Author has written 57 stories for Sonic the Hedgehog, Yu-Gi-Oh, Doctor Who, Teen Titans, Justice League, Young Justice, Flash, Teen Titans, Death Note, Team Fortress 2, Hetalia - Axis Powers, DC Universe Online, Thunderbirds, Portal, Looney Tunes, Loonatics Unleashed, Elder Scroll series, Supernatural, Avengers, Thor, Rise of the Guardians, and Hobbit.
Just looked at my stats for Spy Down...
Jeez, never realised it was so popular.
Thank you all.
Hey everyone, this is LilyRosetheDreamer here and I just wanted to share my good fortune at getting into university with you all!
Yep, I'm here now in Swansea and so far it's been fantastic. It's also the reason why my updates have been few and far between as far as 100 Missions, Spy Down, Endless Broken Melody and Impulse and Inertia have been concerned, so I apologise greatly for that. I am starting my course properly next week, but I will have some free time hopefully (inbetween all of my societies that I've joined. XD) to update my stories. Spy Down is the one I'm having the most difficulties with right now, so if you have any ideas for Chapter 16, the help would be appreciated.
So, thanks for being faithful followers as always and see you all soon!
Love Lily. x
Guide to Everything Fanfiction…Sonic the Hedgehog.
A guide to help authors with fanfiction.
As some of you may know, I am LilyRosetheDreamer, one of the longer-term residents of Fanfiction.net. I have observed and read over the five or more years (I think) that I have been here and I have even produced works of my own. I cannot help but notice the repetitions of mistakes that appear over every fanfic section and having made some of those mistakes in the past (hopefully learning from them as I go), I wish to extend my gained knowledge to others, especially the newest fanfic authors coming up and making themselves known. So here is a guide to help the Sonic the Hedgehog section with their troubles of writing, reviewing and others.
Firstly, the most important thing of all…the actual written piece.
I have seen some fanfics in my time here and as I can't go through them all, here are the subjects that crop up the most and must be treaded carefully through in order to appease your fanbase (or attract a fanbase). There are good fanfics and there can be bad fanfics and these tips should hopefully see you through:
The story line
This is your first major hurdle in writing a good story. A creative writer can have THOUSANDS of ideas streaming around in that noggin of theirs and you must exercise caution to avoid falling into a fanfic 'trap zone' as I like to call it.
To start with an example, let's go with a common storyline – the Sonic characters in high school. Now, I have read many of these and I have read many in disbelief (As a rule, I do NOT mention names to prevent many feelings being hurt and general bad will so don't expect them!). Many high school fics fall into the Pitfall of Emptiness – in other words, there is no reason whatsoever for these characters to be in high school at all. They are just thrust into 'Emerald High' etc with no clue how or why they are there in the first place. Confusing, no?
Now, not being a member or SEGA, I have no idea how the world of Mobius is governed. If it is anything like Earth, the Mobian children should go to school. Taking into account the Sonic characters, the schools they would or could go to could look a little like this:
Sonic (apparently aged 15 in Sonic Heroes) – high school.
Tails (apparently 8 in SH) – elementary school.
Knuckles (apparently 16 in SH) – high school.
Shadow (ULF/immortal) – possibly able to skip education.
Silver (age unknown although seems young) – uncertain.
…And I could go on forever. You see, it is extremely difficult to know where to place these characters in education. Because of this, authors tend to experiment and/or guess what situation these characters would be in. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't. The methods I would recommend are:
If you are REALLY desperate to put Sonic and co. in high school, then PLEASE use a good/valid reason for why they are there. It is no good saying that they randomly got a letter from the government or G.U.N saying that they must go to school as they have been breaking the law since birth or blackmailing them etc.
A good idea I saw put to use was undercover work set by G.U.N to Sonic and co. This is a creative reason for Sonic and friends to appear in school BUT this must be used wisely. For example, it's no use plonking Mephiles the Dark (he is counted as deceased) or Dr Eggman as the new suspicious principal as neither would be interested in teaching or trying to achieve world domination from a high school. May I recommend suspicious alien activity as a reason for Sonic and pals to go undercover as students? I can see them being willing to act upon this.
If you are going to put Eggman as a teacher or principal, try to think of an in-character reason as to why he would make such a move. I might have missed a valuable reason for him being there after all.
What the characters get up to.
Now that they are settled into whatever schools are appropriate (if it is just a high school, use the older characters as students – the remainder are either too old or too young.), it is time to put them in various activities or interactions with other students (who will have to be OCs but I will get to that later).
The important thing is for them to remain IN-CHARACTER. It would be unwise for Shadow to suddenly join every club in the school or Sonic to turn into an angsty loner. Shadow is the loner type (if he could be counted as a high school character) so he would not make 1.5 million friends by the end of the first day. Sonic is the cheerful, friendly type so he would try to make new friends and possibly join a club to really immerse himself in the role of student. Try to make their reactions to lessons (and lessons themselves) as believable as possible to save your self from embarrassing flames.
Moving away from high school, these characters act OOC in many romance stories as well. Which leads us to…
In any story, the pairings that happen are ultimately up to you. It would be wise however to consider these very carefully as not all of them are believable (some bordering lunacy) or are over-used.
Some pairings that can be used well are:
Shad/Amy (there is a hint of fondness for her by Shadow in SA2 that could be taken as the start of love).
Shad/Sally (this is canon in the Archie Comics at one point).
Vector/Vanilla (canon in Sonic X, though may be one-sided).
