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Joined 04-04-09, id: 1888919, Profile Updated: 04-14-14
Author has written 4 stories for Maximum Ride, Inheritance Cycle, and Halloweentown.

Hey there,

Announcement : Writing is a past time, not priority in my life right now, let me know why I should update.

Point of Advise I get inspired when people actually enjoy my stories so reviews and messages would be great. :-)

just in case you are curious Puakai is not just a bunch of letters jumbled up, it is a Hawaiian name meaning "Ocean Flower". It matches me better then you will ever know. For those few of you that are curious about me, if any, this page is for you.

Random stuff

I am 18 years old

I live in Hawaii


Writing and reading stories(that's why I'm here)




Spending time with my family

Hanging with my friends

Art(drawing painting, ceramics yarn leis, etc)

Favorite Books

Maximum Ride-James Patterson

The Inheritance cycle-Christopher Paolini

Age of the Fallen-Mark Olmos (awesome book look it up)

The Spy high Series

Dark Guardians series

Double Identity


Things not seen

Ella Enchanted


So far, all of my stories will have at least one original character because I like to put myself in the story, the character isn't always just like me though.

I have a joy for writing.

I have author as my main career goal, so constructive criticism is very helpful to me.

My Stories (Later I will add more about each one)

Iggy's Romance

This is a on the Maximum ride books. It is the earliest story out of the current ones posted. The first story I wrote was "Jennainbetween 5&6" lame title and all and it wasn't very good. With help from 'Emmafer' I realized I wanted to approach the plot from that story differently so I deleted that one and came up with this. It has similarities but I believe it is a different story in a ways. Iggy's Romance is the first story in my life i have ever actually completed and I am proud that i actually have. If you have not already read it I urge you to.

Jenna's Story

This is a prequel to Iggy's Romance, it follows Jenna starting with her Escape from the school, it shows how she came to be on her own, how she was adopted, everything. I am quite excited to write this as I always make elaborate back stories for my characters. This story is still in progress, and I urge you to read it. I am sure you will enjoy it.


Based on the Inheritance Cycle. The Third Rider comes into the scene she is only 14 but has actually been a rider much longer then Eragon or Murtagh, The perfect summary is the first chapter Please read


This is based off of the Halloweentown the movies, I added a few more characters, Sophie essentially finds a new best friend, the whole family trusts the friend even brings her in on the family secret, but does this new freind have even bigger secrets? Will they ever come out? Read for the answers.


I welcome all kinds of reviews, a few of you know how frustrating it is to have 2,500 hits to your story and only 1 review. I like to view reviews on this site more as comments on a story. I understand not everyone has constructive criticism as one of their skills. I would like people to comment on my stories, if possible I like reviews as well, but some thing as simple as 'I hate it' or 'that was a decent story' would be fine by me.

