Author has written 9 stories for Naruto.
Hey just to let eveyone know im not trying to hide or not update, right now i'm almost due and im waiting for my baby girl to be born once im recovered i'll be back to posting . i have some stories that i have in mind, other that i need to finish up and most importantly a lot of them that are in dire need of a beta.
sorry to cause so much trouble so please be patient. !!!!!!
lots of luv from me Yaoihime22.
My name is Denisse Escobar, but anyone that knows me calls me yaya. Weird huh!!
This is a shared account with my lovely sister:Dafny who goes by DafnyHime and close family members call her Yeya. Want to know something funny guys. Family call me yaya, my sister yeya and my daughter nana. Weird family i guess.
Age; well I'm 27 years old and my sister is 25.
Sex; yes please, specially if its yaoi. Just Kidding, or not. Actually we love yaoi whatever form it comes from we take it and currently we are only reading Naruto goodness. Personally I'm not into angst or character death, why you might ask? Well I cry easily with a screwed up life, on the other hand I love happy endings, call me a sucker i know. However that doesn't mean i go for too much fluff.
DafnyHime loves angst even if she bawls at the first sing of sadness. what can I say, she's our little emo wanabee.
How i started in the world of Fanfiction? I was introduced to Yaoi about 3 years ago and let me tell you I'm addicted to it like a drug addict to crack. As stated before, I take it whatever form it comes in;anime, manga, fanfiction, fanart or just plain imaginary.lol. No really i have a passion for Manga and in my personal (and DafnyHime's) opinion one of the best work without doubt is Totally captivated by Yoo Ha Jin. I'm still mourning the ending of the story, beautiful but I wanted to continue with another volume, but beggars can't be choosers. Am i right ? Besides the Doujinshi Totally Spying of them helped a lot.
Now DafnyHime is another story all together when I'm into Manga she happens to be into Fanfic, when I'm into Fanfic, she goes for Anime and so on and on. That's most of the time we are never on the same level, or so it seems, despite all this we always get along when it concerns our mutual love for Yaoi.
Dafny is the one to blame for my addiction to Yaoi, Anime, Manga and Fanfic for that matter. How i have explained before I am a huge Naruto fan. And will proudly announce that've watched all episodes probably 10 times easily. The Manga i have read it 3 times probably, I know you must be thinking what she doesn't have anything to do? Your right, I'm a lonely house wife with nothing to do. so it doesn't botter me to spend my time watching hot bishonen make out together. Drool.
Dafny has a job so she cant do it a lot. (hehe her loss) Don't worry, when she is at home that's all she does. Some times we get together and surf the web for some good Fics. and this is how we found ourselves in Fanfiction.net and were thankful for it, great works.
Now for my part, i've never been good in writing or school for that matter! But like is well known after you read so much you get bored, and dont get me wrong i tired, i really, really tried to get Dafny to write the stories that I wanted to read; with the plots that i have imagine. But can you believe she declined!!In the back, way back there i understand that she too has her own stories, and relented. And so i was left with either starve or find my own way out of the predicament.
You will be happy to know that I started writing but i get stuck often and like previously stated; I'm not good at grammar or spelling. That's why am thankful for Betas, however hard they might be to find.
At the moment Dafny has a strict policy of not uploading till the story is done or at least done typing. She explained that it would be much easier, then we can post as soon as our beta finishes a chapter. She is one of those who like to be sure of things, not too freaky in the organization thing but she HATES when a stories plot is left unfinished. WE understand that the plot just leaves you, you dont know where to take it or plain you dont feel like writing. Still there's some who just leave the story in the middle and never come back and either finish it or remove. theres those people who got peaked by your awsome plot and would like to see it to the end and are waiting. Yet it will never be finished, so she wont start uploading a story if its not completed.
And so I'm left to write like a crazed person to finished, such is the life. Currently we are in dire need of a good and understanding beta. We have had several; Dagger, ImperialMint and Blugirlami21, they rock, and did or do a great job. We thank them because without their help we wouldn't be able to post stories.So please review my stories and give props to them.
Something that is a must for me is a cute uke, Dafny agrees. We all know that the best uke is Naruto, there's no other way he's too cute for a seme and there are too many semes in the Naruto fandom, with too little ukes.
Naruto Fav Pairings
OUR Fav. Pairings
Itachi X Naruto - Lets face its Itachi; he's more mature and a sex god.
Sasuke X Naruto - Everyones favorite pairing, they have history.
Neji X Gaara - I love Gaara as a uke also because let's face it, its hard not to want to make him submissive under a strong Seme.
Kakashi X Iruka- this one is a given.