Tails/Cosmo (definitely canon in Sonic X).
Tail/Cream (the age difference is acceptable and could be used as a form of childhood romance).
Knuckles/Rouge (canon in the games and anime so you're in luck!).
Silver/Blaze (hints of attraction in Sonic the Hedgehog 2006).
These are but a few you could use. The ones I would stay away from (especially if you are a first timer) are:
Any yaoi e.g. Sonadow (there is NO canon attraction towards each other AT ALL, though I do not criticise others for using this pairing).
Any form of yuri e.g. Amy/Rouge (read above)
Any incest (most canon characters are not related).
Son/Amy (you'll see why).
Shad/Rouge (read above)
Knux/Tikal (read above)
The last three may have confused you.
Surely they are good for fanfiction?
As I hinted in the above list, Shadouge could be used as there may be slight canon attraction, but unfortunately the interaction between them can really be seen as friendly (borderline flirty in Rouge's case as she will flirt with any man) and that's it.
SonAmy is the same, only Sonic has bluntly said no to Amy's almost crazy advances (apart from Sonic Chronicles, where SonAmy fans can make Sonic fall for her charms). He does not want to be with her as he is free-spirited and that is that. Knuckles is related to Tikal so it could be frowned upon. Don't put these couples together just because everyone else is.
These are very fragile subjects to broach as OCs can easily go into Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu territory and go horribly wrong.
Let me give you a parodied example (after all, you may as well have fun reading this):
'Sunshine Daisy Unicorn Ruby was captivating in almost every way. She had no faults-she was perfect. Her sparkling sapphire eyes batted long, perfectly curved eyelashes and her smile melted even the coldest of hearts. Her wavy golden hair flowed like a beautiful waterfall and when it swayed as she stepped delicately down the sidewalk, it flung its beauty and softness everywhere, even finding its way to pedestrians on the other side of the street. Any other person would have been disgusting for flinging hair everywhere, but not Sunshine Daisy Unicorn Ruby! After all, she was like a choir of a thousand angels when she spoke, so everyone scrambled for just one lock of her hair, wondering where such an angel could have sprung from…' etc.
This random Mobian (who is the most common form of Sonic Mary-Sue; a hedgehog) who I just made up is a Mary-Sue in looks and personality through and through. If you want an OC which can be believed by your fanbase, give him/her realistic faults in looks and personality e.g. a small scar or quick to anger. If you want your OC to be loved by a canon character or another OC, make them attractive to that person…but let's not go overboard, shall we? Don't make them fall in love instantly. Believe it or not, that's called a fairytale. If you are going to have romance for a first time character, make another OC for that and have the first OC be friends/enemies with the canon characters for now to be on the safe side.
Once you have had experience with your OCs, you can maybe pan out what powers/abilities they have. No normal living thing can be good at absolutely everything – they have to have believable weaknesses. Even a character with fire powers can get stabbed if they are not careful or some unfortunate events occur.
For example, an OC can be good at Math but suck at English or average at every school subject (they could also be abysmal at everything as some people can't get to grips with any school subject at all in real life). They could have elemental powers (or choose which element etc) but they are not adept at using them and are in training. On the other hand, they can just be ordinary Mobians with no fighting skills whatsoever but can socially support others. Also, try not to give all of your OCs tragic/emo pasts as that's been over-done and after the third character whining about how their parents are dead, it gets tiring. Either way, they have to have weaknesses to balance them out, otherwise they catch the dreaded Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu disease.
This is an issue which isn't addressed too often. Some fanfics fall into the cliché crossover trap i.e. Sonic/Harry Potter. I doubt these crossovers will ever occur in the games and it is nice to imagine how they would occur. Unfortunately, after the third Sonic/Harry Potter fanfic, people can become very bored.
I would suggest Sonic/Death Note crossover as I have yet to see that and it could be very interesting. Shadow has the type of personality to be lured into Light's position…
Again, keep the characters IN-CHARACTER; although a believable out of character situation can get the go-ahead as every one of us can act OOC in life.
And now, last but not least in the fanfic section…
Grammar (Spelling, punctuation etc):
This is one of the biggest problems on Fanfiction. You can have an excellent storyline, but if the author uses text speak (OMG ikr?) or you cannot read what's in front of you, then you quickly lose interest. Unless you have a valid reason for the misappropriate spelling, like dyslexia (I applaud you for having the courage to keep writing if that's the case) or being unwell and tired, you have no excuse for letting down readers.
Here are some does and don'ts:
1. NEVER use text speak. I know from talking to other users on this site that this is considered a hated crime.
2. Always remember to put capital letters and full stops in your sentences. If you are unsure, ask for advice.
3. If you are uncertain of how to spell a word, either use a dictionary or ask someone to spell it for you.
4. Please use spell checker on Word or whatever programme you have.
5. Back this up with a dictionary.
6. If you are still in doubt, beg someone to beta read for you. They will be kind enough to spot any errors.
Now to move on.
Reviews are everything to an author. It helps them see their mistakes and can give you a happy glowing feeling inside when the reviews are good.
If you are going to review or read reviews, there are a few tips to consider:
1. First, try and actually review. A short review is just as good as a long, timed one. It is common courtesy to do so.
2. If you can help it, DON'T flame. Flames cause arguments and hurt people's feelings and I have seen some nasty reviews in my time.
3. If you really feel that the story is bad, please tell them so in a POLITE, friendly reply and back up your reasons why.
