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Author has written 22 stories for Naruto, Sailor Moon, Bleach, Pokémon, Death Note, Ranma, Harry Potter, Touhou Project, Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney, and My Little Pony.

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Retro Naruto

This one requires a bit of background. Read Deathfire-san's 'Only Human' or MystikD109's 'A New Cause'. The former was started in January 2007 and finished 6 months later, while the latter was started up in 2004 and finished in 2005. Mystik's Akatsuki is nothing like what Akatsuki is today, because few details had been released on Akatsuki at that time. Akatsuki in Only Human strongly resembles canon!Akatsuki but it was done before the second databook was released, so there are little bits such as Kakuzu being 300 years old, and since it was before the Jiraiya visits Ame arc, the author envisions the Akatsuki leader to be a sort of technological villain. Most chapters of 'The Nine Broken Mirrors' by Ayien and of 'Lost Soul' by LD 1449 are also good to read to get an idea of what I mean.

Point being, these authors started about 150-250 issues ago, so they had to create their own worlds . That's what the challenge of 'Retro Naruto' is all about. Forget all the recent history with Pein and Madara. Don't use anything that was introduced beyond the end of the Kakuzu and Hidan arc (with a couple of exceptions - you can feel free to use the authentic tailed beasts, since the Legend of the Tailed Beasts is bs, as well as actual real names such as Namikaze Minato and Hiruzen being Sarutobi's first name. If you really want you could get away with jinchuuriki and kage identities), if that: you could even use only Part I material Kakashi Gaiden and pretend Part II doesn't exist at all.

A few of you might ask: "What's the point?" Well, it seems to me like a lot of writers have basically become constrained by canon material instead of trying to expand on it. A ton of fics are basically just rewritten canon with a bit of a twist thrown in. If you ditch the whole Rinnegan, super-ultra-mega Sharingan, ROOT, the planned Uchiha coup, etc., then you have to come up with your own ideas on a lot of things, like why Itachi killed the clan, what the relations are between the hidden villages, what the motives of the Akatsuki are, who leads the Akatsuki, etc, while still keeping the core of the story of Naruto’s perservance in odds roughly the same.

There aren't really any specific other guidelines to follow here other than what has been followed before.

Normal Naruto

I see a lot of fics where the Kyuubi never attacked and so Naruto gets to grow up as the Yondaime's son.

The challenge for this fic is to take a twist on that. Naruto is no longer the son of the Yondaime. Instead, he is a normal person who isn't related to royalty or clans or any Hokage, and he ISN'T a jinchuuriki. Again, he is NORMAL, at least by shinobi standards. He doesn't have a bloodline either. Yes, this Naruto may as well be an OC, but then most fics see a Naruto who is basically an OC anyways, just thrown into canon!Naruto's circumstances. What differs here is that this 'Normal Naruto' shares most of canon!Naruto's personality: loyal, with unwavering willpower and endless determination.

Mute Naruto

I've seen several blind Naruto fics, a few deaf Naruto fics, and a few others where he is missing a limb or is unable to use chakra at all, but only a couple of Mute Naruto fics, with one of those being decent. Being mute, for Naruto, is arguably the least debilitating physical defect that he could have (as even real life military organizations use hand signs a lot, and you can write shinobi up as doing the same). However, it does have two big effects: canon!Naruto acts out for attention, but a Naruto without a voice, while still able to do the same, is much more ineffective in doing so. Additionally, he has to communicate through hand signs, expressions, or through the written word. This would develop his patience at least, but also make him a bit less optimistic and a bit more moodier. Additionally, since he cannot speak, he cannot verbalise a jutsu when he uses it. Depending on what school of fanon thought you subscribe to, verbalising a jutsu isn't necessary, but helps significantly in concentration and stabilisation of the jutsu, so Naruto will have to work around that.

