 - Edward, Bella - Complete
Seducing Ms Swan by DQRC reviews
AU Post-NM. Teacher!Bella, Student!Edward; a struggle of wills, an attempt at seduction, a dark secret, a dash of UST, a gallon of attitude, antagonistic motorcycling, a hell of a lot of angst and one unforgettable scene in a snow storm.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 22 - Words: 132,610 - Reviews: 5860 - Favs: 6,122 - Follows: 4,841 - Updated: 7/12/2010 - Published: 7/26/2008 - Edward, Bella - Complete
Branded by Missus Lovett reviews
First Installment. Something happened. Rape. Torture. Murder. Resurrection. Bella's left scarred after a traumatic event in her life before moving to Forks. Now, Edward seems to want to help her. But does she want to be helped? She's been branded.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 12 - Words: 38,430 - Reviews: 80 - Favs: 92 - Follows: 35 - Updated: 6/27/2010 - Published: 3/22/2008 - Complete
When Darkness Turns to Light by Janna Banana reviews
4 years after Edward left Bella in the forest; Bella is finally moving forward, but it is someone from her past that helps her truly heal and obtain the future she was always meant to have. Bella and Jasper Fanfic.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 52 - Words: 172,600 - Reviews: 3691 - Favs: 3,853 - Follows: 1,299 - Updated: 6/27/2010 - Published: 5/21/2008 - Bella, Jasper - Complete
Unwanted Love by idkifurcrazy reviews
Who would you choose if you were torn between your imprint, the one you might truly love, and the one you used to love with all your heart? What if your enemies became your best friends? The small town of Forks- changed forever. Told in E&J POV.....
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 14 - Words: 43,265 - Reviews: 86 - Favs: 47 - Follows: 43 - Updated: 6/25/2010 - Published: 11/29/2009 - Jacob, Edward
Seven Minutes in Heaven by tuesdaymidnight reviews
High school senior Edward just found out that his long-standing crush on classmate Jasper is mutual, but he is mortified that their first kiss may occur inside a closet. Little does he know what that one kiss will ignite. AU, AH, OOC. E/J Slash. Rated M.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 18 - Words: 112,206 - Reviews: 844 - Favs: 640 - Follows: 346 - Updated: 5/30/2010 - Published: 8/27/2009 - Edward, Jasper - Complete
Mr Cullen I Want to Get With You by kaitzilla reviews
Forks High senior Bella Swan has just made the most extremely bold decision of her life: to seduce her sexy history teacher one month before graduation. rated M for a reason.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 20,036 - Reviews: 59 - Favs: 60 - Follows: 71 - Updated: 5/16/2010 - Published: 1/23/2010 - Bella, Edward
Controlled Burn by staceygirl aka jackbauer reviews
Summary: Bella has always joked about marrying Alice’s much younger brother so she could be a part of her best friend’s family, but now he’s all grown up and hot. Bella tries to control the burn for him, but it quickly becomes a raging fire. ExB AH
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 30 - Words: 124,722 - Reviews: 11331 - Favs: 4,614 - Follows: 2,203 - Updated: 2/25/2010 - Published: 9/13/2009 - Complete
Eternal Sunshine by sunshine-faery reviews
What if Bella had made the healthy choice and never jumped off the cliff on that fateful day...