4. If you get flames, ignore them or send them a polite, friendly reply (if you have to) to thanks them for their time and that you will consider what they have said. They can't get mad at that, can they?
5. Constructive criticism is GOOD. Authors may not always appreciate it but they can't call you a bully.
6. Give at least one good point and one bad point.
7. Listen to constructive criticism and at least think about each point before deciding whether or not to ignore it.
These are just a few tips but these will help create a more stable environment therefore soothing nerves and easing tension.
Finally we look at forums. These are great for socialising with others and can be helpful for when you are stuck. Unfortunately, some are repetitive, boring or a place for bullies. Here are a few rules for forums:
1. When creating an RPG forum, it is similar to a fanfic; the characters must stay IN-CHARACTER and the story must be easy to follow and exciting.
2. Try to give them a structured path as some RPGs have gone sour trying to wait for others to catch up with what's going on.
3. Chat forums are not a place to start fights and pick on others. If you don't get along with someone, agree to disagree and leave it there.
4. Do not drag others into petty fights. It just makes them feel awkward and upset.
5. DO tell the moderator if you are being bullied as they can take the necessary steps to deal with it.
6. Trolls are relatively simple creatures and are easy to deal with. If a troll starts stomping all over your forum, ignore them. Believe it or not, these people thrive off annoyance and anger and bask in attention. Ignoring them means you are stripping them of their ammo.
7. If they persist, tell the moderator and let them get rid of them as they see fit.
And…there you have it. A guide to fanfiction and everything it has to offer. I did not have time to cover everything and this is where I am opening the field to all of you. If you wish to question me further or have any sensible suggestions I haven't thought of e.g. storyline advice – LET ME KNOW! I will answer in a message reply as best I can. As a bonus, the best suggestions will get posted in a bonus chapter for everyone to see next time!
So please…review and ask away.
By working together, we can create better fanfiction for everyone.
Thank you. X
Love LilyRosetheDreamer 2011.
I've redone my About Me bit because it was poorly done last time.
My name is LilyRosetheDreamer and I am a student at Swansea University studying for my Psychology degree, which is a lot of fun right now! Uni life is definitely not what I expected. XD
I have a cat named Rufus and my family consists of my Mum and Dad and little sister. I tend to be found in a library or running around outside in the countryside doing a variety of activities including Archery, Fencing, C.L.A.S.H (or Viking Society for short, as we learn how to fight with old weaponry like swords, spears etc), Sci-Fi, Anime and Manga, Christian Union and Hogwarts and Equestrian. So, as you can see, I've joined a lot of clubs. I also love my computer.
I live in Wales, where it likes to rain...a lot. If we collected all of our rain water, the Africans would never have to worry about drought again. But, there are beautiful, lush greem places because of it. Check out the Brecon Beacons and Snowdonia if you ever arrive here.
Random fact: I LOVE Christmas. You'd be scared to be around me at that time of year. :/
As you can tell, I have written for most of my favourite fandoms. I will be writing for more in the future, including Avatar The Last Airbender, Asterix and Harry Potter, so that's something for us all to look forward to. :D
My favourite fandoms are as follows:
Team Fortress 2
DC (so that includes things like Batmamn, Young Justice, Impulse, Justice League)
The Elder Scrolls series (Skyrim mostly)
Avatar The Last Airbender
Asterix (which DOESN'T have its own section in the comics, which I'm annoyed about)
Disney (anything Disney)
The Sound of Music
The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzamiya
The Inheritance Saga
And there are so many more that I can't be assed to describe them. XD
I don't have a favourite food or preferred music choice, but I don't really care for opera, mostly because I don't understand what they're saying. Right now, I am addicted to the Game of Thrones opening theme (although I've never watched the show or read the books in my life) because the beauty behind it is brilliant. Whoever woke up one morning with that in their head is amazing.
I love to watch comedies and cartoons/manga on TV because that's about the only good programmes on these days. -_- Seriously, where are all these stupid murder mysteries and soaps coming from? Can't we have a happy moment on TV for five minutes?
I love our Mother Earth and God, as they protect us and give us so many things. I suppose that makes me a crazy tree hugger. XD I want to be able to help out with conservation projects when I have a little more money and time (ah, the problems of students everywhere) and want to work towards being a child or animal psychologist or clinical as my main job. After that, I'll probably take a Masters and PhD in Psychology so people can go round calling me Doctor or Professor. XD
"Doctor, you're needed in the ward!"
(dramatic turn and look) "I'M ON MY WAY."
(slow runs into the ward)
From my bedroom window, I have a love view of a park and squirrels everywhere. 8D Someday, I shall go there and talk to the squirrels...which is an abnormal thing to do in today's society, but who cares?
These are the stories I'm working on, have completed and will make in the future, so stop all the presses:
Spy Down (in progress, but a bit slow, sorry! :() TF2
Endless Broken Melody (in progress) Hetalia
100 Missions (an in progress 100 chapter challenge to myself!) TF2
Impulse and Inertia (in progress) Young Justice comic section.
Is This the Image of Beauty? (Hiatus, to be rewritten because it sucks) Yu-Gi-Oh
Parody of the Games series (Will start the second one, but am rewriting the first because it kind of sucks too) Sonic
Dimensional Portals (Started today!) Portal
Dragonborn Tails Elder Scrolls: Skyrim
Winged Grace Supernatural
Drums of Asgard Crossver with Doctor Who and the Avengers movie.
