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Joined 04-05-09, id: 1891163, Profile Updated: 09-11-12
Author has written 8 stories for Maximum Ride.

I am an aspiring journalist/politician, and therefore love constructive critisism.

Maximum Ride is my all-time favorite book, but I also love Canterbury Tales and anything by Dan Brown.

I am definitely a people-person. I'm very enthusiastic about life and I love to make people laugh.

I've been on my high school's cheer squad since freshman year and love being a part of my school as a leader.

Community service is also a huge part of who I am, and I am an active council member at my local branch of the American Diabetes Association.

Not that any of you reading this care...haha.

But yeah.

As a senior this year in high school, my plan is to major in Political Science and hopefully get a job in some sort of investigative journalism field after I graduate. I'll do creative writing, of course, on the side.

With all that being said, criticism and pointers are greatly appreciated in my fanfiction stories, and I would actually prefer them over compliments, to be perfectly honest. The only way I can improve is by the help of the unbiased, like you, and practice. So thanks! :)

My favorite TV shows are American Idol, Modern Family, Glee and CSI Miami

Here are the outfits that I said I would put on my profile:

Bathing suit:

Dress (imagine in olive green):


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Dorm Ride by nightwings93 reviews
In order to escape her past, Max gets accepted to her college of choice. Only there's a catch: she has to live in the ALL BOYS dorm! What happens when she meets Fang, the pyrotwins Iggy&Gazzy, and a whole horde of other hot guys? All Human
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 60 - Words: 141,577 - Reviews: 3644 - Favs: 1,113 - Follows: 599 - Updated: 12/22/2010 - Published: 11/11/2009 - Complete
Commanding Lightning by FalselyTrue reviews
In a futuristic vision, Max learns that she will cause the Flock's deaths. In an attempt to prevent it, she attempts suicide...and fails. Three years later, she commands a special team for a company called Xeti. When the flock joins, all heck turns loose!
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 36 - Words: 84,114 - Reviews: 353 - Favs: 72 - Follows: 58 - Updated: 1/27/2010 - Published: 7/18/2009 - Max - Complete
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Forevermore reviews
This is a short story/continuation of JP's Nevermore, picking up where Max and Fang get swallowed by a tsunami. I found the end to be kind of anti-climatic, so I'm re-writing it to be a bit more MR worthy. FAX, as usual. Changed my pen name from bergatron, I am now cheerleeder. Read, review, PM me. Criticism is love! Rated T because I'm paranoid.
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 824 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/11/2012 - Fang, Max
The ghost of three years past reviews
Max and the flock have been living without Fang for 3 years. This story picks up where FANG left off, tying loose ends and finishing what was left undone. Will Max follow through with her new mission to 'terminate' Fang, or let her emotions rule?
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 2,950 - Reviews: 2 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 3/19/2010 - Published: 3/10/2010
His black parade reviews
After a fatal fight in germany, max is left alone to lead the rest of the flock without her right-winged man. But is everything as they think, or was it a trick of the eye? Prologue in first chapter. critisizm welcome!
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 3 - Words: 1,535 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 11/28/2009 - Published: 11/22/2009 - Complete
To the Max reviews
I saw them laying breathless. Lifeless. Hopeless. And I could do nothing. When Max finds that what she thought is completely wrong, will all fall into place, or can things only get worse? Please Read and Review! Critisism welcome!
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 23 - Words: 20,683 - Reviews: 56 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 10/17/2009 - Published: 5/4/2009 - Complete
One Life To Love reviews
This twoshot is first about Jeb and his regrets as he's dying of terminal lung cancer, and secondly about Max's regrets after leaving the flock and finding that she's no longer wanted when she wants to return. Critiques welcome. :
Maximum Ride - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,520 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 9/18/2009 - Published: 9/15/2009 - Jeb B., Max - Complete
What If reviews
This is a one-shot based on the song “What if” by Ashley Tisdale. Max was separated from the rest of her flock after she broke up with Fang, seeing him *cough* with another girl. He never realized how much she was hurt.
Maximum Ride - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 810 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 2 - Published: 9/13/2009 - Max, Fang - Complete
I Decide reviews
I left. The idea still upsets me, three years later. I, Maximum Ride, abandoned my flock of avian hybrids for the greater good. At least that’s what I tell myself. READ AND REVIEW! PLEASE! CRITISIZM WELCOME! Rated T for possible violence and romance
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 8 - Words: 8,162 - Reviews: 31 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 9/9/2009 - Published: 8/17/2009 - Max, Fang - Complete
Gone reviews
The flock is dead and gone...or are they? Based after MR5. moderate faxness, drama, first fanfic. please read and review! :D Rated T for language
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 528 - Reviews: 4 - Follows: 3 - Published: 4/9/2009 - Complete