Twilight - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 34 - Words: 64,461 - Reviews: 695 - Favs: 281 - Follows: 188 - Updated: 2/1/2010 - Published: 6/24/2009 - Bella, Jacob - Complete
Delivered by firstsong1 reviews
On Hold Due to Injuries/RL Issues. Will be finished ASAP. Bella finds a new path to the Cullens, and to Jasper. Will their involvement lead to tragedy or will they end up saving each other? Bella/Jasper with the rest of the Cullens joining later on.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 42 - Words: 257,745 - Reviews: 1490 - Favs: 692 - Follows: 604 - Updated: 1/1/2010 - Published: 3/12/2009 - Jasper, Bella
That One Day by Harryfan94 reviews
Jacob and Nessie are the best of friends. But what happens when Jacob gets jealous of a crush. read and comment. story much better than summary. HIATUS UNTIL JULY
Twilight - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 5 - Words: 991 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 12/7/2009 - Published: 7/14/2009 - Jacob, Renesmee C./Nessie
Lay Your Hands by OCDJen reviews
The sequel to Healing Heart. This is set 5 years later, life has settled into a nice routine for the boys, they have plans for the future. What will happen when life, fate and heart ache get in the way? Rated M, AH,E&J. please read and review.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 25 - Words: 124,982 - Reviews: 771 - Favs: 253 - Follows: 120 - Updated: 12/7/2009 - Published: 11/8/2009 - Edward, Jasper - Complete
Guarding It All by Cherette reviews
Five years after Edward left, Bella finds herself in the hands of the Volturi. The thing is, she is still human. When the Cullens visit Volterra, how will they react to finding Bella working for the Volturi? Will she accept them back into her life? ExB
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 44 - Words: 177,960 - Reviews: 2849 - Favs: 1,210 - Follows: 911 - Updated: 11/24/2009 - Published: 10/21/2008 - Bella, Edward
Healing Heart by OCDJen reviews
Jasper, confidant and friendly but a creature of habit. Edward, depressed and withdrawn. Can Jasper get close enough to Edward to heal his heart? Or will it push him deeper in to his pit of hell? Rated M, AH and lemons later. Please R&R
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 31 - Words: 156,802 - Reviews: 794 - Favs: 461 - Follows: 181 - Updated: 11/6/2009 - Published: 10/4/2009 - Edward, Jasper - Complete
Anybody There by Kat097 reviews
AU AH. “I’m not a damsel in distress and I sure as hell didn’t put out a flyer for a white knight." Sometimes the damsel wants to do things her own damn way, despite her feelings for the man who wants to save her. B/E. Complete with outtakes
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 40 - Words: 163,342 - Reviews: 705 - Favs: 668 - Follows: 232 - Updated: 10/12/2009 - Published: 8/4/2009 - Bella, Edward - Complete
Call Me by ariviand reviews
A detailing of many 'missing scenes' between Alec and Magnus, starting with the first time they meet in Ch. 12 of *City of Bones* and ending with the last chapter of City of Glass. Update: Ch. 54 is up. Epilogue and thanks to the readers.
Mortal Instruments - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 54 - Words: 77,262 - Reviews: 807 - Favs: 786 - Follows: 245 - Updated: 10/3/2009 - Published: 8/31/2009 - Alec L., Magnus B.
Maximum Ride: Life of a Teenage Mutant Bird Kid by SarahBelle96 reviews
I faintly heard someone yell my name and then more yelling, but I was too far gone to reply. Then I felt my body collide into the ground. Crap. I’m so dead. Literally... FAX! Basicaly Max keeps getting the short end of the stick! Story is finished!
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 26 - Words: 37,918 - Reviews: 317 - Favs: 129 - Follows: 61 - Updated: 10/3/2009 - Published: 6/22/2009 - Max, Fang - Complete
Midnight Rain by ariviand reviews
Just a midnight idea I'm running with. Alec walks through heavy rain to visit Magnus. Post City of Glass.
Mortal Instruments - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,029 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 47 - Follows: 18 - Published: 9/16/2009 - Alec L., Magnus B.
Broken by Divepup reviews
I stood frozen to the spot, my eyes widened in shock and, within moments, pain. I was standing on a cliff about fifteen feet up, staring at my previous family. I felt a sharp pain as my eyes wandered over each shocked face. Esmé, Carlisle, Emmett, Jasper,
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 7 - Words: 12,536 - Reviews: 117 - Favs: 107 - Follows: 119 - Updated: 8/22/2009 - Published: 12/16/2008 - Bella, Edward
Blackout by MandyLeigh87 reviews
All human, Edward and Bella POV. Edward and Bella live in two different worlds, even though they live next to each other. Things get complicated when Edward, the leather jacket wearing cigarette smoking rebel falls for the girl next door.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 36 - Words: 99,410 - Reviews: 1449 - Favs: 1,941 - Follows: 688 - Updated: 7/26/2009 - Published: 2/19/2009 - Bella, Edward - Complete
B l i n d by oh.kd reviews
Do you miss her? You do cry her name at night. Remember when she said she was going to stay forever? Maybe it was you. You scared her off with your fancy words and promises. Too late now, she's forgotten all about you.