World Assemble! Avengers
Colours of the Day Loonatics
Looney Tails Looney Tunes
Tales of Asgard: Legends Thor
Impulse and Inertia: First Step - Young Justice comics section
Boom - TF2
Clear - TF2
Silent Invisibility - TF2
Gotta Go Faster! - TF2
Crystal Clear - TF2
RockOff! - Hetalia
The Cupboard - Yu-Gi-Oh
The Essence of a Good Time - Yu-Gi-Oh
Run - Sonic
Loser Kid - Sonic
Bookshop Memories - Yu-Gi-Oh
Most Terrifying Day Ever! - Justice League
Icespeed - Teen Titans
Just Wanted Love - Young Justice comics section
Inertia's Bothersome Day - Young Justice comics section
Impulse and Inertia's Rivalry Retold! - Young Justice comics section
Remembrance - Teen Titans
Robin's Nightmares - Young Justice comics sections
Titans vs Titans: The Ultimate Showdown - Teen Titans
Drug - Teen Titans
Good Enough - Death Note
Solar System - DC Universe Online
Morning - Thunderbirds
Humour Situations - Justice League
Thoughts - Doctor Who
Thoughts of a Different Kind - Doctor Who
Air Hostess - Sonic
In The End Parody Trailer - Sonic
Musings - Yu-Gi-Oh
Shadow the Singer - Sonic
Fading Shadows - A Happier Ending - Sonic
Just My Point of View - Sonic
What If? - Sonic
Homework - Sonic
In The Future:
My AU Joker Series (looking forward to this one as it coincides with my AU Impulse and Inertia series) - Batman
A one shot for Skyrim (not sure what it will be about or called yet)
The Asterix series (not sure about titles or content, although may be AU)
A few Batman one shots (again, not sure about anything in it)
More Parody of the Games (not sure of content)
A few Hetalia one shots (not sure of content)
A few Harry Potter one shots (not sure)
An AU TF2 universe, possibly called Babylon or Golden Threads. You'll have to wait and see in regards to content. ;)
Thunderbirds one shots (including an Alan "whump" parody)
Adventures of Light and L series (comedy anyone?)
TF2/Parent Trap crossover
TF2/How to Train your Dragon crossover
Detective Joker and the Secret of Wayne Manor (basically a Professor Layton parody)
Professor Layton one shots
TF2/Hetaoni/Ao Oni crossover (well, based on those two actually)
Story of Friendship (rewritten)
Is This the Image of Beauty? (rewritten under a different title)
One shot of Inertia and Sungirl (NOBODY has written about those two yet!)
Fruits Basket one shot
Twilight parody (everyone has to do one in their life)
Inheritance Saga one shot (in other words, Eragon)
Thor crossover with Inheritance Saga (maybe)
Avatar one shot
Portal one shot.
And many more! Bear in mind, the completed one shots aren't in chronological order, so if you read one of my older stories...be prepared for a crappier standard. Phew, hopefully these will get done and I'm particularly excited about a few of them. They may be some of my best works yet. :O
There lies a little bit about me and I hope you enjoyed it! Any questions, just ask me in the PM. :)
Love Lily. X
...I don't know.
I've got character profiles!
Pets: Canary called Misty
Personality: Hotheaded and stubborn, but caring too. Doesn't like being told what to do and gets hyper and excited if she's doing something fun. Very cheerful.
Talents: Geography and DJing.
Appearance: Is yellow all over apart from her muzzle, which is pale peach. Her eyes are strawberry pink. Her boots are Doc Martins, only purple and her clothes change depending on her mood.
Bio: Her parents(Toffee and Rodney) live in Station Square. She has known my other fanchars for a while now and always takes her lucky key-ring wherever she goes.
Likes: Music and her friends.
Dislikes: Being told what to do and annoying people.
Colour: Black and yellow.
Personality: Is hyper most of the time (like another bee we all know) and will do anything to help his friends. He's pretty nice and funny.
Powers: Can fly, has a poisonous stinger.
Talents: Finding things and Math.
Appearance: He has a round face with big light brown eyes. He wears a blue t-shirt and blue shorts with grey trainers and purple goggles. His gloves are white.
Bio: Has parents called Tony and Gemma and an older brother called Timmy. He met Lisa-May when he was taking time out from exams and that was also the time when he met Sonic and co and my other OCs. He helps out against evil now and again but mostly he leads a normal life and he's someone for the others to go to when they want some "normal time".
Likes: Maths (loony) and SUGAR!
Dislikes: His big bro annoying him.
Name: Lisa May
Colour: Sunset orange
Species: One-tailed fox.
Pets: A chao called Will.
Personality: She has a short temper, which is a draw-back, but she is thoughtful. She is good at making friends and makes others laugh with her craziness.
Powers: She uses a purple saber to fight.
Talents: Is good at acting which makes her perfect for going undercover.
Appearance: Her hair is in a ponytail and has white fur shaped like a star on her forehead. Her eyes are sea-blue and she wears whatever she feels like on the day. Has pale grey gloves.
Bio: Has parents called Copper and Mary. She got into trouble while on holiday with Eggman and Sonic and co and the some of my fancharacters came along to help. Her necklace was originally her grandmother's until she died peacefully of old age.
Likes: Her friends, sleepovers and chocolate.