Itachi X Haku -I like this one when its a sasunaru and a good tachi, we cant leave him wihtout love can we?. lol
Sasori X Deidara- they make a cute couple, we can see the love even with all the bickering.
Kakashi X Naruto- newly discovered but addicted to it already.
I like pairings that have Naru as an uke like:
ItaXNaru, SasuXNaru, KakaXNaru, NejiXNaru, GaaXNaru, ShikaXNaru, SaiXNaru, KibaXNaru, HakuXNaru, SoraXNaru...pretty much all the pairings where Naru-chan is UKE...well there's some that i won't take(like ewww OroXNaru... but hey with enough encouragement and an ok character i can give it a go.
Shikamaru X Temari- Shika always needs a good strong women and so I don't mind him with Ino.
Kiba X Hinata- we all know Kiba gets jealous when Hinata shows her crush for Naruto.
Sakura X Lee - I don't really like Sakura(at all), sorry for those Sakura fans but in our opinion she is useless and all she does is cry. So unless she is dead or alone I'm not much for making her happy, but I'm not a total bitch and so since this is everyones facorite pick when they are trying to be nice. I too go for the exhuberant Lee.
Sai X Sakura -ok so lee is with Tenten, the always raven look-a-like can work it.
Tsunade X Jiraija- this one is a given well all know ero-sennin is in love with hime.
Gaara X Hinata - When there's no good seme for him. (i never go into detail for lemons on het. couples)
Pairings WE loathe:
Any orochimaru- my skin is crawling
Any kabuto- I can only see him with Orochimaru, but in my opinion he's better off alone than with the snake freak.
ItaKisa- like eww
kakuHidan- I can see their hate relationship but Hidan is too HOT for Kakuzu
SasuSaku- once I read a lemon between Sasuke and Sakura and literally puked...
NaruSaku- like stated . besides she treats him like a punching bag. she is not good enough for our blond.
Irunar- Will always see him as a parental (mother figure) lol.
I understand that it's imagination and the writers choice to create their perfect stories based on their needs and likes, but some things i go against:
1. Fem characters. What's with turning characters into female?If that's the case then it wouldn't be Yaoi, only exeption on Orioke no Jutsu (Must:sex in male form always).
2. The story has to make sense, if its too random and it doesn't have a plot what's the point I wonder? Unless is a one shot of sex goodness then is acceptable.
3. Now i can take that life is unexpected, sometimes its unavoidable for people to leave a story behind and not update. (as stated before) However if that's the case than at least set it as discontinue or let your readers know, its common courtesy and hopefully at least let someone adopt if someone is willing.
4. Uchihacest or for that matter Sabakucest, unless is a three some with Naruto, then i give leeway with the Uchihas ONLY.
4.Characters created. WHY? Naruto has more than enough characters in the story for you to take pic, don't need to create one. This is mostly for those of you who like to put youreslf in the story, its just not ok people.
5. Too much oocness when not needed, there's a limit to it. If your story is suppose to be ooc then its ok,(please warn that it will be OOC) but when you start normal and then go into extreme, its shocking.
6. Flames- we dont appreciate the fact that we are taking out time to write and someone who just happens to disagree comes and flames you. Now dont get us wrong, we appreciate when you let us know what you think, when we have writen something wrong or plain need help. Thanks. However when you are there to criticize because you dont like that we are bashing Sakura, that is Yaoi (when you think is disgusting and wrong) or that is an MPREG. Then were sorry but in the summary or at the begening of the chapter it was warned, and you can just NOT READ IT or click the back button if it was not to your liking.
people we love it, most of our stories are mpreg and many from the ones that are to be finished still contain mpreg. Yes we know males dont give birth, we dont care!! So many of you think is not normal but hey neither is Naruto who can turn into a girl, ninja's who can do jutsus or many of the things we see in the show. Like the Fact that theres a FOX DEMON insde of him. However we dont see you compalining about it, do we? We respect that you dont like mpreg thats why its warned before you start reading. Is common curtesy.
One thing that we are PRO for are gay rights. The right for marriage. Our believe is that anyone has the right to live their lives however they want, why a gay couple can't marry when a straight one only last a day. Its not fair and should be corrected, it doesn't affect people who we choose to bed or share our love with.
My neighbor is not gonna loose sleep if my cousin in Mexico is banging his boyfriend, is he no!!Then why should people worry, sometimes gay people have better morals than straight its a known fact!!
Why do politics have to make everything so difficult. (shakes head.)
Animes that WE cant live without.
Katekyoshi Hitman Reborn!!
Ouran high school host club!!
Junjou Romantica !!
Okane ga nai!!