Mortal Instruments - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 24 - Words: 32,692 - Reviews: 270 - Favs: 84 - Follows: 87 - Updated: 6/7/2009 - Published: 12/8/2008
Mortal Fools! by honeyshoshana reviews
Tired of depressing angst/romance fics that seem like the standard for MI? It's the one and only parody of CoB! Contains bizarre references, snarkiness, insults, gag jokes, Edward Cullen, and randomness, besides the mockable Real Plot. Script format
Mortal Instruments - Rated: T - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 6 - Words: 8,962 - Reviews: 143 - Favs: 49 - Follows: 44 - Updated: 4/2/2009 - Published: 1/9/2009
Meant to Live by Musings of a Shaken Mind reviews
Hope is a strange emotion. It can both bolster and destroy. It can clear the way, or block our path. It is a fickle thing, and it can be dangerous; building us up and then knocking us down. JPOV. JxC. OneShot.
Mortal Instruments - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 452 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 1 - Published: 1/11/2009 - Complete
Take by Alaylia reviews
Part 4 of "Need". Jary and Clace experiment with the rune that broke down boundaries.
Mortal Instruments - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,966 - Reviews: 45 - Favs: 156 - Follows: 23 - Published: 1/7/2009 - Complete
The Secrets of Slumber by PenInfatuation reviews
What might've happened if Jace really had stayed with Luke and Clary during COA. HIATUS
Mortal Instruments - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 3 - Words: 12,892 - Reviews: 104 - Favs: 102 - Follows: 108 - Updated: 12/13/2008 - Published: 8/19/2008
Deceptions and Seductions by gaymeninthetrenches reviews
Story begins after the cookie for City of Glass where Jace dares Alec to kiss him. What will happen to their relationships, both with each other, and with those they care about, if Alec does? Multi-Chaptered Story. Jace/Alec, Jace/Clary, Alec/Magnus
Mortal Instruments - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 19,823 - Reviews: 118 - Favs: 164 - Follows: 134 - Updated: 11/21/2008 - Published: 10/30/2008 - Alec L., Jace W.
Untouched by gaymeninthetrenches reviews
Alec needs reprieve from the frustration of his life, and seeks it in the arms of a warlock. Alec/Magnus.
Mortal Instruments - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,224 - Reviews: 31 - Favs: 85 - Follows: 7 - Published: 11/5/2008 - Complete
Black Bullet by Aces17 reviews
AU. After the tragic death of her mother, Bella is forced to flee to Forks and relatives she never knew she had. Will Edward be able to tear down her walls? EXB
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 23 - Words: 52,604 - Reviews: 1194 - Favs: 764 - Follows: 342 - Updated: 10/28/2008 - Published: 7/13/2008 - Bella, Edward - Complete
My Best Friend, the Player by blackxout reviews
Bella Swan is used to seeing her best friend, Edward Masen hook up with a lot of girls. She never minds though. What if Edward starts having feelings for Bella? Will she fall head over heels too or will she just want to stay friends? Very OOC.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 12 - Words: 18,394 - Reviews: 1741 - Favs: 1,560 - Follows: 568 - Updated: 7/13/2008 - Published: 12/31/2007 - Edward, Bella - Complete
Scared by Lon-Dubh reviews
AU. What if Bella's past was different, and she had a secret she had never told anyone before? How would she handle moving to Forks and meeting Edward? Will she have a happily ever after ending, or will her troubled past come back to haunt her?
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 25 - Words: 55,208 - Reviews: 1396 - Favs: 677 - Follows: 280 - Updated: 8/17/2007 - Published: 6/2/2007 - Bella, Edward - Complete