Name: Rebecca Autumn
Species: Human (White American)
Personality: She is very quiet and gentle, the opposite of her twin. She acts like the leader she is and she rarely gets angry with anyone (doesn't have the heart to). Her sense of loyalty and bonds is very strong and she has an iron will. Is kind to any race. However, she trusts people too easily and this leads to her getting into sticky scrapes. She also has no concept of time in her normal life so she tends to be late for things. Her Math skills are pretty dismal.
Powers: Ability to control all of the elements (fire, water etc), has limited psychic powers (telepathic communication with her twin mostly) and has super speed. She also holds the Heart of Diamonds, which is very specific to her (will explain more in the bio).
Talents: Art, music and sports and cooking. Her strategy making skills are good.
Appearance: She has golden-brown hair with earthy green eyes (quite normal looking eyes really). Wears the Heart of Diamonds around her neck on a thin silver chain.
Bio: Has a mother called Jennifer Autumn and a father called Jeff Autumn. Jeff is an ex-business tycoon and the whole family live in the rural area just outside of New York. She has her twin brother, Alan. Is part of an assembled group called the Guardians. The immediate group who were picked by an unknown higher power when they were born are herself, Alan, Fermat, Elyon and TinTin. Danielle, Ross, Icestar, Erebus, Luna, Todd and Eros, Indigo and Mark and Alyssa and Secret and Scout and Duella and Cyber joined a little later. Has travelled to many worlds. The Heart of Diamonds holds the Guardians together. They can activate their powers without it, but it is a source of energy and a general weapon of protection for Earth. Rebecca was chosen to be its Holder and wield its magic safely.
Likes: Her friends and family and helping others and music.
Dislikes: Evil, being away from her family and alcohol.
Name: Alan Autumn.
Species: Human (White American)
Personality: Absolutely bonkers at times. Somtimes he's funny because of it, other times annoying. But when he is pushed too far, he can go ballistic. However his heart is made of gold and loves to be free - spirited. He's loud but always willing to help a person in need. Can get cocky.
Powers: He can control all of the elements, thanks to an unknown entity picking him as one of the Guardians at birth. Has limited psychic abilities (mostly telepathic communication with his twin, Rebecca) and has super speed.
Talents: Sports, music and stand up.
Appearance: Has tousled golden-blonde hair and deep ocean eyes.
Bio: Is one of the chosen five Guardians but part of a wider team with the same name. His parents are Jennifer and Jeff Autumn and his sibling is Rebecca. Has travelled to many worlds.
Likes: Family and friends, food, comedy, pranks and the electric guitar.
Dislikes: Anybody trying to harm his loved ones, rules and oppression of his running.
Name: TinTin (Christine) Tatsuya.
Species: Human (Asian American).
Personality: Is a bit sassy and sarcastic but friendly. Impatient (especially with Alan and Fermat), but is confident and self-assured.
Powers: Can control the elements and fly in Guardian form.
Talents: Archery and translating.
Appearance: Has raven hair and chocolate eyes. She wears stylish clothes and looks slightly Asian. Always wears a watch.
Bio: Her parents are both Asian (Tai-Lin and Arisa), who moved to America where she was born. She is best friends with Elyon and locks horns with Alan, who annoys her with his stupidity. She loves jewels and is pretty good at identifying fake from real. Todd is her boyfriend and they are very close. She is one of the chosen five.
Likes: Jewelry, Todd and girl time with her friends.
Dislikes: Alan's immature behaviour and fake jewels.
Name: Todd Damon
Species: Human (Native American)
Personality: A peaceful, wise sensei type figure, who will not let his emotions show in time of battle. Very loving towards family and friends and at one with nature. Serious nature in missions. Can be oblivious to the attentions of the fairer sex. Very patient.
Powers: None - he is a warrior.
Talents: Weaponry, tracking, sports (anything physical really) and playing the flute. Senses heightened as a result of training.
Appearance: Deep black hair with reddish tanned skin and black eyes. Wears a cowboy hat a lot and prefers loose fitting clothes in daily life and tight fitting ones in battle.
Bio: Lives with his tribe in North America. His father is the Chief, Mother is Chief's wife and he has no siblings. He was trained by his Grandfather (who is their shaman character) and warriors from his own tribe, as well as a few assassins he came across in his area while they were moving through to a target. However, he is no killer and is one of the Guardians' best fighters, on an equal par with heroes like Batman. He is Fermat's adoptive big brother (taking him in after Chris died) and is currently acting as his mentor too, teaching him everything he knows. He can fly using wings Fermat made him, as he has no powers and wanted an advantage. He favours his twin katanas for fighting. TinTin is his girlfriend.
Likes: Family, friends and meditating.
Dislikes: Danger to his people, people who are blind to their surroundings and corporate people.
Name: Fermat Sunday
Species: Human (White American)
Personality: A cheerful, hard working boy who can get a bit down hearted with himself if he believes he has failed someone or a task. Doesn't get shy around girls, even though he is very nerdy as he is a relaxed person most of the time; except when he has a deadline. Don't go near him then as he may defenestrate you. Gets excited around technology and video games.
Powers: The elements and can fly.
Talents: Is proficient with weapons, engineering and technology in general, Physics and Math.
Appearance: Brown hair and caramel eyes, with small white wings on his head as a helmet, bracelet wings and anklet wings on his his wrists and ankles. Pale in skin colour.
Bio: Has a father called Reginald (is a scientist), his step mother called Felicity, his birth mother Irma and his step father called Jamie. Did have an older brother called Chris but he died, splitting up his parents and leaving Fermat with depression and shyness for a few years. Todd stepped in to help him back on his feet and during that time, Fermat built him his wings and built his own wings for himself, as he preferred to use them, rather than use air like the other four original Guardians. His girlfriend is Secret.