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Legacy of the Greatest reviews
The greatest trick the Great and Powerful Trixie ever performed was convincing all of ponykind that she was a mere unicorn. Years later, Princess Celestia and Trixie have a discussion by Twilight Sparkle's grave.
My Little Pony - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,767 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 2 - Published: 6/10/2016 - Princess Celestia, Trixie - Complete
The Maudyssey reviews
Maud Pie is evil. Maud Pie is scarily hyper-competent. And Maud Pie has been plotting for years on how to take the Equestrian throne by conquest. Fortunately for Equestria, she's still obsessed with rocks. T Rating for a sexually suggestive scene.
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,083 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/25/2016 - Twilight Sparkle, Pinkie Pie, Trixie, Maud Pie - Complete
Of Mares and a Manticore reviews
After Trixie's "Repentance Tour" show in Ponyville, many ponies have re-evaluated their opinions on Trixie, giving her a little more respect. Fluttershy, however, sees beyond the show and wonders just what truly happened. Fluttershy asks Trixie about her emotional state, and what she was truly feeling right before launching herself out of the cannon. SPOILERS for No Second Prances
My Little Pony - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,983 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 2 - Published: 5/6/2016 - Fluttershy, Trixie - Complete
There's No Place Quite Like Home reviews
Left in the dumps from the incident with the Ursa Minor, Trixie decides to return home to her remaining family for a visit. However, for Trixie, Whinnychester brings out both the best and the worst of her self and her past, and this time will be no different.
My Little Pony - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,710 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/4/2015 - Trixie, OC - Complete
A Sunset Casts a Long Shadow reviews
In two days, Twilight Sparkle overthrew Sunset Shimmer's reign of Canterlot High. That Sunset's rule of several years folded quickly to a culturally-ignorant person of another species entirely is suspect, along with her plan to invade Equestria, and her immediate redemption. What if all this inconsistency was deliberate, to hide Sunset's real master plan? NOT RR-compliant
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11,797 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 3 - Published: 8/25/2015
Dice of Life reviews
Trixie never defeated an Ursa Major. But then, she never needed to. She just wasn't allowed to talk about the even bigger beast that she had once captured. After all, Princess Celestia had demanded complete deniability. Two-shot. After being chased away from Ponyville, sulking in a foul mood while it's raining out, she reunites with a friend from her past.
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 2 - Words: 13,933 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 2 - Published: 8/13/2015 - Princess Celestia, Trixie, Bon Bon - Complete
The Inverted Turnabout reviews
What if Miles Edgeworth had stopped his father on December 28, 2001 to ask a question? History changes, that's what. Written for The Fanfiction Forum 'Resurrection Fic' contest.
Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,255 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 18 - Follows: 1 - Published: 8/13/2015 - Phoenix W./Nick, Miles E., Judge, G. Edgeworth - Complete
seitora's Harry Potter Loops reviews
Groundhog Day-esque stories for the HP fandom. Story Five: Undersecretary Fudge, I knew Humphrey Appleby. You're no Appleby, Undersecretary. Story Six: In which Albus' plans for 'the power he knows not' lies in runes.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,451 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 32 - Follows: 26 - Updated: 12/31/2014 - Published: 12/23/2013 - Harry P., Ron W. - Complete
Red and his DEMoemon reviews
Red was satisfied to stay on Mt. Silver. He feels uncomfortable in society. However, Arceus wants him to pass on his love for Pokemon, and it'll stop at nothing to get that, even if it means Deus Ex Machina bullshit. Gameverse with slight Special characteristics. Regular Pokemon with only a few who can become Gijinka/Moemon. Adult, lemons.
Pokémon - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,318 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 38 - Follows: 38 - Published: 2/25/2014 - Red, Espeon/Eifie
Naruto's Inheritance reviews
Kyuubi refuses to give Naruto chakra without a fight. Naruto needs that chakra. What choice does he have but to break Kyuubi until it gives him its chakra without hesitation? BDSM, lemons, Dom!Naru, Fem!Sub!Kyuubi. WARNING: M-Rated content
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,823 - Reviews: 85 - Favs: 875 - Follows: 936 - Updated: 2/15/2014 - Published: 5/19/2011 - Naruto U., Kyuubi/Kurama, Kushina U.
The Meaning of Hakurei reviews