Thanks for reading

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The name of the game is Fax by TwilightloveandFaximumRide reviews
Fax. Fax, Fax, Fax, Fax, with a bit of Eggy/Illa. That's all there is to say. Fax. Rated T for, well, Fax.
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 27 - Words: 29,081 - Reviews: 888 - Favs: 300 - Follows: 300 - Updated: 11/18/2016 - Published: 6/1/2009 - Fang, Max
Ren is ALIVE! My vers! by Miss Rhine Belikov reviews
Ren died in the end and i didn't like it -.- so i made my own version read and find out what happens! Read it pleasee i got many reviews saying i should continue so i did.
Nightshade series, Andrea Cremer - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 6 - Words: 3,508 - Reviews: 58 - Favs: 32 - Follows: 34 - Updated: 1/2/2015 - Published: 4/10/2012 - Calla T., Ren L.
Visit from the Future by maxride08 reviews
A winged girl named Sam comes to the flock claiming that shes from the future. Fang knows shes keeping secrets from them. Her secrets are revealed, and the consequences force the flock to travel to the future themselves. What they learn changes everything :: ON HIATUS
Maximum Ride - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 31 - Words: 39,992 - Reviews: 633 - Favs: 111 - Follows: 119 - Updated: 8/22/2011 - Published: 9/8/2007
Unrecognizable Faces by werestillflying reviews
When the Flock is found badly hurt by Booth and Bones, they may just have found sanctuary at last. Takes place during SoF. Only BoothxBones & AngelaxHodgins Romance. Maybe some Fax. Read inside for more info. Rated T to be safe
Crossover - Maximum Ride & Bones - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 6 - Words: 17,363 - Reviews: 55 - Favs: 54 - Follows: 71 - Updated: 5/22/2011 - Published: 11/29/2009 - Max, Fang, T. Brennan, S. Booth
Mutant Kiss by TonksGirlAtHeart reviews
After Ella kisses Iggy, she starts mutating on her own. What will happen? Action and romance. Elly and maybe some FAX. R&R, please!
Maximum Ride - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 4,142 - Reviews: 63 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 34 - Updated: 8/8/2010 - Published: 9/17/2008 - Ella, Iggy
In Transition by SheWasaReaderGirl reviews
Chris's disapproval of Wyatt's twice blessed powers becomes a bigger issue; Allison is put to the ultimate test, while Jessica, Melinda, Madeline, and Prue battle their own demon. *SEQUEL to Power Shift - read that first*
Charmed - Rated: T - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 7 - Words: 27,117 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 7/9/2010 - Published: 5/27/2010 - Elise R., Wyatt H. - Complete
Being Melinda by DramaQueen524 reviews
Melinda Halliwell's point of view of living as charmed one's daughter and dealing with magical problems. Not to mention regular ones.
Charmed - Rated: T - English - Family - Chapters: 16 - Words: 15,034 - Reviews: 52 - Favs: 19 - Follows: 22 - Updated: 6/19/2010 - Published: 12/9/2008 - Piper H.
Power Shift by SheWasaReaderGirl reviews
Wyatt, Chris, and their cousin Allison are ready to take on the fight against evil, but their siblings and cousins are reluctant. It may take the life of Phoebe’s youngest being at stake to convince them.
Charmed - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 8 - Words: 27,341 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 4/24/2010 - Published: 3/18/2010 - Complete
FANG: Archangel in Disguise by T-Bones158 reviews
Fang's been caught by Itex. While caught he meets a baby girl... that is his and Max's. after a year of Itex tests, he escapes with her and has to decide. Go back to the flock? Or raise his kid in saftey? OOC
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Family/Humor - Chapters: 65 - Words: 129,078 - Reviews: 970 - Favs: 216 - Follows: 101 - Updated: 3/12/2010 - Published: 12/30/2009 - Fang - Complete
Fallen Angels by FutureNinjas reviews
When the Squints uncover a set of bones belonging to a genetically enhanced experiment, they become immersed in a battle between one of their main funding groups, Itex, with the help of a certain group of Avian Americans.
Crossover - Maximum Ride & Bones - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,742 - Reviews: 44 - Favs: 42 - Follows: 49 - Updated: 1/3/2010 - Published: 1/2/2010
Finding You by DiscoUnicorn reviews
Nudge and Iggy
Maximum Ride - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 697 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 18 - Follows: 8 - Published: 5/19/2009 - Nudge, Iggy - Complete
Tracing Lines by deadlybeautiful reviews
This is how Iggy sees.
Maximum Ride - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 600 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 34 - Follows: 1 - Published: 3/28/2009 - Iggy - Complete
November First by writerchic16 reviews
Disney’s Halloweentown, post first movie two-shot. After an eventful Halloween, the Cromwells have some unresolved issues to work out.
Halloweentown - Rated: K+ - English - Family - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,177 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 17 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 11/20/2008 - Published: 11/19/2008 - Marnie P., Gwen P. - Complete
Despite the Dangers by SilverScreech reviews
An Iggy ficlet. Miggy.
Maximum Ride - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 398 - Reviews: 27 - Favs: 25 - Follows: 7 - Published: 10/10/2008 - Max, Iggy - Complete
Black Roses by Silver pup reviews
One shot — The first look into Selena's journal.
Inheritance Cycle - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,716 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 30 - Follows: 2 - Published: 12/15/2006 - Selena - Complete
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Freindship reviews
Sophie has a made friends with the new girl at school and they become very close. Is the friend trustworthy, or to secretive? Please read and give a chance.
Halloweentown - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Family - Chapters: 7 - Words: 7,061 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 7/15/2011 - Published: 2/28/2010 - Sophie P., Kal
Gabriella's Story reviews
A new rider enters the order.
Inheritance Cycle - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 462 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 6/16/2011 - Published: 2/28/2010 - Murtagh, Eragon S.
Jenna's Story
Another Avian-Human's story. How did she react when Jeb took the flock? Did she escape? many more questions to be answered. Pre-quil to my story "Iggy's Romance". srry horrible at summaries. please read and comment/review. rated T to be safe.
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,084 - Updated: 5/19/2010 - Published: 5/13/2010
Iggy's Romance reviews
Iggy falls in love, what will happen when the flock needs to leave the area?Will he choose The flock?or her? Iggy/OC. Will their love prevail or crumble? Is she even trustworthy? or was she sent by the school? connected to "Jenna's story"
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Romance/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 17 - Words: 20,002 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 5/19/2010 - Published: 2/23/2010 - Iggy - Complete