Likes: Technology, his workshop and his friends and family and eating.
Dislikes: Being reminded about Chris' death, cream cheese and people trying to split up families.
Name: Elyon Johnson
Species: Human (White Canadian)
Personality: Cheerful and calm. Very fashion-orientated but not to the point where she'll only buy designer labels because she's careful with money as well.
Powers: The elements.
Talents: Dancing and singing. Also good at gardening.
Appearance: Blonde hair mostly in pigtails or braids. Light blue eyes.
Bio: Has a mother called Charlene and her father is Lawrence. Both are divorced but the family dynamic is good. Is girlfriend to Mark and one of the original five Guardians.
Likes: Clothes and flowers and karaoke.
Dislikes: People wasting her time and maple syrup.
Age: Not known
Species: Unknown (Android)
Personality: Quite emotionless at times, but when around Cyber, she's loving and more outgoing. Very logical.
Powers: Ability to change the environment around her and laser guns from her hands.
Talents: Hacking and knitting.
Appearance: Her skin is a deep indigo (hence her name) with black hair and artificial blue eyes.
Bio: Crash landed on Earth and was taken in by the Guardians to protect her from the government officials trying to cover her up. She's learning about the world around her and has proved to be a loyal team member.
Likes: Cyber and sunshine
Dislikes: Rain and talking about her home planet.
More will be posted soon.
These are my OCs. Some belong on Mobius and some belong to the DC Universe (I think you'll be able to tell who belongs where). I'm not saying they're better than canon characters at things and I'm trying to make them least like Mary Sues/Gary Stus as possible. Unfortunately, I will admit right here and now that these guys and girls probably ARE Mary Sues/Gary Stus, for I have not taken the test to find out. However, are not all characters we create Mary Sues/Gary Stus? I tend to put characters into two categories; Canon Sues/Stus and Fandom Sues/Stus.
Canon characters are Mary Sues/Stus because they are the heroes or villains and save the day! The have few weaknesses and there's ALWAYS something special about them, no matter who they are or what they do. The only difference between them and Fandom Sues/Stus is the fact that they are widely accepted in society (i.e. being famous because the creator has successfully advertised and published/sold them) and on the internet e.g. Harry Potter.
Fandom Sues/Stus are the same, but created on Fanfiction and are generally hated by all who see them, no matter how hard the poor authors try (although there are the few that make you scream in horror for a good reason).
So feel free to finally scream if you are looking at my profile right now. However...who knows? You could be writing fanfiction about THEM someday...
Team Fortress 2 profiles (completely different to my fancharacters).
Name: Felix Paris.
Hair: Dark brown, almost black.
Appearance: Always wears his RED Spy uniform and mask.
Personality: Very quiet to the point of not talking and shy around women. Has unipolar depression (in Spy Down and sequel - name unknown at this present time) and is loyal to any team-mate. He will hide if frightened, but can defend himself.
Talents: Hacking, spying (obviously) and drawing.
Bio: Was born in France (location unknown) in 1982 and had a normal childhood apart from being bullied in school as a child and was very close to his grandmother until she died. Joined RED after being found by their hiring services in 2009 and trained to be a Spy. Joined his first team but unfortunately got a frosty reception as they weren't very trusting of Spies in general. Was ignored to the point of deliberate exclusion and, along with other contributing environmental factors, developed depression. He was transferred to his current RED team after waking up one morning to find that the old team had left for their new base without him. His crippling shyness has prevented him from making friends as of yet, but that could be about to change. Is indifferent to BLU and will interact with them when necessary.
Likes: Sketching, baby animals and his new team.
Dislikes: Being ignored, his old team and spaghetti.
Name: Bryn Jones.
Appearance: Wears the RED standard Sniper's uniform, but with a red kite feather tucked into the left breast pocket.
Personality: Quiet but cheerful and always likes to help others as he has a big heart. Is loyal and trustworthy when it comes to secrets.
Talents: Sniping (obviously), knitting and cheering people up.
Bio: Was born in the North Wales valleys in 1978 and grew up normally. Became a Sniper for the army when he was twenty years old and was chosen by RED's hiring services to be part of their war. He is well-known for cheering people up when they're down and is friendly to everyone, but doesn't really know how to deal with Felix as the Spy won't talk to him or anyone else. He has a close friendship with the RED Soldier and has a habit of knitting everyone new scarves whenever they go somewhere cold/winter arrives.
Likes: Knitting, talking about kung-fu movies, watching said movies and kiwis.
Dislikes: Being back-stabbed in battle, being interrupted in his knitting and falling over in front of others (which is often for some reason).
Name: Pippin "Pip" Fox.
Hair: Light brown.
Appearance: Wears the standard Scout uniform and has a lot of badges on his hat, including the peace sign.
Personality: He's very hyperactive and playful, constantly needing something to do, otherwise he becomes bored and annoying. Very clumsy and childish.
Talents: Running (I'm way too obvious, aren't I?), dancing and capturing intel.
Bio: Was born in Boston in 1992 and has seven older brothers, who he idolises. He's a mama's boy and is constantly knocking things over. Some team members have no patience for him (Soldier and Demoman being the main culprits) but he thinks of them as his second family anyway, much to their annoyance. He became the Scout in 2010 and is the youngest member of the team, the second being the Pyro.