Papa to kiss in the dark!!
Soul Eater !!
Kyou Kara Maou!!
Nabari no ou!!
Full Metal Alchemist!!
Boku no pico!! (it took us a while to like this one, we had some problems with shota at the beggingin now we like it.)
wow i think we can go on and on and on...damn theres just to many!!
Dafny doesn't like harem she says that it's not fair. On the the other hand I think that if they all get a little piece of that person than it's ok. go figure she said is just cruel...
Hello everyone i have done and posted a story called The Monster That I Am. I want everyone to know this fic was written 4 almost fucking years ago when I first started writing. Its my first work, and after writing it was saved away, i have re-read the work and know the story is mostly summary. You cant understand what's happening and the lemon sucks big time!! I get it, no one has to point it out cuz i already know it. However the reason that this story was posted was in order to see the difference between my writing then and now Call me selfish but there it is; I wanted to make clear that my other stories are different and have a little advance on it . (Also YaoiHime insisted. (sigh) Once she gets something on her head, she wont stop nagging.)
After reading the Cereal Killer profile i went to this website and took the test too as i was curious.
semeuke.com and my results were;
Denisse E is:
You are a Don't Fuck With Me Seme!
Serious and to the point, and sometimes bordering on the sadistic, it takes a special breed of uke to satisfy your needs. You tend to be anti-social with little patience for most people. You need someone to challenge you and push you to your limits, and then be able to take your intense reactions, which possibly involves rope and sensual torture. This is what makes the Badass Uke the yin for your yang, as you're both able to keep each other in line and satisfy each other.
Most compatible with: Badass Uke
Dafny G is:
You are an Innocent Uke!
Cute and sweet, and most gentle of all uke, whips and chains are not for you - you just want someone to love you. You are often spotted in candy shops wearing furry kitty ears, where you are sure to be noticed by the Romantic Seme, whose protective instincts will kick in and will only want to take you home and love and protect you. And you, of course, will be more than happy to spend the rest of your life baking cookies for your seme.
Most compatible with: Romantic Seme
We advice to take the test and let us know how it went.
How is it that two sisters that share the same account and have the same taste on YAOI took the same test and are least compatible with. LOL. I guess that's how strong the love for Yaoi is to unite us.
Ok people right now we are in the process of getting new beta's, we have several stories that are undergoing writing, but our policy still stands: We don't post unless the whole story is complete then we post as it gets beta.
1.Experimental Jutsu- right now is finished and posted.
2.Heated Love- is finished and posted.
3.The Monster That I Am- is finished and posted.
4.Look Who's Laughing Now!- is finished and posted. There's plans for a second and final chapters are in the making but due to all the other stories that we have ongoing will have to wait till the rest are done thank you for been patient.
5.A Unexpected Surprise- is finished and posted.
6. Kyuuketsuki No Ai- is on going, the story is finished we just need to beta the chapters and post them. Also the storie was done by the time the first chapter was posted but by YaoiHime22's request, DafnyHime has changed her mind and is currently working on a epilogue. (she is furious, this goes against her own strict policy and makes her storie not finished,however I think an epilogue would defenetly put the nail in the coffin at the end.)
7.Karma is a bitch- finished and posted.
There are several projects that are almost finished.
1. Itanaru- MPgreg/ Akatsuki life/ stalled in slump.
2. Shikanaru- Oneshot/ humor /almost done just need the lemon and beta.
3. Kakanaru- AU shota /humor and S&M/ stalled remake.
4. Sasunaru- AU food oriented/still working on it at a snail pace.
5. Itanaru AU business life/redone so many times i cant find the right way on the plot but promise to finish one day.
6. Sasunaru- AU business /inspired by the DMZ line story/ multy-chapter/ on the works.
7. Sasunaru light Gaanaru- needs much work.
We ask to be patient and to wait; more goodness is to come. We just need to finish typing most of it.
In addition, we appreciate the work that our Beta's have done so far and understand that they too have their own fics and life.
This is a warning that DafnyHime has made me put on out profile. I YaoiHime22 have a problem(solemnly sigh). When in slump i love to remake other peoples stories, it is not that they are not good work, they are but I can help it. My mind is blocked from my work and when i read a good storie, my ideas flow into the What if. Now any remake stories are with the permission of the original writer ofcourse, i would never just take it and do what ever i want with them. Knowing this she still has me place the warning even though the work has a warning in itself. So if it makes her feel better, then let it be known this is out of respect to the writers and I do it cuz I love the stories.
Please dont forget to comment on the stories, is how we know if we are doing good work or we are just wasting out time. THANKS...YAOIHIME22 AND DAFNYHIME...
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