Author has written 4 stories for Final Fantasy VII, and Harry Potter.
I think Fanfiction is fanfiction and people shouldn't diss anyone's writing. The names of the website speaks for itself, it's a place where people can get their creative ideas out, no matter what they are. Even if I don't like something, doesn't mean I'm going to flame it. Everything is a matter of opinion, and one opinion isn't right. So let's all let this be a safe place shall we? However, if someone's work is poorly written and it's hard to understand, giving feedback is fine - people need feedback to improve as writers.
So in other words, don't diss on people's work, it's immature and rude. Giving them helpful feedback however, is different.
Redemption (Final Fantasy 7) - Rufus Shinra would never be a hero. He was a cynical, spiteful and selfish human being. But after missing for three years and finally returning to the public eye, everyone can't helped but he shocked. Rufus Shinra didn't act like a president, he acted more like his Turks, or a member of AVALANCHE. What happened? Discontinued for now.
Fields of Gold (Final Fantasy 7) - "There's a large amount of white blood cells in your blood." "I thought white blood cells were good?" "White blood cells usually are good, but having a count as high as you do right now usually means that there's an infection, and they're produced so fast that they're premature and can't fight off infection very well…it's usually a sign of leukemia." Discontinued for now.
Sweet Disposition (Harry Potter) - When Draco Malfoy gets sorted into Gryffindor, things change. He becomes a part of a world that brings pain, happiness, tears, friendship, blood – and war. Bonds are broken and mended, while others are gone forever. The light that shines in the beginning slowly turns dark with each passing year. Innocence, will be corrupted. (This story will go through all seven years.) In progress.
Wake your Dreams (Harry Potter) - A Draco and Marauders story. After he's hit with a killing curse in the final battle, Draco is sent back in time. When he opens his eyes he's staring into a pair of green eyes he's known for years, except it's not Potter who's looking down on him. It's Lily Evans. In progress.