Likes: Running, baseball, dancing and food (in large quantities).
Dislikes: Sitting still, being quiet and having nobody to play baseball with.
Name: Lance Corporal.
Hair: Cropped brown.
Eyes: Dark brown.
Appearance: Wears the standard RED Soldier uniform with a small American flag stitched into the right collar.
Personality: Very disciplined and strict, but is a softy at heart and will help anyone on his team in need. Respectful of people who work hard and keep going.
Talents: Drilling his team mates, fixing clothes and playing the trombone.
Bio: Was born in Ohio in 1979 and grew up listening to his father's war stories. Ended up joining the US Marines and served for a limited time until RED found him, impressed by his abilities and discipline. He looks upon his BLU counterpart as being the lesser man and is genuinely confused at the cold shoulder given by BLU Soldier to the BLU Medic. He's often seen hanging around in the gym or planning their next attack on BLU or meditating in his room.
Likes: Obedience, exercise and quiet meditation.
Dislikes: Pippin being annoying, seeing their "rations" running low and laziness.
Name: Guy McNabbin.
Hair: Black small afro.
Eyes: Dark brown.
Appearance: Wears standard RED Demoman uniform (without the smiley face taped to his crotch) and sometimes lets his hair free to be an afro. XD
Personality: Very laid-back, but lacks common sense. Can be creative (especially when with his bombs) and is generally very friendly.
Talents: Gardening, blowing stuff up and chemistry.
Bio: Was born in Glasgow, Scotland in 1980 and grew up in the poorer areas of Glasgow. He took the job with RED to help out his parents and has always been interested in chemistry, so he took the Demoman training course. Guy is a non-alcoholic, an unusual trait in Demomen and can get a bit depressed about only having one eye.
Likes: Gardening, woodwork and blowing stuff up.
Dislikes: Not being able to throw parties, loud noises when he's trying to sleep and his bombs being tampered with.
Name: Jasper Hans.
Hair: Black with a curl on the forehead.
Eyes: Pale blue.
Appearance: Wears the standard Medic uniform but has a little bow tie instead of the usual red tie. Has square glasses and a handkerchief tucked into the breast pocket.
Personality: Stern but kindly, Jasper gets exasperated when the others don't come to his office when they need to.
Talents: Violin, piano and medical science.
Bio: Was born in Stuttgart, Germany in 1973 and was one of four children. His parents divorced, but he didn't mind as they got along better after it happened. Became a Medic for RED to gain a bit of excitement in his life, but does miss the children's hospital he used to work at.
Likes: His doves, music and chocolate.
Dislikes: People disturbing his doves, people not coming to him when they need to.
Name: Dustin Houston
Hair: Shaved down to the scalp.
Eyes: A deep blue.
Appearance: Standard RED engineer uniform except for cowboy boots. Stubble on his chin.
Personality: Makes people laugh but gets annoyed when plans he makes don't work. Protective over machinery.
Talents: Playing guitar, building and cooking.
Bio: Born in Texas in 1974, Dustin was a child who picked up his love affair with machinery from his mother, who broke the mold by going to work as an engineer while his father stayed at home to look after him and his little sister. Joined RED after making Texan news for creating a car that ran only on water that worked properly.
Likes: His guitar, machines and good old fashioned get togethers with beer and barbeques.
Dislikes: People in his workshop, plans going pear-shaped and broken, uncared for machinery.
Name: Oliver Phoenix
Hair: Short and blond
Appearance: Standard Pyro outfit, but with a beaded pendant on. One of the tallest on the team.
Personality: Ridiculously cheerful and observant. Also a mischief maker.
Talents: Physics and playing the saxophone.
Bio: Was born in Toronto, Canada in 1988. Was the single son of the family and pretty small for a boy his age until he hit a growth spurt and became very tall. As soon as he came out of university with his Physics degree, he was hired by RED, who saw the fascination he had with fire (thankfully not the pyromaniac sort).
Likes: Fire, pranks and hockey.
Dislikes: Football, grumpy people and his pranks going wrong.
Name: Adrik Pigoffski
Eyes: Light blue
Occupation: Heavy Weapons Guy
Appearance: Standard Heavy Weapons outfit but with a small Russian flag pinned into his collar.
Personality: Friendly but won't hesitate to smack you in the mouth if you push all of his buttons. Acts like a bodyguard sometimes if needed.
Talents: Wrestling and statistics.
Bio: Was born in Moscow, Russia in 19
I believe in God, the Father almighty,
Creator of heaven and earth
I believe in Jesus Christ, his only Son, our Lord,
Who was conceived by the power of the Holy Spirit
Born of the Virgin Mary,
Suffered under Pontius Pilate,
Was crucified, died, and was buried;
He decended into the dead.
On the third day He rose again,
He ascended into heaven,
Is seated at the right hand of the Father.
And will come again to judge the living and the dead.
I believe in the Holy Spirit,
The holy universal Church,
The communion of saints,
The forgiveness of sins,
The resurrection of the body,
And the life everlasting. Amen.
Christian I am!
Just had a friend from school look at my profile. Liked it he did! Woot!
If you want to learn Japanese, copy/paste this into your profile
So I can sound like an anime character. Lol.
If you have your "own little world", copy and paste this onto your profile.