TFF Iron Fic One-Shot. A visit by a religiously-confused Outsider leaves Reimu shaken enough to question her own faith. Oneshot. Not necessarily 100% canon-compliant.
Touhou Project - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,644 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 3 - Published: 2/14/2014 - Marisa K., Reimu H., Suika I., OC - Complete
seitora's Ranma Loops reviews
In which Ranma and Ryoga discuss linguistics, and Ranma 'heads' off the Phoenixes in his own way in a Loop. Wouldn't the plural of Phoenix sound obscene anyways?
Ranma - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,677 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 7 - Published: 12/23/2013 - Ranma, Ryoga - Complete
All the World's a Stage reviews
TFF Iron Fic One-Shot. In life, Light decided to achieve his New World by killing off criminals. What if he chose to achieve this through instead destroying dictatorships one by one with the Death Note?
Death Note - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,318 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 9 - Published: 6/4/2013 - Light Y., Ryuk - Complete
Spread Your Wings and Fly reviews
TFF Iron Fic entry, Game-centric. Blue has a (one-sided) conversation with Red a year after their Championship battle, leading into their roles in Gen 2.
Pokémon - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,488 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/28/2013 - Red, Blue O./Green O. (male) - Complete
seitora's Sailor Moon Loops reviews
Chapter 2: Setsuna Vowels, Usagi goes looking for Mau-nip, and Minako makes a Preemptive strike as Sailor V
Sailor Moon - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 7,602 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 21 - Follows: 13 - Updated: 5/3/2013 - Published: 4/7/2013 - Minako A./Mina/Sailor Venus, Usagi T./Serena/Bunny/Sailor Moon, Shingo T./Sammy - Complete
seitora's Naruto Loops reviews
Story One: Naruto pranks Itachi and Kisame Story Two: The Death God Puts his Troll-face On Story Three: How many Kyuubis are there in fiction anyways? Story Four: Gato and his Silver Points
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,260 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 8 - Published: 4/29/2013 - Naruto U.
Bleach: The Arcana Project reviews
Urahara is a genius. So what if nearly a century after his downfall and exile from Seireitei, he started plotting to trap Aizen and bring about his ultimate defeat?
Bleach - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 13,981 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 17 - Follows: 27 - Updated: 4/28/2013 - Published: 4/12/2013 - Ichigo K., Uryuu I., K. Urahara
His Last Blessing reviews
Plot bunny, up for adoption. In a future that never was, Naruto became Hokage, Juubi jinchuuriki, and the last living being in the world. Given the chance to return, he takes it. The world is still vulnerable to the forces that already destroyed it once, and Naruto, still suffering from the scars of the never-future, must corral the nations to prepare for this new threat.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,844 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 14 - Published: 8/21/2012 - Naruto U. - Complete
A Midsummer Night's Dream reviews
Yahiko survives and wins the civil war against Hanzo. As the new leader of Ame, he seeks a new path to peace. Through sabotage and destruction, the shinobi world will be annihilated. No Madara, Dark!Naruto, realistic ruthless militaristic Sandaime/Konoha
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 18 - Words: 93,908 - Reviews: 339 - Favs: 525 - Follows: 457 - Updated: 6/12/2010 - Published: 8/1/2009 - Naruto U., Fū
Flame and Vortex reviews
fem!Naruto x male!Kyuubi romance fic. Reborn from the ashes of his attack, Kyuubi no Kitsune will learn that there is more than just duty; the fox shall learn to live and to love, as he and his container take the world by a firestorm. Possible lemons
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 30,843 - Reviews: 65 - Favs: 189 - Follows: 180 - Updated: 3/18/2010 - Published: 12/30/2009 - Naruto U., Kyuubi/Kurama
Rise of a Kitsune: The Life of Uzumaki Naruto reviews
Meeting Kyuubi at five and joining ANBU at eight, Naruto Uzumaki resolves to become the most powerful being alive. Watch as Naruto transcends all limits to achieve his goals. NarutoOC, superNaruto, eventual DemonNaruto, heavy fuuinjutsu/wind elemental use
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 5 - Words: 55,648 - Reviews: 121 - Favs: 505 - Follows: 548 - Updated: 10/13/2009 - Published: 3/15/2009 - Naruto U.
Ripples reviews
What occurs when one man lives and succeeds in a mission where once he failed and suicided? Watch what happens as Hatake Sakumo succeeds in his mission, and the consequences that it brings about to the history of the shinobi world.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,695 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 42 - Follows: 23 - Published: 6/16/2009 - Naruto U. - Complete
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