Ninety-five percent of the kids out there are concerned with being popular and fitting in. If you're part of the five percent who aren't, copy this, put it in your profile, and add your name to the list. AnimeKittyCafe, Hyperactivley Bored, Gem W, Bara-Minamino, Yavie Aelinel, Crazy Billie Joe Loving Freak, Shadow929, The Astrology Nerd, brown-eyed angelofmusic, piratesswriter/fairy to be, The Gypsy-Pirate Queen,xGabriellaxBoltonx, xEarlySunsetsOverMonroevillex, Smartest Girl In The World, GatorPups95, 'rEd RoSe-StArFiRe-RoSeFiRe', ShimmeringJade, Sabaku no Hasame (Gaara's Desert Rose)gaara1306 aka foamy the sguirrel, Matts-Awesome-Too (I like pie! Meeps!), Raykura-Kura(I WILL DESTOY YOU!!), XT-421 (The kid who thinks he is an extraterrestrial), NUTCASE71733(No one's crazier than me!)DE REAPER EEHH!(NOT THE DEATH HIMSELF BY BAD LUCK) LilyRoseTheDreamer(bow before my army of ninjas from the future!)
If you're against animal cruelty (horse slaughter, bear baiting, dolphin hunting, chimp slavery etc.) then copy this into your profile!
If you've been on the computer for hours on end, reading numerous fanfictions, copy this onto your profile.
If you've ever wondered what you are like in another dimension, copy and paste this in your profile.
If you don't do drugs (They are nasty), copy/paste this into your profile.
If you hate Chris Thorndyke and think he should be shot, paste this on your profile.
FAKE VS. REAL
FAKE FRIENDS: Never ask for food.
REAL FRIENDS: Are the reason you have no food.
FAKE FRIENDS: Call your parents Mr./Mrs.
REAL FRIENDS: Call your parents DAD/MOM.
FAKE FRIENDS: Bail you out of jail and tell you what you did was wrong.
REAL FRIENDS: Will sit next to you saying “Damn … we really messed up … but that sure was fun!”
FAKE FRIENDS: Never seen you cry.
REAL FRIENDS: Cry with you.
FAKE FRIENDS: Borrow your stuff for a few days then give it back.
REAL FRIENDS: Keep your stuff so long they forget it’s yours.
FAKE FRIENDS: Know a few things about you.
REAL FRIENDS: Can write a book about you, with direct quotes from you.
FAKE FRIENDS: Will leave you behind if that is what the crowd is doing.
REAL FRIENDS: Will kick the whole crowds ass that left you.
FAKE FRIENDS: Will knock on your front door.
REAL FRIENDS: Walk right in and say “I’M HOME!”
FAKE FRIENDS: Are for awhile.
REAL FRIENDS: Are for life.
FAKE FRIENDS: Say they are too busy to listen to your problems, but when it comes to them they expect you to have all the time in the world.
REAL FRIENDS: Not only kick everything out of their schedule to listen to what’s wrong, but help come up with vindictive plans to make you feel a whole lot better!
FAKE FRIENDS: Make you say sorry when you want to talk to them at odd hours of the night, or even just hang out at odd hours.
REAL FRIENDS: Come right over and hang out with you, until you either fall asleep, or kick them out.
FAKE FRIENDS: Will ignore this.
REAL FRIENDS: Will repost it
Well, my A-Levels are finally over! HUZZAH! This now means that I shall be writing like mad and publishing hopefully just as quickly. Please regard me kindly with future chapters and stories.
Quotes of thy life:
"Here's a touching story...once upon a time, you died and I lived happily ever after. The end." - Sniper from TF2.
"PEOPLE! THE MUTANT'S PURSUING ME!" - taken from Shwiggan's hilarious TF2 shorts which he took from an unknown source (to me anyway).
"BONK!" - Scout from TF2.
"Better to have loved and lost than never loved at all." - Lord Alfred Tennyson (who'd have thought?).
"Just give me the cookies and nobody gets hurt." - LilyRosetheDreamer (wait, that's me!).
"If it was supposed to feel good, they wouldn't call it a crush." - taken from Chicken Soup of the Teenage Soul series.
"What are you, the President of his fan club?"
"No...Zat wouldn be your MOTHER!" - BLU Scout and Spy from TF2 in "Meet the Spy."
"I believe that everything happens for a reason. People change so that you can learn to let go. Things go wrong so that you appreciate them when they're right. You believe lies so you eventually learn to trust no one but yourself, and sometimes good things fall apart so better things can fall together." - Marilyn Monroe.
"Tonight at 11."
"DOOOOOOOM!!" - taken from Shwiggan's video (yet again) from an unknown source (again).
"You must cut down the tallest tree in the forest WITH...A HERRING!" - Knights who say Ni from Monty Python's Holy Grail.
"There is no wealth but life." - John Ruskin.
"Laugh as much as you breathe and love as long as you live." - Unknown.
"Nyeh?" - Joey from Yu-Gi-Oh the Abridged.
"Screw the rules, I have money!" - Kaiba from Yu-Gi-Oh the Abridged.
"Screw the money, I have rules! No wait, let me try that again." - Kaiba from Yu-Gi-Oh the Abridged.
"Screw the rules, I have green hair!" - Kaiba from Yu-Gi-Oh the Abridged.
"Boom...headshot." - Sniper from TF2.
"It's peanut jelly time!" - DJ Chip et al.
"You're a wizard, Harry."
"I'm a what?!" - Harry Potter and Hagrid (the original and the hilarious spoof of it on Youtube by two Scottish guys).
"The cat has a moustache. Your argument is invalid." - My friend Kiera, otherwise known as KiwiFrube on here.
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